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New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« on: August 10, 2019, 12:14:14 pm »
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Adjustments (S. B.) (mc mf fd hu) (new)  by S. B.
Meet the “information expert”. Her neighbors don’t let her have a good night’s sleep. It’s time to do something about it... the fun way.

Ashes (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Blackie
The family raised him not to use his ability on those without the ability. The world isn’t supposed to know the family exists. Or families. When he uses it to defend himself and is seen without knowing who it was, his world turns upside down on him.

Bewitching Spells (mc fd) (1 new chapter)  by CrystalWitch
Your mind is placed under a spell.

Bimbo or Billionaire: Terminal Stage (mc gr ft) (new)  by cirrus108
Emma is a contestant on the popular game show.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

Blossom Valley: Blackout (mc mf ff in gr la) (new)  by thestepfordgirl
Isadora is having a much harder time adjusting to her new life in Blossom Valley than her parents are.

Bouncy Bounties (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by GigglingGoblin
A very clever enchantress aims to enslave a group of dumb, jiggly slime girls. But just who’s in control here?

But I Don’t Really Want This (mc mf md fd gr hm ex) (1 new chapter)  by Pomelo
Will and Nicole find their relationship changing again in at first subtle and then not-so-subtle ways.

Calligraphy (mc mf md ma) (new)  by Meleva
The sun is gone and the lamps are lit. Lady Nallamae Fairmane, noble heiress and minor duchess, knows what that means: it’s time for her to practice her calligraphy.

The Countess’ Conquest (mc ff cb bd) (new)  by Marcus
Countess Conquest has decided to abandon grandiose schemes and devote her villainous talents to the pursuit of personal pleasure. She sets her sights on superheroine Dauntless Maid.

Editing Reality Book Three: Naughty Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Ghost Boy (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

Girl Talk (mc ff) (new)  by Jukebox
On her eighteenth birthday, Nancy finally learns what it is that Girls™ really do for their owners.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Intended Attraction (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
In this sequel to Unintended Attraction, our hero starts to take for granted the growing mastery of his ability.

Intrepid Pawns (mc ff mf fd hm ds la) (1 new chapter)  by GigglingGoblin
To save their city, a band of knights sets out to track down a hive of honey-dripping Thriae fey. But can they work together long enough to resist the sweetest of temptations?

It Runs in the Family (mc ff in ma hm) (1 new chapter)  by Sammynona
Connie’s secretly in love with her best friend Tara. But also Tara’s older sister Jane. And their young mother Michelle too. It was always an impossible dream to make the Silva family into her own harem of lovers, until she found out that Tara’s grandmother was a hypnotist.

Just Relax (mc ff mf fd md) (new)  by Chrysostomon
June visits Dr. Roberts, and has a whole new outlook on her marriage, but Dr. Roberts has an issue with her husband Ken.

Kat and Mouse (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by SoVeryFascinated
Kat and Marisa love to play around with hypnosis. But their encounter with a mysterious music file is no game.

The Key (mc ff) (new)  by Kallie
Hatsue’s friend Laila decides to turn Hatsue’s body into her own worst enemy.

Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

The Long Game (mc fd) (new)  by me-chan
Marley’s reluctant caddy is given perks his afternoon job.

Mark’s Journey, Making Love (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Twirling Thoughts
Mark has to fix the problems he caused when he turned Sammi into a bimbo.

Massaged By My Nerdy Brother (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by BurroGirl18 and Pan
A few innocent massages with her brother go too far.

Member Privileges (mc mf ff md fd gr) (1 new chapter)  by William Pratt
Young, married couple Oliver and Marissa keep in touch through online video chat site while Oliver travels on business. When their current site suddenly changes ownership, the new owners bring some peculiar new rules.

Mind-Control Panties (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
A mysterious figure adds special items to the inventory of trendy clothing stores—panties with special phrases written on them.

The Music Plays on in Her Mind (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by CrystalWitch
Crystal is hypnotized by a collection of erotic stories.

Nanite Cluster (mc mf md gr) (2 new chapters)  by banksie
Dan wants to use his father’s nanotechnology to save his friend Lucy, but his plans change when desire gets in the way.

New Dogma (mc ff) (new)  by Benign Rasputin
Katy, a conservative college student, meets a new friend.

Pink Glasses (mc ff ma) (new)  by Quiet Hypnotist
A witch has her tools, a lonely evening and a sudden guest. What could possibly go wrong?

