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New Releases-March 30th 2019
« on: March 30, 2019, 11:17:03 am »
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The Adventures of Sultry Girl (mc mf ff md fd cb) (new)  by CrystalWitch
A kinky transgender superhero faces of against a litany of equally perverted villains.

Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

Amazonian Pride (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Kiana, an amazonian princess has been captured by a mage, what fate does he have in mind for her?

Bible Belt Redux (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
When Brodie flashes his ultra-religious sister, she is suddenly obsessed with his cock.

Cascade Fire (mc mf fd la) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.

College Undercover (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.

Cressidia’s Concentra (mc mf md fd) (new)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
A marshall requires a certain device for a certain purpose. He’s not going to leave without getting what he needs, and the shopkeep is more than happy to oblige him.

Easily Led (mc mf md) (new)  by Jukebox
Jessica wants to leave the house on her own, but her Master explains why that’s a very bad idea for someone as easily brainwashed as she is.

Eternal Slave (mc mf fd ma bd ds ft hm hu sf) (1 new chapter)  by Aristotle_Writes
A humorous, epic femdom fantasy. As Jack’s last girlfriend leaves in disgust because of his submissive nature, he realizes that all he wants is to be a slave to women. Soon, strange things happen to him, and he ends up in an alien world where it seems his dreams will come true. But at a price.

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by AskJeeves
The CEO of a startup gives a compelling presentation to investors.

It Runs in the Family (mc ff in ma hm) (1 new chapter)  by Sammynona
Connie’s secretly in love with her best friend Tara. But also Tara’s older sister Jane. And their young mother Michelle too. It was always an impossible dream to make the Silva family into her own harem of lovers, until she found out that Tara’s grandmother was a hypnotist.

Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

Losers Can’t Be Choosers (mc mf fd hm) (1 new chapter)  by S. B.
As much as he enjoys it, Jonah knows he’s addicted to femdom humiliation. Perhaps his sister Angela, a skilled hypnotherapist, can help him with that.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

My First Hypno Con (mc mm fd) (new)  by Renensco
Joe goes to his first Hypno Convention and is surprised when his fantasies start coming true.

Originals and Outsiders: Assemble (mc mf md cb) (2 new chapters)  by asianpersuasion
Super powered heroes aren’t the apple of the public’s eye, but that doesn’t stop Nick, Jason from being recruited to join a team of young teenage superheroes to try and learn how to save the world. Taught and mentored by the great heroes of the previous generation like Luminaire and Darklight or their headmaster, Kyle Albinn, the young kids soon find themselves way in over their heads...

Pledging the Sorority — N.C.U. (mc ff) (new)  by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne meets Trisha, the head of the hypnotic sorority that she is pledging. But why does she look so familiar?

A Plethora of Heathers (mc fd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
Heather’s is a restaurant owned by Heather. It’s very profitable.

Poetry & Blood (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Trixie Adara
Laura gets a new job for a strange romance writer that seems to be too good to be true.

Property of Sun Central (mc ff rb) (1 new chapter)  by Nick Vegas
The lovely owner of a tanning salon decides to save money by taking full ownership of her employees, and recruits new employees from her client base, turning one into a lustful submissive bimbo, and the other into a photographer robot.

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (1 new chapter)  by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the General’s forces and remain uninfected himself.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (2 new chapters)  by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

Role Reversal (mc mf fd in) (new)  by MindSpark
After seeing hypnosis in action, a daughter with a crush on her father comes up with a plan to usurp her mother’s place in the family.

Sensual Makeover (mc mf md) (new)  by Douglas Meurs
Bill and Min are a happily-married couple. Bill suggests a hypnotic Sensual Makeover for Min, and Min tries it...

The Sincerest Expression of Love (mc mf md) (new)  by Extantelan
A man with the ability to control the physical actions of others searches for submissive women who appreciate his talent.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations he’d never thought possible.

Torrid Tales (mc mf mm md) (2 new chapters)  by Pan
A collection of sexy mind control stories.

