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New Releases-August 31st 2019
« on: August 31, 2019, 12:58:35 pm »
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The Assassins (mc ff rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
Robberies, kidnappings and Assassinations are being done by strange shiny black PVC tanned women.

The Bakery (mc ff gr ex) (new)  by Kallie
A group of four coworkers discover their ex-colleague has taken a job at a strange bakery where the pastries are more than they appear

Beneath the Blue (mc ff) (new)  by S. B.
Estefania finds out the truth about her friend Chloe and her world drowns in blue.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

The Breast Squad (mc ff rb) (new)  by Roboman127
A group of powerful women form a secret group with plans to covertly rule the World.

Editing Reality Book Three: Naughty Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

An Exercise in Mind Control (mc mf ff md ft) (new)  by Chrysostomon
A group of co-eds have a new instructor for their all-ladies exercise group.

Hey, Listen… Okay? (mc mf md) (new)  by Captain Dunsel
Dr. Nelson Chase develops a brand new hypnosis technique which he proceeds to test on his lovely coworker, Olivia.

Incubus (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Christina summons a demon, who has the ability to grant her greatest desire.

Intrepid Pawns (mc ff mf fd hm ds la) (1 new chapter)  by GigglingGoblin
To save their city, a band of knights sets out to track down a hive of honey-dripping Thriae fey. But can they work together long enough to resist the sweetest of temptations?

Kat and Mouse (mc ff mf fd md) (2 new chapters)  by SoVeryFascinated
Kat and Marisa love to play around with hypnosis. But their encounter with a mysterious music file is no game.

Kiss and Control (mc ff cb) (new)  by Jukebox
Sharpe finds herself in the cross-hairs of an old enemy who plans to use her to get to WildRose.

Listening to Jack (mc mf ff in ex hm gr) (2 new chapters)  by Mister Arioch
Emily’s brother gives her a special set of earphones to listen with.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

Massaged By My Nerdy Brother (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by BurroGirl18 and Pan
A few innocent massages with her brother go too far.

Mind-Control Panties (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
A mysterious figure adds special items to the inventory of trendy clothing stores—panties with special phrases written on them.

Mirror Mirror (Trixie Adara) (mc ff gr) (new)  by Trixie Adara
Esther’s ugly attitude matches her looks, but everything changes when a mysterious mirror arrives at her desk.

The Music Plays on in Her Mind (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by CrystalWitch
Crystal is hypnotized by a collection of erotic stories.

New Dogma (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Benign Rasputin
Katy, a conservative college student, meets a new friend.

Quest for Tamsin (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
An unexpected journey unearths more buried memories of Elle’s past, and shows Louis the door to a secret realm of pleasure and service.

The Request (mc ff) (new)  by Meleva
Raea, a magical craftswoman and chronic overworker, has fifty-three minutes to kill before she can call her work done for the night. The rush-job she takes on has some… unforeseen consequences.

Resistance, Broken (mc ff mf fd md) (new)  by nevermind
A freedom fighter finds herself overwhelmed and captured by a criminal cartel as she tries to buy her comrades time to escape.

Son of Sleep (mc mf md in sf) (new)  by JC Beleren
A high school outcase learns he’s a son of the Greek god Hypnos.

Split Slave (mc ff ma bd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Skaetlett
Delta, a non-binary, kidnapped sex slave with a protective alternate personality, gets auctioned off to a multimillionaire who seems to have more in store than they’re ready for. Their Mistress thinks she knows everything about them and is wrong.

The Summoner (mc) (new)  by CrystalWitch
An aspiring warlock opens a gate to a lustful being of chaos.

Synthetic (Chrysostomon) (mc mf md rb) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Domestic unit K-928 wants to help Charlie with the problems he’s been having with his ex.

The Tickle War (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Benign Rasputin
Kerry loves to tickle Jack, and there’s not much he can do about it, until he discovers that Kerry is a somnambulist.

Tsundere (mc ff) (new)  by Benign Rasputin
Lisa is a bully who picks on Rita relentlessly, gets what’s coming to her when she discovers Rita is studying hypnosis.

The Vengeance Of Miss Applesauce (mc ff) (new)  by HypnoticHarlequin
A group of rebels try and free a TV host from the clutches of an evil corporation. However, the job may not be as straightforward as they first thought.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.
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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2019, 12:59:28 pm »
What's this? New things? Shiny new things? Well, okay, sure...

Kat and Mouse was amazing, as expected. I do love these two so much. And! And!
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Thank you for such a great story, fascinated!

