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New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year
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Alterations: Kathryn’s Confidence (mc mf md) (new)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
A businesswoman visits an alterations parlor for a much-needed confidence boost.

Betsy Visits River City (mc mf ff mm md fd ds bd gr be rb ts sc cb hu) (4 new chapters)  by Betsy Leohtar
Betsy finds herself in River City and is shocked to discover it’s infested with super heroes who will try to stop her doing her own lawful work.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Building a New Home (mc mf ff md) (revised)  by Farleven
A stranger places a magic spell on Jenny, Bell and Wendy.

Choose Your Own Transformation: The Cult of You (mc mf) (new)  by TheWeaver
A quartet of nerds team up to use the power of one of the Weaver’s Choose Your Own Transformation stories in a coordinated effort to take control of bullies who have tormented them.

Christopher, Craig & Co. (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by SoxnTies
The sequel to “Christopher & Craig” and “Campus Case Study”.

The Club (Roboman127) (mc ff rb sf) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
Emma goes to a familiar club, but there is more going on than meets the eye.

College Undercover (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.

Douchebag Teen (mc mf md ma hm) (1 new chapter)  by Special Programmer
A teen with a MILF fetish has some fun with 2 shoppers and then their husbands.

Dr. J.Eckels and Mrs. Whore (mc mf fd gr) (3 new chapters)  by Rikimaru
The strange case of a brilliant scientist involved in a lab accident, who begins to experience episodes where she isn’t quite herself...

Editing Reality Book One: Naughty Fantasies Created (mc mf gr in ts) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Following Her Dream (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Shadra
Janet takes the necessary steps towards obtaining her dream girl.

Gabby the Gray (mc ff mf) (3 new chapters)  by SoVeryFascinated
At nineteen years old, Queen Gabrielle de Vess fears she is too young to assume her mother’s crown. But a chance encounter with a mysterious hypnotist will change her perceptions forever.

The Hash (mc ma md ds ex) (1 new chapter)  by Angel Raymond
Jen likes to explore, using the chaos of a hash function to visit random places. But this game becomes more interesting than just mathematics when it leads her to meet a mysterious hypnotist on a small island.

I Just Can’t Say No (mc mf ff md in ds rb) (new)  by Raptor4d4
Poor Sally is such a people-pleaser! She just can’t say no to anyone. Especially her boyfriend...even as he seeks a threesome with him, Sally and Sally’s twin sister using very “special” means..”

Kary, The Friendly Teenage Ghost (mc mf ff ma hm) (new)  by Mania
Sometime in eighties a local girl was cruelly pranked at the big school dance when it turned out her date asked her out on a dare. She still haunts the town to this day.

Losers Can’t Be Choosers (mc mf fd hm) (1 new chapter)  by S. B.
As much as he enjoys it, Jonah knows he’s addicted to femdom humiliation. Perhaps his sister Angela, a skilled hypnotherapist, can help him with that.

Marital Strain (mc mf gr) (1 new chapter)  by Limerick
Amanda and Joseph’s new marriage comes under pressure when they move to a new town.

The Mark of P (mc mf md fd gr) (new)  by HB5211
A young detective takes on the case of missing women who mysteriously reappear with no knowledge of what happened to them.  They share one thing in common. All are branded with the letter “P” on their inner thigh.

My New Salon (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Robert Towers
Madeleine is convinced by her roommate to try several new things.

New Coach (mc mm) (new)  by Wrestlr
The new coach has a plan for rebuilding the wrestling team.

Orbs of Power (mc mf fd) (new)  by pillevalium
Erik wants to have a serious conversation with Ioana about the memory lapses he’s been having.

Roman’s Girls (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Sinistra
A maid for hire catches a break when Roman Dalton, a multi-millionaire, requests her cleaning services specifically. Initially she finds herself in one of the sleekest, cleanest mansions she’s ever seen—but things are about to get a whole lot dirtier.

Saint Barbra’s Reform School (mc mf md) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Lidia’s best friend was kicked out of college and sent away to a reform school, but something seems wrong as she hasn’t heard from her in months.

