Author Topic: New Releases-March 30th 2019 (Read 20723 times)

Majorwrll · « **on:** March 30, 2019, 11:17:03 am »

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The Adventures of Sultry Girl (mc mf ff md fd cb) (new) by CrystalWitch
A kinky transgender superhero faces of against a litany of equally perverted villains.

Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter) by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm. It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

Amazonian Pride (mc mf md gr) (new) by TheHandsThatLead
Kiana, an amazonian princess has been captured by a mage, what fate does he have in mind for her?

Bible Belt Redux (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter) by Pan
When Brodie flashes his ultra-religious sister, she is suddenly obsessed with his cock.

Cascade Fire (mc mf fd la) (1 new chapter) by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.

College Undercover (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.

Cressidia’s Concentra (mc mf md fd) (new) by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
A marshall requires a certain device for a certain purpose. He’s not going to leave without getting what he needs, and the shopkeep is more than happy to oblige him.

Easily Led (mc mf md) (new) by Jukebox
Jessica wants to leave the house on her own, but her Master explains why that’s a very bad idea for someone as easily brainwashed as she is.

Eternal Slave (mc mf fd ma bd ds ft hm hu sf) (1 new chapter) by Aristotle_Writes
A humorous, epic femdom fantasy. As Jack’s last girlfriend leaves in disgust because of his submissive nature, he realizes that all he wants is to be a slave to women. Soon, strange things happen to him, and he ends up in an alien world where it seems his dreams will come true. But at a price.

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter) by AskJeeves
The CEO of a startup gives a compelling presentation to investors.

It Runs in the Family (mc ff in ma hm) (1 new chapter) by Sammynona
Connie’s secretly in love with her best friend Tara. But also Tara’s older sister Jane. And their young mother Michelle too. It was always an impossible dream to make the Silva family into her own harem of lovers, until she found out that Tara’s grandmother was a hypnotist.

Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter) by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

Losers Can’t Be Choosers (mc mf fd hm) (1 new chapter) by S. B.
As much as he enjoys it, Jonah knows he’s addicted to femdom humiliation. Perhaps his sister Angela, a skilled hypnotherapist, can help him with that.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter) by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

My First Hypno Con (mc mm fd) (new) by Renensco
Joe goes to his first Hypno Convention and is surprised when his fantasies start coming true.

Originals and Outsiders: Assemble (mc mf md cb) (2 new chapters) by asianpersuasion
Super powered heroes aren’t the apple of the public’s eye, but that doesn’t stop Nick, Jason from being recruited to join a team of young teenage superheroes to try and learn how to save the world. Taught and mentored by the great heroes of the previous generation like Luminaire and Darklight or their headmaster, Kyle Albinn, the young kids soon find themselves way in over their heads...

Pledging the Sorority — N.C.U. (mc ff) (new) by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne meets Trisha, the head of the hypnotic sorority that she is pledging. But why does she look so familiar?

A Plethora of Heathers (mc fd ds hm) (1 new chapter) by Betsy Leohtar
Heather’s is a restaurant owned by Heather. It’s very profitable.

Poetry & Blood (mc ff) (1 new chapter) by Trixie Adara
Laura gets a new job for a strange romance writer that seems to be too good to be true.

Property of Sun Central (mc ff rb) (1 new chapter) by Nick Vegas
The lovely owner of a tanning salon decides to save money by taking full ownership of her employees, and recruits new employees from her client base, turning one into a lustful submissive bimbo, and the other into a photographer robot.

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (1 new chapter) by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the General’s forces and remain uninfected himself.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (2 new chapters) by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

Role Reversal (mc mf fd in) (new) by MindSpark
After seeing hypnosis in action, a daughter with a crush on her father comes up with a plan to usurp her mother’s place in the family.

Sensual Makeover (mc mf md) (new) by Douglas Meurs
Bill and Min are a happily-married couple. Bill suggests a hypnotic Sensual Makeover for Min, and Min tries it...

The Sincerest Expression of Love (mc mf md) (new) by Extantelan
A man with the ability to control the physical actions of others searches for submissive women who appreciate his talent.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter) by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter) by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations he’d never thought possible.

Torrid Tales (mc mf mm md) (2 new chapters) by Pan
A collection of sexy mind control stories.