Please, Please, Sir, Put Me in My Place (mc mf ff md fd ds) (new)  by Flying Decadent
Kate has a sexual fantasy: she wants to be utterly ‘put in her place’ by a smart, loving, patronizing chauvinist. Luckily, her girlfriend Lucy knows enough hypnosis to make this fantasy come alive.

Quest for Tamsin — Two (mc fd) (new)  by Argos
An old friend of Tamsin tells Elle that she is doing fine and living in the Southwest. But Louis’s hypnotic vision says she may be buried in a strange valley in the other direction.

Relaxation Therapy — Expanded Functions (mc mf md ds gr) (1 new chapter)  by Incubi
Testing out a new prototype expands Catherine’s horizons in ways she never would have expected.

Split Slave (mc ff ma bd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Skaetlett
Delta, a non-binary, kidnapped sex slave with a protective alternate personality, gets auctioned off to a multimillionaire who seems to have more in store than they’re ready for. Their Mistress thinks she knows everything about them and is wrong.

Squirt (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Val is assaulted on the subway, and goes through some changes.

They all became Slaves and Robots for the Robomaster (mc ff md rb) (2 new chapters)  by Roboman127
A hidden power converts a man into Roboman The Robomaster.

Undress Code (mc mf ff ft) (1 new chapter)  by Mania
Celest is concerned the school’s strict new “Thongs Only” dress code might be turning her daughter into some kind of slut.

What Dreams Are Made Of (mc mf ff md) (new)  by littlefrog66
Artificial Intelligence Singularity sends back copy to change the world’s future. Recruits genetically engineered sex slaves from 2222 to recreate Master’s Harem, for the man who helped invent the machine that caused it all. Discover that aliens were really responsible for it all. Track down interstellar sentient Mother Ship and set out to save the universe from bad guys. Discover alternate universes. Along the way, they save women from an evil mind-altering drug that turns women into sex slaves and save other planets from wicked alien AI’s.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2019, 12:14:46 pm »
Jinx!  :)

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #2 on: August 10, 2019, 12:56:36 pm »
Managed to read through Hostel during my break at work. Maybe not the be best place to be reading this kind of story... but I just couldn't wait. Starting to feel like I'm repeating myself every time, but yes, this chapter was as great as the others. Don't worry, 321, I did enjoy that last scene. And regarding that...
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2019, 01:17:13 pm »
Managed to read through Hostel during my break at work. Maybe not the be best place to be reading this kind of story... but I just couldn't wait. Starting to feel like I'm repeating myself every time, but yes, this chapter was as great as the others. Don't worry, 321, I did enjoy that last scene. And regarding that...
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Thanks, Shadra! I'm excited about where to take the story next!  :)

Just finished this week's chapter of Kat and Mouse. This story is fantastic! I'm already looking forward to Chapter Four.

I love the geographical touches... they make me miss NYC quite a bit...

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #4 on: August 10, 2019, 03:33:36 pm »
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #5 on: August 10, 2019, 04:11:44 pm »
Two very complex, dangerous, exciting stories continue in battles between victims and masters, or putative masters.

321's Hostel has Rebecca getting the upper hand, so it seems, over Alice. I'm not believing it. Not going to be that easy by a long shot. Not trusting Celeste either here. She seems to like things as they are because of her fear of losing Rebecca. I don't think she is thinking straight. But regardless, things seem to be going Rebecca's way until the very end of the chapter when....Jessica shows up. Ops.

Just loved Alice shutting off the hypno machine to save money, lol. That is not only funny but tells you something about Alice. It tells the reader a lot about her. I really enjoy those kinds of little clues a good writer can throw in there like that that seems innocuous but just speaks volumes. Also, the Euro isn't going as far as it used to I guess. Maybe because of Brexit? Good work Alice. You can run my house anytime.

Then you have things really getting dicey in SoVeryFascinted's Kat and Mouse.
Man, Kat is really playing a dangerous game here with the antagonist and her lover Marisa using her as bait. In doing so she does learn things of value about the hidden man behind all this but damn if I think he didn't learn even more valuable information about both girls in return.

Really love the chess match here as both movers, Kat and Mouse? are playing this deadly, daring game of "I'll learn about you and you will learn about me." Eventually one or both will learn enough to try get the other in check. But at what cost?

