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2019 Update Archive / New Releases - December 21st 2019
« Last post by ElmerFudd on December 21, 2019, 11:21:20 am »
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Adoring My Robot Overlord (mc ff ds sf) (new)  by Flying Decadent
A feisty young freedom fighter learns why no one escapes the Commonwealth, and why no one resists its beautiful and compelling dictator.

Apophenia (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva
Phenia doesn’t belong at Lady Sionamuid’s Academy for Young Sorceresses and Sorcerers, and she knows it. But if she can’t find a way to blend in, and fast, then soon everyone else will know it too.

At the Costume Shop in Anne’s Harbor (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Taking You Deeper
A powerful lust witch moves to a coastal town in North Carolina and settles in...

Bimbo Stories: The Carnival (mc mf md) (new)  by Quixerotic
A young couple has a fateful encounter with a fortune teller that turns Susan into a bimbo.

Bimbo Stories: The Wedding (mc mf md) (new)  by Quixerotic
Jacob’s devotion to his bride is rewarded by a bimbified mother-in-law.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

BMBZ Radio (mc mf md) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Stacy has been listening to BMBZ Radio a lot lately... maybe a bit too much?

The Boys of Summer (Chrysostomon) (mc mf ff in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Chelsea wakes after a strange encounter. Now she has a fire in her belly

Brain Development Enterprises (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by JC Beleren
A man purchases a series of self-hypnosis recordings to help him become more assertive.

Chip And Juan’s Take Down (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
When Chip watches the video that he and Juan made, it was nothing like he remembered.

Crossing the Rubicon (mc mf ff mm fd md) (4 new chapters)  by br0adband
There are moments in a lifetime where, with a single step, a line is crossed, a goal is achieved, a dream becomes a reality. Once that line is crossed, there’s no going back to who or what you might have been before. This is such a journey for one person.

Demon Dilemma (mc ff mf) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Baal is summoned to a sleepy village to ruin it.

Dick Picture Perfect (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Will sends a dick pic to a girl, knowing that she would hate it. But it turns out that every woman who sees that picture needs more of it.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (3 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Flightback (mc mf fd md bd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
A writer of erotica meets a flight attendant who likes his work.

Frank and Jessy — Pussy Time for You (mc mf fd bd ft sf) (new)  by schizo
Frank and Jessy have a new sex toy to play with.

The Gift (TheHandsThatLead) (mc mf md) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Monica is shopping for the perfect Christmas gift for herself, will she find it?

Go to Sleep (mc mf mm md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
James is a Sandman. He can make people go to sleep

Her Husband’s Hucow (mc ff ma la gr ds) (1 new chapter)  by CNP
Mary and a few of her old college friends are invited to an almost forgotten friend’s home. What was expected to be a weekend of relaxation and reminiscing soon turns into something more expansive to the exquisite delight of everyone involved.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

I Hear and Obey (mc ff mf fd sf rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
A powerful woman maintains her supply of Slaves from Earth of the past and present.

Influencer (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
An estranged father forced to look after his daughter learns that she wants to become an internet-famous Influencer. She vlogs and blogs in her free time, but has no followers. All she needs, her father decides, is a ‘helping’ hand.

The Internship (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Nichole is looking forward to learning a lot from her internship. She will.

I’m Coming 4 U (mc ff) (new)  by Jukebox
Service Unit 4U is finally forced to confront the contradictions at the heart of her programming, and becomes a new woman even as she finally remembers where her enslavement began.

Learning (mc mm) (new)  by Wrestlr
Andy learns what it takes to become one of the Wolves. An Institute Story.

The Menagerie (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Klaus keeps a collection from the supernatural.

The Odyssey (mc ff mf sf) (1 new chapter)  by ThatSquickGuy
A simple survey mission on a newly discovered planet goes squickly wrong.

Organism-X (mc ff mf gr) (new)  by DevilBookCorruptions
After a meteorite crashes near Bailey College, female students begin to undergo dramatic physical and mental changes while developing insatiable libidos. Meanwhile, the men begin to fall ill and die. In the middle of it all is a girl with exceptional abilities who might just hold the fate of the world in her hands...