The Vengeance Of Miss Applesauce had me laughing out loud. That girl sure does love her applesauce! Loved the Batman-esque presentation as our heroines stumble into something straight out of a comic book.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #2 on: August 31, 2019, 02:36:12 pm »
Kat and Mouse was every bit as good as I hoped and expected, just ... one of my absolute favorite stories, anywhere.  Perfectly paced and beautifully written and characters I absolutely love.  Thank you, SoVeryFascinated.   So much more I want to say but I haven’t worked out how to hide the spoilers!  Thank you thank you thank you. 

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #3 on: August 31, 2019, 03:10:19 pm »
Just like with Gabby the Gray I found Kat and Mouse a little difficult to read. The characters were just so damn likeable and well written that I found myself getting tense and worried, cringing internally at the twists, wanting them to be okay, wanting to jump in and help. SoVeryFascinated did a wonderful job. A little too wonderful.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #4 on: August 31, 2019, 04:05:19 pm »
Just like with Gabby the Gray I found Kat and Mouse a little difficult to read. The characters were just so damn likeable and well written that I found myself getting tense and worried, cringing internally at the twists, wanting them to be okay, wanting to jump in and help. SoVeryFascinated did a wonderful job. A little too wonderful.

You’re so completely right about the likability of these characters.  I’ve been ‘tense and worried’ about them all week, waiting for the update and my heart was pounding this week again.  In that sense it’s hard to read but utterly worth it!   

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #5 on: August 31, 2019, 06:17:24 pm »
Son of Sleep (mc mf md in sf) (new)  by JC Beleren
A high school outcase learns he’s a son of the Greek god Hypnos.

Magically endowed teenage boys aren't my personal delight, but Son of Sleep has a pretty excellent tone and vibe to it, a great sort of tongue-in-cheek mixed with clear writing prowess. Seems like an excellent entry into the genre for those who might enjoy it. I'm keeping my eyes open for JCBeleren's future works; he's certainly befitting of the name!

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #6 on: August 31, 2019, 09:18:13 pm »
Son of Sleep (mc mf md in sf) (new)  by JC Beleren
A high school outcase learns he’s a son of the Greek god Hypnos.

Magically endowed teenage boys aren't my personal delight, but Son of Sleep has a pretty excellent tone and vibe to it, a great sort of tongue-in-cheek mixed with clear writing prowess. Seems like an excellent entry into the genre for those who might enjoy it. I'm keeping my eyes open for JCBeleren's future works; he's certainly befitting of the name!

Check out his stuff on literotica, so fuckong hot, especially the escape room stories

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #7 on: September 01, 2019, 12:19:33 am »
The Bakery (mc ff gr ex) (new)  by Kallie
A group of four coworkers discover their ex-colleague has taken a job at a strange bakery where the pastries are more than they appear

This is off to a promising start. Kallie's a good writer, so I expect the heat to continue.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #8 on: September 01, 2019, 02:46:18 am »
Son of Sleep (mc mf md in sf) (new)  by JC Beleren
A high school outcase learns he’s a son of the Greek god Hypnos.

Magically endowed teenage boys aren't my personal delight, but Son of Sleep has a pretty excellent tone and vibe to it, a great sort of tongue-in-cheek mixed with clear writing prowess. Seems like an excellent entry into the genre for those who might enjoy it. I'm keeping my eyes open for JCBeleren's future works; he's certainly befitting of the name!

Yes it's very nicely written.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #9 on: September 01, 2019, 04:30:21 pm »
Kat and Mouse is, at least for me, one of the best stories on the archive. The characters, even Hallam (oh how I despise him!), were damn well written and the plot was super interesting.
Erotic hypnosis and brainwashing mixed with harsh descriptions of what could go actually wrong in a not sexy way were wonderfully balanced.

I feel like the only logical following step is a hypnotic detective series, just like 321 already mentioned. I hope you'll make it happen, SoVeryFascinated! No pressure though ;)

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #10 on: September 01, 2019, 05:48:31 pm »
S.B.'s Beneath the Blue is a charming little sea story on land, with two ladies who seem to have a strong effect on each other. Finding out what kind of effect was a fun little ride, seeming like a little misdirection at first, then delivering with a rather musical note of hypnotic fun. Really liked the treatment between them, and how it all ended up in the end.

Kiss and Control by Jukebox was a nice surprise. I always liked the Wildrose stories, it was nice to see a familiar foe doing her thing in a sinfully sweet way. Very nice description and almost fetish-play scenes described. I do wonder if there's going to be follow-up with this, or if it's just a one-off either way. Satisfying either way since I like how it plays out.

Argos' new chapter of Quest for Tamsin played out like a nice little showdown between all the lately key players. Nice instances of loyalty subversion, magic, and re-established ownership amongst some pretty hot scenes that didn't confuse me like I thought they would. Wonderfully written as both Louis' and Elle's exploits and expertise are shown throughout and make for a great chapter to follow up on from the last.

