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New Releases-February 9th 2019
« on: February 09, 2019, 10:19:24 am »
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You can now download the BBCode version of the What’s New page at https://mcstories.com/WhatsNew.txt

The next update will be the weekend of 23 February 2019.

The Allen’s House Party (mc mf md in) (new)  by Fiona69m
Ollie and Becky Allen throw a house party, which is infiltrated by Adolph Koch.

And Your Little Dog, Too (mc mf ff fd be) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
The only thing Betsy hates more than her husband’s new workmate, Sue, is her pet.

Betsy Visits River City (mc mf ff mm md fd ds bd gr be rb ts sc cb hu) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
Betsy finds herself in River City and is shocked to discover it’s infested with super heroes who will try to stop her doing her own lawful work.

Beyond the Door (mc mf ff ma ts) (new)  by Maximilian Cummings
Wendy could not recall at all: what had happened in that room?

Bimbo-Midas (mc mf ff md gr) (2 new chapters)  by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.

But I Don’t Really Want This (mc mf md fd gr hm) (1 new chapter)  by Pomelo
Will and Nicole find their relationship changing again in at first subtle and then not-so-subtle ways.

Checkmate I Think (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by The Slaver
A millionaire crime boss attempts to outsmart his rivals.

Click (mc mf fd) (new)  by &c
You hear a strange clicking noise that won’t go away. Soon, you want to give into the sound.

Detention in Stepford High (mc md ft) (new)  by Borbin
Mrs. Pennyworth keeps an eye on Samantha, the new girl in school, at least until her new attitude kicks in.

The Diner (mc mf fd) (new)  by Milo Minderbinder
James’ life takes a dramatic turn after he stops at a nearly empty, out-of-the-way diner.

Emilia’s Exorcism (mc mf ff md fd ma bd ex) (new)  by malsagulo
A cranky young librarian gains access to a whole new world of pleasure when a deal with a witch lets her tap into the mind of an absolutely insatiable slut.

Experiments In recruitment — N.C.U. (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne tries her hand at a few instant hypnosis inductions. Will she succeed?

Following Her Dream (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Shadra
Janet takes the necessary steps towards obtaining her dream girl.

Girls Are Always Right (mc mf fd rb) (new)  by Jukebox
Noah’s therapist comes up with an unconventional way to break through his deflection tactics.

The Glass Wall (mc ff) (new)  by SoVeryFascinated
A woman’s trip to the hypnotherapist is much more than it seems.

Happy Valentine’s Day! (mc mf) (3 new chapters)  by TheWeaver
A Valentine’s Day themed writing contest yields very special prizes.

The Hash (mc ma md ds ex) (1 new chapter)  by Angel Raymond
Jen likes to explore, using the chaos of a hash function to visit random places. But this game becomes more interesting than just mathematics when it leads her to meet a mysterious hypnotist on a small island.

I Have No Idea (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Tanner wakes up from a blackout, and discovers that he started a billion dollar pharmaceutical company and created a slave paradise with a prototype mind control drug.

An Immovable Object (mc mf md cb) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Star Raven is battling her nemesis NanoMan once again, luckily his nanobots can’t affect her... or can they?

It Started With: Alien Control (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
An Air Force Lieutenant investigates reports of alien abduction.

Joanna’s War (mc mf ff md fd ma) (new)  by Scalar Seventh
Joanna wakes up a convention for mind controllers with more than a little evidence that she’s been Altered, but no idea by whom, or when. Or why.

Kneel (mc mf fd) (new)  by Chew Toy
Graham tries out a kneeling meditation class at a BDSM convention.

Living Dead Girl (mc ff cb hu) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
River City is home to a number of unusual residents, all with strange and unique powers and abilities. Now everyone is a hero or villain, however. Some just wish to be left alone to live their lives. But when Gwen crosses paths with two of the city’s young heroines, it seems that she’ll be drawn off the sidelines and into the adventure, whether she wants to or not.