The Triumphs of the Past (mc mf ma) (1 new chapter) by Maximilian Cummings
The classic car that Eric obtains seems to have an effect on the women around or in it.

gyrd · « **Reply #1 on:** March 30, 2019, 08:06:29 pm »

Ooh, I get to give tips on Pan's American English, haven't had to do that in a long time!

Quote

You’ll ring him tomorrow

"You'll call him tomorrow."

greyscribbler · « **Reply #2 on:** March 30, 2019, 08:11:41 pm »

Quote from: gyrd on March 30, 2019, 08:06:29 pm

Ooh, I get to give tips on Pan's American English, haven't had to do that in a long time!

Quote
You’ll ring him tomorrow

"You'll call him tomorrow."

If I didn't already know where Pan was from I could guess from that.

Greyscribbler

Shadra · « **Reply #3 on:** March 30, 2019, 08:20:57 pm »

No no no, he meant ring as in to encircle. It's fine.

lifmcs · « **Reply #4 on:** March 30, 2019, 08:46:49 pm »

The true meaning: https://youtu.be/4m1EFMoRFvY

(Because all things lead back to Beyoncé, or so I’ve been told.)

GiantNut · « **Reply #5 on:** March 30, 2019, 10:44:04 pm »

Is it me or the number of stories has increased since last year?

BigJohn · « **Reply #6 on:** March 30, 2019, 11:05:39 pm »

This was my favourite update in a while, for three specific reasons.

Algorithm - Was afraid this story has been abandoned, so happy to see it wasn't. This new chapter was amazing, and I can't wait to see more.

It Runs in the Family - I knew this was going to get updates, but the author seems to be balancing so many spinning plates at once that I figured it was going to be a while. Excellent, hot chapter. And the cliffhanger ending, oh you are evil Sammynonna!

And newcomer Renensco coming in strong with My First Hypno Con. This hit all the right buttons for me, I love that some unknown person at the con is walking around with his new trigger. I can't wait to see more!

Writer345 · « **Reply #7 on:** March 31, 2019, 02:54:00 am »

A Plethora of Heathers
by Betsy Leohtar

I've been following this from the start but now I really am intreagued! Only one chapter a week? That's not fair!

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #8 on:** March 31, 2019, 06:51:15 am »

Quote from: lifmcs on March 30, 2019, 08:46:49 pm

The true meaning: https://youtu.be/4m1EFMoRFvY

(Because all things lead back to Beyoncé, or so I’ve been told.)

No, they all lead back to the Chipettes

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-RP19fnff_c

Quote from: GiantNut on March 30, 2019, 10:44:04 pm

Is it me or the number of stories has increased since last year?

Yes, they have, definitely. If it wasnt that my work week had cut back due to health issues, and so much so that I currently dont have a work week, I'd have stopped reviewing by now

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #9 on:** March 31, 2019, 09:53:16 am »

Getting started

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup

I suppose its fair to say that nothing surprising, or shocking happens here after the first chapter. The whole app thing would be wasted on me, at least it might save us old, non smart phone owning dinosaurs, lol. Still, if Lavinia wants to try and convince me, by other means...?
Definitely enjoyed

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Somehow I doubt this is the last turn of events in the battle between Angela, and Gail? I would say poor Jonah, but I do love Angela's logic on that front, between him, and Nick. Hopefully Clarissa is enjoying her rebuild, lol? Fun tactical battle to come, for sure. Or is that to cum?

High end of definitely enjoyed

A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, for the sake of 24 words, my desire to find out how 'Miss Carpenter' was getting on, won out over another story for Number 5. Yes, what sort of name is Heaven, then again, what sort of name is Harlean?

This is as entertaining, and crazy as previously, and yes, I'm loving it!
High end of definitely enjoyed

Resistance 2

How much resistance does Robert have left? In truth, who can blame him for considering thinking with something other than his mind?

Of course, the ending might change the whole scenario in so many ways. Cant say much, way too much of a spoiler, so you need to read it to find out
Definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Ah, a mention for Faeryfaye!

Yes, her logic in dealing with matters is as entertaining as before! Definitely looking forward to seeing how this all plays out for everyone
High end of definitely enjoyed

More to follow

CerebusOne · « **Reply #10 on:** March 31, 2019, 02:35:00 pm »

Greyscribblers College Undercover takes huge steps in plot and drives headlong to resolution.

