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Adventures of Admiral Columbia: Reunion (https://mcstories.com/AdventuresOfAdmiralColumbiaReunion/index.html) (mc mm ds hm ws sf cb) (new) by Nicky Noxville
Roger Stevens had always been scrawny. That is, until he joined an experimental program through the Navy of the United States of Columbia. Now Roger is a new man with all the power he needs to bring Nazis, or whoever, to their knees, as his former best friend is about to discover.
Are You Ready? (https://mcstories.com/AreYouReady/index.html) (mc mm mf ma fd) (new) by &c
A strange email shows up in your inbox. After you read it, you try to resist the effect it has on you.
Bimbo-Midas (https://mcstories.com/BimboMidas/index.html) (mc mf ff md gr) (2 new chapters) by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.
Binding Rings (https://mcstories.com/BindingRings/index.html) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter) by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.
Blizzard (https://mcstories.com/Blizzard/index.html) (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter) by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.
The Camping Bug (https://mcstories.com/CampingBug/index.html) (mc ff be in sf) (1 new chapter) by ThatSquickGuy
A fun weekend finds a terrible infestation.
Cascade Fire (https://mcstories.com/CascadeFire/index.html) (mc mf fd la) (3 new chapters) by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.
Cats Eye 2 (https://mcstories.com/CatsEyeTwo/index.html) (mc mf md hu) (new) by J. Darksong
A day in the life of Baby and her Master, as seen through the eyes of Ragnar, another family pet.
Choose Your Own Transformation: The Princess and the Pauper (https://mcstories.com/ChooseYourOwnTransformationPrincess/index.html) (mc ff) (new) by TheWeaver
Adriana Ramirez hates Rachel Holmes for her wealth and mean-spiritedness, but the shoe may shift to the other foot once Adriana has her in her sites via The Weaver’s story of transformation.
College Undercover (https://mcstories.com/CollegeUndercover/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.
Diversion Tactics (https://mcstories.com/DiversionTactics/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter) by Sinistra
Chloe knows Dr Mitchell only wants the best for her, but is changing her entire personality really necessary?
Edited in Post (https://mcstories.com/EditedInPost/index.html) (mc ff md) (1 new chapter) by Olorin247
A sex podcaster decides to have a hypnotist and his assistant as guests on her show.
Editing Reality Book One: Naughty Fantasies Created (https://mcstories.com/EditingReality/index.html) (mc mf gr in ts) (3 new chapters) by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.
Emilia’s Exorcism (https://mcstories.com/EmiliasExorcism/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd ma bd ex) (2 new chapters) by malsagulo
A deal with a tech-savvy witch unexpectedly gives a cranky young librarian the ability to tap into the mind of an insatiable slut. Plain, anti-social Emilia soon experiences levels of pleasure beyond her wildest dreams, thanks to a magical link with party girl and whore-for-fun Katya. But can she maintain control—or will she be consumed entirely by the sensual new world she’s discovered?
Experiments In recruitment — N.C.U. (https://mcstories.com/ExperimentsInRecruitment/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter) by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne tries her hand at a few instant hypnosis inductions. Will she succeed?
Field Test (BeaufitulFetish) (https://mcstories.com/FieldTestBeautifulFetish/index.html) (mc ff) (new) by BeautifulFetish
Why is Carol tied to a chair, and what was in the water they are trying to force down her throat?
Free Hugs For Sale (https://mcstories.com/FreeHugsForSale/index.html) (mc ff cb) (new) by Somnophile
Two superheroines cosplaying as sluttier versions of two different superheroines run into a fangirl who not only recognizes them but who gives the best hugs ever.
Gym Brat (https://mcstories.com/GymBrat/index.html) (mc ff la) (new) by whatlookslike
Spoiled brat Lauren finds her attitude changing after her long suffering flatmate Phoebe buys her an unfamiliar brand of protein shakes.
The Hash (https://mcstories.com/Hash/index.html) (mc ma md ds ex) (1 new chapter) by Angel Raymond
Jen likes to explore, using the chaos of a hash function to visit random places. But this game becomes more interesting than just mathematics when it leads her to meet a mysterious hypnotist on a small island.
Help! I’m Trapped In A Romantic Visual Novel! (https://mcstories.com/HelpImTrappedInARomanticNovel/index.html) (mc ff) (new) by HypnoticHarlequin
After testing out a strange new VR game, Payton finds herself trapped in a visual novel centered around a very odd school. Can Payton escape with her mind intact?
