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New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« on: May 18, 2019, 01:30:44 pm »
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Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

All Bends to My Will (mc ff) (new)  by InLeaves
In a university where jocks reign supreme and bully the nerds in total impunity, Selina has it the worst of all. But then, a strange power starts to reverse the pecking order...

Ashes (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Blackie
The family raised him not to use his ability on those without the ability. The world isn’t supposed to know the family exists. Or families. When he uses it to defend himself and is seen without knowing who it was, his world turns upside down on him.

Bimbo or Billionaire: Custom Karma (mc mf md ma ft gr hm) (new)  by Master GEO
Rachel is a cute gold digger that has had a veritable goldmine dropped into her lap by very lucky circumstances! As her soon-to-be husband asked her to be in Bimbo or Billionaire, it was even more perfect as a friend of hers had gotten secret tech to restore her when it was all over! Super lucky! Surely it’s all coming up Rachel, right?

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

Demon Wars (mc mf ff md fd in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
A mind-controlling demon and his sister are hunted by a team of Vatican agents.

Editing Reality Book Two: Sultry Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

An Episode of Lingerie Enslavement (mc ff mf md ft) (new)  by Mr. Scade
As Joan’s sister, Simmone, starts behaving mightily strange. Joan takes it upon herself to investigate why her sister is not participating in their sisterly activities. This decision takes her down a spiral of family secrets and enforced fetishism, as she slowly learns that someone has been in control of her family for a long time.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (3 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Hostel (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by AskJeeves
The CEO of a startup gives a compelling presentation to investors.

In the Beginning (mc mf md ma gr sf) (1 new chapter)  by CuyahogaKingKong
A girl living before the dawn of civilization has her life changed forever when she’s taken by a mysterious light in the sky.

Mad Monday (mc mf in) (2 new chapters)  by Pan
After swapping bodies with their teenage daughter, Andrew’s wife finds it hard to handle the hormones.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

Muscle Bimbo (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
The nerdy, plain, shy Alex asks goth girl Winter out on a date, only to be told she’s not her type. But after that, Alex finds herself changing.

My New Salon (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Robert Towers
Madeleine is convinced by her roommate to try several new things.

Night Time Nudging (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?

Observer (mc ff mf md) (new)  by Quiet Hypnotist
Ayla is observing the pendulum. Ishana is observing Ayla. But who’s observing her?

Officer Friendly (mc mf ff in md) (new)  by Ice Bear
Detective Brindley becomes more and more obsessive in her investigation of a missing persons case involving Todd.

Paperback (mc mf ff ft) (2 new chapters)  by eviltwinmordred
An impressionable teenager finds an old mind-control fetish novel in a used book store.

Preparation (mc ff md) (new)  by MoldedMind
Alyssa’s boyfriend Bill likes to send her girls he has hypnotized and broken, as gifts. Alyssa wishes he would stop, yet she can’t seem to keep herself from being seduced time and time again. But is Bill really sending these gifts out of the goodness of his heart?

Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (2 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

Religious Conversion (mc ff ma bd ds hm la ft) (new)  by J. F. Gargiulo
A pastor uses conversion therapy to control her daughter and a town’s women, but not everyone’s willing to submit...

Remind Me to Forget (mc ma) (new)  by Jukebox
Elaine programs her personal assistant service to program her.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

The Rose and the Frost (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
A walk in the garden turns into so much more.

The Scent of Love (mc mm) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Brad, a nurse, is captivated by the smell of an unconscious patient, a John Doe.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Skeinbound (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva
Three young women set out on a winter’s journey, to prove their new adulthood or perish in the process. One trying to keep them fed, one trying to keep them safe, and one who’ll try anything to keep them all together.

The Succubus’ Game (mc ff) (new)  by mr. potestas
A young Hunter agrees to play a Succubus’ game to save the woman this Demon possessed.

Tales of Hypnotopia: Holly’s Spa Vacation (mc mf md bd ft ex hm gr) (new)  by Daisy Isabella Britt de Melcker
The creepy guy at work tries to patch things up with Holly by giving her a free vacation to a suspiciously remote luxury spa.

Teacher (GiantNut) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by GiantNut
A college student uses classified government information to reprogram his teacher.