It is interesting to see Carol leaving a trail of busted lives here near the end, betraying those closest to her, Janice and Patrick, one who deserved the betrayal, one who did not under any measure.

She had become a destroyer of people's worlds, and lives, to paraphrase Oppenheimer all the while having inner conversations with Stephanie, a very hard core woman.

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

This chapter is tough stuff, but it has been a tough story. But such a great tough story.

SB · « **Reply #11 on:** March 31, 2019, 06:01:15 pm »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on March 31, 2019, 09:53:16 am

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Somehow I doubt this is the last turn of events in the battle between Angela, and Gail? I would say poor Jonah, but I do love Angela's logic on that front, between him, and Nick. Hopefully Clarissa is enjoying her rebuild, lol? Fun tactical battle to come, for sure. Or is that to cum?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks. There are a few more chapters but the story is nearing its conclusion. By this point, Angela is fed up of playing nice so... Chapter 21 is entitled Payback, just saying.

gyrd · « **Reply #12 on:** March 31, 2019, 07:43:28 pm »

I'd be very disappointed in "College Undercover" if it somehow ended in Carol being "saved" by Wainwright. Even if she could be saved, which it would seem she can't, as the words would still be in her head. Seems like the obvious ending for her is to succeed Mrs. Bowen as the madam, with of course her implanting the words into every hooker she hires.

I do wonder if we're going to see the mobster's daughter whose name I forget become a whore for real now, since her father's going to jail for life and she'll probably be alone and destitute. Maybe she'll go back to Carol and ask for help and Carol will "help" her.

runningpants · « **Reply #13 on:** March 31, 2019, 09:55:36 pm »

Quote from: gyrd on March 31, 2019, 07:43:28 pm

I'd be very disappointed in "College Undercover" if it somehow ended in Carol being "saved" by Wainwright. Even if she could be saved, which it would seem she can't, as the words would still be in her head. Seems like the obvious ending for her is to succeed Mrs. Bowen as the madam, with of course her implanting the words into every hooker she hires.

I do wonder if we're going to see the mobster's daughter whose name I forget become a whore for real now, since her father's going to jail for life and she'll probably be alone and destitute. Maybe she'll go back to Carol and ask for help and Carol will "help" her.

I finally caught up with college undercover and I will have to agree with you. An excellent tale, that is rapidly reaching its end.

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

Shadra · « **Reply #14 on:** March 31, 2019, 11:20:28 pm »

So glad to see Algorithm returning, and it did not disappoint. Actually gave me a really great idea for a story, well... at least for a scene.

That outfit reveal too... so good. Definitely did not expect that!

Carefully_Random · « **Reply #15 on:** April 01, 2019, 06:24:52 am »

Quote from: BigJohn on March 30, 2019, 11:05:39 pm

This was my favourite update in a while, for three specific reasons.

Algorithm - Was afraid this story has been abandoned, so happy to see it wasn't. This new chapter was amazing, and I can't wait to see more.

Thank you, you didn’t have to use italics but the fact that you did is really touching

Sorry this one took so long to update, I got stuck staring at the Algorithm and only got free when the power company cut my supply when I stopped paying them :p

Quote from: Shadra on March 31, 2019, 11:20:28 pm

So glad to see Algorithm returning, and it did not disappoint. Actually gave me a really great idea for a story, well... at least for a scene.

That outfit reveal too... so good. Definitely did not expect that!

Hey, thanks

Speaking of inspiration, I keep meaning to put a little note at the start of Algorithm to say that it was influenced by the simply superb Tabico story Sub Routine, one of my top three favourites of all time on the EMCSA. Anyone enjoying Algorithm should go check it out if they haven’t already!

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #16 on:** April 01, 2019, 04:47:44 pm »

Part 2

Easily Led

Yes, I suspect Jessica is a girl of very little brain nowadays, lol. Fun piece to read, I must admit, if not the most entertaining JB story for my personal tastes
Definitely enjoyed

Magical Girl Syn

Fine, I love the ending, I hate the fact I've got to wait to find out what happens next! Seeing I'm not Bruce's biggest fan, well...?
Definitely enjoyed

Pledging the Sorority — N.C.U.