I Was Blackmailed (https://mcstories.com/IWasBlackmailed/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Princess Kay
A mixture of mind control and blackmail drives good girl Gloria into a loop of never ending sexual depravity. Will she come out of it with her mind or morals intact?
In A Dream (https://mcstories.com/InADream/index.html) (mc ff bd cb) (1 new chapter) by Madam Kistulot
Rose couldn’t be happier living in Chronos with Gemini.
It Rings for Thee (https://mcstories.com/ItRingsForThee/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter) by Doctor D.
Things are tedious but predictable in the thriving city-state of Saltpotter. Until a couple of visitors come looking for something they’ve lost, something Saltpotter might have. And if not? They can replace it.
Jezz and Edge (https://mcstories.com/JezzAndEdge/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Chrystal Wynd
Jezz—along with her sensei Edge—are recruited to locate a missing girl believed to be kidnapped and mind-controlled.
Little Pink Pills (https://mcstories.com/LittlePinkPills/index.html) (mc mf ff fd) (new) by Carefully Random
Strange behaviour and unusual occurrences at the pharmaceutical company that April works for coincides with the arrival of a mysterious package full of little pink pills. Can April get to the bottom of what exactly the pills do without succumbing to their ever growing influence around her?
Losers Can’t Be Choosers (https://mcstories.com/LosersCantBeChoosers/index.html) (mc mf fd hm) (1 new chapter) by S. B.
As much as he enjoys it, Jonah knows he’s addicted to femdom humiliation. Perhaps his sister Angela, a skilled hypnotherapist, can help him with that.
Making a Good Thing Better (https://mcstories.com/MakingAGoodThingBetter/index.html) (mc mf ff md bd gr la) (1 new chapter) by HB5211
Jeremy and Lara are a young married couple happy with each other, but always look for ways to improve their relationship. When they see an ad for a couples weekend promising a relationship enriching experience, they could not resist. The question remains, will they be able to handle the changes in store for them when the weekend is over.
Meetings, Lessons, Truths and Lies (https://mcstories.com/MeetingsLessonsTruthAndLies/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Cerebus1
In a series of vignettes, several characters from Blood Sport meet for the first time.
Moulding a Model Student (https://mcstories.com/MouldingAModelStudent/index.html) (mc ff ds) (1 new chapter) by Flying Decadent
Ms Ishikawa has a problem student, the foul-mouthed, disrespectful, disobedient final-year high school student Annabelle Foster. Conventional teaching methods have failed, so Ms Ishikawa pulls out some hypnosis. But is Annabelle as rebellious as she seems?
Night Time Nudging (https://mcstories.com/NightTimeNudging/index.html) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter) by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?
Nothingness (https://mcstories.com/Nothingness/index.html) (mc ff rb) (new) by Kallie
Hina, a cyborg, and her girlfriend exploit her command functions to help her deal with some of her trauma.
Of Course We’ve All Seen the Sun (https://mcstories.com/OfCourseWeveAllSeenTheSun/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Jukebox
A slave tries to explain her strange dream of freedom.
Poetry & Blood (https://mcstories.com/PoetryAndBlood/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter) by Trixie Adara
Laura gets a new job for a strange romance writer that seems to be too good to be true.
She Has a Problem (https://mcstories.com/SheHasAProblem/index.html) (mc mf fd) (new) by S. B.
You know you want to help her friend out.
Spellthief Stolen (https://mcstories.com/SpellthiefStolen/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd) (2 new chapters) by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
All she has to do is cross a garden, climb a tower, steal some spells, and get out. Just another job. Nothing simpler.
Synthetic (MoldedMind) (https://mcstories.com/SyntheticMoldedMind/index.html) (mc ff rb) (new) by MoldedMind
Stacey gets roped into spending time with her annoyingly perfect neighbor. It can’t be natural to be that perfect...right?
This Is Our Story (https://mcstories.com/ThisIsOurStory/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.
This Job Bites (https://mcstories.com/ThisJobBites/index.html) (mc ff md fd) (new) by Sleepy Hypno
Kelli goes in for a job interview with the mysterious Alan Card.
The Triumphs of the Past (https://mcstories.com/TriumphsOfThePast/index.html) (mc mf ma) (new) by Maximilian Cummings
The classic roadster that Eric purchases seems to have an effect on the women around or in it.
