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May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« on: May 04, 2019, 10:41:51 am »
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Afternoon at the Pink Yoga Studio (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Wittgenstein
Nataly takes the afternoon off to have a relaxing yoga session.

Allure (mc mf fd) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Kyle visits his grandparents’ farm, and spies a strange, beautiful woman.

Bewitching Spells (mc fd) (1 new chapter)  by CrystalWitch
Your mind is placed under a spell.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Candy Coated (mc) (new)  by Jukebox
A delicious, decadent hypnotic induction to satisfy your sweet tooth.

Debbie’s Hypnotic Cab Ride (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Witchman
Debbie’s friend Beth encourages her to take a ride in a special taxi.

Editing Reality Book Two: Sultry Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Fortunes Told (mc mf ff fd) (1 new chapter)  by Witchman
An engaged couple visits a fortuneteller, who has a profound impact on their relationship.

Found (mc mf) (new)  by MoldedMind
A woman successfully tracks down a retired hypnotist, in the hopes of hypnotizing him herself to prove her skill. But even retired hypnotists know how to work a situation to their advantage...

Hierarchy of Needs (mc mf md in ex) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
Behind a small door in Jacob’s house, there’s four filing cabinets—one for each member of his family.

Hostel (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup (mc mf fd) (2 new chapters)  by AskJeeves
The CEO of a startup gives a compelling presentation to investors.

Hypno-Harold: The Wildest Hypnotist on Earth (mc mm) (new)  by stageshow27
Joey, a closet hypno-fetishist, attends his very first live stage hypnosis show.

I Have No Idea (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Tanner wakes up from a blackout, and discovers that he started a billion dollar pharmaceutical company and created a slave paradise with a prototype mind control drug.

In the Beginning (mc mf md sf) (new)  by CuyahogaKingKong
A girl living before the dawn of civilization has her life changed forever when she’s taken by a mysterious light in the sky.

Indian Bride (mc mf md gr) (new)  by Borbin
Satyajit’s uncle reveals to him the secret to a successful marriage.

It Runs in the Family (mc ff in ma hm) (1 new chapter)  by Sammynona
Connie’s secretly in love with her best friend Tara. But also Tara’s older sister Jane. And their young mother Michelle too. It was always an impossible dream to make the Silva family into her own harem of lovers, until she found out that Tara’s grandmother was a hypnotist.

Lawful Orders (mc mf md sf) (new)  by The Scrivener’s Paradox
Emily isn’t fond of the new neural interfaces that SpaceCommand is testing, but they are perfectly safe.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

The Mask Becomes You (mc ff mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Two college students discover a strange mask that makes the words of the wearer irresistible. They soon discover that it’s even hard to resist using the mask, and that the wearer’s thoughts may no longer be their own...

The Merger — Spirals (mc mf ff fd) (new)  by Sleepy Hypno
The angel Veo comes to visit her friend, the succubus Midnight, with an offer that she cannot refuse.

New Breed (mc mf fd) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Satsumo’s company is targeted for takeover.

The New You Spa and Tanning Salon (mc ff rb) (new)  by Roboman127
Robberies, kidnappings and Assassinations are being done by strange shiny white latex clad women.  Is there a connection to the new spa in town?

Night Time Nudging (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?

Paperback (mc mf ff ft) (1 new chapter)  by eviltwinmordred
An impressionable teenager finds an old mind-control fetish novel in a used book store.

Parasites Infect (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Alien parasites begin to spread among the female population.

A Priest in Her Service (mc mf ff md fd) (2 new chapters)  by The Scrivener’s Paradox
Derek’s ordinary life is turned upside down when he finds himself made into a priest of an unusual religion. The job does come with a few perks, however.

Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (2 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

The Reality Schism (mc mf md gr ds) (new)  by MangoTech
John receives a ring that turns his statements into truth. Skeptical, it takes him a bit to warm up to the power. Once he does, however, anything is possible...

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (3 new chapters)  by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the General’s forces and remain uninfected himself.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

The Rose and the Frost (mc mf fd) (new)  by Pan
A walk in the garden turns into so much more.

Ruby (mc fd) (new)  by S. B.
She wants to talk about submission. Listen carefully.