Plenty of hypno chaos going on here, thats for sure. OK for me, but I'm not a big hypno fan, and they will like it more
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Standard mark for hypno fans

The Sincerest Expression of Love

Lets just say I hated this, personal tastes, and leave it there. What I would like to do to the author, assuming he doesnt have genuine MC skills, well it could be painful.
No rating, obviously!

Stop Watch

Plenty of sexual goings on here, between various parties, for sure. It was quite nicely handled as such, but sex ironically isnt a turn on for me, at all.
Low end of definitely enjoyed

More to follow. Hopefully tomorrow, but will depend on health, not had a great day

Akisa · « **Reply #17 on:** April 01, 2019, 05:10:27 pm »

The two new Torrid Tales, are wonderful!

Betsy · « **Reply #18 on:** April 01, 2019, 05:27:01 pm »

Quote from: Writer345 on March 31, 2019, 02:54:00 am

A Plethora of Heathers
by Betsy Leohtar

I've been following this from the start but now I really am intreagued! Only one chapter a week? That's not fair!

Ah, sorry about that. Unfortunately life isn't fair. I get complaints from other parties if my posts are too long and now because my posts are too short. My posts are all lined up now, ready to go and I don't want to alter that now.

But thanks for reading as well as your comment.

Betsy · « **Reply #19 on:** April 01, 2019, 05:31:38 pm »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on March 31, 2019, 09:53:16 am

A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, for the sake of 24 words, my desire to find out how 'Miss Carpenter' was getting on, won out over another story for Number 5. Yes, what sort of name is Heaven, then again, what sort of name is Harlean? This is as entertaining, and crazy as previously, and yes, I'm loving it!
High end of definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Ah, a mention for Faeryfaye! Yes, her logic in dealing with matters is as entertaining as before! Definitely looking forward to seeing how this all plays out for everyone
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thank you Merry. To answer your question, Heaven is an unusual name and Harlean is a lovely name. It reminds me of a maniacal blonde with a baseball bat and tatts. Very hot.

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #20 on:** April 02, 2019, 08:44:00 am »

Quote from: Betsy on April 01, 2019, 05:31:38 pm

Quote from: Merry Brooks on March 31, 2019, 09:53:16 am
A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, for the sake of 24 words, my desire to find out how 'Miss Carpenter' was getting on, won out over another story for Number 5. Yes, what sort of name is Heaven, then again, what sort of name is Harlean? This is as entertaining, and crazy as previously, and yes, I'm loving it!
High end of definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Ah, a mention for Faeryfaye! Yes, her logic in dealing with matters is as entertaining as before! Definitely looking forward to seeing how this all plays out for everyone
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thank you Merry. To answer your question, Heaven is an unusual name and Harlean is a lovely name. It reminds me of a maniacal blonde with a baseball bat and tatts. Very hot.

Its one tattoo, and its a bar code, which I find very apt for a robot, just saying...

But funnily enough, the baseball bat...

Pan · « **Reply #21 on:** April 02, 2019, 10:01:24 am »

Quote from: gyrd on March 30, 2019, 08:06:29 pm

Ooh, I get to give tips on Pan's American English, haven't had to do that in a long time!

Quote
You’ll ring him tomorrow

"You'll call him tomorrow."

Haha, dang it! One of the purposes of Redux was to fix all those up.

Quote from: Akisa on April 01, 2019, 05:10:27 pm

The two new Torrid Tales, are wonderful!

Thanks so much! I am rather proud of those two.

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #22 on:** April 03, 2019, 11:11:47 am »

Part 3

The Adventures of Sultry Girl

First chapter was far more my thing than the second one. More of a decent story line, and definitely the more interesting outcome. Blair seems a little too interested in herself, to be honest.
Definitely enjoyed

Amazonian Pride

One of those nice, but naughty stories for me. As in I did think the take-down method was absolutely delicious, and devious, but at the same time, I just ended up feeling far too sorry for her in the end. Not that I guess thats really her original masters fault (maybe?), and I'd hate anal sex, but other than that, sounded way too deliciously kinky to me.
Definitely enjoyed, compromise mark

It Runs in the Family

OK, the end could be entertaining, thats for sure! Loved the chess match between Jane, and Connie, re the orgasms too, and how that matter was dealt with. Looked forward to seeing where we go from here
High end of definitely enjoyed

Return of the Armored Warrior

Fine, I was wondered why she didnt want to be thoroughly brainwashed like that, but anyway... Yes, I loved the discovered fantasy, lol! Not that I blame Erika, but besides that... If any of those old outfits can be redesigned for disabled old crocks, well...?