The Ultimate Form (https://mcstories.com/UltimateForm/index.html) (mc mf md gr in) (new) by MindSpark
A washed-up loser is chosen to be the subject of a military nanite experiment.
Unlimited (https://mcstories.com/Unlimited/index.html) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter) by Pan
A hypnotist recounts the final sessions with his sister.
Uplink (https://mcstories.com/Uplink/index.html) (mc ff ma sf) (new) by nevermind
The promised future has arrived. Mankind has outgrown old Terra and lives peacefully among the stars. But when junior engineer Kyra Warner of the TSS Argo picks up the wrong item from an alien planet, the rest of her crew must soon find out that not everything in this universe is willing to coexist.
The World Changed for Hope (https://mcstories.com/WorldChangedForHope/index.html) (mc mf) (new) by VindalooCurry
A stay-at-home mom is planning her day when suddenly [[[[theworldchanged]]]].
Zzzonked (https://mcstories.com/Zzzonked/index.html) (mc mf md cb) (new) by Jukebox
Madame Macabre faces a theft from her magical library, but this time Silas the Somnomancer has a few new tricks up his sleeve.
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*does happy dance*
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Thought this was going to be a similarly-large update like last time, but guess not. Oh well, procrastinated on my chapter enough it wouldn't have been ready even if I didn't plan on skipping this week.
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Over 40 stories is a large update combing two weeks.
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Its large compared to a normal week, but i think last two-week update was even twice as large. There were concerns that it was too many, i believe.
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Kind of surprised that there was a "to be continued" at the end of this week's installment of "College Undercover". Carol seemed like she was at a natural end point to her story, as a sex slave to Patrick.
Also slightly disappointed that she programmed Janice to have an escape hatch.
This week's installment of "Binding Rings" was very good, hope we see some of the mom next week.
And we already talked about "Unlimited" when Pan was running that story on this forum, but really, those scenes where he gets his sister and mom to go topless in the house are *very* hot.
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Its large compared to a normal week, but i think last two-week update was even twice as large. There were concerns that it was too many, i believe.
It's unusual to have over 50 stories in an update. I have been here a long time and when there is a two week update it is almost always high 30's or 40's. 50 is rare.
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I really am grateful Merry for you complimenting last chapter's 'Good ending', but I'm afraid I had to go around write another couple of chapters. Sorry about that.
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I really am grateful Merry for you complimenting last chapter's 'Good ending', but I'm afraid I had to go around write another couple of chapters. Sorry about that.
Thats fine, I'll look forward to it, though wont be at this end of the week, for sure, as its 23rd of 30 to read for me.
Funnily enough, last time it was a 2 week update, there were more stories, but less that I had to read (28). Not thrilled with 30, but most are under 5K in length, so hopefully I can get through
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Getting started
The Hash
Dorchester? As in Dorchester, Dorset? Only ask as I used to live about 12 miles from there (left 20 years ago), and I assume there are several in the US? Story continues to delight. Two main characters play off each other so well, its great fun reading this. Cant wait for the rest of this countdown, lol.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Losers Can’t Be Choosers
Err, that was a little different. First MC chapter entirely set in a hospital toilet? Probably! :laugh: I think its fair to say that Nick might have issues of a different kind, thats for sure. Well, as long as Clarissa is being well cared for...? ;)
Definitely enjoyed
Of Course We’ve All Seen the Sun
One of those rare JB stories that just misses for me. There are a few amusing moments, but thats about it for my tastes. Of course those that like md hypno will get more out of it than me.
High end of enjoyed
This Job Bites
Sort of office I wouldnt mind applying for a job at, but fine, I have a 'bitten by vampire' kink, so that might have something to do with that! :laugh: Nicely told, and the next time Mr Card has a vacancy, let me know! ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed
The World Changed for Hope
This is going to be a hit or miss series for me, bit like Weaver stories, I'm sure. This one just pretty much missed for me, but having said that, I'd probably enjoy being tied up, and fucked like that, but anyway... Yes, the tied up bit, primarily! Rest of it had little of interest to me.
Going to be kind (tying up always makes me kind), and give it low end of definitely enjoyed
More to follow
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"Editing Reality Book One": That is an excellent transformation of Veronica in Chapter 13, and the fact that Steve can change someone's relationship with the entire world has intriguing possibilities for future chapters. Equally intriguing is the confirmation that James does have the power to bring drawings to life.