Really enjoy how the the author gets into the villains head and lets you know what he is thinking, including his insecurities. It really spices up the story in a big way.
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #6 on: August 10, 2019, 04:36:08 pm »
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^

Oh god, and that's just the first chapter.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #7 on: August 10, 2019, 04:42:05 pm »
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^

Oh god, and that's just the first chapter.

Well at least it allowed me to remove one from a very long list this week. Still got 26, but none over 10K which will help
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #8 on: August 10, 2019, 05:22:00 pm »
Adjustments, another S.B. re-reading, and favorite. Something about how elusive the "information expert" is makes almost always a pleasant read, with how creatively she conquers her targets, and narrates the conquests. In this case, I love how rather honest and pragmatic the suggestions she gives her targets, and how it sort of backfires on her later. Nice to see some bringing actually intelligence and ingenious creativity to the intelligence world.

CrystalWitch returns with more Bewitching Spells, and I love how this one is distilled down to some elements I can really enjoy - foot worship and a use of something not made for hypnotizing being hypnotic. In this case it's a crop, and more times than not I dislike how they're used for delivering pain. This one delivered more mental pleasure than pain, which was welcome. A spell as wonderful as the ones to come before it; I'm glad this is being continued amongst her other writings.

Calligraphy is a wonderfully-written tale of royalty taking pleasure in one of the least-mundane things they have to do in their structured days, and finding a lot more pleasure than they consciously expected. I love how it was such a sensual read despite the innocuous (at first) motions. Believable, enticing, and plays well to a type of seduction I love. I can see why teachers like that are highly sought after. I don't always go for md, but Meleva seems to impress in any genre.

Argos' Quest for Tamsin continues to be quite the mystery. Love the concept of what Louis can and can't see, and how there's clarity in everything he describes. With all the details mentioned, I do wonder where things are going. Nice to see deeper details between Elle and Joan, expanding the connective lore of Elle and women related to or like her who aren't that far away from exerting power like she does.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #9 on: August 10, 2019, 07:32:40 pm »
So, it may or may not be apparent to the reader, but Mark's Journey, Making Love sets him up in a great role to explore Gifted talents at their secretive academy. I have two other things I'm hoping to do with the Alterra Universe coming up: finish Kat's arc as a foil to the UGA; and to establish a few other places in the universe. Places where people might be encouraged to form their own stories.
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #10 on: August 11, 2019, 02:59:45 am »
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^
Yep, just read the first couple of thousand words of ths...  (What Dreams Are Made Of  by littlefrog66)...

All I can say is that it looks promising, very promising!
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #11 on: August 11, 2019, 04:31:27 am »

Calligraphy (mc mf md ma) (new)  by Meleva
The sun is gone and the lamps are lit. Lady Nallamae Fairmane, noble heiress and minor duchess, knows what that means: it’s time for her to practice her calligraphy.


Really liked this one. Nothing over the top, just a lightly and classily done story of hypnotic submission.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #12 on: August 11, 2019, 07:26:30 am »
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^
Yep, just read the first couple of thousand words of ths...  (What Dreams Are Made Of  by littlefrog66)...

All I can say is that it looks promising, very promising!

Regardless, unless you can find something that directly reads the story into what remains of my mind (I wish!), its not going to happen for me, sorry
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2019, 08:36:11 am »
Anyone want to do the Cliff notes version? =D

I just don't have the time or attention span for a story that long.

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« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2019, 09:30:01 am »
Really liked this one. Nothing over the top, just a lightly and classily done story of hypnotic submission.

Thank you, Decadent, I'm glad you enjoyed!

Calligraphy is a wonderfully-written tale of royalty taking pleasure in one of the least-mundane things they have to do in their structured days, and finding a lot more pleasure than they consciously expected. I love how it was such a sensual read despite the innocuous (at first) motions. Believable, enticing, and plays well to a type of seduction I love. I can see why teachers like that are highly sought after. I don't always go for md, but Meleva seems to impress in any genre.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #15 on: August 11, 2019, 10:40:50 am »
Well at least it allowed me to remove one from a very long list this week. Still got 26, but none over 10K which will help

I do endeavor to keep my chapters manageable. It's one of the reasons my stories tend to have chapters than to be one single drop.
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« Reply #16 on: August 11, 2019, 11:08:06 am »
Well at least it allowed me to remove one from a very long list this week. Still got 26, but none over 10K which will help

I do endeavor to keep my chapters manageable. It's one of the reasons my stories tend to have chapters than to be one single drop.

