We have a couple of twists already. The memory gaps are enticing, my buttons would like to say. There are several different directions you could take the story from here. I’m interested to see what you come up when I read the story. So you make it avaible for my eager eyes, that goes for my buttons too. 
Thank you! The memory twist is going to be fun to play with. And button pushing is what I'm going for.
I'm really excited to hear more so I hope you carry on! Giving someone an exhibition kink live on stage is really hot and I want to see what else this guy is up to <3
Exhibition kinks are fun. Open windows, public places, voyeurs... Giving fetishes too.
Messing around with an idea while I finish up the last one.
Forget and keep masturbating until you've forgotten everything you need to.
This is a brilliant concept and very nicely paced.
You've left lots of room for intriguing fallout as she wakes and tries to piece her immediate life back together. (or fails...)
Your protagonist seems clever and a practical sort. So I'd love to see her match wits with the 'unknown person' responsible for her memory lapse.
Maybe a jump forward in which a therapist helps her recall odd details that could be used to reconstruct a foggy memory?
Please do consider making this a full story.
Thank you! The memory problem is going to be fun to play with, I think. I put in Maddie to help out for that reason. A therapist brought in by Maddie is certainly a thought I had. We'll see where it ends up.
Again, thanks everyone for commenting!