Uplink (mc ff mf ma sf) (1 new chapter)  by nevermind
The promised future has arrived. Mankind has outgrown old Terra and lives peacefully among the stars. But when junior engineer Kyra Warner of the TSS Argo picks up the wrong item from an alien planet, the rest of her crew must soon find out that not everything in this universe is willing to coexist.

The Weaving Witch (mc ff) (new)  by Playright
A princess and her maid get lost in the woods and find more than she expects.

Were-Tigress (mc mf fd gr) (2 new chapters)  by MɛtaBob
A family man learns magic, mostly the hard way.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

Yew and Me (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Writer345
Lilith Yew, powerful leader of the Martian colonization movement, faces more threats to her efforts to establish human colonies on Mars.
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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2019, 01:34:23 pm »
eeeek am i a published writer now? :D
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I’m fairly confident she zapped me, or my brain at least, and those lights... those lights did -something-...
For now, I’m being ignored, still strapped naked and helpless to the chair as several men have joined the good doctor to look at whatever it is they’re looking at on that computer display, muttering to themselves and only occasionally glancing over at my as I’m trying avoid a panic attack.

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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #2 on: May 18, 2019, 02:41:48 pm »
eeeek am i a published writer now? :D

Congrats, Daisy!

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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #3 on: May 18, 2019, 02:45:05 pm »
It's Saturday. You know what that means? Why, another quality submission by 321, of course! Back at it with another delicious chapter of Hostel. The plot thickens, as we learn just what it is that's going on at this quaint inn in Berlin. As ever, the writing is of envious quality, hot as all hell, and 321 still manages it all at a pace that has me jealous. Maybe hold off on reading, because then you won't have to wait an entire week for the next chapter. Who am I kidding though, no one should wait for this.

After last week's cliffhanger of Carefully Random's The Mask, I'm sad to see the follow up not in this update. However, a new chapter of Algorithm is a more than suitable substitute. And what a chaoter this was, answering the questions left by its OWN cliffhanger! Such an exciting read, as we see just what Tiffany's plan was, and how it all plays out. And what, another cliffhanger? If I didn't know any better, I'd say Lucy was writing this story, with how cruel these waits are. Once again, another story that will make waiting an entire week seem unbearable.

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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #4 on: May 18, 2019, 03:10:15 pm »
Welcome, Daisy, to the Archive.  I’ve already commented and praised your Story, but I will say I enjoyed “Tales of Hypnotopia”.

My friend 321 brings us another spectacular chapter of “Hostel”. My favorite scene this week has Alice oh so casually telling two young ladies to just ignore her conversation with Rebecca.  It reminds me of Mr. Reardon telling Doreen to be “Quiet....please” in “Attack Angels”, the great “Charlie’s Angels “ episode.

The story is such a smorgasbord of Hypno tropes.  And I love how Rebecca says no no.....but not really.
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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #5 on: May 18, 2019, 03:48:52 pm »
321's Hostelstarts to really unwind for the reading, opening up the fuller picture of things and they are vast in scope and interest.

We find out that Emily is really seeing everything on her lone travel.

Rebecca is being 'recruited' for her hypnotic abilities by Alice. Somehow I don't think that decision is being left to her free will, even though Rebecca may think it is.

The huge scope of Alice's operation begins to take shape. She is an entrepreneur of the highest order, her slimy, greedy tentacles slithering out into so many people and venues.

And both Rebecca and Emily get introduced to 'acquaintances' of Alice, someone each has never 'met' before and find out they have doppelgangers of a sort for their best friends. Same names! Damn, what are the odds of that? That is a GREAT SCENE.

And..............we learn Rebecca hypnotized Emily back in college. Hmmmmm....somehow I don't think that was a flashback thrown in there just to fill the story with some words.

Mordred's Paperback continues on its exceptional course. Hot as hell mind control, gorgeous agents, intrigue, plot twists it has it all. And the lovely twinned double narrative making it two stories for the price of one!

Two chapter this week and lots going on. Stella is sent on a mission, one that directly conflicts with what her father did, as her dead mentor points out. But her control is so deep it matters not. Great stuff throwing that conflict in there. Stella and Laura come under suspicion because Stella did not clean up a bit of a mess as she should have, this time she listens to her old mentor. So some good remains in her.