Out of Mind-Control 2 — Still A Mystery (mc ff mf ft rb) (1 new chapter)  by Catsuit78
Even five months after their investigations the Inspector and Trish can’t grab a breather as spandex-clad men and women disappear and Trish finds herself in the crosshairs. Is the Syndicate behind this? And what are they up to?

Petite Scarlett Fleeing Cloak (mc mf ff md ma gr) (new)  by Taking You Deeper
Scarlett tries to escape from the Canid monster who’s been ‘eating’ her Grandma.

Preposterously Posh (mc mf ff fd ft) (new)  by Downing Street
When Lindsey does yoga in a tight cocktail dress and gorgeous six-inch stilettos, she struggles to explain the embarrassing reason why she has to wear them all the time, no matter what, even in the most ridiculous of situations.

A Price Paid (mc mf ff md fd) (2 new chapters)  by Saddle Rider
Losing a prized possession to mages, a powerful man seeks revenge.

Quest for Tamsin (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
An unexpected journey unearths more buried memories of Elle’s past, and shows Louis the door to a secret realm of pleasure and service.

Rachel’s Love Potion 2: Rachel’s Love Potion’s Love Potion (mc mf md) (new)  by Ice Bear
Rachel wants to set up her best friend Knox with another woman, so she makes a love potion for him.

Santa Comes But Once a Year: The Revenge Of Technology Claus (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
Santa contacts a technology lab to make a control chip for him.

Santa’s Gift (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
Santa hypnotizes a business executive.

Santa’s Secret (mc mf ff mm md fd in be) (new)  by Crayz Maddy
Family bickering is put on hold when helping a stranger on Christmas Eve. The jolly old stranger makes sure they never quarrel again.

The Secret of Brookrose College (mc ff mf in sf la) (1 new chapter)  by Templeton Rose
Who or what is enslaving this all-female college’s faculty and students, and using them to breed futa clones?

Senioritis (mc mf ff fd md ds bd ft hm) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Marc explores sexuality with a 19-year-old dominant woman.

A Shiver Down the Spine (mc ff) (new)  by Trixie Adara
Morganna, a powerful witch, spots her latest prey in a cozy sweater curled up in coffee shop, and there’s no way she can resist corrupting that.

The Somnambulist (mc ff) (new)  by le Duc de Kavaliere
Emily is an exceptionally good hypnotic subject, much to the pleasure of Miss Scarlett.

Space Nut (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Adam discovers a crash landed alien who shares a taste for women with him, and together they will have them all, no matter the price.

Sssslipping Into the Jungle (mc mf md ft) (2 new chapters)  by Sleepy Hypno
Actress Jennifer gets lost while on a shooting break in India, only to come across a well known hypnotic serpent.

Taken By Santa: What Happens Next (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
Santa explains what happens to the men he captures after he reprograms them.

Test Cases (mc mf md) (new)  by scifiscribbler
A psychology test at university leaves many of the volunteers with new ideas in their heads.

There’s Something in the Water (mc mf in) (5 new chapters)  by RawlyRawls
An alien scientist arrives on Earth to conduct experiments in reproduction.

Thin As Paper, Thick As Blood (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by connie k
When Jackie gets a job at iconic WomaNation magazine, her future seems bright. But, within its walls, dark forces have plans for Jackie of their own.

T’was the Night Before Christmas (Sleepy Hypno) (mc md) (new)  by Sleepy Hypno
Xander gives everyone a Merry Christmas... whether they want it or not.

Vox Dominus (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Mesmerciless
When Seb accidentally enslaves his classmate with his voice, they both get more than they bargained for.

Ward (mc mf md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Bill is a ward of the state. Jill is sent into the backwater to do a welfare check. Bill is not who he seems.

Well-Trained (mc mm) (new)  by Wrestlr
Jim has finished with his chores, and now his uncle Butch want to show off how well-trained Jim has become.

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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 14th 2019
« Last post by 321 on December 21, 2019, 11:11:32 am »
More bottoms-up reviews (wait, that sounds wrong... anyway!)