Simon Says (Chrysostomon) (mc mf ff md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Simon’s life is saved with an experimental serum, which has side effects.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Skeinbound (mc ff) (new)  by Meleva
Three young women set out on a winter’s journey, to prove their new adulthood or perish in the process. One trying to keep them fed, one trying to keep them safe, and one who’ll try anything to keep them all together.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations he’d never thought possible.

Subroutine (Kallie) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
Lori, a college student, discovers she has a hypnotic trigger that turns her into a mindless, obedient drone. How? Why? And what’s going to happen when her roommate finds out?

Teacher (GiantNut) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by GiantNut
A college student uses classified government information to reprogram his teacher.

This Cannot Be Happening, Can It? (mc mf ff md fd in be) (new)  by HB5211
Ashley was a successful young romance writer finding success incorporating eroticism and vampires into her novels.  Her latest novel was now a movie.  At the premier, the  budding novelist meets a couple right out of her family’s past.  Her life will never be the same.

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Anna and Matt are two young professionals who need a romantic break, and find the perfect island vacation rental. But is it too perfect?

Watch and Learn (mc mf ff md in) (1 new chapter)  by Quiet Hypnotist
Siblings might not always get along. But when Kailyn secretly steals a DVD from her brother’s room Nora is sure that goes too far. Yet one quick peek couldn’t hurt, right?

Were-Tigress (mc mf fd gr) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
A family man learns magic, mostly the hard way.

What You See In The Mirror (mc mm mf md) (new)  by MCBrain
Juan Miguel Santos de Costa finds a mirror that he thinks is pretty neat. However, he soon realises that this mirror shows him things about himself he had never known before...

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

Yew and Me (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Writer345
Lilith Yew, powerful leader of the Martian colonization movement, faces more threats to her efforts to establish human colonies on Mars.
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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #1 on: May 04, 2019, 10:50:32 am »
May the Forth be with you? Firth sure!

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New Releases-May 4th 2019
« Reply #2 on: May 04, 2019, 11:31:53 am »
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Afternoon at the Pink Yoga Studio (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Wittgenstein
Nataly takes the afternoon off to have a relaxing yoga session.

Allure (mc mf fd) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Kyle visits his grandparents’ farm, and spies a strange, beautiful woman.

Bewitching Spells (mc fd) (1 new chapter)  by CrystalWitch
Your mind is placed under a spell.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Candy Coated (mc) (new)  by Jukebox
A delicious, decadent hypnotic induction to satisfy your sweet tooth.

Debbie’s Hypnotic Cab Ride (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Witchman
Debbie’s friend Beth encourages her to take a ride in a special taxi.

Editing Reality Book Two: Sultry Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Fortunes Told (mc mf ff fd) (1 new chapter)  by Witchman
An engaged couple visits a fortuneteller, who has a profound impact on their relationship.

Found (mc mf) (new)  by MoldedMind
A woman successfully tracks down a retired hypnotist, in the hopes of hypnotizing him herself to prove her skill. But even retired hypnotists know how to work a situation to their advantage...

Hierarchy of Needs (mc mf md in ex) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
Behind a small door in Jacob’s house, there’s four filing cabinets—one for each member of his family.

Hostel (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup (mc mf fd) (2 new chapters)  by AskJeeves
The CEO of a startup gives a compelling presentation to investors.

Hypno-Harold: The Wildest Hypnotist on Earth (mc mm) (new)  by stageshow27
Joey, a closet hypno-fetishist, attends his very first live stage hypnosis show.

I Have No Idea (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Tanner wakes up from a blackout, and discovers that he started a billion dollar pharmaceutical company and created a slave paradise with a prototype mind control drug.

In the Beginning (mc mf md sf) (new)  by CuyahogaKingKong
A girl living before the dawn of civilization has her life changed forever when she’s taken by a mysterious light in the sky.

Indian Bride (mc mf md gr) (new)  by Borbin
Satyajit’s uncle reveals to him the secret to a successful marriage.

It Runs in the Family (mc ff in ma hm) (1 new chapter)  by Sammynona
Connie’s secretly in love with her best friend Tara. But also Tara’s older sister Jane. And their young mother Michelle too. It was always an impossible dream to make the Silva family into her own harem of lovers, until she found out that Tara’s grandmother was a hypnotist.

