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New Releases-September 21st 2019
« on: September 21, 2019, 12:02:08 pm »
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Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

The Armageddon Archives (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by mr. potestas
Life in California is different now that the Apocalypse has happened, and the Realm is now ruled by the demon Asmodeus.

Ashley (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by Blue Collar Girl
Ashley discovers a pile of goo in her home.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

The Bovide Bus (mc mf md gr la) (new)  by Screw-Ball_Rancher
A high school girls’ volleyball team and cheerleader squad are sent to a long summer training camp, but the bus ride there is long, and the whole trip is lame anyway!  Good thing the bus is nice, and they can relax on it.  Of course, they have to get through the annoying information video they’re required to watch first!

Confused (mc mf fd) (new)  by Robert Towers
Mrs. Bissot wakes up without remembering anything about her past and her current life is definitely weird.

Corruption Games (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by S. B.
Alexandra Ryder—a.k.a. Agent 47-D—is back and this time it’s personal.

Editing Reality Book Three: Naughty Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (2 new chapters)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Euphrates Pharmaceuticals: Dilemma (mc mm ds hm ft sf) (new)  by Nicky Noxville
Three buddies sign up for a medical trial that is offering a full scholarship as a reward. What could go wrong?

Flame & Frost (mc ff) (new)  by Meleva
Once more: two mages, a pyromancer and a glaciomancer, face off for a duel in the woods just beyond their college grounds. This time it’s Selyana who’s tired of losing—even if she doesn’t have much of a plan to defeat her partner with.

Frank & Jessy — Collar Play (mc mf md fd bd ft sf) (1 new chapter)  by schizo
Jessy purchases some illegal tech for her and Frank to play with.

Ghost Boy (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

The Girls of S.L.E.E.P. — N.C.U. (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne, Trisha, Laura, and Eve get set up for the first meeting of the hypnosis sorority, Sigma Lambda Epsilon Epsilon Pi.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

How I Got Here (mc mf ff md) (new)  by The Scrivener’s Paradox
A man describes how he suddenly became very successful with women, and how it affected his life and the world.

I Hate My Master (mc mm) (2 new chapters)  by maxrpotter
Mark moves in with a new roommate, and finds himself getting annoyed by a few small things about him, like when he leaves dishes in the sink, or when he leaves his clothes around the place, or when he gives Mark orders that he is unable to disobey.

Kidnapping by Tentacle (mc ff sf) (new)  by Skaetlett
Courtney, a high ranking space soldier, finds herself in an unfortunate situation at the hands of some tentacled aliens who secrete a special fluid.

Lady of the House (mc mf md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Prescott obtains a special collar for his wife after he discovers she’s been cheating on him.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

Massaged By My Nerdy Brother (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by BurroGirl18 and Pan
A few innocent massages with her brother go too far.

Master of the Mind (mc mf md gr) (2 new chapters)  by InLeaves
A plane crash survivor realizes that he has psychic powers.

Naked in Front of the Computer (mc mf md ma) (new)  by Jukebox
Niusha is convinced that she’s not going to spend yet another night masturbating to the Guiding Dark’s hypnotic website. She’s very very wrong.

Nu Thought (mc ff bd ds) (new)  by Doctor D.
Dell joined Nu Zeta because it would look good on her resume but something odd is happening and now she isn’t so sure.

Office Space 2 — Space Harder (mc mf fd) (new)  by Chrystal Wynd
Lady Kanja arrives searching for her sister Lady Gaja. Chaos ensues.

On the Cards (mc mf ff md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Two sisters on the beach run into a magician.

Packback (mc mf ff fd in ft bd) (new)  by MɛtaBob
A man finds lust, love, and renewal on the Pacific Crest Trail.

A Priest in Her Service (mc mf ff md fd) (2 new chapters)  by The Scrivener’s Paradox
Derek’s ordinary life is turned upside down when he finds himself made into a priest of an unusual religion. The job does come with a few perks, however.

Principal of Revenge (mc mf md) (new)  by Alyce Moore
Devon uses his knowlege of herbology and natural medicine to concoct an elaborate revenge on his high school.

Rare Books (mc mf md) (new)  by 321
Tessa’s research project is revealing in more ways than one.

Refashioned (mc ff ft) (new)  by zorkmeister
Annabel gets far more than she bargained for when she goes online shopping.

Remainders (mc ff sf) (1 new chapter)  by the hungry ghost
Women find themselves trapped by a weird and mysterious force that seems to control their minds and bodies by putting them together in positions and groupings ideal for storage.