Great options play offs here, even if it wasnt hard to work out her final call!
High end of definitely enjoyed

Sensual Makeover

Fine, the names amused me, though FBH, and maybe the author would be the only ones to know why, though you could try looking back at early 1930's movies, lol. The makeover is pretty cute in all honesty, and fine, something I'd love to be done to me! All I'd need is a partner, and I could obey like that very willingly indeed.
High end of definitely enjoyed. Provide me with a partner, and the programming (submissive), and I'd be open to giving more

Last 5 in next couple of days

mr potestas · « **Reply #23 on:** April 03, 2019, 12:05:56 pm »

Amazonian Pride (mc mf md gr) (new) by TheHandsThatLead
Kiana, an amazonian princess has been captured by a mage, what fate does he have in mind for her?

This was a very well written story, regardless of the fact that it was a bit less titillating for me than I expected. I tend to root for the woman of the story, if my recent Amazon story was any indication. So there were moments where I just hated the captors/owners. Not even "love to hate" like a General Hux! Plus, the plastic surgery seems oddly standard, for lack of better words, in a fantastical world, as having a powerful Amazon under your complete control seems like it would be more than enough without body modification. That said, Kiana's blatant overconfidence prior to the main story was clearly something she was paying for. The "devices" were rather interesting as well. It seemed as if they did not have to be used as a form of erotic torture, but that might just be my interpretation. A weirdly depressing, yet interesting read.

TheHandsThatLead · « **Reply #24 on:** April 03, 2019, 02:04:16 pm »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 03, 2019, 11:11:47 am

Amazonian Pride

One of those nice, but naughty stories for me. As in I did think the take-down method was absolutely delicious, and devious, but at the same time, I just ended up feeling far too sorry for her in the end. Not that I guess thats really her original masters fault (maybe?), and I'd hate anal sex, but other than that, sounded way too deliciously kinky to me.
Definitely enjoyed, compromise mark

Thanks Merry, I always look forward to seeing your reviews of you stories, even when I know they may not be 100% to your liking

TheHandsThatLead · « **Reply #25 on:** April 03, 2019, 02:09:43 pm »

Quote from: mr potestas on April 03, 2019, 12:05:56 pm

Amazonian Pride (mc mf md gr) (new) by TheHandsThatLead
Kiana, an amazonian princess has been captured by a mage, what fate does he have in mind for her?

This was a very well written story, regardless of the fact that it was a bit less titillating for me than I expected. I tend to root for the woman of the story, if my recent Amazon story was any indication. So there were moments where I just hated the captors/owners. Not even "love to hate" like a General Hux! Plus, the plastic surgery seems oddly standard, for lack of better words, in a fantastical world, as having a powerful Amazon under your complete control seems like it would be more than enough without body modification. That said, Kiana's blatant overconfidence prior to the main story was clearly something she was paying for. The "devices" were rather interesting as well. It seemed as if they did not have to be used as a form of erotic torture, but that might just be my interpretation. A weirdly depressing, yet interesting read.

Thanks, that's the first time I've ever received a "weirdly depressing, yet interesting" review and oddly enough I'm perfectly fine with it

greyscribbler · « **Reply #26 on:** April 03, 2019, 03:22:20 pm »

Quote from: CerebusOne on March 31, 2019, 02:35:00 pm

Greyscribblers College Undercover takes huge steps in plot and drives headlong to resolution.

It is interesting to see Carol leaving a trail of busted lives here near the end, betraying those closest to her, Janice and Patrick, one who deserved the betrayal, one who did not under any measure.

This chapter is tough stuff, but it has been a tough story. But such a great tough story.

Thanks CerebusOne. Glad you're still enjoying it. Patrick, for sure. But Janice wasn't exactly without agency in her part of the chapter.