Lawful Orders (mc mf md sf) (new)  by The Scrivener’s Paradox
Emily isn’t fond of the new neural interfaces that SpaceCommand is testing, but they are perfectly safe.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

The Mask Becomes You (mc ff mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Two college students discover a strange mask that makes the words of the wearer irresistible. They soon discover that it’s even hard to resist using the mask, and that the wearer’s thoughts may no longer be their own...

The Merger — Spirals (mc mf ff fd) (new)  by Sleepy Hypno
The angel Veo comes to visit her friend, the succubus Midnight, with an offer that she cannot refuse.

New Breed (mc mf fd) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Satsumo’s company is targeted for takeover.

The New You Spa and Tanning Salon (mc ff rb) (new)  by Roboman127
Robberies, kidnappings and Assassinations are being done by strange shiny white latex clad women.  Is there a connection to the new spa in town?

Night Time Nudging (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?

Paperback (mc mf ff ft) (1 new chapter)  by eviltwinmordred
An impressionable teenager finds an old mind-control fetish novel in a used book store.

Parasites Infect (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Alien parasites begin to spread among the female population.

A Priest in Her Service (mc mf ff md fd) (2 new chapters)  by The Scrivener’s Paradox
Derek’s ordinary life is turned upside down when he finds himself made into a priest of an unusual religion. The job does come with a few perks, however.

Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (2 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

The Reality Schism (mc mf md gr ds) (new)  by MangoTech
John receives a ring that turns his statements into truth. Skeptical, it takes him a bit to warm up to the power. Once he does, however, anything is possible...

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (3 new chapters)  by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the General’s forces and remain uninfected himself.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

The Rose and the Frost (mc mf fd) (new)  by Pan
A walk in the garden turns into so much more.

Ruby (mc fd) (new)  by S. B.
She wants to talk about submission. Listen carefully.

Simon Says (Chrysostomon) (mc mf ff md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Simon’s life is saved with an experimental serum, which has side effects.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Skeinbound (mc ff) (new)  by Meleva
Three young women set out on a winter’s journey, to prove their new adulthood or perish in the process. One trying to keep them fed, one trying to keep them safe, and one who’ll try anything to keep them all together.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations he’d never thought possible.

Subroutine (Kallie) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
Lori, a college student, discovers she has a hypnotic trigger that turns her into a mindless, obedient drone. How? Why? And what’s going to happen when her roommate finds out?

Teacher (GiantNut) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by GiantNut
A college student uses classified government information to reprogram his teacher.

This Cannot Be Happening, Can It? (mc mf ff md fd in be) (new)  by HB5211
Ashley was a successful young romance writer finding success incorporating eroticism and vampires into her novels.  Her latest novel was now a movie.  At the premier, the  budding novelist meets a couple right out of her family’s past.  Her life will never be the same.

Vacation Rental (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by LightSail
Anna and Matt are two young professionals who need a romantic break, and find the perfect island vacation rental. But is it too perfect?

Watch and Learn (mc mf ff md in) (1 new chapter)  by Quiet Hypnotist
Siblings might not always get along. But when Kailyn secretly steals a DVD from her brother’s room Nora is sure that goes too far. Yet one quick peek couldn’t hurt, right?

Were-Tigress (mc mf fd gr) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
A family man learns magic, mostly the hard way.

What You See In The Mirror (mc mm mf md) (new)  by MCBrain
Juan Miguel Santos de Costa finds a mirror that he thinks is pretty neat. However, he soon realises that this mirror shows him things about himself he had never known before...

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

Yew and Me (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Writer345
Lilith Yew, powerful leader of the Martian colonization movement, faces more threats to her efforts to establish human colonies on Mars.
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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #3 on: May 04, 2019, 12:26:36 pm »
Subroutine (Kallie) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
Lori, a college student, discovers she has a hypnotic trigger that turns her into a mindless, obedient drone. How? Why? And what’s going to happen when her roommate finds out?


Excited to see this one in the update list, and it was everything I've been hoping for since Harper went under the first time.

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Re: New Releases-May 4th 2019
« Reply #4 on: May 04, 2019, 12:28:12 pm »
Ok, so something I wrote is out there now.  This is an oddly big moment for me.
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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #5 on: May 04, 2019, 12:55:18 pm »
I for one await the plethora of praise over Hostel, because this chapter was absolutely delicious. Not a single dull moment to be had, I don't know how you do it. Thanks for another amazing contribution.

