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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by SB on September 08, 2019, 05:13:20 pm »
S.B.'s Beneath the Blue is a charming little sea story on land, with two ladies who seem to have a strong effect on each other. Finding out what kind of effect was a fun little ride, seeming like a little misdirection at first, then delivering with a rather musical note of hypnotic fun. Really liked the treatment between them, and how it all ended up in the end.


"Charming little sea story on land", huh? I certainly like the sound of that. Glad you had fun with it.



Beneath the Blue

I must admit it, I didnt remember this, but yes, its fun, and if someone wants to be Chloe for me, be my guest! Mind, its a fine case of maybe you didnt expect things to end up as it does, Estefania! Or maybe she did want it to end that way. A very fun story, but I might be biased, maybe?
High end of definitely enjoyed


What the...?  ??? I was convinced I had replied to this one already and as it turns out, I didn't. Sorry. Not surprised you don't remember as the first take on it was from my early days around here so... Pleased you enjoyed it and once again, my apologies for not getting back to you sooner.


Beneath the Blue had a twist that I feel I should have figured out. Hindsight bias at its finest, I suppose. Clever little tale.


Thank you. The synopsis is certainly a hint for the story twist though I'm not sure the ending itself is what people expected.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by melevawrites on September 08, 2019, 03:13:42 pm »
The Request is a story I read based on someone's recommendation. Turns out they gave the wrong title, but I'm so glad for the mistake. This story was so creative and detailed. I'm not familiar with the larger universe this apparently takes place in, but has me curious about it. I do wish the "green" part had more, especially with the customer, but I still had fun reading.

I'm really glad the serendipity paid off for you! :D Thank you for reading, Shadra.

The Request
Oh, very good, some very neat twists in here I must say. Oh, and I loved the way it all played out too, especially events at the end. Makes  for a good read, thats for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thank you so much Merry!
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by Redsliver on September 08, 2019, 09:46:48 am »
Blizzard was fantastic this week. I thought I knew what was going to happen next. I was wrong!

I love that fact that, for our four protagonists, "boots" is now a verb.  :)

Boots is a lot like pork. Better a verb than a noun.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by crazydorian on September 08, 2019, 12:22:40 am »
I looooved this story. Popped over to Literotica to discover the entire first chapter is finished: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4036186&page=submissions

Appreciate the heads up.  I've liked some of JC Beleren's stuff before.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by Pan on September 07, 2019, 05:56:34 pm »
Son of Sleep is off to an interesting start. I want to read more of this. I like that Hypnos himself gets some significant story time- usually in tales like this, the god shows up to bestow some MC powers and then vanishes from the plot. Poor Alex, though. His life would probably be at least a little easier if his mind control powers came from a- ahem- more visible body part.  ;)

I looooved this story. Popped over to Literotica to discover the entire first chapter is finished: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4036186&page=submissions
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by Merry Brooks on September 07, 2019, 04:57:49 pm »
Last 3, as the 4th one posted a message saying I shouldnt read(taste issues), so...

The Bakery

Seriously, I dont know if I want to visit, or avoid that bakery lol? Mix of feelings for Misty, definitely. Mind, if they fancy a robot waitress working there? Certainly a good, and fun read
High end of definitely enjoyed

Hey, Listen… Okay?

Talking of stories that make for a fun read... Have to say the stoned/drunk stuff did nothing for me, but its not real, so...? Certainly interested, lets settle for that
Low end of definitely enjoyed as a compromise

Kat and Mouse

A bit painful to be honest, but at least its the right side winning in the end, and a few good twists in getting there. Loved the work payoff method at least. All in all, been a really good story
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thats it, all behind, but thats my health stuff getting in the way now. As always, thanks to all authors, reviewed or otherwise
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by Shadra on September 07, 2019, 02:12:41 pm »
Bit late, but better than never with reviews of some of the stories I read.

The Bakery, as others have mentioned, is a good introduction to what looks like a fun story. Cant say i expected any less from Kallie. While the gr tag isn't my thing, there seems to be plenty to offer. My only criticism is that this means no Subroutine this week!

Beneath the Blue had a twist that I feel I should have figured out. Hindsight bias at its finest, I suppose. Clever little tale.

Tickle War is another story that leaves me hoping for more. Well, given that I'm posting this after a new update, I suppose I don't have to wait any longer! Great fun, though I do hope the smoking parts are put behind soon. Personal squick.

New Dogma is a nice little party scene for a chapter. Have to say, that ending was spot on, and made me wish there was more to read. Alas, nothing in the new update. Perhaps the next?

The Request is a story I read based on someone's recommendation. Turns out they gave the wrong title, but I'm so glad for the mistake. This story was so creative and detailed. I'm not familiar with the larger universe this apparently takes place in, but has me curious about it. I do wish the "green" part had more, especially with the customer, but I still had fun reading.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by 321 on September 07, 2019, 11:53:19 am »
Blizzard was fantastic this week. I thought I knew what was going to happen next. I was wrong!

I love that fact that, for our four protagonists, "boots" is now a verb.  :)

Magical Girl Syn is back! More monsters, more mayhem, more mind control! The scenes with Carice were especially hot. Welcome back, Cynthia!

Son of Sleep is off to an interesting start. I want to read more of this. I like that Hypnos himself gets some significant story time- usually in tales like this, the god shows up to bestow some MC powers and then vanishes from the plot. Poor Alex, though. His life would probably be at least a little easier if his mind control powers came from a- ahem- more visible body part.  ;)

Still need to read: The Bakery. Kallie's stories need fail to impress- I just need an eighth day of the week to catch up!

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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by Merry Brooks on September 05, 2019, 04:58:07 pm »
Part 3

The Request

Oh, very good, some very neat twists in here I must say. Oh, and I loved the way it all played out too, especially events at the end. Makes  for a good read, thats for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Split Slave

To be honest I'd forgotten just how complex the whole gender thing is in here, but it adds delightful to the whole situation. Oh, and the whole story is wonderful told too. Characters, and their cross play is all very well handled too
High end of definitely enjoyed

Tsundere

Oh, I'll say it, if Rita hadnt been a Johnson, I probably would have loved this anyway, but seriously, with that surname, of course... Lisa is a great character too, and the whole way things play out between the two of them, I love. Especially as there are a few twists in their relationship you'd never expect. I cant say more, beyond you should go read
Low end of much enjoyed. There may be a bit of Johnson bias in that mark, and probably would have got high end of definitely but for that

The Vengeance Of Miss Applesauce 

Some great twists and turns here too. Not all of which are you going to spot until you go read it. The ending wasnt quite what I expected, given what had gone before, I saw it as an easy way out, but others might disagree, but again, go read, and decide for yourself
High end of definitely enjoyed

Whatever Gets You Through The Night

Another really good chapter in this multi story saga. Some great moments in here, but you have a hell of a lot of catching up if not already intothis
High end of definitely enjoyed

Last 4 to follow
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Last post by Redsliver on September 05, 2019, 08:04:57 am »
Blizzard

Fun to see not everything goes perfect with the harem, lol. Fun piece, with all 3 girls getting to test Gene out to some degree or another. Another nice add to the series
High end of definitely enjoyed


Problems and conflict make everything more fun. Glad you liked it!
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