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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #25 on: February 26, 2019, 04:52:02 pm »
Part 4

Emilia’s Exorcism

Fine, I can think of a few types of bodies I'd rather be in than Katya, but other than that, what a great story this is. Looking forward to more, and how this all plays out in the end. Oh, and the magic words to turn me into a wonderful musical type dancer, lol
High end of definitely enjoyed

Field Test (BeaufitulFetish)

Oh fine, I love the concept of the robotic programming, no surprise there! Other than this, a delightful starter piece, definitely looking forward to more of this. But seriously, Mira, for me, its robot suit, or dont bother! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed

Free Hugs For Sale

Just shows how dangerous cosplay can be, especially with a serial mind controlling hugger in the place! It was amusing in places, though not a real grabber for me, unlike if Heather got me!
Low end of definitely enjoyed

Little Pink Pills

This is the other starter piece that I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of. And fine, if those pink pills can do me any good, send some my way! I think April might be trying them soon, like it, or not! :laugh:
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Moulding a Model Student

Maybe it was the 14 month gap, maybe it was just the nature of this piece, but it really didnt grab me at all, in truth.
I'll go no rating, as a get out, probably too long a gap issue

And now it will definitely be Thursday before you get any more! :P
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #26 on: February 26, 2019, 06:00:19 pm »
Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...

Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #27 on: February 26, 2019, 06:01:35 pm »
Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...

Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!

Still an update remaining! But I know the feel =P

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #28 on: February 26, 2019, 08:25:44 pm »
Doctor MC, thank you for your comments about "Jezz and Edge". I appreciate your reading and commenting, good sir.

I have just started reading "Bimbo Midas", so I can't comment on the latest chapters yet, but I can say I'm definitely enjoying it so far. Your dialogue for the leprechaun is really good. I love the old country cadence you give him.
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #29 on: February 26, 2019, 11:48:03 pm »
Bimbo-Midas

Yes, I could worship a man too, for the stunning looks, without the bimbo IQ, just saying... :angel: Clever way to end a super story, I must say. Fine, the lottery win would be handy too, but does nothing for the state of my body! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Long golden hair, young looks, healthy body, and slightly bigger boobs for me, with no IQ loss, open to negotiation for rating! :cool:

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #30 on: February 26, 2019, 11:54:52 pm »
Doctor MC, thank you for your comments about "Jezz and Edge". I appreciate your reading and commenting, good sir.

I have just started reading "Bimbo Midas", so I can't comment on the latest chapters yet, but I can say I'm definitely enjoying it so far. Your dialogue for the leprechaun is really good. I love the old country cadence you give him.

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #31 on: February 27, 2019, 02:54:43 am »
Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...

Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!

Still an update remaining! But I know the feel =P

Still 2 chunks of reviews to go in fact. Olorin's story is in next batch, having checked reading list

Bimbo-Midas

Yes, I could worship a man too, for the stunning looks, without the bimbo IQ, just saying... :angel: Clever way to end a super story, I must say. Fine, the lottery win would be handy too, but does nothing for the state of my body! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Long golden hair, young looks, healthy body, and slightly bigger boobs for me, with no IQ loss, open to negotiation for rating! :cool:

Sorry, Merry, I can imagine all that nifty stuff that I write about in Bimbo-Midas, but this doesn't mean I can make those things happen!

I'm glad you rated my story so highly. Thank you.

Yes, I was suspecting that was the case, but no harm in hoping :angel: :laugh:
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #32 on: February 27, 2019, 10:02:12 pm »
I almost missed a completely different Mind Spark story!

"The Ultimate Form".  I do admire his 3000-words-per-installment pace, like a metronome.

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #33 on: February 27, 2019, 11:34:37 pm »
Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...

Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!

Still an update remaining! But I know the feel =P

Still 2 chunks of reviews to go in fact. Olorin's story is in next batch, having checked reading list


I figured. Thanks for the consistent feedback on all the stories, they are very much appreciated.
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #34 on: February 28, 2019, 11:45:51 am »
Part 5

Diversion Tactics

I do want to feel sorry for Chloe, but fine, I find it hard to do so, because I'd probably love that done to me! I could do without the humiliation type stuff, but other than that... Yes, Mistress, whatever you wish to do to me! :angel:
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Edited in Post

Oh fine, talking of things I'd love done to me, being turned into a sexy courtesan would definitely be one of them! I loved the way it was all explained to Lily, and why it had happened, thats really called self hypnosis, lol. Very clever way to end this, assuming it is actually the end?
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Nothingness

Yes, no big surprise, just loved this. Not only because I'm jealous of Hina, with her cyborg makeover (though I am), but the very clever way that Kimmie slowed changed her sense of the world, that was really cleverly done. As the closest I've done to sensory deprivation is the tank, and only for an hour, I have no idea how weird, or amazing that level of deprivation must be, but would love to know. Oh, and if I have to have the cyborg makeover to discover it, happily bring it on! ;)
Wont be everyone's cup of tea, but for me, low end of much enjoyed

This Is Our Story

Fine, there are moments I want to hit Connor, but there are equally moments I love what he does, but anyway...Fascinated to see how this all plays out in the end, should be quite something for sure!
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Zzzonked

OK, plain and simple, loved this. Great story, great characters, and very neatly tidied up in the end. A right JB gem here
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #35 on: February 28, 2019, 01:30:32 pm »
Zzzonked (mc mf md cb) (new)  by Jukebox
Madame Macabre faces a theft from her magical library, but this time Silas the Somnomancer has a few new tricks up his sleeve.