Quote from: gyrd on March 31, 2019, 07:43:28 pm

I'd be very disappointed in "College Undercover" if it somehow ended in Carol being "saved" by Wainwright. Even if she could be saved, which it would seem she can't, as the words would still be in her head. Seems like the obvious ending for her is to succeed Mrs. Bowen as the madam, with of course her implanting the words into every hooker she hires.

I do wonder if we're going to see the mobster's daughter whose name I forget become a whore for real now, since her father's going to jail for life and she'll probably be alone and destitute. Maybe she'll go back to Carol and ask for help and Carol will "help" her.

I wrote the last chapter some time ago, then some of the chapters that come before it. The end to me seemed obvious. Hopefully you'll like it. The name you're looking for is 'Ellen'.

Quote from: runningpants on March 31, 2019, 09:55:36 pm

I finally caught up with college undercover and I will have to agree with you. An excellent tale, that is rapidly reaching its end.

Thanks runningpants. Yes, the end is very close. Hopefully you think it matches the rest of the story.

Greyscribbler

ExtantElan · « **Reply #27 on:** April 05, 2019, 04:32:45 am »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 01, 2019, 04:47:44 pm

The Sincerest Expression of Love

Lets just say I hated this, personal tastes, and leave it there. What I would like to do to the author, assuming he doesnt have genuine MC skills, well it could be painful.
No rating, obviously!

Thank you for the feedback

Your response caused me to make the resolution more brutal (in a good way, I promise) though it won't conclude for another two chapters and, given how you felt, I won't ask that you continue reading it. I will say, in my defense, the more visceral the feeling of disgust, the greater the potential for a sense of catharsis. I will see if I can pull it off.

Thanks again.

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #28 on:** April 05, 2019, 07:59:50 am »

Thats fine, you can go as you wish, I wont be reading any more.

Oh, and strictly, you're safe anyway, had a major health issue a few weeks ago, doubt I could harm a fly at present

buster · « **Reply #29 on:** April 05, 2019, 09:04:32 am »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 07:59:50 am

Thats fine, you can go as you wish, I wont be reading any more.

Oh, and strictly, you're safe anyway, had a major health issue a few weeks ago, doubt I could harm a fly at present

:-( hope you mend quickly.
We love you Merry.

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #30 on:** April 05, 2019, 09:30:37 am »

Quote from: buster on April 05, 2019, 09:04:32 am

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 07:59:50 am
Thats fine, you can go as you wish, I wont be reading any more.

Oh, and strictly, you're safe anyway, had a major health issue a few weeks ago, doubt I could harm a fly at present
:-( hope you mend quickly.
We love you Merry.

Thank you, but Doctors are suggesting it will be early medical retirement as I'm 61, seizures have a habit of stopping you pretty much completely. Due to Neurologist in June for further opinion

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #31 on:** April 05, 2019, 10:59:52 am »

And so to complete

Algorithm

Is it wrong that the one I'm jealous of is Alice?

Loved the tactical battle between Tiffany and Erin surrounding her, and each other, I must say. Looking forward to seeing what happens next between them, and the others, I must say. Oh, and sending in my request for the part of Alice when this gets made for real! ;D
High end of definitely enjoyed

Eternal Slave

OK, this is funny, very funny! I agree totally with the chapter title in all honesty. And yes, I adore Dreamy, and want to be controlled, sorry, interviewed by her too. Fine, Jack makes for an interesting character, and seemingly apt name here, I must say. I want to see more of Dreamy too, but anyway... We will need to see where this goes from here.
But yes, I know, its green fd, but I have to do it, its crazy fun, low end of much enjoyed

Laser Tag Party

I cant say this game interested me as much as the previous two, found it harder to follow. Mind, that might be down to me, but anyway...Its certainly an interesting place to play, given the Alternations, and stuff
Definitely enjoyed

The Triumphs of the Past

Maybe I need to get a Sabrina type bra before I meet Max? Yes, I'm old enough to know what they are, and what they might do to his eyesight?

It probably does help I'm British with these, but his stuff is great, and I loved this. And of course I approve of the involvement of older women too! Thankfully I'm not travelling in his car, though that might be fun?
High end of definitely enjoyed. A gift of that cone bra, and who knows?