Lust from Darkness (mc ff mf md fd) (new)  by mr. potestas
Hunters Lucinda and Alena were fighting monsters for nearly a decade. Demons were never their speciality, but they soon found themselves against Demons with an unexpected plan…

Making a Good Thing Better (mc mf ff md bd gr la) (new)  by HB5211
Jeremy and Lara are a young married couple happy with each other, but always look for ways to improve their relationship. When they see an ad for a couples weekend promising a relationship enriching experience, they could not resist. The question remains, will they be able to handle the changes in store for them when the weekend is over.

Mpulsive (mc mf fd) (new)  by M Pulsive
George goes to meet M, but M has some plans in store for him.

My New Salon (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Robert Towers
Madeleine is convinced by her roommate to try several new things.

Spellthief Stolen (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
All she has to do is cross a garden, climb a tower, steal some spells, and get out. Just another job. Nothing simpler.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations he’d never thought possible.

Subliminal Toys (mc mf ff md in) (new)  by controlthruhypno
A teenager discovers that his dead father had been using subliminals on his stepmother.

Subroutine (Kallie) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
Lori, a college student, discovers she has a hypnotic trigger that turns her into a mindless, obedient drone. How? Why? And what’s going to happen when her roommate finds out?

This Is Our Story (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.

Using Ursula (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
There’s only one way to stop Dion from using his step-sister Ursula.

The World Changed for Susan (mc mf) (new)  by VindalooCurry
Susan heads for the door when suddenly [[[[theworldchanged]]].


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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2019, 11:05:24 am »
Quote from: subroutine

It didn’t matter. Once her hand was stroking her cock, all her willpower melted away


Erm. Editing mistake, or something about Lori we weren't told.   :grin:

Regardless, a hot chapter. I've been enjoying the story.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2019, 12:08:53 pm »
Not a mistake.  Mentioned in ch 1.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2019, 12:31:10 pm »
I actually wrote what will be chapter 12 first, before I realized I needed to expand on certain things, so basically a couple lines in chapter 12 turned into the chapter above. Show don't tell, as they say, I guess. I struggled so much trying to get the ending to this chapter to a point where I didn't hate it. Hopefully it's good enough now.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #4 on: February 09, 2019, 01:17:00 pm »
Glad that this week's random selection of stories hit on one I can say something positive about :)

The Glass Wall (mc ff) (new)  by SoVeryFascinated
A woman’s trip to the hypnotherapist is much more than it seems.

I liked this one. Found myself waiting for the twist, and enjoying each step along the way.
Shattering the wall felt maybe a little scary for my taste, but that doesn't detract from an engaging story with likeable characters.
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #5 on: February 09, 2019, 01:42:32 pm »
Another great chapter of Following Her Dream. Although I'm picturing Melanie sitting in Janet's bedroom with a very stern look on her face. "Where the hell are those two? I've been waiting forever!"  :)

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #6 on: February 09, 2019, 02:02:40 pm »
Quote from: subroutine

It didn’t matter. Once her hand was stroking her cock, all her willpower melted away


Erm. Editing mistake, or something about Lori we weren't told.   :grin:

Regardless, a hot chapter. I've been enjoying the story.

Chapter 1, right after Harper snaps Lori out of her robot mode:

It had been such a relief not to have to think. Especially out in public, she was normally so wrapped up in anxieties about being trans and how other people looked at her. On the bus home from the lecture, she hadn’t thought about it at all. She hadn’t needed to. It had been blissful.

And now the diabolical conspiracy reveals itself. Yay! I've got an idea as to who is behind all of this, but I can't wait to see how it all develops.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #7 on: February 09, 2019, 03:27:29 pm »
Emilia’s Exorcism (mc mf ff md fd ma bd ex) (new)  by malsagulo
A cranky young librarian gains access to a whole new world of pleasure when a deal with a witch lets her tap into the mind of an absolutely insatiable slut.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #8 on: February 09, 2019, 04:06:07 pm »
Emilia’s Exorcism (mc mf ff md fd ma bd ex) (new)  by malsagulo
A cranky young librarian gains access to a whole new world of pleasure when a deal with a witch lets her tap into the mind of an absolutely insatiable slut.