You've been upstaged. What Dreams Are Made Of has one long single drop AND chapters!  ;)

I am curious about the format of the story. Hopefully littlefrog66 will stop by the Forum to chat about it.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #17 on: August 11, 2019, 11:46:52 am »
Getting started, back again

Adjustments (S. B.)

Oh fine, I loved this. The fact it didnt end in the obvious way, the lead to someone at the end, and in truth, the way it all plays out is delightful. So no complaints, but the RSB's do sound fun to deal with, even if I am a good girl, lol
High end of definitely enjoyed. Was tempted to give more, but then I might not get 'punished'!

Just Relax

Always fun, especially when it backfires on the guy who was too clever for his own good, or not, depends on how you look at it. Strictly there's incest, but its so minor, barely worth mentioning. Other than that, just relax, and enjoy events
Definitely enjoyed

Mark’s Journey, Making Love

Oh, a sort of sweet ending to this chapter (story?), love that. I know, not perfect for Sammi, but she's not exactly suffering at the same time. Loved how its told, how it plays out, and everything else here.
High end of definitely enjoyed

New Dogma

Religion warning for those sensitive to such things. Beyond that, a pleasant enough lesbianisation story, but nothing exceptional here, in truth. But fine, her attitude sort of justified it.
Definitely enjoyed

Squirt

Cant say this did much for me, more the way it was all done, and an unlikable controller to boot. But if you're into straightforward lesbianisation stuff, you might get more from this than me
High end of enjoyed, as a fair mark, I guess?

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #18 on: August 11, 2019, 12:10:15 pm »
Girl Talk (mc ff) (new)  by Jukebox
On her eighteenth birthday, Nancy finally learns what it is that Girls™ really do for their owners.

A really clever story, establishing the relationship between Nancy and her Girl through their interactions in a way that showcases the Girl's multi-faceted role in Nancy's life. The heat builds up nicely (the reader can guess where things are headed, and things get there in a smooth and natural manner).

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #19 on: August 11, 2019, 01:32:06 pm »
More sweet, sexy, silly fun to be had in this week's edition of Blizzard. Everyone seems ready to set aside their worries, doubts, and cares for a bit while they put the items from their latest shopping trip to good use.  :)  Honestly, it couldn't have happened to a nicer group of four people.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #20 on: August 11, 2019, 04:57:28 pm »
Part 2

Girl Talk

Oh fine, I'm going to have the Dave Edmonds song in my head until whenever, lol. The only turn off for me here is all the spanking stuff, does nothing for me. The rest of it, I absolutely adore. I think I'd rather be a girl, than own one, but fine, either would be fun, even more so if she arranged my transformation now I was old enough
High end of definitely enjoyed

The Music Plays on in Her Mind

I'd love to know what JB thinks about this, in truth, he doesnt seem to me the evil type. But yes, I'm loving Crystal's descent here, I must say. Oh yes, this is fun
High end of definitely enjoyed

Please, Please, Sir, Put Me in My Place

Oh goodness, this was so much fun. Lucy handles the whole gender thing absolutely brilliantly. Again, the spanking stuff does nothing for me, but the rest is brilliant
High end of definitely enjoyed

Relaxation Therapy — Expanded Functions

I probably shouldnt be jealous of Catherine, and what she has to go through, but I am, that machine sounds absolutely fantastic. Sadly I havent got a partner to force me to go through that, but...?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Undress Code

I thought I'd give this another chance, but I wont again. Its not great anyway, not at all subtle, and not a storyline doing anything for me, sorry. If you like really misogynistic stuff, it might be fine, but otherwise
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #21 on: August 11, 2019, 09:07:20 pm »
Mark’s Journey, Making Love

Oh, a sort of sweet ending to this chapter (story?), love that. I know, not perfect for Sammi, but she's not exactly suffering at the same time. Loved how its told, how it plays out, and everything else here.
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #22 on: August 12, 2019, 06:04:26 am »
Adjustments, another S.B. re-reading, and favorite. Something about how elusive the "information expert" is makes almost always a pleasant read, with how creatively she conquers her targets, and narrates the conquests. In this case, I love how rather honest and pragmatic the suggestions she gives her targets, and how it sort of backfires on her later. Nice to see some bringing actually intelligence and ingenious creativity to the intelligence world.