The Triumphs of the Past (mc mf ma) (1 new chapter)  by Maximilian Cummings
The classic car that Eric obtains seems to have an effect on the women around or in it.
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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2019, 08:06:29 pm »
Ooh, I get to give tips on Pan's American English, haven't had to do that in a long time!

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2019, 08:11:41 pm »
Ooh, I get to give tips on Pan's American English, haven't had to do that in a long time!

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2019, 08:20:57 pm »
No no no, he meant ring as in to encircle. It's fine.

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #4 on: March 30, 2019, 08:46:49 pm »
The true meaning: https://youtu.be/4m1EFMoRFvY

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #5 on: March 30, 2019, 10:44:04 pm »
Is it me or the number of stories has increased since last year?

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2019, 11:05:39 pm »
This was my favourite update in a while, for three specific reasons.

Algorithm - Was afraid this story has been abandoned, so happy to see it wasn't. This new chapter was amazing, and I can't wait to see more.

It Runs in the Family - I knew this was going to get updates, but the author seems to be balancing so many spinning plates at once that I figured it was going to be a while. Excellent, hot chapter. And the cliffhanger ending, oh you are evil Sammynonna!

And newcomer Renensco coming in strong with My First Hypno Con. This hit all the right buttons for me, I love that some unknown person at the con is walking around with his new trigger. I can't wait to see more!

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2019, 02:54:00 am »
A Plethora of Heathers
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I've been following this from the start but now I really am intreagued!  Only one chapter a week?  That's not fair!
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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2019, 06:51:15 am »
The true meaning: https://youtu.be/4m1EFMoRFvY

(Because all things lead back to Beyoncé, or so I’ve been told.)

No, they all lead back to the Chipettes

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #9 on: March 31, 2019, 09:53:16 am »
Getting started

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup

I suppose its fair to say that nothing surprising, or shocking happens here after the first chapter. The whole app thing would be wasted on me, at least it might save us old, non smart phone owning dinosaurs, lol. Still, if Lavinia wants to try and convince me, by other means...?
Definitely enjoyed

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Somehow I doubt this is the last turn of events in the battle between Angela, and Gail? I would say poor Jonah, but I do love Angela's logic on that front, between him, and Nick. Hopefully Clarissa is enjoying her rebuild, lol? Fun tactical battle to come, for sure. Or is that to cum? :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed

A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, for the sake of 24 words, my desire to find out how 'Miss Carpenter' was getting on, won out over another story for Number 5. Yes, what sort of name is Heaven, then again, what sort of name is Harlean? :P This is as entertaining, and crazy as previously, and yes, I'm loving it!
High end of definitely enjoyed

Resistance 2

How much resistance does Robert have left? In truth, who can blame him for considering thinking with something other than his mind? :laugh: Of course, the ending might change the whole scenario in so many ways. Cant say much, way too much of a spoiler, so you need to read it to find out
Definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Ah, a mention for Faeryfaye! :) Yes, her logic in dealing with matters is as entertaining as before! Definitely looking forward to seeing how this all plays out for everyone
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #10 on: March 31, 2019, 02:35:00 pm »
Greyscribblers College Undercover takes huge steps in plot and drives headlong to resolution.

It is interesting to see Carol leaving a trail of busted lives here near the end, betraying those closest to her, Janice and Patrick, one who deserved the betrayal, one who did not under any measure.

She had become a destroyer of people's worlds, and lives, to paraphrase Oppenheimer all the while having inner conversations with Stephanie, a very hard core woman.


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This chapter is tough stuff, but it has been a tough story. But such a great tough story.
 


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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #11 on: March 31, 2019, 06:01:15 pm »

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Somehow I doubt this is the last turn of events in the battle between Angela, and Gail? I would say poor Jonah, but I do love Angela's logic on that front, between him, and Nick. Hopefully Clarissa is enjoying her rebuild, lol? Fun tactical battle to come, for sure. Or is that to cum? :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed


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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #12 on: March 31, 2019, 07:43:28 pm »
I'd be very disappointed in "College Undercover" if it somehow ended in Carol being "saved" by Wainwright.  Even if she could be saved, which it would seem she can't, as the words would still be in her head.  Seems like the obvious ending for her is to succeed Mrs. Bowen as the madam, with of course her implanting the words into every hooker she hires. 