Thats it for this update, thanks as always to all authors involved, reviewed or not

The fifth one? It was Cressidia’s Concentra but its over 10K, and a series I'm not reading, so thats it!

Scalar7th · « **Reply #32 on:** April 05, 2019, 11:09:47 am »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 10:59:52 am

The fifth one? It was Cressidia’s Concentra but its over 10K, and a series I'm not reading, so thats it!

Meleva and I had a laugh about it being 10,002 words. Like we couldn't find a place to cut just a bit.

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 10:59:52 am

Laser Tag Party

I cant say this game interested me as much as the previous two, found it harder to follow. Mind, that might be down to me, but anyway...Its certainly an interesting place to play, given the Alternations, and stuff
Definitely enjoyed

You're quite kind. If it's any consolation, I have trouble following who's where and doing what... and I wrote the thing... and I have a chart detailing it. I got more than a little mixed up writing it, a few times.
It was the right moment for Laine to shine, anyway. If it matters, she had a great time (And some of the others complain about how mixed up they were getting, too).

Thanks again for your lovely words to me, and all that you do in general.

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #33 on:** April 05, 2019, 11:41:22 am »

Once I saw it was linked to the 2 that I'd only read the start of the first one, I probably would have passed anyway, even if it had been 9,999 lol.

As to the Alternations, I do love the idea, and I'm sure I would have a great time too, if done to me, in all truth. But yes, that might have been too complex for me, even without the health issues, with them, it had no chance!
Maybe I should get 'altered' into a complex, logical computer like robot lol? Yes, I'd love that far too much!

Scalar7th · « **Reply #34 on:** April 05, 2019, 12:02:31 pm »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 11:41:22 am

Once I saw it was linked to the 2 that I'd only read the start of the first one, I probably would have passed anyway, even if it had been 9,999 lol.

If it matters, they're linked by universe only, not by characters or plot.

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 11:41:22 am

Maybe I should get 'altered' into a complex, logical computer like robot lol? Yes, I'd love that far too much!

It doesn't quite work that way, but I assure you if we ever find a 'upload-a-brain' option, I'll let you know!

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #35 on:** April 05, 2019, 04:58:46 pm »

I know it doesnt sadly, just wishful thinking. But would be so handy, especially now!

Scalar7th · « **Reply #36 on:** April 05, 2019, 05:39:27 pm »

I'll get the best Alterist minds available working on it ASAP.

321 · « **Reply #37 on:** April 06, 2019, 11:42:23 am »

A Plethora of Heathers

Betsy has a wonderful talent for depicting chaos (managed or otherwise), and for making even the most ridiculous of situations seem perfectly reasonable. This is a great example of both, with a cartoonishly devious snatch-and-grab hypno operation hiding in plain sight. (The breakfasts are delightful, even if you don't remember eating them!)

I think we've all had at least one day where we cannot believe our luck, and then it gets even better!, and that moment is perfectly captured here with a mind controller who is probably missing a few eggs in the carton but who also can't stop hitting the jackpot. I also liked the efforts of the cheerful, if beleaguered staff to carry out Heather's brainwashing business whilst still running a high-quality restaurant. Good thing she pays her staff well- they deserve it!

Carefully_Random · « **Reply #38 on:** April 06, 2019, 12:59:10 pm »

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 10:59:52 am

Algorithm

Is it wrong that the one I'm jealous of is Alice? Loved the tactical battle between Tiffany and Erin surrounding her, and each other, I must say. Looking forward to seeing what happens next between them, and the others, I must say. Oh, and sending in my request for the part of Alice when this gets made for real! ;D
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks Merry! You can have first go in the chair, that’s if they ever actually finish the Algorithm! Right now it’s all manual input and adjustment, they’re supposed to be working to automate it but some of them keep getting distracted... Any suggestions on how to keep them in check would be welcome!

Hope you’re doing well

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #39 on:** April 06, 2019, 03:41:49 pm »

There is a 30's actress named Alice White, who only made it slightly more than Clara Johnson (my avatar) did, and she reminds me of her in looks. And given the pre code pictures I've seen of Miss White, they seem to have a similar attitude to the need to wear clothes!

