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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 21st 2019
« Last post by MCaesar on January 02, 2020, 04:26:20 pm »
Thoughts on Iím Coming 4 U by Jukebox, as well as the 4U series overall:

First, the stories give off a really cool spy vibe, like the Bourne movies but with less shaky cam and the protagonist is a sex slave. Second, I think the setting is fascinating, and we get a big exposition dump in this installment to break open all the little cracks and glimpses we've gotten into the history of the MK Perfect conspiracy. And for once, the "cabal of sinister mind controllers" trope plays out to it's logical conclusion, where one person decides they just want to be the only one at the top. I feel like there are too many shadowy cabals made up of megalomaniacal mind controller that all seem to share and get along fine, and that always breaks my immersion unless it's addressed.

And last, but the opposite of least, the way that 4U works through her programming in all sorts of situations. Rarely is a brainwashed character so aware of their own brainwashing, and so deftly able to dance around the cognitive dissonances that arise from conflicting programming. It's fun to watch. The pleasure component of the brainwashing sometimes feels kind of pushed to the background, and some of the sex scenes feel a little tacked on as an afterthought. That just might be me, though. I feel like all the hottest stuff is going on in 4U's head.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 21st 2019
« Last post by MCaesar on January 02, 2020, 03:21:29 pm »
Got some new Day-Old Thoughts on Week Old-Stories for the week. Starting with The Secret of Brookrose College by Templeton Rose.

Let's just say, you had me at futa nuns. :grin: This story does not seem super complicated so far. It's not going to ask deep questions about human nature. But what it is, is my kind of weird. The characters and setting are definitely colorful and lively too.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
« Last post by mr potestas on January 01, 2020, 07:36:33 pm »
Resolutions (Trixie Adara) (mc ff ex hm) (new)  by Trixie Adara
Four friends drunkenly make New Yearís Resolutions which will turn out to drastically control their lives in the coming weeks and months.

This probably was the intent of the author to portray as such, but I always found New Year's Resolutions to be a joke. People will put all this thought into doing something positive, only to just not do it. I personally made a Resolution years ago to not do Resolutions! So, having women actually follow erotically charged Resolutions can only be a farce. Even the first part, which largely introduced this whole thing, delivered, in albeit more intriguing than hot ways. The Resolutions themselves were not erotically charged, but it seems instead that the interpretation of them became erotic. I'll look forward to more.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
« Last post by BigJohn on December 31, 2019, 01:35:34 am »
Loved Pink Cloud by Jukebox. I tend to always enjoy their work but the characters in this story were incredibly sweet and endearing. Couldn't help but smile at how cute and respectful they were.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
« Last post by TheHandsThatLead on December 30, 2019, 04:13:51 pm »
Another thumbs up for The Role of a Lifetime.

-Fortunato

Thanks Fortunato.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
« Last post by Fortunato on December 30, 2019, 11:43:52 am »
Another thumbs up for The Role of a Lifetime.

-Fortunato
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
« Last post by TheHandsThatLead on December 30, 2019, 08:53:31 am »

The Role of a Lifetime (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Denise has been a struggling actress in Hollywood for years, only getting bit parts, but a new opportunity has come along, will it be the role of a lifetime for her?

Have you ever read a story and felt like the author was writing it just for you?
From the main character having the same name as me, to having an almost exactly same high school experience, and same fantasies... it is just uncanny! And so I was hanging on every single word...!!!

Thanks Dede, I promise I didn't read your mind from afar while writing it... or did I? ;)
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
« Last post by TheHandsThatLead on December 30, 2019, 08:51:32 am »
Just dropping in to say 'A Villainous Deal' is excellent. I'm a sucker for superheroines getting taken down.  >:D

Thanks ironflower.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
« Last post by Dede on December 29, 2019, 10:04:47 pm »

The Role of a Lifetime (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Denise has been a struggling actress in Hollywood for years, only getting bit parts, but a new opportunity has come along, will it be the role of a lifetime for her?

Have you ever read a story and felt like the author was writing it just for you?
From the main character having the same name as me, to having an almost exactly same high school experience, and same fantasies... it is just uncanny! And so I was hanging on every single word...!!!
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 21st 2019
« Last post by mr potestas on December 29, 2019, 09:48:47 pm »
Organism-X (mc ff mf gr) (new)  by DevilBookCorruptions
After a meteorite crashes near Bailey College, female students begin to undergo dramatic physical and mental changes while developing insatiable libidos. Meanwhile, the men begin to fall ill and die. In the middle of it all is a girl with exceptional abilities who might just hold the fate of the world in her hands...

This was a rather large story to start. Generally avoid reading more than 5k words when I review a story or chapter update. In fact, this might have been just that much more fun if it was split between even just a couple updates. That said, the premise here was irresistible, and this story delivered on its promise. Sure, there was a moment or two where I wanted a mass transformation that didn't occur to move things along. That was not really how this story was written. It was consistently paced and methodical. The transformations and seductions were amazing. The story was engaging and well written.  Everything flowed orgasmically from one section to the next. Nothing was held back in the long run. Serial recruitment at its best, while succeeding at being far more than the otherwise redundant trope. Hope there's more. This was greatly enjoyed.
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