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New Releases-July 27th 2019
« on: July 27, 2019, 12:28:17 pm »
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Adaptation (Jukebox) (mc mf fd) (new)  by Jukebox
Luisa gives Chad a little biology lesson. But this is less about the birds and the bees than about gradualism, saltation, and the changes that are coming for the human race.

Animal Husbandry (mc mf ff md in be) (new)  by Adam Lily
With the help of a partner, the protagonist from Cleaning Time and Dogged in the Dirt begins expanding his stable of experimental subjects.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Crossings (mc mf fd ft) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Memory and reason restored, a man mastering magic journeys to new destinations, encountering ever more irresistible women.

Deep Undercover (mc mf md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Paul is a private eye who dabbles in hypnosis. Cassie is his beautiful client. But there’s more to their relationship—and their case—than meets the eye.

Dick Picture Perfect (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Will sends a dick pic to a girl, knowing that she would hate it. But it turns out that every woman who sees that picture needs more of it.

Dios (mc mf mm md) (new)  by Chrysostomon
A god decides to impregnate a young lady.

Editing Reality Book Two: Sultry Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

First Meeting (scifiscribbler) (mc mf md) (new)  by scifiscribbler
Mark and Debbie repeatedly meet for the first time at the same restaurant.

From the Sea (mc mf ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Toxic waste causes a new life form to spread and multiply.

The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
A continued look at the marriage of Elle and her hypnotically enslaved husband Louis.

Ghost Boy (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

Hostel (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Invasion of the Breast Girls (mc ff fd rb) (new)  by Roboman127
Alien entities come to Earth in small objects to possess suitable Earth Women and conquer.

Kat and Mouse (mc ff) (new)  by SoVeryFascinated
Kat and Marisa love to play around with hypnosis. But their encounter with a mysterious music file is no game.

Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

Man Pleaser (mc mf ma hm sf) (new)  by staricide89
Justine is a neural programmer who gets a job to create the perfect man pleaser.

The Mask Becomes You (mc ff mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Two college students discover a strange mask that makes the words of the wearer irresistible. They soon discover that it’s even hard to resist using the mask, and that the wearer’s thoughts may no longer be their own...

Massaged By My Nerdy Brother (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by BurroGirl18 and Pan
A few innocent massages with her brother goes too far.

Mirrors (mc mf fd) (new)  by Meleva
A woman, suffering from an unspecified malady, finds comfort in an extended stay in an isolated cottage. Only, there’s something strange about all of these mirrors…

Nina’s Revenge (mc mf ff fd) (new)  by Anonymous-047
Shana, a brilliant doctor has a very jealous sister called Nina that has had enough of living under her shadow of brilliance. She decides its time that Shana became the shadow, or even less.

Poetry & Blood (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Trixie Adara
Laura gets a new job for a strange romance writer that seems to be too good to be true.

Psycho the Rapist (mc mf md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
An unethical psychotherapist uses a strange syrum to control his family, and his patients.

Relaxation Therapy — Expanded Functions (mc mf md ds gr) (new)  by Incubi
Testing out a new prototype expands Catherine’s horizons in ways she never would have expected.

Simple and Straightforward (mc ff ma) (new)  by nevermind
Marie and Aurelia are doing scientific experiments when something that should have been a routine procedure goes wrong on so many levels.

A Song in the Rain (mc) (new)  by S. B.
What is this mysterious song only Darren hears and why?

Split Slave (mc ff ma bd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Skaetlett
Delta, a non-binary, kidnapped sex slave with a protective alternate personality, gets auctioned off to a multimillionaire who seems to have more in store than they’re ready for. Their Mistress thinks she knows everything about them and is wrong.

Subroutine (Kallie) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
Lori, a college student, discovers she has a hypnotic trigger that turns her into a mindless, obedient drone. How? Why? And what’s going to happen when her roommate finds out?

Tessa’s Jewels (mc mf fd) (new)  by SleepyTheSleeper
A woman walks into a jewelry store and proceeds to hypnotize the owner and staff.

Under the Gun (mc ff cb) (new)  by chris.lionofthenorth
A gun-wielding superheroine is captured by a hypnotic villain. Will she fall to the same fate as the former hero Ronin?

