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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #25 on: July 15, 2019, 08:53:10 pm »
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Just wanted to post a correction...Buenos Ares is not in Brazil and you will upset some Brazilians saying so as it is the capital of Argentina and in my experience (being married to a Brazilian) they hate Argentina. Based on the story as written it states he is traveling to Brazil for business but the only city mentioned from South America is Buenos Ares....
Oh wow. Will fix. Marissa's not supposed to be a bimbo. Yet.
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #26 on: July 16, 2019, 10:39:28 am »
Part 2

Every Woman Has a Price

These coins are quite something for sure. I might even manage to get a wealthy man to look after me with one of those! :laugh: Fun events, and great characters make for an entertaining read
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Reason

Might be a blessing not being young, pretty, and desired by men, lol? :laugh: The play as to why she is doing everything is entertaining for sure. As for where he was going to go to work, priceless.
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Snaps to Clicks

Ah, the joys of English v American English lol, had so much of this in my life, from the other perspective. Loved the way it played out, and especially with the 'little treat' for Ashley towards the end.
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Upgrades

Oh my, thats a robot upgrade and a half, and yes, I'd love it, for sure, far more than Roberta would! Seriously, if Machina wants a robot bodyguard, why she doesnt just give me a call, no idea? Loved the play off between everyone, and cant wait to see where it goes from here.
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #27 on: July 16, 2019, 05:33:49 pm »
I'm finally back from vacation! The one bad thing about the EMCSA is that you can't really bring your laptop to the shore (well, you CAN, but I imagine getting the sand out is quite a chore). Anyway! Stuff!

The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle is always a fun read, and this chapter is no exception. I love how Louis improvised on the spot to deal with Elle's "wall"- and I'm not sure if I've ever seen such a creative solution! Some fun interactions here and I enjoyed the callbacks to previous chapters. So helpful!

Kallie is one of my favorite authors at the moment, and Princess is a fantastic example as to why. The hacker who stumbles onto a nefarious mind-control conspiracy is an old story idea, and I like the fresh spin that Kallie puts on it:

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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #28 on: July 17, 2019, 08:46:21 am »
Every Woman Has a Price

These coins are quite something for sure. I might even manage to get a wealthy man to look after me with one of those! :laugh: Fun events, and great characters make for an entertaining read
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The characters are turning out to be more fun than I had hoped. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #29 on: July 17, 2019, 11:32:42 am »
Part 3

Hostel

Huge fan of this wonderful story. Suspect I'm the only one who adores Alice, and the methods she uses, but anyway... and I'm too old to concern her, anyway. Loved the twists with Rebecca, both with Elke, and Emily, cant say more without spoilers. Seriously, if you're not reading this, why not? And thats before Alice puts me in that Brainwashing chair (oh, please...)
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Always a treat to see a story from Mr Karloff, I must say. All the usual bits, as body parts grow dramatically, and demure people become sexual animals, and oh, a great story too. I wont bother to join the group, there is only so much you can do with disabled 61 year old's. lets face it? :laugh: Other than that, sounds great fun
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Nanite Cluster

Needs a huge edit,thats for sure. Ignoring that fact, it started off as a promising, kind of sweet story, but then the level of growth went way beyond the grounds of sanity. I might have stuck with it, but it was so hard to read, I was looking for a reason to pull out, and that fitted the role. Might be promising, if more readable, but impossible to know
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Spy Games (HypnoticHarlequin)

Oh god, loved this, just a matter of which method I'd love used on me, principally of the last 2. Play off between the characters is great too, all in all. How do I get a job, or a break in opportunity at that place?
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In truth any of 3 of these could have got it with a bit of push, but...

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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #30 on: July 17, 2019, 11:33:54 pm »
Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #31 on: July 18, 2019, 08:56:43 am »
Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.

You do realise I'd love the Elsa Lanchester treatment lol
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #32 on: July 18, 2019, 01:10:32 pm »
Thanks, me-chan! It means a lot to know people are reading about our fictional couple. I write the stories and my boss, L, approves or disapproves.