Thanks. She's a quirky character, almost as silly as she gets. As you know, all of her pieces are impromptus hence her curious "voice". She will always be elusive though as it's part of her charm. Thanks for reading... again.

Getting started, back again

Adjustments (S. B.)

Oh fine, I loved this. The fact it didnt end in the obvious way, the lead to someone at the end, and in truth, the way it all plays out is delightful. So no complaints, but the RSB's do sound fun to deal with, even if I am a good girl, lol
High end of definitely enjoyed. Was tempted to give more, but then I might not get 'punished'!


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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #23 on: August 12, 2019, 11:07:25 am »
More sweet, sexy, silly fun to be had in this week's edition of Blizzard. Everyone seems ready to set aside their worries, doubts, and cares for a bit while they put the items from their latest shopping trip to good use.  :)  Honestly, it couldn't have happened to a nicer group of four people.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #24 on: August 12, 2019, 02:02:04 pm »
I’m trying to prepare for it! I’ve been dreading waiting for our more supernatural characters to make another attempt to “correct” things...

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #25 on: August 12, 2019, 04:22:52 pm »
Part 3

Blossom Valley: Blackout

Must make sure to miss that town if I move, not that anyone would want me, but any way... Reminds me of the sort of place a Cristina Prince character might end up, in truth. Obviously the whole pregnancy thing did nothing for me, but the rest of it was decent, but not exceptional for me.
High end of enjoyed

Laser Tag Party

Have been a fan of this all the way through, but fine, I loved the way the ending all played out. Gorgeously romantic, but with a neat twist. Would I love to be adjusted, you bet I would!
Low end of much enjoyed. As much for the whole series, but happy endings, well...

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Ah well, way to old for this kind of mischief, but that might be for the best. :laugh: Geo is a fun writer to read, and this is no exception, all the characters are great fun
Low end of much enjoyed

Split Slave

Hard to say much here without giving spoilers, but yes, plenty of mixed emotions for me in this. Fascinating to see where it goes next, for sure
Definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #26 on: August 12, 2019, 05:11:09 pm »
Please, Please, Sir, Put Me in My Place

Oh goodness, this was so much fun. Lucy handles the whole gender thing absolutely brilliantly. Again, the spanking stuff does nothing for me, but the rest is brilliant
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #27 on: August 12, 2019, 05:30:20 pm »
Laser Tag Party

Have been a fan of this all the way through, but fine, I loved the way the ending all played out. Gorgeously romantic, but with a neat twist. Would I love to be adjusted, you bet I would!
Low end of much enjoyed. As much for the whole series, but happy endings, well...

Everyone loves a wedding, right?

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« Reply #28 on: August 12, 2019, 11:15:33 pm »
Anyone want to do the Cliff notes version? =D

I just don't have the time or attention span for a story that long.

The description pretty much covers it.

It could do with a good proof-read, and there's a level of cynicism that borders on the conspiracy theory, but there's some fairly solid world-building too.
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #29 on: August 13, 2019, 02:22:29 am »

What Dreams Are Made Of (mc mf ff md) (new)  by littlefrog66
Artificial Intelligence Singularity sends back copy to change the world’s future. Recruits genetically engineered sex slaves from 2222 to recreate Master’s Harem, for the man who helped invent the machine that caused it all. Discover that aliens were really responsible for it all. Track down interstellar sentient Mother Ship and set out to save the universe from bad guys. Discover alternate universes. Along the way, they save women from an evil mind-altering drug that turns women into sex slaves and save other planets from wicked alien AI’s.

Well I am still reading this epic and am about a quarter of the way through Part One and have to agree with Grey Shadow that a 'a good proof-read' would have made a good story a little easier to read...  Although the story is well thought out and flows seamlessly from scene to scene.

I must say that I am inpressed by what I have read so far, especially by the level of cynicism which this style of 1st person POV (with flash-backs) needs.  Incidentally I would be very interested to know just how long it has taken littlefrog66 to write this fascinating story.

I won't promise a review when I get to the end but, based on what I have read so far, I would recommend it to anyone who might be interested. 

Nice one, littlefrogg66, although I rather wish that you had posted it in weekly, easy-to-read installments..
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« Reply #30 on: August 13, 2019, 02:41:03 am »
Thank you, Merry. Just you wait for next issue where I wrap things up by killing everyone. You'll love it.
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #31 on: August 13, 2019, 08:38:00 am »
Thank you, Merry. Just you wait for next issue where I wrap things up by killing everyone. You'll love it.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #32 on: August 13, 2019, 09:29:17 am »
More sweet, sexy, silly fun to be had in this week's edition of Blizzard. Everyone seems ready to set aside their worries, doubts, and cares for a bit while they put the items from their latest shopping trip to good use.  :)  Honestly, it couldn't have happened to a nicer group of four people.