My health is best described as questionable in truth. Mainly seems to be the brain that has been a bit 'frazzled' by the 2 seizures, which is of course why I'm being sent off to see a neurologist. Sadly, that wont be until mid June (we may not pay for our health service, but its not quick), and barred from work until then, at earliest. Given its 99.9% certain I'm then going to be referred for Brain MRI, and EEG, its going to be a lot longer than that. Already been told 3 times by medical people that I wont be working again (5 years from normal retirement, but will be early on medical grounds), but all needs to be made official.

But I'm surviving at least!

Carefully_Random · « **Reply #40 on:** April 06, 2019, 04:43:57 pm »

That’s a fine looking Alice

now, where are these pre code pictures you speak of...?

It’s great the NHS is there, sure, and I’ve been in and out the hospital a couple times to do with cycling related injuries (one more and I fear they’ll ban me from cycling again for life O_o) but anything requiring a specialist seems to take far too long to be arranged, it’s not great. :/

Thanks for keeping us all updated though, you have many well wishers on here and I think I can speak for most when I say we’re glad you’re getting yourself seen to even if they are being incorrigibly slow about it

Betsy · « **Reply #41 on:** April 06, 2019, 05:33:36 pm »

Quote from: 321 on April 06, 2019, 11:42:23 am

A Plethora of Heathers

Betsy has a wonderful talent for depicting chaos (managed or otherwise), and for making even the most ridiculous of situations seem perfectly reasonable. This is a great example of both, with a cartoonishly devious snatch-and-grab hypno operation hiding in plain sight. (The breakfasts are delightful, even if you don't remember eating them!)

I think we've all had at least one day where we cannot believe our luck, and then it gets even better!, and that moment is perfectly captured here with a mind controller who is probably missing a few eggs in the carton but who also can't stop hitting the jackpot. I also liked the efforts of the cheerful, if beleaguered staff to carry out Heather's brainwashing business whilst still running a high-quality restaurant. Good thing she pays her staff well- they deserve it!

Thank you so much 321. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far and I hope the rest won't disappoint.

And yes, Heather pays her staff well. It all has to look good if there's ever an enquiry. I'm sure that's not Heather's idea either. She does take note of her acquisitions when they recommend something and that's the way to be successful at this game, even if a couple of her eggs are cracked. And never fear, I'm sure Heather will be able to collect all those salaries back somehow, after the tax man has seen the records and has seen nothing amiss.

Merry Brooks · « **Reply #42 on:** April 07, 2019, 07:22:47 am »

Quote from: Carefully_Random on April 06, 2019, 04:43:57 pm

That’s a fine looking Alice now, where are these pre code pictures you speak of...?

It’s great the NHS is there, sure, and I’ve been in and out the hospital a couple times to do with cycling related injuries (one more and I fear they’ll ban me from cycling again for life O_o) but anything requiring a specialist seems to take far too long to be arranged, it’s not great. :/

Thanks for keeping us all updated though, you have many well wishers on here and I think I can speak for most when I say we’re glad you’re getting yourself seen to even if they are being incorrigibly slow about it

For those curious, here are a couple of clips of Alice wearing not a great deal

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_IMmGVS_xKE

Even more amusingly in this one, Clara Johnson is one of the chorus line girls!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oafgeA41QTc

Alice was one of those who couldnt sing great, couldnt dance great, but was cute. And for a few years, she stuck around in movies, and photo shoots because of those things.

Oh, and CR, thank you for something else too!

grey_shadow · « **Reply #43 on:** April 12, 2019, 07:47:48 pm »

Quote from: Carefully_Random on April 06, 2019, 12:59:10 pm

Quote from: Merry Brooks on April 05, 2019, 10:59:52 am

Algorithm

Is it wrong that the one I'm jealous of is Alice? Loved the tactical battle between Tiffany and Erin surrounding her, and each other, I must say. Looking forward to seeing what happens next between them, and the others, I must say. Oh, and sending in my request for the part of Alice when this gets made for real! ;D
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks Merry! You can have first go in the chair, that’s if they ever actually finish the Algorithm! Right now it’s all manual input and adjustment, they’re supposed to be working to automate it but some of them keep getting distracted... Any suggestions on how to keep them in check would be welcome!

Hope you’re doing well

If one of them "wins" and manages to secure control, then they can make sure everyone else focuses on the important things. It's the divided loyalties and maneuvering for position that are the biggest distraction...

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