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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #33 on: July 18, 2019, 11:36:16 pm »
Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.

You do realise I'd love the Elsa Lanchester treatment lol
She was the bomb in Murder By Death.
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #34 on: July 19, 2019, 08:21:19 am »
Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.

You do realise I'd love the Elsa Lanchester treatment lol
She was the bomb in Murder By Death.

I was thinking more Bride of Frankenstein!
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #35 on: July 19, 2019, 09:28:38 am »
Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.

You do realise I'd love the Elsa Lanchester treatment lol
She was the bomb in Murder By Death.

I was thinking more Bride of Frankenstein!

I simply can't watch the old Frankenstein movies, thanks to Mel Brooks. 
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #36 on: July 19, 2019, 09:38:16 am »
Last batch is a bit brief, due to thinking I'd give Meleva's story a swing, just to see if I was more in the mood, but seemingly not. HB's story, I missed the be tag when adding it to list, and didnt read the first chapter, so no point. So...

Princess

Oh fine, that dress, I want it! I could act feisty princess type to wear that! Both characters are great, the transformation is delightfully paced, and oh, that dress! Unfortunately I couldnt hack a door lock, let alone that, but...
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Relaxation Therapy

I know, too old strictly to continue, but hey, I gave it a much enjoyed, it wasnt lengthy, so... :angel:
Oh goodness, not hard to see why I did, and the 4 new chapters didnt disappoint, or make me any less inclined to want to try that machine for myself. For those who love tech-MC, you must read. Oh fine, given she needed the makeover, I loved it more, but seriously...Please, can I be the next guinea pig?
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I'm going to give Split Slave a try, given I've got the time, and liked the authors piece this week. Being in chapters does help. I will add review, if I complete.

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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #37 on: July 19, 2019, 10:21:08 am »

Relaxation Therapy

I know, too old strictly to continue, but hey, I gave it a much enjoyed, it wasnt lengthy, so... :angel:
Oh goodness, not hard to see why I did, and the 4 new chapters didnt disappoint, or make me any less inclined to want to try that machine for myself. For those who love tech-MC, you must read. Oh fine, given she needed the makeover, I loved it more, but seriously...Please, can I be the next guinea pig?
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Thank you for reading, and for the lovely review. I actually completely forgot to upload the second half of the story here so it sat half finished. It wasnít until someone wrote to ask that I remembered. I will be adding relaxation therapy 2 over the next few weeks which I hope you enjoy just as much. (Iím midway through writing the third) as for being the next guinea pig well your welcome to come chat ideas, I like to work people into my stories.
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #38 on: July 19, 2019, 04:56:54 pm »
Feel free to work this old busted crock into something, if you wish, but I was thinking more for real, lol. Seriously, at the moment it doesnt feel like you could do damage to the mind anyway, more than there already is :laugh:

Edited to add, I have got through 8 chapters (of 11) of Split Slave, will definitely be getting reviewed, just saying... ;)

OK, now finished the 11 chapters prior to the new chapter this week, and god, what a roller coaster ride that is. Let me say, I know its the non binary thing, I guess, but I hate all the they usage for Delta. Probably how it should be for the author, but from a reader perspective, it does throw me out. But other than that, the characters are great, though I find Mistress a total mixed bag, but thats the idea I guess. It is long already, but as long as non binary, and transgender stuff isnt a turn off for you, its quite a story.
Not going to rate standard, but yes, I've liked what I've read
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Re: New Releases - July 13 2019
« Reply #39 on: July 20, 2019, 12:02:55 pm »
Hostel

Huge fan of this wonderful story. Suspect I'm the only one who adores Alice, and the methods she uses, but anyway... and I'm too old to concern her, anyway. Loved the twists with Rebecca, both with Elke, and Emily, cant say more without spoilers. Seriously, if you're not reading this, why not? And thats before Alice puts me in that Brainwashing chair (oh, please...)
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Thanks, Merry! I suspect that a lot of people are rooting for Alice to come out on top,. After all, the girls do enjoy their stay! And the beds are so comfy!