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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by Merry Brooks on April 24, 2019, 12:20:00 pm »
Part 3

Binding Rings

Fine, I guessed the incest was coming, ah well...Even more so as I suspect the focus on birth control is going to lead to something I'll hate even more. The story is well done, but this chapter was pretty much just total turn off for me.
No rating, taste issues, big time

It Runs in the Family

And talking of incest infatuation, here's some more! Again, I guessed given Connie's desire for it, it was going to happen, so I was prepared. And all female is slightly less horrible for me, though not greatly. Again, the story line is great, just my turn off with incest, and of course the only other focus here was sex, so...
Again no rating, for same taste issue

Paperback

First of two I've already read, though due to my brain issues, both seemed fresh as it has been a while. Yes, Mordred does write some great stuff, and this is no exception. I dont get the bare foot thing, but I can live with it, and I'm sure the 'director' would have methods of making me love it, anyway! :laugh: Its great quality, and I'd love to perform in his work, if it ever happened.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Whatever Gets You Through The Night

The other I'd previously read. Didnt remember any of it mind, after a month! Its a good build chapter to the next one (which I have already read recently) with events in the second half at least. First half is just sweet, and delightful
High end of definitely enjoyed

Yew and Me

Yes, I want one of those exosuits, and helmets. Seriously, I do! But apart from that, I would swap places with Svetlana too. Mind, I now have less mind to lose than most, lol. :P Story is developing delightfully, and thoroughly looking forward to seeing what happens next. Well, unless either of the suggested events happens, and I forget everything but total obedience...?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Last 5 to follow
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by ExtantElan on April 24, 2019, 04:27:33 am »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (3 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

I must admit, Budda's resistance to it all sometimes seemed a bit much in the sometimes overwhelming concept of MC erotica, but it was probably not unrealistic. Oh, and yes, Budda's side of things was finally quite engaging! I think Bobbi might have misread him a little, but its doubtful the truth would really displease her. The addition of a third perspective really does twist this game of perversion in unexpected ways! A slow burn thus far, but now certainly an engaging ride ...

Thank you again for the feedback.
The conflict here (as I see it) is that both these two have wanted to get together for a while but on top of all those issues involved, Bobbi precipitates all this in her desire to be physically dominated. Meanwhile she is extremely self conscious about her body development and her true dread is being judged and rejected on those grounds because if that were to happen it would crush her fragile self esteem. Bubba on the other hand has his self image tied up in being a gentle protector type, but his true inner kink is causing sadistic humiliation for which he is terrified to fully embrace because to do so means the dissolution of his prior self.
Kacy is there now to throw a little chaos in to the mix, plus she has a super power. :P
Also you need three to represent the id, ego, and super ego. Not to mention the dark triad (though I don't see myself getting that deep in to it)
Glad you have enjoyed it so far.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by mr potestas on April 23, 2019, 02:04:44 pm »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (3 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

I must admit, Budda's resistance to it all sometimes seemed a bit much in the sometimes overwhelming concept of MC erotica, but it was probably not unrealistic. Oh, and yes, Budda's side of things was finally quite engaging! I think Bobbi might have misread him a little, but its doubtful the truth would really displease her. The addition of a third perspective really does twist this game of perversion in unexpected ways! A slow burn thus far, but now certainly an engaging ride ...
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by Akisa on April 23, 2019, 04:05:23 am »
Thanks for the kind words, everyone! It's so strange to see the final chapters going up.

I'm in the process of reposting the story on Literotica, a new chapter every 2-3 days. So far they've gotten content that took about 2 years over here, and almost every comment is about how SLOW the story is going. :P

It does not matter how slow a story is as it develops and has something to contribute in each chapter.

I really enjoy the story, it's consistent, the fetishes are well managed. And above all the end is good, what can end up disappointing long stories is to reach an end aimlessly.

Many successes, future plans!
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by Pan on April 22, 2019, 08:07:55 pm »
Thanks for the kind words, everyone! It's so strange to see the final chapters going up.

I'm in the process of reposting the story on Literotica, a new chapter every 2-3 days. So far they've gotten content that took about 2 years over here, and almost every comment is about how SLOW the story is going. :P
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by Akisa on April 22, 2019, 07:37:26 pm »

Pledging the Sorority ó N.C.U. (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne meets Trisha, the head of the hypnotic sorority that she is pledging. But why does she look so familiar?

