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Too Many Questions was a wonderful read as someone that likes reading and writing dialog-only stories occasionally. I love how crafty S.B.'s female characters are with their word choice, and Monica is no exception, carefully leading Josh all the way to exactly where she wanted him, no matter how many roadblocks his mind threw up, even using some of them to her advantage. Definitely a fun story to re-read a few times with its length and writing, and fun every time.
Too Many Questions
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Talking of fun hypno contests, here is another, though in this case, only one ever stood a chance of winning. These chat things dont do an awful lot for me, but the way it plays out between them is fun. Fine, I love the way Monica plays it out with him
High end of definitely enjoyed.
Princess was a solid read and had a nice, slow descent for Beck. I was maybe looking forward to a bit more "princess" style talking or acting once she was converted, but that didn't quite happen because the story ended right at the point where I'm most interested to see what her life would be like now.
Slug Academy was pretty damn good, too. I actually expected it to be a goth-to-prep style transformation and while that happens in a sense, it also completely subverts that expectation once Hans gets involved, too. I think the only thing that some reviewers might jump on here is the fact that Autumn is tasked with a mission of such importance immediately upon her conversion. To me, it seems that the story does a good job of showing that the conversion process is completed pretty quickly, which would mean that there's little resistance left on the part of the victim to screw up whatever plans the masters have for them.
-Fortunato
Massaged by My Nerdy Brother
I've been enjoying this one a lot. Not exactly the twistiest story ever, and it is taking its time a bit, but that's fine. I like the writing, and it's been quite enjoyable watching her slowly taken by the influence.
Holy crap, a new Geo story that’s NOT a comic book? Awesome!I assumed the title word choice was a buried reference, especially with the gr tag and wasn't wrong.
I loved it (Member Privileges). Not too long but I enjoyed seeing both the husband and wife toyed with in different ways. I’d love to read more but suspect that was it.
Members Privileges
Just wanted to post a correction...Buenos Ares is not in Brazil and you will upset some Brazilians saying so as it is the capital of Argentina and in my experience (being married to a Brazilian) they hate Argentina. Based on the story as written it states he is traveling to Brazil for business but the only city mentioned from South America is Buenos Ares....
Holy crap, a new Geo story that’s NOT a comic book? Awesome!I assumed the title word choice was a buried reference, especially with the gr tag and wasn't wrong.
I loved it (Member Privileges). Not too long but I enjoyed seeing both the husband and wife toyed with in different ways. I’d love to read more but suspect that was it.
Will be interesting to see where it goes, even though I'm not generally into gr, a little too much suspension of disbelief for me, even as an MC fan. ;-)
Any week with a 321 posting is a good week on the Archive. Two stories from him marks a great one. He continues to stretch his narrative muscles with “Deep Undercover”, and with “Hostel” he consumes to show how to layer complexities and build to mini-cliffhangers each chapter.
Members PrivilegesOh wow. Will fix. Marissa's not supposed to be a bimbo. Yet.
Just wanted to post a correction...Buenos Ares is not in Brazil and you will upset some Brazilians saying so as it is the capital of Argentina and in my experience (being married to a Brazilian) they hate Argentina. Based on the story as written it states he is traveling to Brazil for business but the only city mentioned from South America is Buenos Ares....
Every Woman Has a Price
These coins are quite something for sure. I might even manage to get a wealthy man to look after me with one of those! :laugh: Fun events, and great characters make for an entertaining read
High end of definitely enjoyed
Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.
She was the bomb in Murder By Death.Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.
You do realise I'd love the Elsa Lanchester treatment lol
She was the bomb in Murder By Death.Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.
You do realise I'd love the Elsa Lanchester treatment lol
She was the bomb in Murder By Death.Thank you very much, Merry. For that I promise to not exterminate the human race. This week.
You do realise I'd love the Elsa Lanchester treatment lol
I was thinking more Bride of Frankenstein!
Relaxation Therapy
I know, too old strictly to continue, but hey, I gave it a much enjoyed, it wasnt lengthy, so... :angel:
Oh goodness, not hard to see why I did, and the 4 new chapters didnt disappoint, or make me any less inclined to want to try that machine for myself. For those who love tech-MC, you must read. Oh fine, given she needed the makeover, I loved it more, but seriously...Please, can I be the next guinea pig?
Low end of much enjoyed
Hostel
Huge fan of this wonderful story. Suspect I'm the only one who adores Alice, and the methods she uses, but anyway... and I'm too old to concern her, anyway. Loved the twists with Rebecca, both with Elke, and Emily, cant say more without spoilers. Seriously, if you're not reading this, why not? And thats before Alice puts me in that Brainwashing chair (oh, please...)
High end of definitely enjoyed