I don't think there is a genre that this author cannot master. This was fun and engaging from the first sentence. Not necessarily that much to say about this, in some ways. The description and tags give enough of an idea about the described events. This was not that predictable, though, and that showed how well written this was. There were times where I felt such a self-awareness that it was as if Jukebox was winking at the reader through his own words. The elaborate dream sequence was almost too good! A fun ride.

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #36 on: February 28, 2019, 02:33:42 pm »
Emilia’s Exorcism
Fine, I can think of a few types of bodies I'd rather be in than Katya

She does seem kinda improbably energetic, doesn't she? I was wondering if I should maybe have her take it down a few notches, if only for the sake of something a little more realistic. But then I figured what the hell, it's a fantasy, isn't it? Might as well lean into it.

Anyway, main thing is, glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for reading!

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #37 on: February 28, 2019, 04:38:33 pm »
I think it works as it is, if thats the way she wants to be. No point in her having a tame time, lets face it
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #38 on: March 02, 2019, 11:50:29 am »
And last,but definitely not least...

Gym Brat

So who wants me to provide them with a protein shake, lol? Seriously, if I'm being milked, its being done properly, moo! Fun enough story, and always helps with me when the victim deserves it, so...
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Help! I’m Trapped In A Romantic Visual Novel!

Well, I've always wanted to try the whole VR immersion thing, but maybe this is something I should pass on? :laugh: Interesting look at the whole VR thing, combined with some very annoying characters (especially 1!) to help me putting off trying that myself
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Jezz and Edge

This was just wonderful, a pure delight for me. Great banter between Jezz, and just about everyone else, in truth. The dry humour of Edge was just another treat for me. Only gripe, fine, why did she have to destroy the mind controlling box, and not just advise Toner to only go after women who would enjoy it used on them? ;) Should have humour tag, for sure.
Low end of much enjoyed

The Triumphs of the Past

Must be very careful if I ever go in a car with Mr Cummings, for sure! :laugh: Fine, I'm never going to see a car gear stick in the same way, ever again! :angel: Very amusing story, with plenty of cumming, for sure!
Definitely enjoyed, marked down on length rule. Sorry, Max, even for you! x

Uplink

Oh fine, I'd probably enjoy being turned into a drone like that, but the Agent would have to drone me to get great marks for this, as the build up is just a little too repetitive. But fine, offer to drone me, and I might be kinder. Its fine as a story, but just not grabbing me yet.
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Middle might not be unreasonable, but I dont want the Agent being gentle on me, lol. :P

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #39 on: March 02, 2019, 07:07:02 pm »

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Err, that was a little different. First MC chapter entirely set in a hospital toilet? Probably! :laugh: I think its fair to say that Nick might have issues of a different kind, thats for sure. Well, as long as Clarissa is being well cared for...? ;)
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #40 on: March 02, 2019, 07:08:22 pm »

She Has a Problem

I suppose, as a submissive female, I shouldnt complain too much, as she's going to get her wish here, submitting to a man. Equally, the man has to pay the price to get that reward, and might not have enjoyed that as much. I loved the Dominant woman's attitude to matters, I must secretly admit
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Glad you liked it. It was quite fun to write just like the one I posted this week. I hope you like where that goes to even if you have to go up and down to get there. ;)
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #41 on: March 03, 2019, 04:12:43 am »
And last,but definitely not least...

Gym Brat

So who wants me to provide them with a protein shake, lol? Seriously, if I'm being milked, its being done properly, moo! Fun enough story, and always helps with me when the victim deserves it, so...
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Thanks for your review: ). I had no plans on Lauren being quite like that when I started writing but it just... happened I suppose! She was certainly more fun to write that way.

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #42 on: March 03, 2019, 07:46:37 am »

She Has a Problem

I suppose, as a submissive female, I shouldnt complain too much, as she's going to get her wish here, submitting to a man. Equally, the man has to pay the price to get that reward, and might not have enjoyed that as much. I loved the Dominant woman's attitude to matters, I must secretly admit
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Glad you liked it. It was quite fun to write just like the one I posted this week. I hope you like where that goes to even if you have to go up and down to get there. ;)

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #43 on: March 03, 2019, 09:16:26 am »
Thank you for the review, Merry! Jezz and Edge are a fun team to write.  😁
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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #44 on: March 04, 2019, 07:20:10 pm »
Just read Gym Brat last night and it was the perfect storm of light humiliation, infantilism, and forced servitude. It's a great little story.

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Re: New Releases-February 23rd 2019
« Reply #45 on: March 06, 2019, 07:07:06 am »
Just read Gym Brat last night and it was the perfect storm of light humiliation, infantilism, and forced servitude. It's a great little story.

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Glad you liked it : ). I had a lot of fun writing it!