Had to laugh at the narrator spending obscene money, he is filthy rich at that point, to find an old pilot of a show based on the book. Of course I have spent some pretty good money buying up old videos of MC shows and if I had his money there are some not on the market I would do the same thing for. Mordred once again so adeptly inside the head of an MC junkie.

That description of the girl who played Stella in the pilot, gorgeous but no actress, lol, yep, could be used to describe any of the pretty girls in those shows, such as Charlies Angels, which also gets a very apropos shout out in this chapter.

At the end, Stella is given another mission by Laura, a horrific one targeted right at her boss, the man trying to protect the world and his agents!! Cliffhanger.

In the next chapter, the last one of the story, sadly, Stella and Laura go to the Directors yacht to accomplish her programmed mission. And boy, what a surprise awaits her....and the reader! Never saw that one coming. Great job Mordred! And right when it looks like something really bad is about to happen, Stella's old mentor appears! Not really dead after all???

Also the narrator clues us in on his health not being so well. Why is this? What happened with him?

On the yacht some things happen that I admit surprise me. I didn't expect that story to go the way it did for reasons I had. I have to say I was very surprised in a good way at the bend PaperBack took.

Now the thing is this, it not only took a surprise turn for me in the comic, but also with the narrator, what he is, what has become of him, the price he paid to do so.

This story is not a gentle MC story in the end. It is all adult and can be viewed as the steep cost of doing MC business, both for the victims and the one doing the controlling. Playing with people's minds is a dark, evil path and the story reflects that both in comic and the narrator. Ones as great as this one are rare and so very special.

Thanks Mordred for doing this story, for all the reasons you know. You did it to perfection in saying what you intended all the while taking the reader on a wild, smashing ride.

I wish it could have gone on ten more chapters.


 
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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #6 on: May 18, 2019, 04:19:22 pm »
Thank you, Cerebus. 
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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #7 on: May 18, 2019, 04:23:01 pm »
Mordred,

Thank you. You're doing all the work, creating that very amazing, exceptional story, I am just having all the fun reading it.

Daisy,

I agree with Mordred. I thought  “Tales of Hypnotopia” was wickedly terrific story. Very well done!! Loved it.

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« Reply #8 on: May 18, 2019, 05:02:08 pm »
eeeek am i a published writer now? :D
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Weird, right? 
It's a good story.  Still super tempted to write a rebuttal piece of my own that imposes a happy ending on it though.  Which is a sign of quality, badly written downer stories don't effect me.
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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #9 on: May 18, 2019, 05:48:19 pm »
Daisy, I agree with Mordred. I thought  “Tales of Hypnotopia” was wickedly terrific story. Very well done!! Loved it.
Yay! Thank you! :D Also congrats on your 200th forum post! :D

eeeek am i a published writer now? :D ♥♥♥
Weird, right? 
It's a good story.  Still super tempted to write a rebuttal piece of my own that imposes a happy ending on it though.  Which is a sign of quality, badly written downer stories don't effect me.
Well, you can write an AU version of my fic. :3 Just let me read it when you're done~

I’m fairly confident she zapped me, or my brain at least, and those lights... those lights did -something-...
For now, I’m being ignored, still strapped naked and helpless to the chair as several men have joined the good doctor to look at whatever it is they’re looking at on that computer display, muttering to themselves and only occasionally glancing over at my as I’m trying avoid a panic attack.

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« Reply #10 on: May 18, 2019, 05:55:15 pm »
Ashes  Nailed it.  Not only some nice long chapters, but three of them right out of the gate?  Fantastic!

War is in the offing and I'm curious to see how it goes.  Great way to get the reader hooked!

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« Reply #11 on: May 18, 2019, 11:14:05 pm »
Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!
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« Reply #12 on: May 18, 2019, 11:30:57 pm »
Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!

Agreed! A hot merry-go-round of controlling and being controlled, of trigger phrases and trances and rapidly-shifting power dynamics... is Part 9 here yet?  :grin:

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Re: New Releases-May 18th 2019
« Reply #13 on: May 19, 2019, 01:32:58 am »
eeeek am i a published writer now? :D
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Well done, Daisy!  I remember the thrill that I got when my first story was posted...  Suddenly all of the blood, sweat and tears are worth it!
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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #14 on: May 19, 2019, 04:12:38 am »
Officer Friendly was freaking awesome, perfectly paced and plotted.