Room With a Secret (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Maximilian Cummings
Young ladies don’t know or can’t remember a room that makes their minds so open to suggestion.

Savannah’s Hypnotic Socks (mc ff ft) (new)  by Fibaro
A co-ed gets a pair of hypnotic socks that she uses on her roommate.

Seeing Things Through a New Lens (mc ff) (new)  by Dr. HypnoD
Sam hates going to the eye doctor. But thanks to her appointment with Dr. Vale, she’s seeing things, and people, differently.

Sensual Makeover (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Douglas Meurs
Bill and Min are a happily-married couple. Bill suggests a hypnotic Sensual Makeover for Min, and Min tries it...

The Silken: Family Counseling (mc mf mm ma in ft) (new)  by Templeton Rose
A rogue psychiatrist mends a mother-son relationship by turning both into incestuous, pantyhose sex slaves.

Simplify Your Life — Trading Up (mc mf ff md fd ma in bd ds ex hm gr ft) (new)  by Raptor4d4
Gold-digger Sharon Holmen has finally decided to trade up and ditch her wimpy husband and deadbeat daughter on the even of her husband’s latest job interview. But four years later...who was the one really trading up?

Sovereign (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by InLeaves
Giulietta is the heiress of the wealthiest family in Florence. Though still a commoner, she wants uppity princess Alessa out of her town. Alessa has other ideas. Brainwashing ideas.

The Spiral Boy (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by connie k
An unscrupulous hypnotist recounts his fateful meeting with a new subject, and how his plans spiral out of control.

Split Slave (mc ff ma bd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Skaetlett
Delta, a non-binary, kidnapped sex slave with a protective alternate personality, gets auctioned off to a multimillionaire who seems to have more in store than they’re ready for. Their Mistress thinks she knows everything about them and is wrong.

Stop Watch: Genesis (mc mf ff md fd in ts) (new)  by Sidia
Mike continues to use his timestopping power on his family.

There Was Something Strange Going On At The Office (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Alan Smithee
After a system update at work, Jenna starts to notice the increasingly unusual behaviour of her coworkers.

They all became Slaves and Robots for the Robomaster (mc ff md rb) (3 new chapters)  by Roboman127
A hidden power converts a man into Roboman The Robomaster.

The Ultimate Hypnotist — A Master PC Story (mc mf md gr) (new)  by The Lycanthrope
Ted’s collectable military computer has a bigger secret than he expected. Now he must take on a new identity as the ultimate hypnotist.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

Wildwood (mc mf md) (2 new chapters)  by notorioushypno
A mind control conspiracy spawns small-town hokum, entangling a group of plucky university students, some deadbeat locals, and a team of federal investigators.
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #1 on: September 21, 2019, 12:35:05 pm »
Wow! You guys have been BUSY!  :o

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2019, 01:41:29 pm »
Simon goofed the title of my piece ... it's "Packback" rather than "Paperback". I sent him a note and hopefully that'll be corrected soon.
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #3 on: September 21, 2019, 01:45:57 pm »
Simon goofed the title of my piece ... it's "Packback" rather than "Paperback". I sent him a note and hopefully that'll be corrected soon.

I find the title “Paperback” to have more literary merit. Simon was unintentionally brilliant. BRILLIANT!
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2019, 01:50:18 pm »
"Paperback," meh. Anyone can write one of those. ANYONE!

Simon has already fixed the piece's title, but left it at the beginning of each chapter. I sent him a note about that, too.

Whoever posted the link to the story on this forum will have to change it unless they want it to be a dead link.
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #5 on: September 21, 2019, 02:02:57 pm »
Wow, so many stories this week!  And starting at the top, hurray for more Algorithm, thank you for the special bonus installment Carefully Random!  As always, Algorithm doesn't disappoint, very hot and a wonderful story too.  And as always I completely failed to correctly guess the next plot twist, but I'm not going to stop trying!

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #6 on: September 21, 2019, 02:14:36 pm »
All fixed now. Except for the link to it at the top of this thread. Which, for the record, should be:

Packback

It's also nice to see that connie_k has posted the second chapter to her piece, this time under a separate title: The Spiral Boy. I'm working my way through that in between other endeavors and I like it just fine so far :-)
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #7 on: September 21, 2019, 04:10:26 pm »
September 21st already. Wow.