I do wonder if we're going to see the mobster's daughter whose name I forget become a whore for real now, since her father's going to jail for life and she'll probably be alone and destitute.  Maybe she'll go back to Carol and ask for help and Carol will "help" her.   :)

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« Reply #13 on: March 31, 2019, 09:55:36 pm »
I'd be very disappointed in "College Undercover" if it somehow ended in Carol being "saved" by Wainwright.  Even if she could be saved, which it would seem she can't, as the words would still be in her head.  Seems like the obvious ending for her is to succeed Mrs. Bowen as the madam, with of course her implanting the words into every hooker she hires. 

I do wonder if we're going to see the mobster's daughter whose name I forget become a whore for real now, since her father's going to jail for life and she'll probably be alone and destitute.  Maybe she'll go back to Carol and ask for help and Carol will "help" her.   :)

I finally caught up with college undercover and I will have to agree with you.  An excellent tale, that is rapidly reaching its end.

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #14 on: March 31, 2019, 11:20:28 pm »
So glad to see Algorithm returning, and it did not disappoint. Actually gave me a really great idea for a story, well... at least for a scene.

That outfit reveal too... so good. Definitely did not expect that!

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #15 on: April 01, 2019, 06:24:52 am »
This was my favourite update in a while, for three specific reasons.

Algorithm - Was afraid this story has been abandoned, so happy to see it wasn't. This new chapter was amazing, and I can't wait to see more.

Thank you, you didn’t have to use italics but the fact that you did is really touching :)
Sorry this one took so long to update, I got stuck staring at the Algorithm and only got free when the power company cut my supply when I stopped paying them :p

So glad to see Algorithm returning, and it did not disappoint. Actually gave me a really great idea for a story, well... at least for a scene.

That outfit reveal too... so good. Definitely did not expect that!

Hey, thanks :)

Speaking of inspiration, I keep meaning to put a little note at the start of Algorithm to say that it was influenced by the simply superb Tabico story Sub Routine, one of my top three favourites of all time on the EMCSA. Anyone enjoying Algorithm should go check it out if they haven’t already!


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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #16 on: April 01, 2019, 04:47:44 pm »
Part 2

Easily Led

Yes, I suspect Jessica is a girl of very little brain nowadays, lol. Fun piece to read, I must admit, if not the most entertaining JB story for my personal tastes
Definitely enjoyed

Magical Girl Syn

Fine, I love the ending, I hate the fact I've got to wait to find out what happens next! Seeing I'm not Bruce's biggest fan, well...?
Definitely enjoyed

Pledging the Sorority — N.C.U.

Plenty of hypno chaos going on here, thats for sure. OK for me, but I'm not a big hypno fan, and they will like it more
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Standard mark for hypno fans

The Sincerest Expression of Love

Lets just say I hated this, personal tastes, and leave it there. What I would like to do to the author, assuming he doesnt have genuine MC skills, well it could be painful.
No rating, obviously!

Stop Watch

Plenty of sexual goings on here, between various parties, for sure. It was quite nicely handled as such, but sex ironically isnt a turn on for me, at all.
Low end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #17 on: April 01, 2019, 05:10:27 pm »
The two new Torrid Tales, are wonderful!
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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #18 on: April 01, 2019, 05:27:01 pm »
A Plethora of Heathers
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I've been following this from the start but now I really am intreagued!  Only one chapter a week?  That's not fair!

Ah, sorry about that. Unfortunately life isn't fair. I get complaints from other parties if my posts are too long and now because my posts are too short. My posts are all lined up now, ready to go and I don't want to alter that now.