The Request by Meleva is one of the more clever works I've seen from this author. A workoholic unknowingly constructing the instrument giving her some fun time off. I loved being taken through each step carefully, the construction, the delivery, unforseen roadblocks, and the intended end result that Raea deserved.

Tsundere by Benign Rasputin was kind of a surprise. Didn't expect the bully to eventually share how much she had in-common with her victim, but I loved how mutual everything felt between then, even with the hypnotic control the bullied levied over the bully. Easily one of the sweetest mc stories I've read in a while.

And for The Vengeance of Miss Applesauce, I wasn't sure what to think at first as I read it, but it was hard to stop reading once I started. The jingles, corny in quite the appealing way, how they get used, how Miss Applesauce never really changes, but we find how playfully sinister she is. By the end, I feel like I should've seen that outcome coming, but I love how it turned out. Almost Borg-ish, with mindless smiles and endless jingles ringing through empty heads. Quite pleasing.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #11 on: September 02, 2019, 02:43:30 pm »
Hey, Listen… Okay? (mc mf md) (new)  by Captain Dunsel
Dr. Nelson Chase develops a brand new hypnosis technique which he proceeds to test on his lovely coworker, Olivia.

I quite enjoyed this story. Nicely done, Captain.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #12 on: September 03, 2019, 11:33:25 am »
Getting started, apologies for delay, health issues!

Beneath the Blue

I must admit it, I didnt remember this, but yes, its fun, and if someone wants to be Chloe for me, be my guest! Mind, its a fine case of maybe you didnt expect things to end up as it does, Estefania! Or maybe she did want it to end that way. A very fun story, but I might be biased, maybe?
High end of definitely enjoyed

An Exercise in Mind Control

Also fair to say there is a double meaning to the title of this story. Not that I'm sure how Barry kept up with demands sexually, but other than that, it makes for a fun story, and a few shocks for the girls
High end of definitely enjoyed

Incubus

Yes, Jenny is back. Mind, in this Christina has her hands more than full with events going on. Will she win out, or will she finally succumb like the rest, who knows? Will be fun finding out, for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Magical Girl Syn

Jenny again, and my preferred story of the two. Can Syn save Ruthie, or not.. Can Syn save any of the girls, in truth? Tons of great characters here, good to see them back
High end of definitely enjoyed

Synthetic (Chrysostomon)

Is it wrong to say lucky Veronica? I mean, I'd love Kay to do that to me. Hey, I'd love an upgrade like that, please. Trouble is, Charlie might not be as keen on me, but besides that...Not that I wouldnt prefer to be upgraded to the Kay look, but anyway...Oh and the sex system is just great
High end of definitely enjoyed. Almost gave more, would for a Kay makeover!

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #13 on: September 03, 2019, 03:31:34 pm »
I enjoyed the two new chapters of 'Listening to Jack'.  Nice scenes further fleshing out the state of the town and Jack's level and methods of control.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #14 on: September 03, 2019, 06:41:39 pm »
Incubus

Yes, Jenny is back. Mind, in this Christina has her hands more than full with events going on. Will she win out, or will she finally succumb like the rest, who knows? Will be fun finding out, for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Magical Girl Syn

Jenny again, and my preferred story of the two. Can Syn save Ruthie, or not.. Can Syn save any of the girls, in truth? Tons of great characters here, good to see them back
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #15 on: September 04, 2019, 04:36:26 pm »
Part 2

Blizzard

Fun to see not everything goes perfect with the harem, lol. Fun piece, with all 3 girls getting to test Gene out to some degree or another. Another nice add to the series
High end of definitely enjoyed

Kiss and Control

A few neat twists and turns here too. Cant say too much without giving the plot away, but well worth reading
Definitely enjoyed

The Music Plays on in Her Mind

There is mm stuff in here for those who dont enjoy that sort of things, like me. Neat addition to the story, other than that though
High end of enjoyed. People not worried by mm would give more

The Summoner

Not my sort of thing, but that would be the only real issue with it. Nicely enough written if summary appeals to you though
No rating, taste issues

The Tickle War

Fine, I love these two, and how they play off each other, great fun. Yes, definitely looking forward to seeing what mischief these 2 get up to  next
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #16 on: September 05, 2019, 05:18:10 am »
I enjoyed the two new chapters of 'Listening to Jack'.  Nice scenes further fleshing out the state of the town and Jack's level and methods of control.

As always, thanks for the quick review. :-)

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #17 on: September 05, 2019, 08:04:57 am »
Blizzard

Fun to see not everything goes perfect with the harem, lol. Fun piece, with all 3 girls getting to test Gene out to some degree or another. Another nice add to the series
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Problems and conflict make everything more fun. Glad you liked it!