I really wished that there had been some physical description of the ladies in the harem to the point of differentiating them, but given the PoV was another female I admit that my (personal) complaint is groundless... it wasn't that kind of story and I doubt I am the intended demo audience anyway. In fact I am surprised that I enjoyed it that much, a story of a woman's fall told through her perspective (I'm going to have to try telling a story like that).

This was great, thanks.



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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #15 on: May 19, 2019, 07:12:36 am »
After reading Master GEO's Bimbo or Billionaire: Custom Karma, I have to say that while I enjoyed the overall effect of Rachel becoming an anime-girl, I felt that there were too many changes involved that gave it an unfocused feel, like the author wanted to just throw every concept he had into one story instead of selecting a few to focus on here and keeping some others in reserve for a different story. That said, I really like the accent changes, the forced roleplay, and, oddly enough, Rei-Rei's new enthusiasm for socks which was completely unexpected. It's mostly a winner for me and it's a story I'll definitely reread.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #16 on: May 19, 2019, 08:57:40 am »
Completely forgot to mention Paperback previously, so let's go ahead and rectify that. What a wonderful conclusion to a great story. That twist, or really all the twists, were just so expertly delivered, and hot to boot. Really glad I gave this series a chance all those weeks ago, wouldn't change a thing about the story. Well... except maybe a request for more?

I read so very little while I was working on my own story. This unfortunately meant that I haven't kept up with any story by Mr. Scade. Reading An Episode of Lingerie Enslavement really has me regretting this. Reminds me of the wonderful stories from him that I used to read so many years ago. I'll have to find the time to go through anything I may have missed for sure. As for this story? Absolutely loved it, of course. When the main character investigates a bit too far into what her sister is up to, that scene and the resulting ones were just so delicious. Certainly a story I'll be reading each and every week is updated.

With so many great stories coming out, though, it seems my Saturdays are going to be almost entirely booked!

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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #17 on: May 19, 2019, 11:34:49 am »
Getting started

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction

Mindless Toy amused the old actress by far the most, probably for the obvious reasons. You Want Her has a few fun moments, but most not really my thing. First one has a relative issue, plus its by far the most sex related piece too.
Compromise? Definitely enjoyed. First gets more, other 2 less

Observer

OK, the end play was kind of neat, but other than that, its just fairly standard hypno stuff which is never going to excite me. Hypno fans will get more than me, mind
High end of enjoyed

Remind Me to Forget

Another hypno piece, but I have to admit to being amused by the way it all plays through the piece, very neatly done. The whole Alexa thing is a bit lost on me, but thats an age, and lifestyle thing, lets face it.
Low end of definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Wasnt a lot here for me either, in truth. We are clearly beginning to get towards the big ending, in more senses than one, mind. I dont think River City will be sorry when these 2 get out of town, mind, lol.
Low end of definitely enjoyed

The Succubus’ Gamet

And quite a game it was too. As to what really happened there, who knows? Certainly makes a nice teaser for the main story, when released.
Definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #18 on: May 19, 2019, 11:57:03 am »
Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!

Agreed! A hot merry-go-round of controlling and being controlled, of trigger phrases and trances and rapidly-shifting power dynamics... is Part 9 here yet?  :grin:

I'll add another round of agreement to that.

At this point, it looks like all three of them have at least one other who has a trance trigger. Tiffany got out of the direct control, but seems to have forgotten that Lucy left a trigger command in her mind. Lucy now has two triggers in her, and Tiffany has a trigger for each of the others, but in theory whoever gets a chance to use their triggers privately first has the best chance to come on top (though while they're together, it's more of a Mexican standoff).

Plus whatever the note said.

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #19 on: May 19, 2019, 12:44:02 pm »

The Succubus’ Game

And quite a game it was too. As to what really happened there, who knows? Certainly makes a nice teaser for the main story, when released.
Definitely enjoyed


Thanks for definitely enjoying! The fallibility of memory is a major theme of the upcoming story, so much so that neither version of events depicted in the teaser may be completely accurate. I plan to exacerbate that further by not looking to the teaser at all when finalizing the rather long Demon Lover over the next few days. Fun story to put together.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #20 on: May 19, 2019, 01:33:23 pm »
Completely forgot to mention Paperback previously, so let's go ahead and rectify that. What a wonderful conclusion to a great story. That twist, or really all the twists, were just so expertly delivered, and hot to boot. Really glad I gave this series a chance all those weeks ago, wouldn't change a thing about the story. Well... except maybe a request for more?