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Part 2
Cats Eye 2
Family fun with an author friend of mine. No, I'm positive the cat didnt actually write the story, but otherwise, its delightfully done, and probably closer to the truth than some might think. Always fun seeing the viewpoint of a family pet, of the feline kind!
High end of definitely enjoyed
I Was Blackmailed
Oh fine, I loved an incest story, shock horror! Fine, the method of getting her sister ready for her was brilliantly evil, and I thought it was great. Loved the contact lens thing too, would love that done to me, as I couldnt put them in for myself. Oh fine, the tag gives away the ending, but beautifully done
High end of definitely enjoyed
Making a Good Thing Better
Must be careful what vampire I get to bite me, because I'd want to pass on the piercings, and the baby! I know the formula is fairly standard for the author, but enough here to keep me interested. Not hard to work out whats going to happen to the next couple, mind
Definitely enjoyed
She Has a Problem
I suppose, as a submissive female, I shouldnt complain too much, as she's going to get her wish here, submitting to a man. Equally, the man has to pay the price to get that reward, and might not have enjoyed that as much. I loved the Dominant woman's attitude to matters, I must secretly admit
High end of definitely enjoyed
Synthetic (MoldedMind)
Yeah, if Joanna wants to provide me with one of those titanium eggs, she wouldnt have to force it on me! Of course, that name has Stepford significance, so I do wonder if there is more than coincidence involved there? Yes, anything that has women being turned into robots is going to get my approval, lets face it. Story is decent too.
High end of definitely enjoyed. Subject to upgrade if a titanium egg should arrive :angel:
More on Tuesday
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Kind of surprised that there was a "to be continued" at the end of this week's installment of "College Undercover". Carol seemed like she was at a natural end point to her story, as a sex slave to Patrick.
Also slightly disappointed that she programmed Janice to have an escape hatch.
Hi Gyrd
There's a reason I didn't think that could be the end point. Although it's the chapter after next that it's explained. Also we haven't seen the last of Janice.
Greyscribbler
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Jezz and Edge (https://mcstories.com/JezzAndEdge/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Chrystal Wynd
Jezz—along with her sensei Edge—are recruited to locate a missing girl believed to be kidnapped and mind-controlled.
I loved this story that, besides being sexy and having great mind-control, was also hilarious! The author clearly has been watching too many schlocky 1930s science-fiction movies—I kept waiting for either mad-scientist character, "Mr. X" or "Toner," to lay his hand on a knife-switch.
Five stars out of five.
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Meetings, Lessons, Truths and Lies (https://mcstories.com/MeetingsLessonsTruthAndLies/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Cerebus1
In a series of vignettes, several characters from Blood Sport meet for the first time.
When my friend Cerebus1 told me he was adding to “Blood Sport”, I was torn. On one hand, I’m always concerned when an author tinkers with a great story, on the other, this was a chance to read more of Cerebus1’s lush prose and vivid descriptions. I’m now fully glad he did. In particular, the utter sweetness of Angel anfpd Brianna’s meeting really sets up the utter tragedy of what the MC does to them. The section with Sarkosian truly shows the lengths Angel would go to save Brianna.
Well done, I hope we see more of this world.
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Of Course We’ve All Seen the Sun (https://mcstories.com/OfCourseWeveAllSeenTheSun/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Jukebox
A slave tries to explain her strange dream of freedom.
I love the premise of this story, although I would have wanted a little more. Something like a dream in which 'she is not a slave', but strange events happen in her normal life, which give indications of what she really is.
Although these are my wishes, the story is impeccable.
Experiments In recruitment — N.C.U. (https://mcstories.com/ExperimentsInRecruitment/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter) by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne tries her hand at a few instant hypnosis inductions. Will she succeed?
I like the development of the story, I crave a little more of it. I did not know this story, the descriptions of the hypnotic inductions are very well achieved.
Unlimited (https://mcstories.com/Unlimited/index.html) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter) by Pan
A hypnotist recounts the final sessions with his sister.
I've only read fragments of the saga. When I finish, I'm sure I'll read it all in one pass. Progressive hypnosis, along with the incestuous fetish, both move the story very well.
Edited in Post (https://mcstories.com/EditedInPost/index.html) (mc ff md) (1 new chapter) by Olorin247
A sex podcaster decides to have a hypnotist and his assistant as guests on her show.
I almost forgot, this story, although I liked the previous chapter more. The rhythm of the story is maintained at a very good level.
If Lily tries everything, what will she have for the next story?