Been a busy weekend for me so not much reading time but I will comment on a few:

321's Hostel goes forth as Rebecca seems to have all things well under control. So very well. I can't help thinking....too well....And wow, what a partner in Celeste! Even though she has been altered and is under control she is proving an invaluable, smart aid for Rebecca.

For a while now I have been waiting for the unexpected hammer blow to come down and 321 do9es a great job luring you into feeling that way a just a certain point, but every time I think its coming, no. So now, finally, today I'm thinking, well, there may be no hammer, just a very happy ending.

Than Jessica gets a call right at the end of the chapter.


321 double dips this week with a short, Rare Books. Could have been called The Bait or The Trap too. Once Landon was disappointed Tessa had put the tome away you knew he had set the bait...or trap. This of course also sets up tension for the reader. You know if she opens that book....and of course she does.

Landon has a reputation. In the end one wonders, is it because of his own game and seduction techniques or has he had many other young women read the tome? Or a combination of both?

Lovely excursion into supernatural 321.


Another story I liked from the start that just gets better, more complex and sophisticated and volcanic hot in it's MC. That would be Alan Smithees There Was Something Strange Going On At the Office.  Poor Jenna, she finds out some kind of mind control at her company is changing her friends and co workers. It is only having a partial effect on her so far so she is able to see what is happening. In the latest chapter she tries to recruit and ally and fight back before all is lost leading up what should a massive next chapter I can't wait to read.

Smithee really put in a terrific, hot layered piece of writing right at the end of this chapter. Just great stuff. Jenna thinks about how she should go outside the company and get help but realizes anything that happens in the company stays in the company and doesn't do that logical, smart expedient. She does this because that mantra is part of the programming that she has absorbed along with some others! That touch there was just so clever and soooo HOT. I love this story.

There was also a very unusual story this week I found myself getting into. It is Nu Thought by Dr. D. This is a strange read in a very interesting, complimentary way. It is really unlike anything I came across before and that is rare. That last scene, where Dell is 'working out'..smoking freaking hot.

Also have to mention Zorkmeister's Refashioned. Annabel finds a new online clothing store...hmmmmm. And soon she finds herself attracted to pretty co-worker Lauren..hmmmm..

This story is so well written both in plot and establishing Annabel's character and the reaction to the changes coming over her and how she is acting atypical to her old self. Another thing I LOVE is Zorkmeister is taking his or her good sweet time with the hot induction and not rushing into it. It's like sitting in a humid, steamy, southern night and you just keep sweating more. Just perfection. I does not get any hotter than this.

I can't wait to see where this goes and the way it takes the reader there. Great job!!



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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #8 on: September 21, 2019, 05:45:07 pm »
Naked in Front of the Computer by Jukebox
A hot little short. Very much Jukebox's style of vividly illustrating one idea or hot flash that hints at something much larger with an economy of words, which I'm always a fan of (although I don't often manage to do myself, lol).


Seeing Things Through a New Lew Lens by Dr. HypnoD
Another quickie, although one that does leave the door somewhat open (despite being mostly encapsulated). Sort of the pornographic equivalent "Jason jumps up at the end of the movie to prove that he's still around". Always onboard for a red story now and then and this scratched the itch nicely. I'm not sure I've seen eye exams come up in this context before, although it now seems obvious in retrospect given the weirdly large overlap between asmr, eye exam roleplays, and attractive women.
 
Another story I liked from the start that just gets better, more complex and sophisticated and volcanic hot in it's MC. That would be Alan Smithees There Was Something Strange Going On At the Office.  Poor Jenna, she finds out some kind of mind control at her company is changing her friends and co workers. It is only having a partial effect on her so far so she is able to see what is happening. In the latest chapter she tries to recruit and ally and fight back before all is lost leading up what should a massive next chapter I can't wait to read.

Smithee really put in a terrific, hot layered piece of writing right at the end of this chapter. Just great stuff. Jenna thinks about how she should go outside the company and get help but realizes anything that happens in the company stays in the company and doesn't do that logical, smart expedient. She does this because that mantra is part of the programming that she has absorbed along with some others! That touch there was just so clever and soooo HOT. I love this story.

Thank you for all your kind words, it means a lot. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! Next update is ready to be sent in and should be the final chapter unless I decide I decide to add on an epilogue too. I think there'll be plenty more material that will be to your liking  >:D

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #9 on: September 21, 2019, 07:38:25 pm »
So many stories this week! I should probably pace myself, but I've already read more than usual...