Thanks! Glad you like the characters, makes it satisfying to throw a wrench in the works now.

I wasn't going to say anything, but I have been thinking that there needs to be a crisis or reckoning soon. 
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #33 on: August 13, 2019, 01:25:53 pm »
Part 4

Blizzard

A bit focused on all the sex combinations for me, but it made for a fun read, all the same. But beyond that, as much fun as ever.
Definitely enjoyed

Intended Attraction

Oh, the end makes for some fun, but what the next sexual event between those 3 will be, who knows? I'd love the 2 girls, but anyway... The build up to the event was fun, if a bit inevitable.
Definitely enjoyed

The Long Game

Hypnosis, and fd of men shouldnt be my things, but fine this was funny to read. Maybe helps that I played golf when much younger, so I can relate? Certainly a more entertaining round than any I had, for sure! :laugh: Delightfully done, for sure
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Pink Glasses

OK, I would have loved this, regardless of a Carla, a Marion (Davies), and a Norma (Talmadge) who all fit the parts perfectly, even if neither of the latter were known to be bi, lol. Seriously, the whole story is wonderfully done, including the whole 'what should I wear' stuff.
Fine, I'm giving it a low end of much enjoyed, though I suspect that may be down to the 'casting', just saying

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #34 on: August 13, 2019, 01:26:51 pm »
"Kat and Mouse" oh my goddddddddddddddddddddd I can't take the suspense!!!!  I'm loving this story as a story, not just as teh pr0nz.
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« Reply #35 on: August 13, 2019, 02:17:26 pm »

What Dreams Are Made Of (mc mf ff md) (new)  by littlefrog66
Artificial Intelligence Singularity sends back copy to change the world’s future. Recruits genetically engineered sex slaves from 2222 to recreate Master’s Harem, for the man who helped invent the machine that caused it all. Discover that aliens were really responsible for it all. Track down interstellar sentient Mother Ship and set out to save the universe from bad guys. Discover alternate universes. Along the way, they save women from an evil mind-altering drug that turns women into sex slaves and save other planets from wicked alien AI’s.

Well I am still reading this epic and am about a quarter of the way through Part One and have to agree with Grey Shadow that a 'a good proof-read' would have made a good story a little easier to read...  Although the story is well thought out and flows seamlessly from scene to scene.

I must say that I am inpressed by what I have read so far, especially by the level of cynicism which this style of 1st person POV (with flash-backs) needs.  Incidentally I would be very interested to know just how long it has taken littlefrog66 to write this fascinating story.

I won't promise a review when I get to the end but, based on what I have read so far, I would recommend it to anyone who might be interested. 

Nice one, littlefrogg66, although I rather wish that you had posted it in weekly, easy-to-read installments..

I'm pretty sure it was previously posted to storiesonline.
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #36 on: August 13, 2019, 02:27:45 pm »
Blizzard

A bit focused on all the sex combinations for me, but it made for a fun read, all the same. But beyond that, as much fun as ever.
Definitely enjoyed


Excellent, this chapter's the turning point. Knew it was bit oversexed for you but, I'm glad the parts you like stand out.

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« Reply #37 on: August 13, 2019, 06:07:06 pm »
Thanks to all of the people reading and saying nice things about "Kat and Mouse." Maybe I'm being immodest (or just plain wrong) when I say this, but I think it gets even better in the chapters you haven't seen yet.

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« Reply #38 on: August 13, 2019, 06:40:17 pm »
Thanks to all of the people reading and saying nice things about "Kat and Mouse." Maybe I'm being immodest (or just plain wrong) when I say this, but I think it gets even better in the chapters you haven't seen yet.

