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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by 321 on July 06, 2019, 11:48:34 am »
I never thought that I'd get to review a Robotunit8 story, much less three of them!  :)

Stuck in the Past
I love the idea of "historical" mind control and diabolical brainwashing conspiracies; I'd love to write one of my own one of these days. This one is short and sweet, and our protagonist suffers the added embarrassment of being programmed to forget all about it and then, years later, suddenly having it all come back to her! I do love how the secret club just... ends. Were they raided by the feds? Did they feel the heat from some supers? Did the place just fail to make rent, like the coffee shop down the street from me? If I missed a clue, don't tell me- I like the story this way! :)

A Whole Different Look
Ah, secret agents and mind control! And a fantastic identity-changing invention that our heroine gets to try out, in more ways than one! Is it too much to hope that we'll see more of this in a future River City story?

Walking on Sunshine
One wonders if one of the -ahem- "talent scouts" on the beach that day would later go on to discover Rita Hayworth herself ("I've been looking for you for years- you still look great!" A fun afternoon at the beach, with many nods to the reader. Cannot imagine who this "other crazy woman" is, but I'm sure that I'll enjoy her stories as well!

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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by ExtantElan on July 06, 2019, 10:38:21 am »
To Mr.Potestas:

Glad you like her, but who doesn't like a ride or die chick with a freaky side.
:)
 I will say, as the story is about down to the finish line, she is actually spun out of Bobbi. One late night writing session took an odd turn and Bobbi exhibited some of the characteristics that Kacy has and while I then realized that my subconscious had been telling me all along I needed a third character and she needed to be X, which would also allow Bobbi to be the loveably flawed sexpot she is now. That's all I can say for  the time being, but it is good to hear you are enjoying it so far.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by Blackie on July 06, 2019, 10:12:16 am »
Quote from: CuyahogaKingKong on July 06, 2019, 09:10:10 am
I've also been losing the ability to connect with real people. As a result I need positive fantasies and over empathize with fictional characters.  Its something In trying to work on and writing has actually been a big help.
I'm jaded myself. In addition to the depth of the abyss, I'm also a friggin' romantic sap. Positive stuff to be had in romantic comedy, after all.

I'm glad writing is helping.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by CuyahogaKingKong on July 06, 2019, 09:10:10 am »
Quote from: Blackie on July 05, 2019, 10:19:34 am
Quote from: CuyahogaKingKong on July 04, 2019, 03:51:31 pm
People might roll their eyes at my saccharine nonsense but not take the time to threaten me over it.

As a quality you pique my interest, given how dark my world is for fantasies. Results in a great appreciation of those not as dark as my own.

Over the past 20-odd years since I first read The Book (1st mc story I can remember) I've coincidentally been steadily losing the ability to imagine happiness, success, affection, etc in real life.  I've also been losing the ability to connect with real people. As a result I need positive fantasies and over empathize with fictional characters.  Its something In trying to work on and writing has actually been a big help.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by mr potestas on July 05, 2019, 07:02:59 pm »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (1 new chapter)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

I genuinely love Kacy's evolution as a character. Maybe "Kitten" was who she was deep down all along, but it did take some nudging for her to get to this point. The mind control was perhaps the key to making her what she now loves being. She does not need to be controlled anymore. Yet, she loves  that control, whether she is actively turning others on or being made to. Easily the hottest of the threesome!
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by Blackie on July 05, 2019, 10:19:34 am »
Quote from: CuyahogaKingKong on July 04, 2019, 03:51:31 pm
People might roll their eyes at my saccharine nonsense but not take the time to threaten me over it.

As a quality you pique my interest, given how dark my world is for fantasies. Results in a great appreciation of those not as dark as my own.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by gyrd on July 05, 2019, 12:29:25 am »
Quote from: Merry Brooks on July 04, 2019, 05:06:29 pm
Go read about it

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Monster_(1925_film)

Only snag with the gorgeous Gertrude is that I'd probably have to invite her to try out a handy lesbianator device, but other than that...

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Film/TheMonster
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by 321 on July 04, 2019, 06:49:08 pm »
Quote from: CuyahogaKingKong on July 04, 2019, 03:51:31 pm


I suddenly started getting some for Crutch.  I think five all together, all friendly and encouraging.  It probably helps that my stories are ridiculously nice, and thus unlikely to provoke rage.  People might roll their eyes at my saccharine nonsense but not take the time to threaten me over it.

How dare you post a great, sweet, sexy, hot hypnosis story?? Why, I oughtta  :grin:
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by Merry Brooks on July 04, 2019, 05:06:29 pm »
Go read about it

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Monster_(1925_film)

Only snag with the gorgeous Gertrude is that I'd probably have to invite her to try out a handy lesbianator device, but other than that...
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - June 29th 2019
« Last post by CuyahogaKingKong on July 04, 2019, 03:51:31 pm »
Quote from: strikeThree on July 04, 2019, 03:29:55 pm
Quote from: Writer345 on July 04, 2019, 02:14:49 am
Yes one of my stories, I think it was on Literotica, received a similar comment...

I just posted back saying "You First"...  I never heard from the idiot again!

The one thing that I did notice about the Trolls on Litorotica, they all had the same name --- Anonymous!  And I bet that was the name of the one that had a go at you.

Literotica definitely has the trolliest commenters of anywhere i post to. Most of them are pretty nice, but a lot of places that sort of "go kill yourself" crowd doesn't even show up at all.

Storiesonline probably has the dumbest ones, though. I'm not fully convinced that a lot of them even read the story they're commenting over.

Fictionmania is easily the nicest. Maybe even too nice.

Mcstories basically doesn't have any, in my recent experience. Everyone stopped using email, or at least emailing me.

I suddenly started getting some for Crutch.  I think five all together, all friendly and encouraging.  It probably helps that my stories are ridiculously nice, and thus unlikely to provoke rage.  People might roll their eyes at my saccharine nonsense but not take the time to threaten me over it.
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