My first new story in a while! Feedback appreciated!

I really enjoyed it. I like how ambiguous the situation is, and the hints at what might be really happening.

For other readers, here's my attempt to decipher the invocation -

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

I don't know if this is what you intended, but my thoughts are:

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

Regardless of whether I'm off base or not, I enjoyed the story, and home to see more from you in the future, malsaĝulo.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #9 on: February 09, 2019, 04:49:01 pm »
:grin: Eee-hee-hee that's awesome! I was really hoping that someone would try and decipher the spell! Let's just say I appreciate you using spoiler tags, and leave it at that. ;)

Also, here's a fun fact I didn't mention -- this story was actually the result of a kinda/sorta collaboration between the Gonewild redditor I mentioned and myself. As a challenge (and with her permission), I took the photos on her profile and tried to structure them into a narrative. I can't post the photo links here on EMCSA, obviously, given the rules here/text only nature of the archive. But if anyone wants to see how I integrated u/soft-n-slow's visual material into the story, you can find the master post here: https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/aom7a4/emilias_exorcism_part_1/.

Just one or two more details for you, anostus, because I'm also a big nerd like that:

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #10 on: February 09, 2019, 07:03:21 pm »
Quote from: subroutine

It didn’t matter. Once her hand was stroking her cock, all her willpower melted away


Erm. Editing mistake, or something about Lori we weren't told.   :grin:

Regardless, a hot chapter. I've been enjoying the story.

Chapter 1, right after Harper snaps Lori out of her robot mode:

It had been such a relief not to have to think. Especially out in public, she was normally so wrapped up in anxieties about being trans and how other people looked at her. On the bus home from the lecture, she hadn’t thought about it at all. She hadn’t needed to. It had been blissful.

And now the diabolical conspiracy reveals itself. Yay! I've got an idea as to who is behind all of this, but I can't wait to see how it all develops.

I'm observant!

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2019, 07:48:25 am »
A story of mine was missing but it's been added to the update just now. It's this one.

Manual for Domination (mc mf fd) (new)  by S. B.
Jack’s memories are all jumbled. What did Greta do to him exactly?

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #12 on: February 10, 2019, 09:26:11 am »
Getting started (1 out of order, missed an SB green story previously (or not, I now discover)

Betsy Visits River City

And now Billie can get back to normality, which I'm sure will include gin, and a number of cigarettes, to get over the trauma! :laugh: And Robbie has learnt enough to know to avoid the North East of England! :P A fun way to tie up all the loose ends here, and fine, I roared with laughter at the ending, loved what Faeryfaye did there to Betsy! :laugh: As to that blue eyed blonde, halfway through the chapter, no idea who that reminds me of? :angel:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Was tempted to give more, for the way it ended, but dont want to boost Betsy's ego too much! :P

Bimbo-Midas

So at long last, is Jimmy finally beginning to think through events? Loved the logic behind the build up to the orgy, and the new girl sounds cute (if clueless) too.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Lust from Darkness

Another promising taster piece from Mr P here. Some crazy demonic events here, and definitely some extreme dildos too! The disguises didnt last long, for sure! :laugh:
Definitely enjoyed

This Is Our Story

Thank goodness we never had yearbooks over here, in the 70's. Mind, the lack of computers, let alone that kind of software... The playoff between the 3 main characters here was very good too. Mind, if the author can find a Dancers yearbook, from the 1930's...? ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed

The World Changed for Susan

OK, no prizes for subtlety here, but at the same time, it made me laugh in several places, which has to be a good thing? I can see a few ways I'd enjoy my world changing (see previous review), but a wild desire for sex probably wouldnt be among them! :laugh:
Definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #13 on: February 10, 2019, 10:25:42 am »

Lust from Darkness

Another promising taster piece from Mr P here. Some crazy demonic events here, and definitely some extreme dildos too! The disguises didnt last long, for sure! :laugh:
Definitely enjoyed