Kallie's Subroutine sees our two protagonists on very different paths, one still trying to solve the mystery and escape slavery, and the other now sinking fully into her new life as a four-digit robot. And the number of robots continues to grow! I liked the dark turn here as
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, after being so eager to get to the bottom of things at the start of the story. Then again, she seems happier now...

Speaking of mysteries, there's more latex/robot/mind control fun going on inOut of Mind Control 2. The induction via smoke detector was creative and (quite possibly) a first for an EMCSA story? I enjoy stories with brainwashed moles and betrayal, so I'm looking forward to the next installment.

The Internship opens this week with a scene that reminds me of "Attack Angels," with a character brainwashing herself at home, after a long work day. Of course
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. Nichole certainly is a fast learner. I'm not sure how you'd put these skills on a resume, but then again, I get the feeling that her internship is going to end with a job offer she can't refuse.

Bob's on a roll in Flightback. A free upgrade, a hot flight attendant fawning over him, and then a chat about erotic mind control stories leads to sexy (dare I say romantic?) fun. And we haven't even reached Germany yet! MetaBob does a good job here with making us care about his characters, and wanting to know more about them. It'll be interesting to see where this plane goes.

More comic book fun awaits in Issue #3 of Cape City Chronicles! Our brainwashed heroine is just starting out on her new, re-aligned career path, while Lieutenant Alvarez continues to chip away at the case. If only she knew what was going on behind her back! This feels like a good setup for the next installment!

Meanwhile, poor Gene continues to juggle his girls in Blizzard. I love the character development here, as Gene and his girlfriends all struggle with their emotions and feelings. They all get some sage advice that could very well determine the outcome of the story. Also, they may want to think about cleaning those boots. They've gotten a lot of use lately!

(I still need to read through Black Swan and a few others before Simon's newest update hits today...)
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 14th 2019
« Last post by 4064 on December 21, 2019, 10:53:22 am »
AnimeCon Harem (mc ma ft) (1 new chapter)  by FortySixtyFour
After getting dumped by his girlfriend, Brian attends an anime convention with a special amulet.

Superb. As always. Makes me wish I hadn't posted the first chapter of Flightback this week.

A little Horatio Alger thing going, which is a sweet surprise, and beyond Emily joining the party, which has been apparent to me for a while, I perceive a few author giveaways from upcoming chapters:
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My Chloe character in Senioritis is named for FortySixtyFour's in this piece, but flipping her script entirely, reclaiming the good in her name. It's also a well-deserved homage.

Haha, the other fiction I write possibly leans too hard into the Horatio Alger sorta thing. Thanks for reading, man! Very pleased that now at least one other person is willing to accept a redemption scenario for Chloe characters. I mean, I write her as a bit of a hate sink, but from some of the reader responses I've gotten you'd think she was an eldritch abomination intent on performing human sacrifices and hellbent on spreading misery and destruction at any cost.
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I really want the rest of the harem in anime con harem to come together, but at the same time I am loving the slow burn on this. My only complaint is the time between entries, but good things are worth waiting for.

nametag, you appear every single time I've made a post here. Really appreciate your support, MCstories was the first site I started writing fiction on and if not for the right kind words at just the right time I don't know that I'd have bothered to keep trying back when I was struggling to balance work and writing. Message me sometime when you're free, I'm interested in what you might think of some of the chapters I'm working on.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 14th 2019
« Last post by connie k on December 21, 2019, 09:21:17 am »
Thank you, Shadra.

I will take a wild guess and say the stories diverge considerably in the end.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 14th 2019
« Last post by neverm1nd on December 21, 2019, 05:57:50 am »
Thank you Zork, BethanyP and Shadra for you kind words. It's always great to hea that people enjoy my writing! Thank you especially Shara for your nuanced take on the later chapters and the new ending. I definitely see what you mean, and some of the points you raised were by design. The main plot is definitely done by chapter 6, and the rest of it is indulgence and fetish fodder. Your mileage may absolutely vary on that :)

And concerning what you said about the new ending:
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 14th 2019
« Last post by MetaBob on December 21, 2019, 01:34:38 am »
Rounding out the week with Flightback, just before the next update. Knowing the inspiration for the story, it's nice to see the idea grow into a proper story. Not sure I would have the confidence to write anything with myself as the main character.