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Meetings, Lessons, Truths and Lies (https://mcstories.com/MeetingsLessonsTruthAndLies/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Cerebus1
In a series of vignettes, several characters from Blood Sport meet for the first time.
When my friend Cerebus1 told me he was adding to “Blood Sport”, I was torn. On one hand, I’m always concerned when an author tinkers with a great story, on the other, this was a chance to read more of Cerebus1’s lush prose and vivid descriptions. I’m now fully glad he did. In particular, the utter sweetness of Angel anfpd Brianna’s meeting really sets up the utter tragedy of what the MC does to them. The section with Sarkosian truly shows the lengths Angel would go to save Brianna.
Well done, I hope we see more of this world.
Fumanchu,
Thank you so very much. I was honestly concerned about writing it too. The fact that you enjoyed it makes it all worth the while. Especially coming from you.
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Okay, edited in post hit me so hard.
I mean damn. That was an intense reminder that yeah, this is a fetish. Phew.
It reminded me a little of Mountain Man's Making Them Do Things.
Then I made the mistake of going back and reading that too.
I gotta go recover.
Conclusion, Edited In Post.... 5 stars.
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"Unlimited" touches on a sub-fetish of mine this week, actually. Making the victim wear less and less clothing, ideally reluctantly, until she's naked in the presence of the MCer. Good stuff.
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Bimbo-Midas (https://mcstories.com/BimboMidas/index.html) (mc mf ff md gr) (2 new chapters) by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.
The was a fun story. I had a high school teacher that liked to tell students when he ask a question that was technically answered already, "If all else fails, read the directions." Of course, Jimmy did not get them for the better part of a month! What amused me -- at least in my interpretation, was how rewarding the good behavior without presenting all details led to mindless behavior. This all seemed a meditation of if and how good behavior should be rewarded, especially in how the recipient of the reward might react. Oh, yes, young Jimmy was a smart one, but that college age can ensure sexual lust can be overpowering! Jimmy and Brogus were both right: Jimmy did not handle the power well, while Brogus and co. did not bother to give all the details. As an aside, intentional or no, I sensed a bit of a parody of how it is becoming more common in at least the US that 20-30-somethings live in an almost communal setting with multiple roommates. Indeed, I had some college friends that had the setup for several years after graduation. That can help organically explain why Jimmy was not given too many questions about having an apparent harem! Anyway, gosh golly, this was a fun ride with a happy ending.
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Getting started
The Hash
Dorchester? As in Dorchester, Dorset? Only ask as I used to live about 12 miles from there (left 20 years ago), and I assume there are several in the US? Story continues to delight. Two main characters play off each other so well, its great fun reading this. Cant wait for the rest of this countdown, lol.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Wow, first on the list this week :)
I don't often use real place names, and when I do I prefer to pick towns that there's several of around the world. I think in this case I might have got the numbers a little confused, because his clue seems to imply a train journey taking several hours. If so, it must have been a very important business meeting to be worth travelling so far.
Good to see you're enjoying this one :)
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It was the first alphabetically, in the 5 shortest story updates, so yes, lol! :laugh:
As to Dorchester (Dorset), and lengthy train journeys, you really only have 2 options, the line towards London, or the tortuously slow line up to Bath, and Bristol. The latter line I knew quite well in truth, as my partner at the time would run me across to nearby stations on that line (Chetnole, Yetminster, or Yeovil Pen Mill) if getting a train up to Yorkshire by myself, as she was only driver in relationship.
But I can imagine there are several Dorchester's in the US (especially New England), and Canada, and possibly Australia too
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Emilia’s Exorcism (https://mcstories.com/EmiliasExorcism/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd ma bd ex) (2 new chapters) by malsagulo
A deal with a tech-savvy witch unexpectedly gives a cranky young librarian the ability to tap into the mind of an insatiable slut. Plain, anti-social Emilia soon experiences levels of pleasure beyond her wildest dreams, thanks to a magical link with party girl and whore-for-fun Katya. But can she maintain control—or will she be consumed entirely by the sensual new world she’s discovered?
First let me just say that I love library special collections. They might just be a bunch of old genealogy books and manuscripts, but there is always this almost unintentional air of mystery toward that normally locked room. There almost is no need to add a Lovecraftian level of mystery. Yet, that is more confirming than redundant. The story is deepened by that Lovecraft connection, as we fall deeper into whatever the apparent witch might be planning.