I read so very little while I was working on my own story. This unfortunately meant that I haven't kept up with any story by Mr. Scade. Reading An Episode of Lingerie Enslavement really has me regretting this. Reminds me of the wonderful stories from him that I used to read so many years ago. I'll have to find the time to go through anything I may have missed for sure. As for this story? Absolutely loved it, of course. When the main character investigates a bit too far into what her sister is up to, that scene and the resulting ones were just so delicious. Certainly a story I'll be reading each and every week is updated.

With so many great stories coming out, though, it seems my Saturdays are going to be almost entirely booked!

Thank you, Shadra.  This story was personal, something I really needed to say, even though it took time and effort.  I therefore doubt I will do a sequel.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #21 on: May 19, 2019, 07:22:24 pm »
Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!

Agreed! A hot merry-go-round of controlling and being controlled, of trigger phrases and trances and rapidly-shifting power dynamics... is Part 9 here yet?  :grin:

I'll add another round of agreement to that.

At this point, it looks like all three of them have at least one other who has a trance trigger. Tiffany got out of the direct control, but seems to have forgotten that Lucy left a trigger command in her mind. Lucy now has two triggers in her, and Tiffany has a trigger for each of the others, but in theory whoever gets a chance to use their triggers privately first has the best chance to come on top (though while they're together, it's more of a Mexican standoff).

Plus whatever the note said.

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Plus Tiffany will forget the whole night at midnight, she seems to have forgotten about that, too.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #22 on: May 19, 2019, 09:15:21 pm »
I'm trying to catch up on 2 weeks of reading. I'm still digging In the Beginning by CuyahogaKingKong. If you like slow builds, assholeish controllers, and plucky heroines who may or may not beat said assholeish controllers at their own game, this story is so, so worth it. I adore Ahn and am so rooting for her to become more than what her Master intends for her, but if she doesn't, I trust CKK's vision. Even if the story doesn't go where I really hope it will go based on the first 3 chapters, I trust that I'll still be a satisfied reader.

I'm also into a chapter of Ashes by Blackie. I know The Book is a classic of our genre and a favorite for good reason, but Blackie's 2019 output has hit me harder than The Book for reasons I can't quite explain. I'm digging what I've read of Ashes so far. Again, if you like slow builds, this may be a story for you. I'm willing to wait however many chapters it takes to get to the sexy bits (likely Chapter 3, given Simon's submission guidelines) because Blackie's nailing the characters and the narrative.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #23 on: May 20, 2019, 12:14:48 am »
I'm also into a chapter of Ashes by Blackie. I know The Book is a classic of our genre and a favorite for good reason, but Blackie's 2019 output has hit me harder than The Book for reasons I can't quite explain. I'm digging what I've read of Ashes so far. Again, if you like slow builds, this may be a story for you. I'm willing to wait however many chapters it takes to get to the sexy bits (likely Chapter 3, given Simon's submission guidelines) because Blackie's nailing the characters and the narrative.

Depends what you consider sexy. The presence of mind control becomes more overt, but there's nothing X-rated so far.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday May 18th 2019
« Reply #24 on: May 20, 2019, 01:08:57 am »
Officer Friendly was freaking awesome, perfectly paced and plotted.

I really wished that there had been some physical description of the ladies in the harem to the point of differentiating them, but given the PoV was another female I admit that my (personal) complaint is groundless... it wasn't that kind of story and I doubt I am the intended demo audience anyway. In fact I am surprised that I enjoyed it that much, a story of a woman's fall told through her perspective (I'm going to have to try telling a story like that).

This was great, thanks.

Glad you enjoyed. This is indubitably a bit of hubris on my part; the amount of mail I get on the Friend Zone series is pretty heavy, and I return to them often enough that I sometimes forget to include descriptive details for folks who somehow don't have the myriad tales memorized. You're right that our protagonist didn't much care for that stuff anyway, but still, I get the impulse toward wanting visual clarity.