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #19 on: April 01, 2019, 05:31:38 pm »
A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, for the sake of 24 words, my desire to find out how 'Miss Carpenter' was getting on, won out over another story for Number 5. Yes, what sort of name is Heaven, then again, what sort of name is Harlean? :P This is as entertaining, and crazy as previously, and yes, I'm loving it!
High end of definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Ah, a mention for Faeryfaye! :) Yes, her logic in dealing with matters is as entertaining as before! Definitely looking forward to seeing how this all plays out for everyone
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Thank you Merry. To answer your question, Heaven is an unusual name and Harlean is a lovely name. It reminds me of a maniacal blonde with a baseball bat and tatts. Very hot.
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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #20 on: April 02, 2019, 08:44:00 am »
A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, for the sake of 24 words, my desire to find out how 'Miss Carpenter' was getting on, won out over another story for Number 5. Yes, what sort of name is Heaven, then again, what sort of name is Harlean? :P This is as entertaining, and crazy as previously, and yes, I'm loving it!
High end of definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Ah, a mention for Faeryfaye! :) Yes, her logic in dealing with matters is as entertaining as before! Definitely looking forward to seeing how this all plays out for everyone
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thank you Merry. To answer your question, Heaven is an unusual name and Harlean is a lovely name. It reminds me of a maniacal blonde with a baseball bat and tatts. Very hot.

Its one tattoo, and its a bar code, which I find very apt for a robot, just saying... :P But funnily enough, the baseball bat... ;)
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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #21 on: April 02, 2019, 10:01:24 am »
Ooh, I get to give tips on Pan's American English, haven't had to do that in a long time!

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Haha, dang it! One of the purposes of Redux was to fix all those up. :P

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #22 on: April 03, 2019, 11:11:47 am »
Part 3

The Adventures of Sultry Girl

First chapter was far more my thing than the second one. More of a decent story line, and definitely the more interesting outcome. Blair seems a little too interested in herself, to be honest.
Definitely enjoyed

Amazonian Pride

One of those nice, but naughty stories for me. As in I did think the take-down method was absolutely delicious, and devious, but at the same time, I just ended up feeling far too sorry for her in the end. Not that I guess thats really her original masters fault (maybe?), and I'd hate anal sex, but other than that, sounded way too deliciously kinky to me.
Definitely enjoyed, compromise mark

It Runs in the Family

OK, the end could be entertaining, thats for sure! Loved the chess match between Jane, and Connie, re the orgasms too, and how that matter was dealt with. Looked forward to seeing where we go from here
High end of definitely enjoyed

Return of the Armored Warrior

Fine, I was wondered why she didnt want to be thoroughly brainwashed like that, but anyway... Yes, I loved the discovered fantasy, lol! Not that I blame Erika, but besides that... If any of those old outfits can be redesigned for disabled old crocks, well...? ;) Great options play offs here, even if it wasnt hard to work out her final call!
High end of definitely enjoyed

Sensual Makeover

Fine, the names amused me, though FBH, and maybe the author would be the only ones to know why, though you could try looking back at early 1930's movies, lol. The makeover is pretty cute in all honesty, and fine, something I'd love to be done to me! All I'd need is a partner, and I could obey like that very willingly indeed.
High end of definitely enjoyed. Provide me with a partner, and the programming (submissive), and I'd be open to giving more

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #23 on: April 03, 2019, 12:05:56 pm »
Amazonian Pride (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Kiana, an amazonian princess has been captured by a mage, what fate does he have in mind for her?

This was a very well written story, regardless of the fact that it was a bit less titillating for me than I expected. I tend to root for the woman of the story, if my recent Amazon story was any indication. So there were moments where I just hated the captors/owners. Not even "love to hate" like a General Hux! Plus, the plastic surgery seems oddly standard, for lack of better words, in a fantastical world, as having a powerful Amazon under your complete control seems like it would be more than enough without body modification. That said, Kiana's blatant overconfidence prior to the main story was clearly something she was paying for. The "devices" were rather interesting as well. It seemed as if they did not have to be used as a form of erotic torture, but that might just be my interpretation. A weirdly depressing, yet interesting read.

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Re: New Releases-March 30th 2019
« Reply #24 on: April 03, 2019, 02:04:16 pm »
Amazonian Pride

One of those nice, but naughty stories for me. As in I did think the take-down method was absolutely delicious, and devious, but at the same time, I just ended up feeling far too sorry for her in the end. Not that I guess thats really her original masters fault (maybe?), and I'd hate anal sex, but other than that, sounded way too deliciously kinky to me.
Definitely enjoyed, compromise mark


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