As an aside, I find myself reminded of the film Being John Malkovich. There is always a surreal kind fo thrill in the possibility being someone else. It could be John Malkovich, it could be some apparent prostitute; the person does not really matter. It is a kind of mask that may reveal who we really are inside. That possibility instantly makes one wonder if Emilia is really sex crazed deep down rather than being given some kind of addictive experience. This story is amazing!
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Bimbo-Midas (https://mcstories.com/BimboMidas/index.html) (mc mf ff md gr) (2 new chapters) by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.
The was a fun story. I had a high school teacher that liked to tell students when he ask a question that was technically answered already, "If all else fails, read the directions." Of course, Jimmy did not get them for the better part of a month! What amused me -- at least in my interpretation, was how rewarding the good behavior without presenting all details led to mindless behavior. This all seemed a meditation of if and how good behavior should be rewarded, especially in how the recipient of the reward might react. Oh, yes, young Jimmy was a smart one, but that college age can ensure sexual lust can be overpowering! Jimmy and Brogus were both right: Jimmy did not handle the power well, while Brogus and co. did not bother to give all the details. As an aside, intentional or no, I sensed a bit of a parody of how it is becoming more common in at least the US that 20-30-somethings live in an almost communal setting with multiple roommates. Indeed, I had some college friends that had the setup for several years after graduation. That can help organically explain why Jimmy was not given too many questions about having an apparent harem! Anyway, gosh golly, this was a fun ride with a happy ending.
I'm glad (not to mention relieved) that you liked the ending. I must confess that I did not think of the possibility that California neighbors would figure that the girls were living in Jimmy's Vallejo house as rent-sharing because of California's high cost of living, or the girls were living-out some kind of wacky California lifestyle, and so Jimmy's neighbors would never realize that he had a harem.
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Part 3
Bimbo-Midas
Yes, I could worship a man too, for the stunning looks, without the bimbo IQ, just saying... :angel: Clever way to end a super story, I must say. Fine, the lottery win would be handy too, but does nothing for the state of my body! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Long golden hair, young looks, healthy body, and slightly bigger boobs for me, with no IQ loss, open to negotiation for rating! :cool:
Binding Rings
Fine, I'm beginning to dislike Jason, as well as the incest now, but besides all that...Story is building nicely, all the same, must be said.
Low end of definitely enjoyed
Blizzard
An absolutely delightful feelgood MC story here. Though Gene might not enjoy that meeting with 'Daddy' when it happens, lol? Great characters, who play off each other well, and only thing I'd dislike is the blizzard!
High end of definitely enjoyed
Choose Your Own Transformation: The Princess and the Pauper
Nice concept, though in truth, I found it hard to get much feeling for either of the women in here, both pretty shallow in attitude. Ending wasnt hard to spot, either.
High end of enjoyed
Experiments In recruitment — N.C.U.
I could do with Rayne, and Co getting me in character for the 1930's thing I'm doing at the Film Festival next month. Hypnotised to believe I really was a 30's dancer could be a lot of fun. The whole thing with the villainess, heroine, and the victims was absolutely delightful. But yes, cosplay will always get my approval lol.
High end of definitely enjoyed
More on Thursday
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Part 4
Emilia’s Exorcism
Fine, I can think of a few types of bodies I'd rather be in than Katya, but other than that, what a great story this is. Looking forward to more, and how this all plays out in the end. Oh, and the magic words to turn me into a wonderful musical type dancer, lol
High end of definitely enjoyed
Field Test (BeaufitulFetish)
Oh fine, I love the concept of the robotic programming, no surprise there! Other than this, a delightful starter piece, definitely looking forward to more of this. But seriously, Mira, for me, its robot suit, or dont bother! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed
Free Hugs For Sale
Just shows how dangerous cosplay can be, especially with a serial mind controlling hugger in the place! It was amusing in places, though not a real grabber for me, unlike if Heather got me!
Low end of definitely enjoyed
Little Pink Pills
This is the other starter piece that I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of. And fine, if those pink pills can do me any good, send some my way! I think April might be trying them soon, like it, or not! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed
Moulding a Model Student
Maybe it was the 14 month gap, maybe it was just the nature of this piece, but it really didnt grab me at all, in truth.
I'll go no rating, as a get out, probably too long a gap issue
And now it will definitely be Thursday before you get any more! :P
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Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...
Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!
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Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...
Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!
Still an update remaining! But I know the feel =P
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Doctor MC, thank you for your comments about "Jezz and Edge". I appreciate your reading and commenting, good sir.