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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #6 on: May 04, 2019, 01:22:57 pm »
Afternoon at the Pink Yoga Studio (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Wittgenstein

This is a solid story, with hot mantra repetition and serial recruitment elements.  I can't help thinking the controller has things a bit too easy though, I'd like to see more effective resistance.


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Lawful Orders (mc mf md sf) (new)  by The Scrivener’s Paradox
Emily isn’t fond of the new neural interfaces that SpaceCommand is testing, but they are perfectly safe.

I really wanted Emily to find a loophole.  As a longtime Star Trek and Babylon 5 fan this is a great fantasy.  But I want her to find a way to blow the whistle on her sleazy CO.  Since she's compelled to obey unethical orders, could she somehow resist ethical ones in a useful way?  But her CO shows he's genre savvy, I don't see much hope from her.  Maybe one of the other sharp nubile bridge bunnies will figure it out in time?  A sequel or further chapters feel like good ideas.
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Re: New Releases-May 4th 2019
« Reply #7 on: May 04, 2019, 01:27:25 pm »
Ok, so something I wrote is out there now.  This is an oddly big moment for me.

Your story was the first one I read this week, and I thought that it was a great start. Loved the world-building! It'll be interesting to see what happens next.

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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #8 on: May 04, 2019, 01:29:00 pm »
I for one await the plethora of praise over Hostel, because this chapter was absolutely delicious. Not a single dull moment to be had, I don't know how you do it. Thanks for another amazing contribution.

I feel like I had quite the wrestling match with this chapter, so I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed it! That comment really made my day!

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Re: New Releases-May 4th 2019
« Reply #9 on: May 04, 2019, 02:02:10 pm »
Ok, so something I wrote is out there now.  This is an oddly big moment for me.

Your story was the first one I read this week, and I thought that it was a great start. Loved the world-building! It'll be interesting to see what happens next.

Thanks, I've got a draft of chapter 2 in desperate need of a test reader if you're interested.  It'll be a while before I even get to the meat of this story.
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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #10 on: May 04, 2019, 03:08:39 pm »
Sorry messed up, didn't see this thread already based on the title.
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Re: New Releases-May 4th 2019
« Reply #11 on: May 04, 2019, 04:22:38 pm »
Well,

I will start with 321s Hostel, chapter two.

I have always admired 321's slowly intricate executed cerebral stories. It is something I always look forward to when reading those stories and chapters.

But this time I was ambushed. Wait, before I go on I have to get myself a nice big glass, no, make that a huge mug of freezing cold ice water.

Now that I have it let me...pour it over myself.

Ahhhhhh....that's better. Now I can continue, just have look through the steam that generated after touching me.

This chapter can best be described by one word: HOT. HOT. HOT. HOT.

321 pulls off one of the most difficult tricks. It is taking a character and switching back and forth, altering her perceptions slowly, by increments, changing what she thinks and knows to be true.

When done right, it has almost as a disorienting feel for the reader as it does to the victim.

Trilby Else, who was so good at this, and few others used that maneuver to varying effect and success in other stories and I have to say 321 did it in an inimitable way that is as great as I have ever read in any story, ever. Just masterful! That is no mean feat to pull off.

To read how Rebecca slowly changes with each snap, now accepting being at the hostel instead of the hotel, now accepting being naked in front of Alice, now understanding that she had no intention of spending vacation time with her great, best friend Emily. I mean why would she spend their vacation time together, right? Oh man, how sinister, how intricate, how sexy.

Just ridiculous. MC really can't get any better than what happened here.

And of course 321 does not rush this. It just keeps going back and fourth like some tennis ball being hit from one side to another, and with each cross of the net Rebecca changes her views. Fuck.

321 understands that the slow burn is the one that penetrates deepest. No quick case of sunburn that will fade out in a few says, this burn will last and last, the pain so exquisite and enjoyable.

I have always loved 321s slow, cerebral approach to MC stories but man, what happened here with the MC just knocked me out. 321 has always been a master of story line, plot, characters but the MC is this story, as it is applied and described is just as good at it can get. 321 is reaching new personal heights in MC depiction with this story and chapter. You really outdid yourself here 321. Thanks!  >:D

As to the story, besides the amazing MC, we see the return of Jessica, as I supposed we would. She too falls into the horrific net as Rebecca induces her. But really not, because as always, it is Alice who is calling the shots and all the rest are puppets.

In the end poor Emily, who no longer cares about spending vacation time with her best friend either finds a use for herself. Or I should say, Alice finds a use for her.

I can't wait to see where this dark, devious, so very smoking hot story goes from here. I'll have more ice on hand just to be safe.



And then we move from one budding classic right to another. Aren't we a bunch of lucky readers?

This story of course is Fumanchu's Paperback chapter three. You know a story is special when the longer it goes on the more interesting the plot gets and the hotter, amazingly, the MC becomes. This story has that terrific double narrative, one seemingly better than the other, until you switch to the previous one and realize, hey, they are both just great so just dig in and enjoy the ride.

The narrator begins by describing some of the action in the comic. His fears that Stella is not really induced but if faking it. Yep, just as I and a thousand other MC junkies would have worried. Fumanchu is so expert and getting in our heads, knowing what his narrator, and we, would be thinking. It is just so much fun to read when he does that. Like looking at a reflection of yourself as shown by someone else. And you think...boy does he know me.

He then goes on to describe some more of life's journey, the budding genius doing some very recondite work for the government. It is here where Fumanchu does something very clever as the narrator talks about how the narrator got an idea from the comic! So not only do we have a double narrative story but Fumanchu cross pollinates them! Bravo Funmanchu! So very imaginative.

The work he is doing is a portent of the shape of things to come in his life. The other seminal moment being meeting the intelligent love of his life, Noel, and the good effect she has on him. What happens between them then one can tell will be a major driver in what becomes of him.


Now on to the comic.

Yep, in my second freezing cold water mug moment of the day I encounter the discussion of Stella and young Lindsey. The languid, lounging bed room scene, replete with  bed room eyes talk about how the investigation into the De Maurier Society was a dead end. Uh huh. To see these two women who joined law enforcement to do good work so subverted is just such a freaking hot MC scene. And to see controlled young Lindsey leading controlled veteran agent around by the nose just keeps pouring the heat on. And to see Lindsey so completely embracing her dark mission of complete betrayal.

Has playing 'I'm a little tea pot' ever been so fun or sexy? No way. Not in my memory.

Keep it coming Fumanchu. You're killing this so unusual story and your'e killing me. In a good way.  ;)

Some other stores I had a chance so far to read I want to comment about, both very good with excellent MC components.

Pan's Hierarchy of Needs continues on it's wicked way and I'm so glad to see it back. Pan uses a very original style of mind control here as Jacob continues to change, corrupt and conquer preternaturally gorgeous sister Ashley.

Not only is the story unusual in its methods but the MC and slow changes going on are just top shelf. Pan is a master of this and Hierarchy is one of his better efforts at it. That's saying a lot considering his awesome body of great works.

Afternoon at the Pink Yoga Studio by Wittengenstein is a really good flat out MC story. Nataly got inducted in the last chapter and now 'decides' to share the love with Laurel. Really good MC here in both chapters. This a very fun story to read.

Night Time Nudging by Mindspark is another brother conquers sister story. These are always fun to read if done write and Mindspark knows exactly how to do it. And like any good predator, the brother has his eyes set not only on lovely sis Sammy but her gorgeous best friend Kylie. Hey, I mean why not, right? And Mindspark does it all, the plot, the story, the characters the MC perfectly.


Interesting to see Witchman come up a sequel to Hypnotic Cab Ride, one of my favorite long time stories with Debbie's Hypnotic Cab Ride. We see Debbie years after the events with daughter in tow. One wonders what fate befell Beth. She was totally out of it by the end of Hypnotic Cab Ride. Good to see this and very fun to read.


Vacation Rental by Lightsail is another very good read. Ann and Matt are on vacation but both of them seem to be undergoing some strange changes in their views and behavior. Lightsail is taking it slow, all the more credit to that, and slow induction of the two is both very hot and adds to a mysterious plot. This story has me hooked.

Watch and Learn by Quiet Hypnotist is anther story with a very good set up, plot and characters. The slow burn, patient MC is so very well done and really smoking. I really am intrigued by where this story of a brother, his nosy sister and  her friend goes.

The one complaint I have about it is the huge paragraphs, or really no paragraphs at all and how when two people are speaking to each other there is no delineation. You really have look carefully, reread sometimes to understand who is saying what. It does take away from the enjoyment of a well thought out, terrifically executed plot. It would be better if reading was easier and smoother.
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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #12 on: May 04, 2019, 04:27:01 pm »
Hi all! I have the start of a new chaptered story out this week, so I hope folks enjoy it. I got to depart some from my weekly fare and experiment with induction style throughout, but I think it's still just as fun, magical, and hot as I've managed in the past. :D

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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #14 on: May 04, 2019, 06:41:18 pm »
The first two stories to catch my eye this week are both from first-time contributors to the EMCSA, so I figured I’d poke around the rest of the update and see if there are other first-time contributors (there was one more). So, in the order I read:

In the Beginning (mc mf md sf) (new)  by CuyahogaKingKong
A girl living before the dawn of civilization has her life changed forever when she’s taken by a mysterious light in the sky.

I like this! I’m a sucker for a good abduction and transformation story and a sucker for the way CuyahogaKingKong shows the absolute control. Don’t be afraid, the light orders Ahn, and she’s powerless against the command. (I love how Ahn runs through everything she’s not afraid of anymore; it’s a nice bit of world- and character-building.)

I was throughly satisfied by the abduction, the light’s testing of Ahn, and the start of the transformation. I hope this does get a continuation, because I do want to see Ahn post-transformation.

The Reality Schism (mc mf md gr ds) (new)  by MangoTech
John receives a ring that turns his statements into truth. Skeptical, it takes him a bit to warm up to the power. Once he does, however, anything is possible...

So, what does one do when they get a mysterious magical ring in the mail? This being an EMC story, they test it out and indulge in some sexy fun. John is thorough in his testing, and smart about it, starting with small, mundane changes. MangoTech doesn’t spend too long on this section before moving onto the action that makes this an EMC story.

John is also a dick controller. There’s no internal debate about using his magic to transform people around him. I like that in this sort of story, and I especially like John’s scientist/engineer approach to his testing. He’s more fascinated by how the ring works, what the extent of its powers are, and if he can assemble a harem.

(I so hope he can assemble a harem.)

Afternoon at the Pink Yoga Studio (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Wittgenstein
Nataly takes the afternoon off to have a relaxing yoga session.

Do you like hot young (20-something) ladies being conditioned to obey and serve a nameless master? Do you like cocksucking? Conditioned slaves getting off on being used and then being ordered to forget their blissful service?

Most importantly, do you like serial recruitment? Then this is a story for you!

There are no surprises in the first 2 chapters. (This is not a complaint.) Wittgenstein delivers a solid entry into the unaware serial recruiter subgenre.

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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #15 on: May 04, 2019, 07:30:52 pm »
I love 321’s presentation of hypnosis, and Chapter 2 of “Hostel”  does not disappoint.  There’s an art to writing inductions and triggering, making them just realistic enough without getting bogged down in the details.  Add that to complex, expertly drawn characters and a mysterious plot and you have real winner.   

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« Reply #16 on: May 05, 2019, 06:40:07 am »
I'd like to thank badpenny and all the other people around here who are very supportive of new authors like me.  It's especially nice from longtime contributors with impressive bodies of work.

Scalar7th deserves a fair share of credit for chapter one, as I rewrote the first scene basically from scratch after getting his notes.  Chapter 2 is waiting for similar treatment (can't stress enough how much I need test readers), but Ahn's journey has barely started yet!  Stay tuned Chalcolithic Erotica fans! :D
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Re: May the Fourth Be With You Update, 2019
« Reply #17 on: May 05, 2019, 10:08:13 am »
What post of mine? :angel:

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Candy Coated

Is it wicked to say its a sweet hypno piece? But yes, it is, in more senses than one. Delightfully done, and trance lovers will enjoy this a lot
Definitely enjoyed

Magical Girl Syn

Oh my, plenty of twists and turns going on here, on both sides of the magic! I love the play with Carice, even if I do feel sorry for her, really I do. But fine, given the chance to be in her place, of course I would! No idea who eventually wins here, but its great fun in interim
High end of definitely enjoyed

The Merger — Spirals

Talking of stories I'd love to be a victim in, here's another! Love the action between Veo, and Midnight, and fine, between Midnight, and her lucky victims. Part of a really good series of stories
High end of definitely enjoyed

Paperback

As strong a chapter as ever, both sides of the story. If nothing else, I'd love a part as an uncredited woman being converted! As for the way this chapter plays out, loved it! No, not telling you, go read it
High end of definitely enjoyed

Return of the Armored Warrior

Yes, I'd love one of those armored bodysuits, especially the liquid one, but anyway... The play offs between Erika, and Gene, and between her, and the villains are just great, and such fun. Clearly stories with moments of humour, and things not going perfectly are always fun for me, and this is clearly that
High end of definitely enjoyed. A rebuild in one of those suits (including an AI system), and I could happily give more

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« Reply #18 on: May 05, 2019, 03:16:04 pm »
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« Reply #19 on: May 05, 2019, 10:09:15 pm »
Lots of great stuff this week, as always!

Carefully Random's The Mask Becomes You is a fun roller coaster this week, full of highs and lows (and creamy middles) for our heroine.
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The whole thing ends on a wonderful cliffhanger. Can't wait to see where this one goes next.

Betsy's 61 Days in River City has smelly booze-swigging Vikings, heroines on the job, and an unexpected quarterly uptick in new television sales. Mysteries are afoot and Motorcycle Maid is still being mean. It's been a wild six weeks, story-wise, and there's still sixteen days of adventure to come!

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Okay, for those of you who read this week's great chapter of Kallie's Subroutine... how many of you immediately went to Google and typed in "my roommate was brainwashed into a latex drone"?   :)

From the beginning it was pretty clear that Lori's brainwashing and implanted trigger phrase had something behind it, and that Lori and Harper risked finding out what that was in the worst way if they poked around too much. These last two chapters have really been amazing. Plenty of hypnosis, plenty of brainwashing, and plenty of hints about who might be behind the whole thing.

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« Reply #20 on: May 06, 2019, 03:45:14 am »
plenty of hints about who might be behind the whole thing.

At the start of the first chapter...
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Seems pretty obvious to me?

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« Reply #21 on: May 06, 2019, 07:23:17 am »
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« Reply #22 on: May 06, 2019, 10:35:01 am »
Part 2

Found

Fine, I love these cute stories with a twist, and this is most delightfully one of those. Why cant I find a hypnotist like him, seriously? Rom MC lovers, this is a must, just keep going! Wonderfully done
High end of definitely enjoyed

Indian Bride

One of those stories where she deserved what she gets, but then he has to go a little bit too far, but anyway... Up until then, I was feeling sorry for him, and thanking him for putting her in her deserved place, but... Fine, I'd probably enjoy the transformation done to me, but I dont think he's my man to do it, thats all
Definitely enjoyed. Compromise, as I like the method, if not the protag

Ruby

In truth, its non gender related fd, so any ladies feeling submissive to ladies, could read this, and enjoy too. Yes, fine, Ruby could take me under her control (if so inclined) any day she wished. She's got a sharp mind, and great logic, and would make a great Mistress to anyone.
High end of definitely enjoyed. It is loosely hypno (which doesnt normally get marked this high), but done more as a logical piece, than trance, so merited

61 Days in River City

Pure lunacy in River City too, as would be expected. Fine, my favourite scene has to be the supermarket one, but its all pretty good. The primary mission might get done eventually, but regardless, the ride to that point is just great
High end of definitely enjoyed

Watch and Learn

Nora certainly learns here, and she's certainly watching a few DVD's too! :laugh: I love the way Harold is playing around things too, teasing her, and I suspect Kailyn has already been worked over too. Until we get actual incest, loving this
High end of definitely enjoyed

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« Reply #23 on: May 06, 2019, 11:50:57 am »
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Ruby

In truth, its non gender related fd, so any ladies feeling submissive to ladies, could read this, and enjoy too. Yes, fine, Ruby could take me under her control (if so inclined) any day she wished. She's got a sharp mind, and great logic, and would make a great Mistress to anyone.
High end of definitely enjoyed. It is loosely hypno (which doesnt normally get marked this high), but done more as a logical piece, than trance, so merited


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« Reply #24 on: May 06, 2019, 11:58:15 am »

Debbie’s Hypnotic Cab Ride (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Witchman
Debbie’s friend Beth encourages her to take a ride in a special taxi.


Was pleasantly surprised to see this sequel to the original story - hoping that more will follow in the near future, as possibilities exist for it.