Thanks for definitely enjoying! :D
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Must admit, was not sure how much you would like this one! I've gone pretty dark, but this might just be the first story that almost has that "humiliation" tag. Simon clearly judged it not necessary, but he might have if I posted the entire 16k+ words of it. The story called for that erotic madness. Pretty happy with it at its near final status. If you wanna see more Demonic craziness, you know where the final piece will be  ;)

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #14 on: February 10, 2019, 12:34:41 pm »
Another great chapter of Following Her Dream. Although I'm picturing Melanie sitting in Janet's bedroom with a very stern look on her face. "Where the hell are those two? I've been waiting forever!"  :)

Thank you for your kind words, as always <3 I'm pretty happy with how most of this chapter turned out.

We'll definitely see more of Melanie soon, don't worry! Maybe there's something that happened with her already that wasn't shown yet? Who knows =D

 I also had some people asking for more of Janet, so I actually started adding her into the next chapter as well. Glad I did, honestly, based on how it's turning out. Hope it's worth the wait!

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #15 on: February 10, 2019, 04:18:06 pm »
Betsy Visits River City

And now Billie can get back to normality, which I'm sure will include gin, and a number of cigarettes, to get over the trauma! :laugh: And Robbie has learnt enough to know to avoid the North East of England! :P A fun way to tie up all the loose ends here, and fine, I roared with laughter at the ending, loved what Faeryfaye did there to Betsy! :laugh: As to that blue eyed blonde, halfway through the chapter, no idea who that reminds me of? :angel:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Was tempted to give more, for the way it ended, but dont want to boost Betsy's ego too much! :P

Thank you Merry. I'm glad you liked it. And I'm glad you liked that blue eyed blonde halfway through the chapter.
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #16 on: February 10, 2019, 04:25:39 pm »
Mr P, I have enough difficulty getting through updates of late, so I might take up the kind offer, but no promises made

Part 2

Detention in Stepford High

Maybe I need to apply for an admin job there? :laugh: Fine, I prefer my robot element in Stepford, but other than that, a fun story about a woman who is definitely going to become a better housewife than me. Is there a cookery school there? :angel:
High end of definitely enjoyed. Almost gave standard end, because of all the baby talk, but anyway...

Experiments In recruitment — N.C.U.

More hypno amusement, where not every plan to trance (or not trance) people doesnt quite go as planned. Its fun, and who wins the most 'slaves' in the end, we will have to wait and see.
Definitely enjoyed

I Have No Idea

Plenty of angst going on here, especially from Brian, and way too much baby talk for me. Probably a good job I'm too old for invites to the island, and far too old for babies! :laugh: Not a lot to grab me here in this update, but still sticking with it.
High end of enjoyed. Those more into sex and pregnancies would give it more, mind

Manual for Domination

Nice twist of sorts at the end, though I doubt it will help Jack at all? :laugh: At least if I ever need a submissive husband to worship me, I'll go arrange something with Greta! :laugh:
Definitely enjoyed

Stop Watch

Somehow I could hope the threesome would be with Emily, but I have little expectation of that! :laugh: Certainly some interesting sexual shenanigans going down here! Time stop stuff showed some interesting moments too
Definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #17 on: February 10, 2019, 04:51:03 pm »
Bimbo-Midas

So at long last, is Jimmy finally beginning to think through events? Loved the logic behind the build up to the orgy, and the new girl sounds cute (if clueless) too.
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #18 on: February 10, 2019, 06:23:35 pm »

The Glass Wall (mc ff) (new)  by SoVeryFascinated
A woman’s trip to the hypnotherapist is much more than it seems.

I liked this one. Found myself waiting for the twist, and enjoying each step along the way.
Shattering the wall felt maybe a little scary for my taste, but that doesn't detract from an engaging story with likeable characters.
Absolutely delightful. This story should be posted here too (although is not based in real events): https://charmedhypno.org/charmed-stories/

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #19 on: February 11, 2019, 12:11:41 am »
Betsy Visits River City is over? What's this "The End" business? We're only 48 chapters and 100,000 words into the story!  :)

Thoroughly enjoyed from start to finish.

Emily's Exorcism is off to a good start. There's so much going on here that we've yet to see, and it sounds interesting.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #20 on: February 11, 2019, 11:00:52 am »

Manual for Domination

Nice twist of sorts at the end, though I doubt it will help Jack at all? :laugh: At least if I ever need a submissive husband to worship me, I'll go arrange something with Greta! :laugh:
Definitely enjoyed


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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #21 on: February 11, 2019, 03:40:43 pm »
Betsy Visits River City is over? What's this "The End" business? We're only 48 chapters and 100,000 words into the story!  :)

Thoroughly enjoyed from start to finish.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #22 on: February 11, 2019, 03:42:51 pm »
No "Binding Rings" or "College Undercover", too bad.  The latter seems ready to be wrapped up.

I see "This Is Our Story" has finally gotten into overt mind control.  Good stuff.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #23 on: February 11, 2019, 05:39:03 pm »
Bimbo-Midas

So at long last, is Jimmy finally beginning to think through events? Loved the logic behind the build up to the orgy, and the new girl sounds cute (if clueless) too.
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #24 on: February 12, 2019, 12:44:54 am »
I see "This Is Our Story" has finally gotten into overt mind control.  Good stuff.

I know, took me long enough. I promised Simon up front that it would build to it and was a worthy placement on the archives, and he was kind enough to trust me. It only gets better (MC-wise) from here.  :D

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #25 on: February 12, 2019, 02:45:03 pm »
Bimbo-Midas (mc mf ff md gr) (2 new chapters)  by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.

Gosh golly, this is a fun story. I had my college fantasies -- clunkily writing some out in my earliest MC stories, but they were not even close to this fun. If I was in Jimmy's shoes, I might not even want to figure it all out! How many get the chance to be in a college orgy, let alone be the center of one? Jimmy is most certainly distracted. Plus, I just can't get enough of the reality distortion. Makes this just that much more wild.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #26 on: February 12, 2019, 03:08:07 pm »
The Allen’s House Party (mc mf md in) (new)  by Fiona69m
Ollie and Becky Allen throw a house party, which is infiltrated by Adolph Koch.

Must admit having nazi doctors as part of the backstory felt a little weird and random. A mind controller does not have to have a background quite like that! Anyway, this was definitely odd and oddly mysterious. I had trouble figuring out Koch's purpose for being there, beyond sex, but this turned out to be the first chapter. In the end, I think I'll give this the proverbial "no rating." Probably great for anyone looking for a male dominating diversion.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #27 on: February 12, 2019, 04:11:28 pm »
Emilia’s Exorcism (mc mf ff md fd ma bd ex) (new)  by malsagulo
A cranky young librarian gains access to a whole new world of pleasure when a deal with a witch lets her tap into the mind of an absolutely insatiable slut.

This looked pretty wild and kind of unique. I can't say I've read many MC stories that focussed on a librarian! Anyway, this gets right to it, and I respect that. The visuals, erotic or no, were vivid and engrossing. The Lovecraft reference with Miskatonic University being "defunct" but for its archives was wonderful! This was fun and darkly comedic. The perspective shifts were well done. My only complaint was how I was unable to find u/soft-n-slow under r/gonewild, but I don't normally find myself on Reddit :( Hopefully they will be more of this interesting story at some point!

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
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Emilia’s Exorcism (mc mf ff md fd ma bd ex) (new)  by malsagulo
A cranky young librarian gains access to a whole new world of pleasure when a deal with a witch lets her tap into the mind of an absolutely insatiable slut.

This looked pretty wild and kind of unique. I can't say I've read many MC stories that focussed on a librarian! Anyway, this gets right to it, and I respect that. The visuals, erotic or no, were vivid and engrossing... This was fun and darkly comedic. The perspective shifts were well done.

Really glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and for the review!

The Lovecraft reference with Miskatonic University being "defunct" but for its archives was wonderful!

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My only complaint was how I was unable to find u/soft-n-slow under r/gonewild, but I don't normally find myself on Reddit :(

Her profile is at: https://www.reddit.com/user/soft-n-slow/ (Maybe I should add in a link to it in the story text? Does Simon allow that?)

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Next two chapters are already sent to Simon for the next update. :) Thanks again!

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #29 on: February 12, 2019, 05:00:09 pm »
Part 3

Beyond the Door

Another wonderful story from the hand of Mr Cummings, this time with some very delightful time stopping involved. Very cleverly done, and only the full reveal at the end, even if we had a fair idea who might be behind the Storeroom door!
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But I Don’t Really Want This

And I probably wont bother to read this any more, as its going places that I really dont enjoy, in a humiliation sense. Shame, because I was enjoying it for quite a while, but then Will became a jerk, so...
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Girls Are Always Right

Not sure if I'd prefer my mind being tampered with by a Girl, or being made into one. Probably the latter, but anyway... Doesnt take too long for Noah to see things her way, thats for sure.
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The Hash

Will things work out here, as Jen is hoping? I hope so, but who knows. Enjoying this, though I do feel sorry about her route to the library, under the circumstances
Definitely enjoyed

An Immovable Object

Nano Man sounds like the sort of guy I wouldnt mind as a beau on Thursday. Maybe his nanobots could turn me into a nice shiny robot, or a young talented dancer, lol? Wasnt expecting Star Raven's fate to be as it was, but cleverly done. As to what was done to her, oh please...!
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #30 on: February 12, 2019, 06:14:51 pm »
An Immovable Object

Nano Man sounds like the sort of guy I wouldnt mind as a beau on Thursday. Maybe his nanobots could turn me into a nice shiny robot, or a young talented dancer, lol? Wasnt expecting Star Raven's fate to be as it was, but cleverly done. As to what was done to her, oh please...!
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #31 on: February 12, 2019, 11:54:44 pm »
Bimbo-Midas (mc mf ff md gr) (2 new chapters)  by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.

Gosh golly, this is a fun story. I had my college fantasies -- clunkily writing some out in my earliest MC stories, but they were not even close to this fun. If I was in Jimmy's shoes, I might not even want to figure it all out! How many get the chance to be in a college orgy, let alone be the center of one? Jimmy is most certainly distracted. Plus, I just can't get enough of the reality distortion. Makes this just that much more wild.

I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. The reality distortion was actually an easy writing choice: If family and other friends who are close to these women, noticed they were drastically changing, these other people would surely step in and do things to the women (such as hospitalizing them) that would ruin Jimmy's fun. So instead, these women's family and friends are convinced that Jimmy's women "always have been" this way.

Let's just hope that no mathematics major plays around with a computer and discovers that Tyudlurm University is in the 99.99999th percentile in terms of the percentage of the female-student population with GG-cup breasts. Then the jig might well be up.

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Joanna’s War (mc mf ff md fd ma) (new)  by Scalar Seventh
Joanna wakes up a convention for mind controllers with more than a little evidence that she’s been Altered, but no idea by whom, or when. Or why.

I really enjoyed this one, much as it's long for one update. The world make cohesive sense, the story was a fun slow reveal, and the characters were adorable and believable.
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
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Joanna’s War (mc mf ff md fd ma) (new)  by Scalar Seventh
Joanna wakes up a convention for mind controllers with more than a little evidence that she’s been Altered, but no idea by whom, or when. Or why.

I really enjoyed this one, much as it's long for one update. The world make cohesive sense, the story was a fun slow reveal, and the characters were adorable and believable.

Thanks! The length kind of got away from me. It was supposed to just be a nice, short mystery, but the characters really asserted themselves in odd ways. Leigh, especially, refused to keep quiet.

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« Reply #34 on: February 13, 2019, 02:15:28 pm »
Joanna’s War (mc mf ff md fd ma) (new)  by Scalar Seventh
Joanna wakes up a convention for mind controllers with more than a little evidence that she’s been Altered, but no idea by whom, or when. Or why.

I really enjoyed this one, much as it's long for one update. The world make cohesive sense, the story was a fun slow reveal, and the characters were adorable and believable.

Yeah, maybe having no update next weekend will let this reach some people who would otherwise have skipped it (hint hint). I'm not sure how well it would still work split in two or three chunks across multiple updates - as a subtle mystery, having all the details fresh is a big help...
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« Reply #35 on: February 13, 2019, 04:21:38 pm »
I mean, I'd consider "someone who graduated several years ago thinking that they're a high school student again" to be mind control...
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #36 on: February 13, 2019, 05:38:17 pm »
Joanna’s War (mc mf ff md fd ma) (new)  by Scalar Seventh
Joanna wakes up a convention for mind controllers with more than a little evidence that she’s been Altered, but no idea by whom, or when. Or why.

I really enjoyed this one, much as it's long for one update. The world make cohesive sense, the story was a fun slow reveal, and the characters were adorable and believable.

Yeah, maybe having no update next weekend will let this reach some people who would otherwise have skipped it (hint hint). I'm not sure how well it would still work split in two or three chunks across multiple updates - as a subtle mystery, having all the details fresh is a big help...

I've put it on a side list for now. In other words, if I get time, I've got a nudge to read it, if I dont, technically its beyond my limit. Probably going to depend as much on how well my back holds up, in terms of therapy sessions, as anything else. But yes, any other time, no chance. :angel:
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« Reply #37 on: February 14, 2019, 12:36:13 am »
I mean, I'd consider "someone who graduated several years ago thinking that they're a high school student again" to be mind control...
Truedat. Though arguably not erotic mind control? Either way, totally crossed that river now. Burned the boat, burned the bridge. We made it baby!

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« Reply #38 on: February 14, 2019, 12:59:01 am »
I mean, I'd consider "someone who graduated several years ago thinking that they're a high school student again" to be mind control...
Truedat. Though arguably not erotic mind control? Either way, totally crossed that river now. Burned the boat, burned the bridge. We made it baby!

Depends what they were like back in high school, I suppose.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #39 on: February 14, 2019, 03:54:58 am »
Betsy Visits River City was fantastic. I thoroughly enjoyed all of it, from start to finish. Sad, though, that it is at an end (unless a sequel is planned). Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.

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« Reply #40 on: February 14, 2019, 09:38:55 am »
I mean, I'd consider "someone who graduated several years ago thinking that they're a high school student again" to be mind control...
Truedat. Though arguably not erotic mind control? Either way, totally crossed that river now. Burned the boat, burned the bridge. We made it baby!

Depends what they were like back in high school, I suppose.
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #41 on: February 14, 2019, 11:23:11 am »
Part 4

Emilia’s Exorcism

OK, this was a lot of fun, though it definitely wouldnt be the life of a slut that I'd want to experience, lol. Could think of a few other things I'd love to find out what life is like, mind. ;) Definitely looking forward to reading more of this, I must say.
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The Glass Wall

Entertaining piece of hypno fun here, with a great twist in the finish, or more strictly, 2 twists! The whole set up drew me in nicely, then out comes 'reality' and... :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed

Making a Good Thing Better

Started out quite interesting, but as so often, the author goes off wildly into the world of tattoos, and piercings, and not in a sane way, and that finished it for me, didnt even care after that, even with a la tag to tempt me!
No rating, taste issues, in a big way!

Subliminal Toys

Desperately in need of a major edit, and I would say that with that (despite the incest), there might even be a decent story for me in here. Certainly looking forward to seeing where this goes from here
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Straight, at least, with a good edit.

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« Reply #42 on: February 14, 2019, 12:25:59 pm »
The Hash

Will things work out here, as Jen is hoping? I hope so, but who knows. Enjoying this, though I do feel sorry about her route to the library, under the circumstances
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #43 on: February 14, 2019, 05:01:32 pm »
Emilia’s Exorcism

OK, this was a lot of fun, though it definitely wouldnt be the life of a slut that I'd want to experience, lol. Could think of a few other things I'd love to find out what life is like, mind. ;) Definitely looking forward to reading more of this, I must say.
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #44 on: February 16, 2019, 09:29:48 am »
Pretty sure that it will, Malsagulo.