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #18 on: September 05, 2019, 04:58:07 pm »
Part 3

The Request

Oh, very good, some very neat twists in here I must say. Oh, and I loved the way it all played out too, especially events at the end. Makes  for a good read, thats for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Split Slave

To be honest I'd forgotten just how complex the whole gender thing is in here, but it adds delightful to the whole situation. Oh, and the whole story is wonderful told too. Characters, and their cross play is all very well handled too
High end of definitely enjoyed

Tsundere

Oh, I'll say it, if Rita hadnt been a Johnson, I probably would have loved this anyway, but seriously, with that surname, of course... Lisa is a great character too, and the whole way things play out between the two of them, I love. Especially as there are a few twists in their relationship you'd never expect. I cant say more, beyond you should go read
Low end of much enjoyed. There may be a bit of Johnson bias in that mark, and probably would have got high end of definitely but for that

The Vengeance Of Miss Applesauce 

Some great twists and turns here too. Not all of which are you going to spot until you go read it. The ending wasnt quite what I expected, given what had gone before, I saw it as an easy way out, but others might disagree, but again, go read, and decide for yourself
High end of definitely enjoyed

Whatever Gets You Through The Night

Another really good chapter in this multi story saga. Some great moments in here, but you have a hell of a lot of catching up if not already intothis
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #19 on: September 07, 2019, 11:53:19 am »
Blizzard was fantastic this week. I thought I knew what was going to happen next. I was wrong!

I love that fact that, for our four protagonists, "boots" is now a verb.  :)

Magical Girl Syn is back! More monsters, more mayhem, more mind control! The scenes with Carice were especially hot. Welcome back, Cynthia!

Son of Sleep is off to an interesting start. I want to read more of this. I like that Hypnos himself gets some significant story time- usually in tales like this, the god shows up to bestow some MC powers and then vanishes from the plot. Poor Alex, though. His life would probably be at least a little easier if his mind control powers came from a- ahem- more visible body part.  ;)

Still need to read: The Bakery. Kallie's stories need fail to impress- I just need an eighth day of the week to catch up!


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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #20 on: September 07, 2019, 02:12:41 pm »
Bit late, but better than never with reviews of some of the stories I read.

The Bakery, as others have mentioned, is a good introduction to what looks like a fun story. Cant say i expected any less from Kallie. While the gr tag isn't my thing, there seems to be plenty to offer. My only criticism is that this means no Subroutine this week!

Beneath the Blue had a twist that I feel I should have figured out. Hindsight bias at its finest, I suppose. Clever little tale.

Tickle War is another story that leaves me hoping for more. Well, given that I'm posting this after a new update, I suppose I don't have to wait any longer! Great fun, though I do hope the smoking parts are put behind soon. Personal squick.

New Dogma is a nice little party scene for a chapter. Have to say, that ending was spot on, and made me wish there was more to read. Alas, nothing in the new update. Perhaps the next?

The Request is a story I read based on someone's recommendation. Turns out they gave the wrong title, but I'm so glad for the mistake. This story was so creative and detailed. I'm not familiar with the larger universe this apparently takes place in, but has me curious about it. I do wish the "green" part had more, especially with the customer, but I still had fun reading.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #21 on: September 07, 2019, 04:57:49 pm »
Last 3, as the 4th one posted a message saying I shouldnt read(taste issues), so...

The Bakery

Seriously, I dont know if I want to visit, or avoid that bakery lol? Mix of feelings for Misty, definitely. Mind, if they fancy a robot waitress working there? Certainly a good, and fun read
High end of definitely enjoyed

Hey, Listen… Okay?

Talking of stories that make for a fun read... Have to say the stoned/drunk stuff did nothing for me, but its not real, so...? Certainly interested, lets settle for that
Low end of definitely enjoyed as a compromise

Kat and Mouse

A bit painful to be honest, but at least its the right side winning in the end, and a few good twists in getting there. Loved the work payoff method at least. All in all, been a really good story
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #22 on: September 07, 2019, 05:56:34 pm »
Son of Sleep is off to an interesting start. I want to read more of this. I like that Hypnos himself gets some significant story time- usually in tales like this, the god shows up to bestow some MC powers and then vanishes from the plot. Poor Alex, though. His life would probably be at least a little easier if his mind control powers came from a- ahem- more visible body part.  ;)

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #23 on: September 08, 2019, 12:22:40 am »
I looooved this story. Popped over to Literotica to discover the entire first chapter is finished: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4036186&page=submissions

Appreciate the heads up.  I've liked some of JC Beleren's stuff before.

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Re: New Releases-August 31st 2019
« Reply #24 on: September 08, 2019, 09:46:48 am »
Blizzard was fantastic this week. I thought I knew what was going to happen next. I was wrong!

I love that fact that, for our four protagonists, "boots" is now a verb.  :)

Boots is a lot like pork. Better a verb than a noun.