Alter-Right: Well written and worth reading. It wasn't quite the story I hoped it would be, but that's an unfair burden to judge any work by - this is good on it's own merits. I will, nevertheless discuss something that it made me think about, which relates to an ongoing discussion that crops up from time to time on the forums. [snip]

[...] And then...the swerve. [snip] So in the end, the execution fell flat for me, much like a semi-sweet'semi-dry wine that can't bother to commit to either end of the spectrum. Middle of the road stuff rarely satisfies me, and this story comes across as firmly middle of the road to me.
[snip] There's a part of me that wants to say Ozhojabbe sold this story a little short, but it's written with a firm enough hand that when I step back and try to take a more objective look at it, I'm left convinced Ozhojabbe told the story they set out to write, and my complaints are more of a result of my tastes of a reader not lining up with the author's vision.

Politics related MC stories tend to take the form of "Feminist/Progressive woman is turned into a Submissive/Conservative/Ultra Traditionalist woman". [...] Nevertheless, the inversion of this story is an appealing and interesting direction to take things.I would really love to see another story take this idea and run with it a bit more long-form, or even for the story as it exists to continue on and take up that theme with other characters outside of the two in the chapter we have.

Like walter_kovacs, I'd love to see a longer exploration of this idea.

Next up, we have the thrilling conclusion to Office Story With Huge Title! I greatly enjoyed this story, and am partly sad to see it end. Fantastic submission for a first time author! Definitely one for me to keep an eye on going forward. While I expected things would have played out the way they did, it was actually a reversal of characters of what I was thinking. And then the huge twist that explained how Jenna was able to do all the things... very clever! I don't usually reread stories, but I'm tempted to go back to the beginning to see things in this new context. Either way, I look forward to any future story you may submit!

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S.B.'s Corruption Games fulfills something I was hoping would be expanded upon from the last update. Alexandra's call to her contact was a fun exchange. Watching them go through the motions and him react to the waking suggestions was, as the author called the subtitle, "the fun way." The cruel hangups followed by the triggering commands, I envied and pitied Jeremy all at once. Looking forward to Alexandra's next plan of attack.

Trapped (Mr. Scade) (mc ma ft) (new)  by Mr. Scade
She had trapped herself many years before, when she fed her fantasies and fetishes. She had become trapped, when the sight and smell and even thought of latex aroused her. She was trapped in this suit that kept changing, her, her mind, her life. Trapped and unable to escape. The latex was taking more and more of her.

Mr. Scade was always the kind of author that gave something different. As such, there never really is disappointment, even when the story isn't completely to your tastes. And well, Trapped was certainly different and hot! She was not in control, but fully aware of it. Well, I guess it was what she wanted! All that is all but forgetting to mention the wonderful yet almost subtle TF elements. I love Latex MC and TF, but inspiration to write such themes in their purest form come in fits and spurts. OK, fine, I've been on a kick involving demons with latex-like skin, but that is wildly different from this wonderful story. Hot, quick, vivid. This was near perfection!

Master's Mark by newcomer Third Leprechaun really pushed the right buttons for me. I love that quick and all-powerful mental domination and I love the emphasis on screwing with people as opposed to screwing people.