Sanctuary (Wrestlr) (mc mm) (new)  by Wrestlr
A small-town crook stumbles upon a haven for special people.

Spellthief Stolen (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
All she has to do is cross a garden, climb a tower, steal some spells, and get out. Just another job. Nothing simpler.

This Is Our Story (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.

Unlimited (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
A hypnotist recounts the final sessions with his sister.

Vertigo (mc) (new)  by Jukebox
A screen on the floor provides a dizzying illusion of endless descent for one hapless woman.

Web of Trust (mc mm in) (1 new chapter)  by RobinHood70
A hypnotist builds his personal harem, while his boyfriend believes they’re monogamous.

Weight of Authority: A Reyna Story (mc ff hm) (new)  by Trixie Adara
Reyna gives the Christmas gift of relaxation and submission.
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Re: New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year
« Reply #1 on: January 05, 2019, 05:18:47 pm »
If the sexiest part of "College Undercover" was the part where Carol and the other whore program each other in the police station, the second sexiest part was the part where Carol programs the new whore.  Enjoyed this installment the first time around and I'm still enjoying it.

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Re: New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year
« Reply #2 on: January 05, 2019, 11:16:36 pm »
Had a chance to look at few stories so far.  My thoughts:

GreyScribblers College Undercover keeps on rolling with great content as usual. Man, this was a dark chapter, that's saying something for a story that is pretty dark all around.

Carol/Stephanie now turned Copeland in dealing with Brenda!!! The saddest part is her Stephanie side tries to rationalize it to her Carol side, but she knows what she did and how wrong it is. How does she come back from that? How does she not get destroyed by what she's becoming and doing? For the first time in this story I realize Carol, all of Carol, may disappear for good.

Also had to look at one of my other favorite stories, Shadra's Following Her Dream. You know, reading this last chapter I couldn't help but think back how far this story has come and the great road Shadra has taken it from the start to now.

I remembered various parts of the story: the vivacious, fun loving, confident extrovert Rachel with her roommate and tight friend, the more introverted, unsure Janet. Janet's obsession with Melanie. The device Janet made to allow her to follow her dream, now turned nightmare. The toothbrush scene that first started to put cracks in Rachel personality and change her.

That amazing, so hot scene of Professor Gilio giving Rachel that test with ever harder questions and the "punishment" for a wrong answer. Then the innocent visit to Violets store, where Janet was trying to give Rachel a taste of what she now craved. A visit that would change everything. And that great plot device of Rachel's diary, showing her what was being done to her in trance that would lead to her and Janet's current plight. That was really clever. And of course the evil, Violent and what she has done to Rachel and whatever new plans she has for Janet and who knows (Shadra knows) what else. And well, Janet, if you are thirsty, you know where to drink from. Classic.

Another thing I love about this story is the detail Shadra gives Rachel and the others about what they think and how they feel, in trance and out. The use of the diaries contents to break down Rachel when she realizes her best friend has done something awful to her and then how the predatory Violet used Rachel's fear and emotional state to make her doubt what was true about anything in her life to manipulate here was so good.

All these things and so many more occurring over the the breath of the story and all so well thought out and written. Oh and yeah, Shadra writes MC so fucking hot. Her descriptions of Rachel and how she acts and what she "thinks" under control are terrific. Same with Melanie.

And this chapter was another great one. Shadra leaves us hanging with a blue haired girl in a bar picking up another girl. But who is this blue haired girl? Is it Violet who has blue hair? Has to be her, right? Or.....was it Rachel, on the mission Violet sent her on? Or is it Janet, as the girl claimed to be? We don't know so we will have to wait to find out. Who doesn't love a mystery on top of an already great story.

We all have different tastes in stories and MC kink. But if you like involved interesting plot driven stories with great characters and hot as hell MC, this story is for you.