Just don't use that as an excuse not to write them.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #39 on: August 14, 2019, 04:26:40 pm »
Part 5, almost there

The Countess’ Conquest

Oh seriously, if the Countess needs any more victims, tell her to call me! Would love the part of Voltinelle if it ever got made for real. This is fun, great play off conversation between the 2 main characters before the inevitable happens.  Great fun read
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Hostel

I could say something about Alice, but its a bit earlier in the week for that. Author will know what I'm hinting at, anyway! ;) This chapter is as strong as ever, lets leave it there
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It Runs in the Family

Oh fine, the family stuff is a turn off for me, but thats my only complaint, really. Other than that, this chapter is as good as ever, I must say. Loved the play with the girl friend, I must say
Definitely enjoyed

Kat and Mouse

Oh goodness, loving this, and cant wait to see how this all plays out in the end. Cant say a lot more without spoiling things really.
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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #40 on: August 14, 2019, 05:10:17 pm »
Thanks for the kind words on "The Countess' Conquest". I was going for a light and friendly tone in the post-mind-control conversation to suit the Countess' cheerful hedonism and Dauntless Maid's full acceptance of her new lifestyle, apparently it came across as intended.

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Re: New Releases - August 10th, 2019
« Reply #41 on: August 15, 2019, 04:37:11 pm »
That last trio

Bimbo or Billionaire: Terminal Stage

I think, to be fair, this is about as sweet as a BoB story is ever going to end up. Yes, therefore, I love it! At the same time, there are some neat changes in here too. You know the formula here, it plays to that. But yes, if you want some sweetness, in with the other stuff, this is for you
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Bouncy Bounties

I must admit, I found it hard to care about anyone here, in truth. There are some neat twists and turns here, just that I found it hard to care what went down, but anyway...
No rating, taste issues

The Key

Fine, for those with issues (hopefully no one), there is a transgender warning going on down here. Again, I had issues caring about either character, so just sort of turned off to things.
No rating, couldnt get involved

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« Reply #42 on: August 16, 2019, 08:33:55 pm »
I have to say, while I have been enjoying Hostel as is, at this point in the story I'm just going to be honest. It's a terrible adaptation of the movie. I was giving it some creative freedom in the beginning, but it doesn't seem to be following anything from the film. I just don't get it. I'll give it a few more chapters. Hopefully by then I start to see what I had expected. If not, I guess I'll just have to cut my losses. Sometimes people just take too many liberties, I guess...

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« Reply #43 on: August 16, 2019, 10:18:27 pm »
I have to say, while I have been enjoying Hostel as is, at this point in the story I'm just going to be honest. It's a terrible adaptation of the movie. I was giving it some creative freedom in the beginning, but it doesn't seem to be following anything from the film. I just don't get it. I'll give it a few more chapters. Hopefully by then I start to see what I had expected. If not, I guess I'll just have to cut my losses. Sometimes people just take too many liberties, I guess...

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« Reply #44 on: August 17, 2019, 08:09:03 am »
I have to say, while I have been enjoying Hostel as is, at this point in the story I'm just going to be honest. It's a terrible adaptation of the movie. I was giving it some creative freedom in the beginning, but it doesn't seem to be following anything from the film. I just don't get it. I'll give it a few more chapters. Hopefully by then I start to see what I had expected. If not, I guess I'll just have to cut my losses. Sometimes people just take too many liberties, I guess...

HA! I'm not sure what the prize is worth, but you win the update thread this week! So many liberties with the "source material".

I didnt even know there was a movie until that post. I tell you what, if this ever gets made into a movie, I want to audition for the part of Alice! :grin:

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« Reply #45 on: August 17, 2019, 12:34:44 pm »
HA! I'm not sure what the prize is worth, but you win the update thread this week! So many liberties with the "source material".

Yay! Honestly, knowing someone got a laugh out of it is all the prize I need xD I thought about waiting until the story was finished, and have that part of the "review," but I was too impatient, and wanted to share my dumb humor right away.

I have to say, while I have been enjoying Hostel as is, at this point in the story I'm just going to be honest. It's a terrible adaptation of the movie. I was giving it some creative freedom in the beginning, but it doesn't seem to be following anything from the film. I just don't get it. I'll give it a few more chapters. Hopefully by then I start to see what I had expected. If not, I guess I'll just have to cut my losses. Sometimes people just take too many liberties, I guess...

HA! I'm not sure what the prize is worth, but you win the update thread this week! So many liberties with the "source material".

I didnt even know there was a movie until that post. I tell you what, if this ever gets made into a movie, I want to audition for the part of Alice! :grin:

(Only because I'm way to old to play any of her victims!)

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« Reply #46 on: August 17, 2019, 05:09:05 pm »
I'm only interested in a part in 321's version, believe me, I read the synopsis of the other film! :laugh:
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