I have just started reading "Bimbo Midas", so I can't comment on the latest chapters yet, but I can say I'm definitely enjoying it so far. Your dialogue for the leprechaun is really good. I love the old country cadence you give him.
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Bimbo-Midas
Yes, I could worship a man too, for the stunning looks, without the bimbo IQ, just saying... :angel: Clever way to end a super story, I must say. Fine, the lottery win would be handy too, but does nothing for the state of my body! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Long golden hair, young looks, healthy body, and slightly bigger boobs for me, with no IQ loss, open to negotiation for rating! :cool:
Sorry, Merry, I can imagine all that nifty stuff that I write about in Bimbo-Midas, but this doesn't mean I can make those things happen!
I'm glad you rated my story so highly. Thank you.
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Doctor MC, thank you for your comments about "Jezz and Edge". I appreciate your reading and commenting, good sir.
I have just started reading "Bimbo Midas", so I can't comment on the latest chapters yet, but I can say I'm definitely enjoying it so far. Your dialogue for the leprechaun is really good. I love the old country cadence you give him.
Thank you for reading my story, and I hope you continue to enjoy reading it.
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Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...
Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!
Still an update remaining! But I know the feel =P
Still 2 chunks of reviews to go in fact. Olorin's story is in next batch, having checked reading list
Bimbo-Midas
Yes, I could worship a man too, for the stunning looks, without the bimbo IQ, just saying... :angel: Clever way to end a super story, I must say. Fine, the lottery win would be handy too, but does nothing for the state of my body! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Long golden hair, young looks, healthy body, and slightly bigger boobs for me, with no IQ loss, open to negotiation for rating! :cool:
Sorry, Merry, I can imagine all that nifty stuff that I write about in Bimbo-Midas, but this doesn't mean I can make those things happen!
I'm glad you rated my story so highly. Thank you.
Yes, I was suspecting that was the case, but no harm in hoping :angel: :laugh:
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I almost missed a completely different Mind Spark story!
"The Ultimate Form". I do admire his 3000-words-per-installment pace, like a metronome.
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Oh no, Merry skipped me... I has a sad...
Also, thanks, Buster and Akisa, for the feedback!
Still an update remaining! But I know the feel =P
Still 2 chunks of reviews to go in fact. Olorin's story is in next batch, having checked reading list
I figured. Thanks for the consistent feedback on all the stories, they are very much appreciated.
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Part 5
Diversion Tactics
I do want to feel sorry for Chloe, but fine, I find it hard to do so, because I'd probably love that done to me! I could do without the humiliation type stuff, but other than that... Yes, Mistress, whatever you wish to do to me! :angel:
Definitely enjoyed
Edited in Post
Oh fine, talking of things I'd love done to me, being turned into a sexy courtesan would definitely be one of them! I loved the way it was all explained to Lily, and why it had happened, thats really called self hypnosis, lol. Very clever way to end this, assuming it is actually the end?
High end of definitely enjoyed
Nothingness
Yes, no big surprise, just loved this. Not only because I'm jealous of Hina, with her cyborg makeover (though I am), but the very clever way that Kimmie slowed changed her sense of the world, that was really cleverly done. As the closest I've done to sensory deprivation is the tank, and only for an hour, I have no idea how weird, or amazing that level of deprivation must be, but would love to know. Oh, and if I have to have the cyborg makeover to discover it, happily bring it on! ;)
Wont be everyone's cup of tea, but for me, low end of much enjoyed
This Is Our Story
Fine, there are moments I want to hit Connor, but there are equally moments I love what he does, but anyway...Fascinated to see how this all plays out in the end, should be quite something for sure!
Definitely enjoyed
Zzzonked
OK, plain and simple, loved this. Great story, great characters, and very neatly tidied up in the end. A right JB gem here
High end of definitely enjoyed
Last 5 on Saturday
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Zzzonked (https://mcstories.com/Zzzonked/index.html) (mc mf md cb) (new) by Jukebox
Madame Macabre faces a theft from her magical library, but this time Silas the Somnomancer has a few new tricks up his sleeve.
I don't think there is a genre that this author cannot master. This was fun and engaging from the first sentence. Not necessarily that much to say about this, in some ways. The description and tags give enough of an idea about the described events. This was not that predictable, though, and that showed how well written this was. There were times where I felt such a self-awareness that it was as if Jukebox was winking at the reader through his own words. The elaborate dream sequence was almost too good! A fun ride.