Thanks again Shadra. Top shelf. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
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Re: New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2019, 04:37:22 am »
The Mark of P (mc mf md fd gr) (new)  by HB5211
A young detective takes on the case of missing women who mysteriously reappear with no knowledge of what happened to them.  They share one thing in common. All are branded with the letter “P” on their inner thigh.
This one has a great start; really grabbed my attention. Now if I could just get a chance to read without family disturbances; must have started it 3 or 4 times now.
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« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2019, 10:10:00 am »
Getting started

Betsy Visits River City

At least Billie hasnt (yet) met anyone from her own era, who knew her then, that might ask tricky questions! :laugh: Sounds like Joystick might appeal to a few ladies, hmm? ;) So will he sort out the monster, will he satisfy a lady (or more)'s needs? As entertaining as ever, for sure.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Binding Rings

Getting more interesting here, as things build up between Jason, and Sarah. Will be interesting to see how this develops more. As to whether his mother comes into all this, who knows? Well written, and so far I'm surviving the sex stuff with his aunt, not quite sure why?
High end of definitely enjoyed

The Hash

Fine, if I was Jen, I wouldnt mind meeting up with Eric again too, and being hypnotized by him. Seems a lovable charmer, and she's sweet too. Nice feelgood story here.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Thing with this is, 'Clarissa' quite likes the idea of being turned into a latex clad drone! ;) So, if it doesnt happen for real, in the 'production', can we at least have a minds eye picture, lol? :angel: Or backfires, latex clad Domme? Gail continues to play naughty, I only hope justice comes into play at the end, but we will see? And then of course, there is Nick, Angela, and maybe Gail butting her nose in, hmm?
High end of definitely enjoyed. Sorry, cant afford the Patron stuff, however much I'd love to know what happens next to Clarissa!

Vertigo

Certainly an interesting piece, not sure if I'd enjoy, or hate having that done to me, in truth? Yes, fine, the end is inevitable, but its a clever route to get there
Definitely enjoyed

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« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2019, 11:21:15 am »
SoVeryFascinated's Gabby the Gray gets more fun with every chapter. The mind control conspiracy broadens even as our heroine starts to find the strength to break free (or does she?)

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Re: New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year
« Reply #6 on: January 06, 2019, 11:53:09 am »
This Is Our Story (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.

I'm still enjoying this story a lot. In Chapter 2, fattie-turned-hottie Hailey gives an inept blowjob (it's her first time), but at least she's willing. Knowing Ice Bear, Hailey's fellatio skills will get much better.

I have a question for Ice Bear: When Hayleigh (the slim, toned, busty goddess of the school) and Hailey (the fat, flabby loser) got their bodies switched, did they keep all of their old personalities and attitudes? Will now-fat Hayleigh hit the gym, while now-shapely Hailey overeats, skips workouts, and eventually becomes fat and flabby? Or did the body-swap also swap each girl's attitudes toward her body, so that Hailey, even as she otherwise still thinks like a desperate loser, is a gym rat now?

The reason for my question: Everybody but Conner thinks that each girl has "always" looked this way. But to "explain" why Hailey is slim and toned, she would have to have a gym-rat lifestyle, which is not her own (former) lifestyle, it's the lifestyle that Hayleigh had before the swap. Similarly, to "explain" Hayleigh's now-obese body, she would have to have the practices of a fat person, practices which came from Hailey.

Or maybe the body-swapping magic also locks in each girl's body? This would mean that no matter how Hailey pigs out and skips workouts, she will always be slim and toned; while Hayleigh could exercise till Doomsday and not lose an ounce or an inch.
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« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2019, 04:11:39 pm »
If the sexiest part of "College Undercover" was the part where Carol and the other whore program each other in the police station, the second sexiest part was the part where Carol programs the new whore.  Enjoyed this installment the first time around and I'm still enjoying it.

Thanks Gyrd.  Hope you keep enjoying it.

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« Reply #8 on: January 06, 2019, 04:13:42 pm »
GreyScribblers College Undercover keeps on rolling with great content as usual. Man, this was a dark chapter, that's saying something for a story that is pretty dark all around.

Carol/Stephanie now turned Copeland in dealing with Brenda!!! The saddest part is her Stephanie side tries to rationalize it to her Carol side, but she knows what she did and how wrong it is. How does she come back from that? How does she not get destroyed by what she's becoming and doing? For the first time in this story I realize Carol, all of Carol, may disappear for good.

Thanks CerebusOne.  We still have a few twists and turns to go.  let's see where we end up.

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« Reply #9 on: January 06, 2019, 04:35:44 pm »
Part 2

Dr. J.Eckels and Mrs. Whore

Oh fine, I loved the ending! I hope that doesnt act as too much of a spoiler to some, but I had to say it. Brilliant compromise out to the whole situation. Mind, I could probably do with that stuff being used on me, might get me a whole new social life, and marriage!
High end of definitely enjoyed

Following Her Dream

Is it terrible that I want Rachel to come out on top here? She's the only one of the main trio I like! I'll give credit, nice workaround by Violet, with Janet, but beyond that, not really my scene. Oh, fine, a Klara appearing at the end amused me too! :laugh: Even more amusing if she turns out to be heroine material?
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Almost got a straight, but I'll hold judgement for when Klara appears again! :angel:

Kary, The Friendly Teenage Ghost

Cant see much here to interest me, but I'll give it one more try for sure. Nothing wrong with writing, just really a story that doesnt appeal to my tastes so far.
No rating, tastes issues.

Roman’s Girls

Is it wrong that guys like Roman make me swoon, and want to fall at his feet, and obey his wishes? Not that he's ever going to want a partially disabled 60 year old (getting more disabled by the week, sadly), but other than that...Oh goodness, can I have an interview, any tenuous reason will do! Writing is pretty good, the man is the style this old submissive loves. Ah well...
High end of definitely enjoyed. Did think of giving lower, so that he demands an interview, to put me right, but I'll behave! :angel:

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« Reply #10 on: January 06, 2019, 04:44:49 pm »
The Mark of P (mc mf md fd gr) (new)  by HB5211
A young detective takes on the case of missing women who mysteriously reappear with no knowledge of what happened to them.  They share one thing in common. All are branded with the letter “P” on their inner thigh.
This one has a great start; really grabbed my attention. Now if I could just get a chance to read without family disturbances; must have started it 3 or 4 times now.

Agreed! I'm always down for a dark abduction emc story. My "beggars can't be choosers" comment is that I wish it was longer. I would have loved to see more words devoted to
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« Reply #11 on: January 06, 2019, 05:35:31 pm »
Got a chance to read a few more stories today.

Since I trust 321 and love 321's writing I wanted to check out SoVeryFascinated's Gabby The Gray.

321 was right. This is an amazing story that gets better and better. The world building, characters you fall in love with, Gabrielle, the new queen, her stalwart protector Angela, the traveling hypnotist Prudence and a whole host of other characters, the winding, interesting plot, the terrific, subtle mind control, the attention to detail in dialogue and description, it's all here. The time, effort and thought put into this story has to be tremendous and it shows. Great, great stuff. Once you get into the plot you can't stop reading. The writing itself is highly sophisticated and top notch. Very unusual in the best possible way. This is a GREAT story in all possible ways.

HB5211's The Mark of Phas a very clever, original plot and it is done very well. The mind control in this story is just flat out excellent hot as a detective tries to find out what happens to returned women. She does. And we get the reward for it.



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Re: New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year
« Reply #12 on: January 06, 2019, 05:44:58 pm »
Betsy Visits River City

At least Billie hasnt (yet) met anyone from her own era, who knew her then, that might ask tricky questions! :laugh: Sounds like Joystick might appeal to a few ladies, hmm? ;) So will he sort out the monster, will he satisfy a lady (or more)'s needs? As entertaining as ever, for sure.
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« Reply #13 on: January 06, 2019, 05:50:39 pm »
Since I trust 321 and love 321's writing I wanted to check out SoVeryFascinated's Gabby The Gray.

321 was right. This is an amazing story that gets better and better. The world building, characters you fall in love with, the winding, interesting plot, the MC, the attention to detail in dialogue and description, it's all here. The time, effort and thought put into this story has to be tremendous and it shows. Great, great stuff. Once you get into the plot you can't stop reading. The writing itself is highly sophisticated and top notch. Very unusual in the best possible way.

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« Reply #15 on: January 06, 2019, 11:39:06 pm »
This Is Our Story (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.

I'm still enjoying this story a lot. In Chapter 2, fattie-turned-hottie Hailey gives an inept blowjob (it's her first time), but at least she's willing. Knowing Ice Bear, Hailey's fellatio skills will get much better.

I have a question for Ice Bear: When Hayleigh (the slim, toned, busty goddess of the school) and Hailey (the fat, flabby loser) got their bodies switched, did they keep all of their old personalities and attitudes? Will now-fat Hayleigh hit the gym, while now-shapely Hailey overeats, skips workouts, and eventually becomes fat and flabby? Or did the body-swap also swap each girl's attitudes toward her body, so that Hailey, even as she otherwise still thinks like a desperate loser, is a gym rat now?

The reason for my question: Everybody but Conner thinks that each girl has "always" looked this way. But to "explain" why Hailey is slim and toned, she would have to have a gym-rat lifestyle, which is not her own (former) lifestyle, it's the lifestyle that Hayleigh had before the swap. Similarly, to "explain" Hayleigh's now-obese body, she would have to have the practices of a fat person, practices which came from Hailey.

Or maybe the body-swapping magic also locks in each girl's body? This would mean that no matter how Hailey pigs out and skips workouts, she will always be slim and toned; while Hayleigh could exercise till Doomsday and not lose an ounce or an inch.
This is actually a thing Conner briefly ruminates on during book 2, as he notes that, with months having gone by, Hailey doesn't seem to have backslid. iirc there's some mention of how Hailey's frustrated that her efforts to slim down still don't seem to be yielding results, while Hayleigh is still working hard to maintain her figure. The TIOS program is usually pretty literal about interpreting/enforcing its editor-in-chief's commands (whether or not he realizes he's made them).

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Douchebag Teen (mc mf md ma hm) (1 new chapter)  by Special Programmer
A teen with a MILF fetish has some fun with 2 shoppers and then their husbands.

This chapter was one I was looking forward to and it did not disappoint! It was definitely one of the possible conclusions I wanted to see and it read better than I could ever write. I had to read some of Special Programmer's other stories just to process how great a read it was. Thank you so much for that one.
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Re: New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year
« Reply #17 on: January 07, 2019, 02:06:02 am »
I'm enjoying "This Is Our Story" but not sure it counts as mind control.

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« Reply #18 on: January 07, 2019, 10:02:50 am »
Simon has traditionally allowed body-swap stories. It's a new body being controlled by a mind that's not its own, plus it has a Master PC-esque plot (and who knows where it's going). The protagonist "controlled" the body of two people, making them swap - if you try to break down mind control to exclude "body control", you're quickly going to run into trouble.

I got some confused emails about Mad Monday, asking if the daughter was really behind the whole thing or whatever, because otherwise how was it mind control? I tried to play up the hormones aspect in that story, make sure that the mother was being "controlled" by something she wasn't used to, but ultimately it's a body-swap story. (As is my non-EMCSA story "Jake and Jess", which has a brother and sister swapping bodies - I figured Simon wouldn't allow it because of the gender switch.)
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« Reply #19 on: January 08, 2019, 09:10:53 am »
I'm enjoying "This Is Our Story" but not sure it counts as mind control.

What Pan said, and also fwiw, the story definitely incorporates some more traditional/up-front sorts of control before long. Wouldn't be much of an mc novel if there was a body swap in chapter 1 and that's as far as it went.  :)

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« Reply #20 on: January 08, 2019, 03:23:21 pm »
Well, like I said, "This Is Our Story" is pretty great but mind control seems to me to require a mind being controlled which this story does not have (yet).  Neither does "Mad Monday".  Just a matter of opinion; I disagree with the notion that body swap is mind control.

I look forward to reading the next installment, don't get me wrong.  And it does seem likely that there will be more to the story, since we can't very well have the protagonist play "swap bodies of different women into the one chick who had a crush on me" every time.  And there's certainly been a lot of foreshadowing with the teacher, the stepmom, the stepsister...

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In other news, "Binding Rings" still chugging along very nicely.  I was hoping to read more about the mom in this installment after the cliffhanger from two weeks earlier, but what we did have with the aunt was very very hot.  Something else to look forward to.

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« Reply #21 on: January 09, 2019, 09:30:17 am »
I think (not trying to be argumentative; this is an interesting subject to me) a case could be made for the girl being mind-controlled - she thinks that her body is wholly unlike what it actually is. How does one do that without any aspect of controlling a mind?

EDIT: And, similarly, everyone in school (bar the main character) believes that her old body is hawwt.
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« Reply #22 on: January 09, 2019, 11:27:59 am »
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Whether I find the story truly erotic or not, Jukebox usually makes the story so vivid that I love it anyway. That is Vertigo from the start. It was not that it was obvious what was happening to the woman, because we wanted to know everything that was happening to her. I remember watching a stage hypnotist years ago that said something rather profound: the people that think they can't be hypnotized -- or think they are fully resistant -- might just be easier to put under. Those comments suggested that our assumed resistance can be used against us, and my interpretation is that we are thus thinking so actively that our subconscious is fully unprotected. The apparent victim in Vertigo certainly attempted resistance to her hypnotic situation. Right from the start, however, it was impossible to tell if she was  thinking she was resisting or if she was told to think she was resisting. Such disorientation is integral to any hypnotic scene, especially when told in the third person. Now, to be honest, I tend to find mind control to be erotic when it is merely the catalyst to erotic things. However, pleasure was not necessarily the point of the story here. Well, maybe there was no way to know for sure ... ;)

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« Reply #23 on: January 10, 2019, 09:59:36 am »
Part 3

Alterations: Kathryn’s Confidence

I could do with someone paying for me to go to this place, or finding the money to go myself, anyway... Fine, I'm sure the alterations cant turn a 60 year old into a young sex kitten, but besides that...But yes, regardless of that, for assistance with acting (or dancing) roles, oh please... Fine, I'd love having that done to me, even if he is being naughty, oh fine, it appeals! ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed. Almost got more, but an appointment could secure that, shall we say...? ;)

I Just Can’t Say No

Unfortunately, I could quite easily say no. Much though I'd love to be put in 'drone mode', Jim is a lot of a jerk, to put it mildly. Obviously, if he wants to try and change my opinion? :laugh: Not too many points for subtlety, I must say. Bimbo fans will get slightly more from this than me.
I'll give it enjoyed, but that really relates to the concept of drone mode, and processing, and little else.

Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
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This Is Our Story

This is more body swap, than mind control at this point, but I really dont care. Hailey sounds so much like she deserves something good happening in her life, just love it. And fine, Conner is the type of guy who deserves a good break too. I also love the way the author is thinking through side matters (organ transplant as example), as well as the standard stuff. If he wants to somehow arrange a body swap for me, before March, with a young Ginger Rodgers, or my avvie, I'd much appreciate it, lol!
Another that I could easily give slightly more to, but I'll stick with high end of definitely enjoyed for now

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« Reply #24 on: January 10, 2019, 01:28:18 pm »
Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
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« Reply #25 on: January 10, 2019, 02:19:44 pm »
This Is Our Story

This is more body swap, than mind control at this point, but I really dont care. Hailey sounds so much like she deserves something good happening in her life, just love it. And fine, Conner is the type of guy who deserves a good break too. I also love the way the author is thinking through side matters (organ transplant as example), as well as the standard stuff. If he wants to somehow arrange a body swap for me, before March, with a young Ginger Rodgers, or my avvie, I'd much appreciate it, lol!
Another that I could easily give slightly more to, but I'll stick with high end of definitely enjoyed for now

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« Reply #26 on: January 10, 2019, 04:50:30 pm »
And so to complete

Choose Your Own Transformation: The Cult of You

4 permutations on the cult for the price of 1. Usual mixed bag, Aurora would be my fave, Wesley no interest at all, other 2 in between. If the CYOT formula appeals to you, you'll find something here to like, and something you probably wont.
Definitely enjoyed, very much a compromise mark

Gabby the Gray

Well, as long as the Seers meet a horrible fate in the end, I'll live with it, I guess? Some good moments here, some I disliked too. Certainly gripped to find out who wins in the end, all the same.
Low end of definitely enjoyed, after length markdown

The Mark of P

Thank goodness I'm too old to be desired, and too old to get pregnant! :laugh: Another where you know the formula, and how much of it you can take. Its been a while, so survived so far at least. But if the next chapter is more of the same formula...? :sleepy:
Low end of definitely enjoyed

Spellthief Stolen

This was always on a length limit, and in truth, showed nothing in the first half to really interest me at all. Shorter, I'd have pushed on, but nearly 15K, not going to happen!
No rating, length reasoning

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« Reply #27 on: January 10, 2019, 07:36:00 pm »
Spellthief Stolen

This was always on a length limit, and in truth, showed nothing in the first half to really interest me at all. Shorter, I'd have pushed on, but nearly 15K, not going to happen!
No rating, length reasoning

I'm enjoying it so far, but it does look like it's settling in for the long haul...
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« Reply #28 on: January 10, 2019, 08:10:27 pm »
I Just Can’t Say No

Unfortunately, I could quite easily say no. Much though I'd love to be put in 'drone mode', Jim is a lot of a jerk, to put it mildly. Obviously, if he wants to try and change my opinion? :laugh: Not too many points for subtlety, I must say. Bimbo fans will get slightly more from this than me.
I'll give it enjoyed, but that really relates to the concept of drone mode, and processing, and little else.

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« Reply #29 on: January 11, 2019, 03:01:16 am »
I hope they will do too. Will have appealed to others, for sure, anyway
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« Reply #30 on: January 11, 2019, 10:06:21 am »
Alterations: Kathryn’s Confidence

I could do with someone paying for me to go to this place, or finding the money to go myself, anyway... Fine, I'm sure the alterations cant turn a 60 year old into a young sex kitten, but besides that...But yes, regardless of that, for assistance with acting (or dancing) roles, oh please... Fine, I'd love having that done to me, even if he is being naughty, oh fine, it appeals! ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed. Almost got more, but an appointment could secure that, shall we say...? ;)

Thank you, Merry! My co-author Scalar took the lead on this one, and it was a ton of fun to put together. We're both really excited to show people more of the Alterations world soon! I totally understand your length qualm in regards to Spellthief Stolen as well, for what it's worth. Thank you for having a look nonetheless. :)

I'm enjoying it so far, but it does look like it's settling in for the long haul...

I'm glad to hear you've liked it, grey_shadow! This story is/was my first writing project, big or small, and I might have bitten off more than I should've first chewed, but I think it turned out well. :) It's got a pretty strong length (though not every chapter is 15,000 words long), so I hope people enjoy it and it manages to keep interest in the coming weeks.

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« Reply #31 on: January 11, 2019, 04:45:42 pm »
Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
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Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day ;)

Well that was horrible ;)

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« Reply #32 on: January 11, 2019, 04:58:32 pm »
Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day ;)

Well that was horrible ;)

I've submitted an update to Simon, hopefully it's better this time around :)

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« Reply #33 on: January 12, 2019, 08:24:22 am »

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Thing with this is, 'Clarissa' quite likes the idea of being turned into a latex clad drone! ;) So, if it doesnt happen for real, in the 'production', can we at least have a minds eye picture, lol? :angel: Or backfires, latex clad Domme? Gail continues to play naughty, I only hope justice comes into play at the end, but we will see? And then of course, there is Nick, Angela, and maybe Gail butting her nose in, hmm?
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« Reply #34 on: January 12, 2019, 06:09:51 pm »
Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day ;)

Well that was horrible ;)

I've submitted an update to Simon, hopefully it's better this time around :)

Might be wise, or you might get sent to the reform school, heaven forbid! :P

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