Let's go with alphabetical for today, and start with the ever wonderful Algorithm. I've already told CR how much I enjoyed this chapter. There's so much I would like to say here, but I don't want to spoil it. All I can really say is... if you haven't been reading, I would highly recommend you start. It has it all, from fun moments, to sexy hypnosis... there's even an emu or two thrown in for good measure! Can't go wrong with that. Wouldn't want to upset the emus by not reading, would you?

Hostel is another story that I'm sure people are getting tired of hearing me gush over. It's still as chock full of wonderful triggers and control as ever. I thought I had things figured out, but as the chapters go on, I'm starting to lose confidence in my prediction. That said, I'm as happy as ever that Jessica makes her glorious return in here... and I already warned 321 that nothing bad should befall her... Oh, thank you for the unexpected shout out at the start! Always glad to help where I can =)

It's fitting that another 321 story happens to be the next alphabetically. It's been awhile since I read Rare Books, and I should probably read it again to refresh my memory but... screw it, we're doing it live! I'm glad I have no interest in reading such ancient books, nor do I have the ability to translate anything. I wonder if Google Translate would be of any assistance? Probably would have spared Tessa, not that she's complaining at the moment!

I was intrigued to read Savannah's Hypnotic Socks. The synopsis reminded me of a (sadly unfinished) story called Sarah's Feet Convert the Coeds. Unfortunately the villain in this story was just too unlikable for my tastes, what with her being written as rude, smell, and just an offensive person. Had some good parts, so given a few character changes I probably would have enjoyed it more, but generally just not to my taste.

I'm glad to see the follow up to The Spiral Girl here, though I almost was confused as this one was called The Spiral Boy. I do see why, though! I'm really glad the way things turned out, as let's just say that I wasn't exactly rooting for the protagonist since the beginning. Loved the introduction of the new character, and all her interactions with Kennedy. Would love to see more with just those two!

There Was Something Going On At The Office, despite having such a long title, continues to be a remarkably fun tale. I love how Jenna is so unwitting to the few things already instilled in her, but still has enough sense to try to fight her way out the way she does. The plan she came up with was clever, and really has me rooting for her. That said, there's a certain way I'd like this to go down, especially if the next chapter is the last as the author earlier said! Definitely one of the stories I will be looking forward to next week!

That's all I had time for today. Which is probably good because I wouldn't want to burn through EVERYthing at once. Still a few stories that piqued my interest remain, and I'm sure there will be a few more that I'll give a shot. Until then!

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #10 on: September 21, 2019, 10:02:42 pm »
Thanks to Majorwrll for fixing his/her link to Packback at the top of this thread. For the record, Simon changed my short description. I wrote it as:

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Lust, love, and renewal on the Pacific Crest Trail.

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A man finds lust, love, and renewal on the Pacific Crest Trail.

It's not just the man who finds lust, love, and renewal is why I mention it. Four more chapters coming ...
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #11 on: September 22, 2019, 03:02:50 am »
S.B.'s Corruption Games surprised me as I expected it to be a one-off story of probably my favorite hypnotist of his. But Alexandra is at it again, and though a lot of this seemed like a planning chapter, how the General and male support on her team reacted to her was always nice. Can't wait to see more Alexandra, and how she might have to square off against someone formidable soon.

Really wasn't expecting a sequel from last week's Ice & Fire, but Flame & Frost was a great look a characters growing in time and roles reversed, with the flame user now on the defensive and having to improvise to win. A sweet, familiar move the former hot-head takes to spice things up, which I love. Fans of the last story will love this new one for sure.

The Girls of S.L.E.E.P. are going further with their sorority building, with new potential recruits and connections made amongst characters who've met before in previous stories from Sleepy Hypno. It's been gratifying following a number of his characters up to this point and to watch them play with each other. Eve's trance of the reporter girl was done very nicely.

And Seeing Things Through A New Lens runs with a great concept into several clever inductions and deepeners I must say. Love how Dr. Vale got her to spell things out, and how every test seemed to be passed with flying colors. This has been a sexy reminder that it might not be a bad idea to check on my vision, at least in a fantasy with an eye-doctor like Vale.

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« Reply #12 on: September 22, 2019, 05:34:50 am »
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Refashioned (mc ff ft) (new)  by zorkmeister
Annabel gets far more than she bargained for when she goes online shopping.


Nice to see a new story by Zorkmeister.  I found this one really enjoyable to read and look forward to the next part.  I particularly like the slow-burn.