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Following Her Dream

Beyond the amusing game of tag, there wasnt a lot aimed at me in this chapter. Story is fine, just all the talk about sex, and the actual action just does very little for me.
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Those more into sex will give more.

Happy Valentine’s Day!

First of the 3 was pretty much a no interest for me, but the other 2 worked far better. For some reason, the sex demon one amused me the most. Thats not to say I'd mind the blonde sexbomb makeover, given the chance, but anyway...
Definitely enjoyed

Living Dead Girl

Couple of delightful moments with Gwen here, though somehow I dont think the issue of the Akert stone is finished just yet. Another great addition to the River City story lines.
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Subroutine (Kallie)

I'd love them to find out who did this to Lori, if only so they could do the same to me! Though having said that, Harper may have found out the secret already! :laugh: This is a wonderful story, but yes, absolutely, I'd love to be droned in the same way.
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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #45 on: February 16, 2019, 03:28:31 pm »
Following Her Dream

Beyond the amusing game of tag, there wasnt a lot aimed at me in this chapter. Story is fine, just all the talk about sex, and the actual action just does very little for me.
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Those more into sex will give more.

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Re: New Releases-February 9th 2019
« Reply #46 on: February 16, 2019, 03:52:46 pm »
I am only one fragment of the reading market, its just that an asexual old biddy is one of those that comments the most :laugh: Oh, I'll read it out, to see how it all plays out in the end, dont worry
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« Reply #47 on: March 07, 2019, 05:04:30 pm »

Girls Are Always Right (mc mf fd rb) (new)  by Jukebox
Noah’s therapist comes up with an unconventional way to break through his deflection tactics.

Ouch, goddammit I had to register here just so I can say "ouch goddammit" over this story.  I've liked the 'girl' storyline in the past, and I usually don't mind the preachiness in these because it usually works.

But this one, ouch goddammit. 

At first I was like, this is gonna be a good one of this type of story, and it was.  I like the formula, the recurring 'girl' character, I like the framework for the reversal, the slow seduction over the length of the story, I usually even come to enjoy the condenscension because it fits with the world of the story.  Mostly I've liked these because of the 'extreme travel arc' the victim goes on.  From extremely hostile, trapped, terrified, etc onwards to inevitable enthrallment.  It's just been a great story device from the get-go.

The story grew hotter and even though Jukebox was plucking a raw nerve with the theme, I was onboard, because who really can't relate? 

But then that world is shattered for me at the end when the 'girl' drops the line "we're gonna put you on medication."   ??? Oh hell no dude.  I read these stories as an escape from -that- world.  Ouch, goddammit.  It wasn't even done in that kind of 'fetish nurse' kind of way, it was in the "ambiguously benevolent 'girl'" theme that's used in other similar stories.

Supernatural alien technology sex robots who seduce the world one by one and nurture and care for their 'victims' to bring them to a better existence is awesome in theme, almost spiritual. 

Somehow I always imagined them lifting people out of the rat-race of free will up into a sort of life of service that's its own medicine - even if it's a life of quasi enslavement to some aliens. 

Using this archetype (or whatever you call it) to lure the mc victim into taking psych meds 'for his own good' was a horrifying twist of betrayal.  The goddess/therapist figure here is supposed to save and yet enslave the victim, not play cheap social worker. Ouch, just do the protagonist a favor and kill him off instead.  Maybe it's partly my personal baggage, but it was gut-wrenching to see the 'girl' character go there. 

On the other hand, the protagonist was a prick, so part of me kind of thought it was fitting that he be shoved off into drug therapy instead of getting the genuine "benevolent enslavement" therapy of stories' past.   I guess maybe the lesson here is "don't be that kind of a prick." but ouch, dammit.

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