As I've mentioned to Mɛta, he has great skill with his writing that I admit I'm a bit envious of. The story is well written with a sweet opening scene with a cared focus on the induction. Those that like pleasant tales will definitely find something to enjoy in this.

Thank you, Shadra! I'm very happy to have received the inspiration for this piece on your (and Carefully Random's) Discord server!

And thank you to 321 (plus one other inspiration, who I wish I could recall) for the question there: "I'm curious, though, if anyone has ever written an EMCSA story about an EMCSA story writer"

I cited br0adband in reply. And Wiseguy. I even included a somewhat inevitable Wiseguy homage in my chapter 2. I felt honored to do so, and still do.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 14th 2019
« Last post by Shadra on December 20, 2019, 07:55:21 pm »
Rounding out the week with Flightback, just before the next update. Knowing the inspiration for the story, it's nice to see the idea grow into a proper story. Not sure I would have the confidence to write anything with myself as the main character.

As I've mentioned to Mɛta, he has great skill with his writing that I admit I'm a bit envious of. The story is well written with a sweet opening scene with a cared focus on the induction. Those that like pleasant tales will definitely find something to enjoy in this.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 7th 2019
« Last post by MCaesar on December 20, 2019, 07:49:32 pm »
A buzzer-beater for Day-Old Thoughts, and it's for Dead of Night.

Here's my progression going through this story.
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While the ending might not have floated my particular boat, overall I was pretty riveted. The characters all rang very clear, and the prose really flowed. I liked it almost as much as I liked Kat and Mouse, which I liked a lot, though I didn't finish it in time to give timely feedback. Both had me on the edge of my seat.

Since I mentioned Kat and Mouse, just wanted to say (again) that it was a phenomenal story. It felt super grounded and the tension was so thick it was actually nauseating for me at times. Which is a good thing, I think. Well done. I really want sequels where Kat and Marisa become consultants or PIs and solve mind control cases for the FBI, or something like that. That would be dope.

And speaking of both stories, the biggest issue I have with both of them is that both are very lacking in eroticism to me. Dead of Night moreso. The hypnosis rarely comes off as sexy, seductive, or titillating. It's a device that supports the plot and the tones of uncertainty and fear. Supports them very well, I'll readily admit. Even in Kat and Mouse, where the two characters have an erotic relationship with hypnosis to start, the plot twists and perverts it, and not in a fun way. Compelling, but not in the sexy way I come to this site for. It very well could be that forcing more erotic elements into either story would have compromised the overall vision, but I'd love to see one that includes them organically.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 7th 2019
« Last post by scifiscribbler on December 20, 2019, 07:31:27 am »

I think I can get behind that. Been reading some "battle-of-wits" and "cat-and-mouse" stories lately, and been trying to pick them apart, and the progression of enslavement and the struggle between controller and victim are often the big conflict there. The high stakes and uncertainty I've been slurping up with those have probably colored my view a bit.

But if you're saying what I think you are, I do think I've got a bit better of a handle on it now. :)

I mean, fair's fair, you may come out of Chapter Four with the same issue. I won't claim to be a perfect writer.
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2019 Update Archive / Re: New Releases - December 7th 2019
« Last post by MCaesar on December 20, 2019, 02:42:47 am »
Glad you're enjoying, if on a chilled out stroll-in-the-park level.

For what it's worth: For me, the journey in this story isn't Millie's. Which may be clear after the final chapter, or I may have missed my mark.

I think I can get behind that. Been reading some "battle-of-wits" and "cat-and-mouse" stories lately, and been trying to pick them apart, and the progression of enslavement and the struggle between controller and victim are often the big conflict there. The high stakes and uncertainty I've been slurping up with those have probably colored my view a bit.

But if you're saying what I think you are, I do think I've got a bit better of a handle on it now. :)
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