Oddly enough it was reading Zorkmeister's stories that introduced me to the 'Hive' subgenre of MC stories so naturally I want to see how this one developes.
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #13 on: September 22, 2019, 08:43:10 am »
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« Reply #14 on: September 22, 2019, 12:05:29 pm »
Thanks, CerebusOne and Shadra!

Who knew that Berlin was so crowded with mind controllers? Certainly not Rebecca or Emily. Or Jessica, for that matter!

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #15 on: September 22, 2019, 12:33:15 pm »
Thanks to Majorwrll for fixing his/her link to Packback at the top of this thread. For the record, Simon changed my short description. I wrote it as:

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Lust, love, and renewal on the Pacific Crest Trail.

Simon changed that to :

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A man finds lust, love, and renewal on the Pacific Crest Trail.

It's not just the man who finds lust, love, and renewal is why I mention it. Four more chapters coming ...

My synopsis for Armageddon Archives is a bit wonky, too. In my case, I simply forgot to have one in my email to Simon!
Asked him to change it to: Life in California is now different after the apocalypse, as that part of the world is now ruled by Demon King Asmodeus.

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #16 on: September 22, 2019, 02:23:34 pm »
This is the first time I've ever been compelled to post a message here after years of lurking and reading.  I felt it was important enough regarding the story "On The Cards"...

The line in particular "His cock, slick with her [...]"  I found... way over the top to include without any notification of such.  I can appreciate that not everything is my kink and there are plenty of people out there that might enjoy this sort of thing... but some warning would be nice when you're going to get into descriptions of that being used as a lubricant..
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #17 on: September 22, 2019, 03:13:16 pm »
I was at first a bit incredulous, with my mind filling in the blanks, wondering how something like that would merit a comment, and wondering why you blanked out the word.

My reaction after checking out that chapter: oh... Oh I see now.

I haven't read much from the author, but from what I have read, they don't seem to mind going full throttle over some lines, it seems. So I can't say I'm too surprised. Still has some good stories, and even the more extreme ones can have nice parts, but I understand why some people would avoid their stories.

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« Reply #18 on: September 22, 2019, 05:22:16 pm »
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Women find themselves trapped by a weird and mysterious force that seems to control their minds and bodies by putting them together in positions and groupings ideal for storage.


Still an intreguing slow burn which I am enjoying reading.
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #19 on: September 22, 2019, 07:01:36 pm »
Next week will be the final chapter of Massaged by my Nerdy Brother, so this is a good week to jump in and catch up!
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #20 on: September 23, 2019, 01:49:01 am »
The Bovide Bus (mc mf md gr la) (new)  by Screw-Ball_Rancher
A high school girls’ volleyball team and cheerleader squad are sent to a long summer training camp, but the bus ride there is long, and the whole trip is lame anyway!  Good thing the bus is nice, and they can relax on it.  Of course, they have to get through the annoying information video they’re required to watch first!


I really liked this story. Thematically and structurally, it reminded me of CNP's stories, and I enjoy CNP's writing very much. Being really, really nitpicky, there were one or two spots that could've been reworded for clarity, but overall, I thought the writing was sharp and the pacing brisk but enjoyable. I will probably reread it.

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #21 on: September 23, 2019, 02:19:25 am »
Anyone one know if the Bovide Bus is a one part or if there's another chapter coming? 
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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #22 on: September 23, 2019, 03:32:26 am »

There Was Something Going On At The Office, despite having such a long title, continues to be a remarkably fun tale. I love how Jenna is so unwitting to the few things already instilled in her, but still has enough sense to try to fight her way out the way she does. The plan she came up with was clever, and really has me rooting for her. That said, there's a certain way I'd like this to go down, especially if the next chapter is the last as the author earlier said! Definitely one of the stories I will be looking forward to next week!


Thank you very much for continuing to read, and I hope the conclusion will be to your liking. If not, don't hesitate to provide a critique since I'm still new to this and want to get good!

Once I've wrapped this one up I have a few more old story ideas to explore, so hopefully I'll be able to follow up before too long.

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #23 on: September 23, 2019, 02:24:55 pm »
Shout-out to The Bovide Bus and its author, that was extremely hot 👍

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Re: New Releases-September 21st 2019
« Reply #24 on: September 23, 2019, 03:26:10 pm »
CW, I loved the sequel to Office Space! I always wondered what happened to Lady Gaja... here’s hoping we find out within the next decade  :grin: