Produced a somewhat longer short (and still didn't fit it all in... so there will be episodes) -
Sub Rosa Episode One.
It's an idea I've had bouncing around in my head (and on my speculation folder) for a while... not sure how many parts it'll have but I'll go ahead and shut down any speculation... it's NOT going serial recruitment. The guy's on the run from Liberforge, who experimented on him. He hides from them by hopping golf/work widows through their network of friends (because the shadowy forces hunting him know he can't control men). One at a time - he can't handle a herd or make permanent changes.
Anyhow, if you're still reading, I have a bit of a weird question to ask about "The Caretaker" - only for those who've watched and enjoy it.
The main storylines are set (Mr. Sully, Iris, and Brad) through to the end of the story... and I know the things I've set up and want to pay off. However, I've got author-blindness.
I don't see the setups I've UNINTENTIONALLY set up. And that brings me to my ask:
What have I set up in the story that you want to see paid off?I don't want to miss them because, once I'm done with this one, I won't be revisiting it for a while (I made a HUGE mistake choosing THIS slow-burn, iterative story as my THIRD effort... but I'm committed to finishing.

). If you've read any of my "mind control porn" reviews (see below if you haven't) - you might notice that I make a lot of wishes while I watch stuff... often to be disappointed because it's 5 minutes of story and 55 minutes of banging. Well, I'm the opposite... 95% story and 5% non-porn-porn.
What's your favorite, un-resolved setup in my story so far? If I can incorporate them into the decisions I've already made, I will try to pay them off (as long as they are already set up... I'm not intentionally setting up ANYTHING else... I'm just asking for payoffs because I KNOW I'm missing some).
Thanks in advance, although I know I'll thank you again if you post.