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Emilia’s Exorcism
Fine, I can think of a few types of bodies I'd rather be in than Katya
She does seem kinda improbably energetic, doesn't she? I was wondering if I should maybe have her take it down a few notches, if only for the sake of something a little more realistic. But then I figured what the hell, it's a fantasy, isn't it? Might as well lean into it.
Anyway, main thing is, glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for reading!
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I think it works as it is, if thats the way she wants to be. No point in her having a tame time, lets face it
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Gym Brat
So who wants me to provide them with a protein shake, lol? Seriously, if I'm being milked, its being done properly, moo! Fun enough story, and always helps with me when the victim deserves it, so...
Definitely enjoyed
Help! I’m Trapped In A Romantic Visual Novel!
Well, I've always wanted to try the whole VR immersion thing, but maybe this is something I should pass on? :laugh: Interesting look at the whole VR thing, combined with some very annoying characters (especially 1!) to help me putting off trying that myself
High end of definitely enjoyed
Jezz and Edge
This was just wonderful, a pure delight for me. Great banter between Jezz, and just about everyone else, in truth. The dry humour of Edge was just another treat for me. Only gripe, fine, why did she have to destroy the mind controlling box, and not just advise Toner to only go after women who would enjoy it used on them? ;) Should have humour tag, for sure.
Low end of much enjoyed
The Triumphs of the Past
Must be very careful if I ever go in a car with Mr Cummings, for sure! :laugh: Fine, I'm never going to see a car gear stick in the same way, ever again! :angel: Very amusing story, with plenty of cumming, for sure!
Definitely enjoyed, marked down on length rule. Sorry, Max, even for you! x
Uplink
Oh fine, I'd probably enjoy being turned into a drone like that, but the Agent would have to drone me to get great marks for this, as the build up is just a little too repetitive. But fine, offer to drone me, and I might be kinder. Its fine as a story, but just not grabbing me yet.
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Middle might not be unreasonable, but I dont want the Agent being gentle on me, lol. :P
Thats it for this update, thanks as always to all authors involved in this
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Losers Can’t Be Choosers
Err, that was a little different. First MC chapter entirely set in a hospital toilet? Probably! :laugh: I think its fair to say that Nick might have issues of a different kind, thats for sure. Well, as long as Clarissa is being well cared for...? ;)
Definitely enjoyed
I sure hope it's the first! ;) Like I said in the notes at the end of chapter I wanted to inject a little humor into the mix and since Angela was trapped in a bathroom... Nic is in trouble indeed and you'll get to see what happened to him next chapter. Clarissa is okay but she's still undergoing surgery. She won't appear much for the remainder of the plot (only a few chapters remain) but when she does... 8-) Thanks, dear.
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She Has a Problem
I suppose, as a submissive female, I shouldnt complain too much, as she's going to get her wish here, submitting to a man. Equally, the man has to pay the price to get that reward, and might not have enjoyed that as much. I loved the Dominant woman's attitude to matters, I must secretly admit
High end of definitely enjoyed
Glad you liked it. It was quite fun to write just like the one I posted this week. I hope you like where that goes to even if you have to go up and down to get there. ;)
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And last,but definitely not least...
Gym Brat
So who wants me to provide them with a protein shake, lol? Seriously, if I'm being milked, its being done properly, moo! Fun enough story, and always helps with me when the victim deserves it, so...
Definitely enjoyed
Thanks for your review: ). I had no plans on Lauren being quite like that when I started writing but it just... happened I suppose! She was certainly more fun to write that way.
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She Has a Problem
I suppose, as a submissive female, I shouldnt complain too much, as she's going to get her wish here, submitting to a man. Equally, the man has to pay the price to get that reward, and might not have enjoyed that as much. I loved the Dominant woman's attitude to matters, I must secretly admit
High end of definitely enjoyed
Glad you liked it. It was quite fun to write just like the one I posted this week. I hope you like where that goes to even if you have to go up and down to get there. ;)
My arthritis wasnt thrilled with all that scrolling, but I'll live, and I can see why you did it
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Thank you for the review, Merry! Jezz and Edge are a fun team to write. 😁
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Just read Gym Brat last night and it was the perfect storm of light humiliation, infantilism, and forced servitude. It's a great little story.
-Fortunato
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Just read Gym Brat last night and it was the perfect storm of light humiliation, infantilism, and forced servitude. It's a great little story.
-Fortunato
Glad you liked it : ). I had a lot of fun writing it!