Laura seems hilarious to me. The inductions are well achieved. Randy plays a leading role and deserves it. Her position in history helps, being in a process of learning, being very skilled even with this.

But Trisha between the three, is the one that I find most striking, for its 'evil' and playful attitude.

I hope more of this great group, NCU. And let Randy achieve her goal with her roommate.

Unlimited (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
A hypnotist recounts the final sessions with his sister.

A big applause for Pan. Keeping the rhythm of the story for so many chapters, without losing the final impact, is a challenge. Speechless.

Recommended reading for any fan of progressive hypnosis.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Last post by Akisa on April 22, 2019, 07:21:28 pm »
Conference Buddies (mc mf fd) (new)  by Adam Smith
Jane and Alan discuss the very silly session about hypnosis they just attended at a conference.

What am I going to say, is a dream come true (?) XD

Jane is a really bad person, and I love that. The plot unfolds in a wonderful way.

If someone likes male humiliation, this story is for you. I would not like to have someone like Jane work with, but as an expectator I am happy.

Manners Maketh Man (mc mm in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
Mark learns the power of good manners.

It's good for me that the MC has some sordid point. These two stories are full of those points.

A highly recommended story for those who like the mm (obvious), voyeurism, transformations and absolute telepathic powers.

Sexy Shorts (mc mf md in ex) (2 new chapters)  by Pan
A collection of short tales for the whole family.

Gift, it's a good story, 'Seduce me', it's not bad. But I like the first one more because of the disfigurement of perception in the mother. It's very fun.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases-April 6th 2019
« Last post by Akisa on April 22, 2019, 06:59:39 pm »

Aftermarket (Fugue) (mc mf md) (new)  by Fugue
Mahop BioLabs produces docile, sexy little playthings from housewives and soccer moms. How do they do that?

I like some stories of Fugue. They are a good example of the limits that each medium has to express the MC.

The comic version is exciting and more direct, but the written version allows you to 'live' what the characters experience and what the MC entails.

The (Late) Much Loved Old Clem (mc mf md) (new)  by Maximilian Cummings
Lucy and her new husband settle into their honeymoon holiday cottage. Is it all in Lucyís mind or is it really haunted?

Perfect fantasy in which fantasy, naturally formed in a character. And he tells it. But when we see them in this context we notice perfectly what is 'wrong' in their perceptions and it really happens. Very immersive, a good job.

Stranger Tales (mc mf md) (new)  by Quiet Hypnotist
A confusing and hypnosis induction leads girls towards a curious realization.

Good speed management in deepening the trance. You know what is going to happen, even so that does not take away the exciting. A set of short stories or a more extreme continuation in another context, would be a fantastic idea, with this rhythm.

You Broke Like Glass (mc mm) (new)  by Jukebox
Wayne doesnít think he can be hypnotized, but Jerry keeps telling him itís happened before.
f.lux made me read this story, with the orange protector. The blue colors look more like a green, and the yellow ones, white.

It's excellent, the spiral is a classic, and Jukebox uses it a lot. Here the tension, the battle of egos, the freedom lost from the first moment. Hypnosis is perfectly carried.

I'm not from reading male to male stories. Of which I have read, it has not convinced me much, except as a complement to other stories. This story, puts as a main axis, the trance, and domination by 80% and in the end, highlights the most sexual dynamics. That is perfect for the framework established in that 80%.

Humiliation is much more psychological. And I love that.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by TMaskedWriter on April 22, 2019, 11:00:52 am »

I for one welcome our new Mask-wearing Goddesses and am quite satisfied with their reign this week. Though, that was a pretty hype cliffhanger to be sure~

"I donít remember taking it out, but the mask is in my hands now."

I absolutely loved the building tension as Tara and the mask fight over what to do about Stacy. Just great. And who knows? Perhaps Tara and the mask can team up and get their own wildly successful daytime talk show, helping families and couples to reconcile all of their differences.  :grin:

Plus, one never forgets one's first mask.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Last post by Merry Brooks on April 22, 2019, 09:36:07 am »
Dear Betsy,

I dont have many other authors who complain about their given ratings, from time to time. Thats why the 'awaits grumbles' section is only ever likely to appear on your reviews! :P

To be honest, I could say you disappointed me. Given that Miss Carpenter not only had to be 5 ft 7 inches in height, she had to be blonde, with short hair. Therefore I was expecting it to be pointed out that the need for her to be blonde, if she was going to be sealed in a full body unit, why would these be needed? I guess it could be needed if she's being turned into a mannequin though?
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