Uniforms Control Your Mind (mc ff mf fd in rb ma ds ft) (3 new chapters)  by Mr. Scade
A series of short flashes where we dwell into the deeper meanings of what can be done to control us, and how simple it is. From the mystic to the mundane, there are and infinite themes with which to control minds.

Upgrades (mc ma md fd cb) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
After several years of adventure as the heroic Robotica, Roberta Bayport finally has the chance to regain her humanity and become a normal human again. It’s a dream come true. But while Robotica is a powerful and capable heroine, Roberta, as a human, is vulnerable. And when her nemesis catches her in the middle of the procedure, her perfect dream may become a nightmare...
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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2019, 12:37:23 pm »
Ahh, so many great stories this week. And couldn't come at a better time!

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2019, 08:54:43 pm »
Mirrors is another detailed story that gets me into author Meleva's style of writing even more. Even the occasional complications and confusion in the writing keep me going to understand the connection between the woman, John, and the woman with blue eyes. Some interesting turns, curious elements, and a slow build-up to help me appreciate every step built. I think even the 1st person perspective was a nice fit as seeing how the main character dealt with everything internally was compelling.

I'd read S.B.'s A Song in the Rain before, but it didn't seem quite familiar until getting into it. Not forgettable, but S.B. writes enough where it's easy to forget if he's written something when there's a lot of good stuff of his to read. I'm sort of glad I'd forgotten it because it was pleasure to read as if it was the first time all over again. A very sweet story, hits several romantic notes I really like, and a very satisfying ending. I hope I can forget about this again someday to re-live the "first time experience" all over again.

Tessa's Jewels was a nice piece by what might be a new writer to EH. Wasn't a fan of the paragraph and formatting, but loved the inductions by Eve, and the antics she especially played with Leon. My kind of scene, and a great effort by a first-time writer. I look forward to more of his work.

Under the Gun seems to be a continuation of chris.lionofthenorth's last story Rebel with a New Cause. Selene is at it again, taking another superhero, this time for impeding on the activities of the recently enslaved one. Pretty hot how she treats them once she has two under her power. Glad the author continued his story, and can't knock his taste in character inspirations (Bayonetta)

Adaptation was not only a hot domination story, but a nice look into the scientific theories of how certain creatures adapt. I love how it seemed that some of those explanations maybe served a little like pillow talk or foreplay as she ramped up her sexual intentions towards him. Luisa seemed a very eager lecturer for Chad, explaining to him her theories, even if they fit under the Heisenberg Uncertainty Principle (what you study, you also change). As of the story, I doubt Chad mind's the change, especially if it makes Luisa happy.

And The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle, three weeks running, a pace I'm not used to with this author, but I'm not complaining at all. This time more of a direct romantic bent with playing out Louis' likes and stories of how some of his family carried on with their relationships. A nice little surprise with how it somehow turns into more roleplay, and inadvertent hypnotic dominance on both sides. Another nice chapter to follow.

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2019, 09:45:51 pm »
Have the pleasure of working this weekend and just got home not long ago so my time today has been very limited. It sucks.

Two stories I did read today and will comment on:

321s Hostel is really entering the nail biting stage. Rebecca tries to get Emily out of her situation but finds herself thwarted by a past action of her own. Because of this she is really juggling balls up in the air, not only for herself but all the controlled girls and also friend Emily, who could end up like poor Olivia if she is not careful. The walls are really closing in on Rebecca as she now knows the full extent of what has been going on. If that is not bad enough, Alice has expanded plans, and they are not so nice, dearie!

Alice also tells Rebecca in no uncertain terms of what she is capable of when pressed. And all this brought out some classic lines and scenes that I could just envision in head so clearly:

Alice expounding-"But there are men out there who will take everything you have if you’re not careful.” She looked Rebecca up and down. “Women, too." Uh huh, looking at Rebecca up and down. Does she suspect?

Rebecca thinking- She thought of Emily walking out of the hostel under a new name, a one-way plane ticket to Bali in her small, delicate hand. “Sorry, dearie,” Alice would tell her. And that would be that. Uh huh, again. Yep, she is right to think that. Pithy and chilling.

And she also knows who will turn up at the door if she runs. The person who would hurt the most.

At the end Rebecca really takes a gamblers shot at something. If it works she has a chance, if not, she's crapped out big time.

Another terrific chapter in a great, sophisticated story. Oh and hot as always. Always that.

Nevermind's Simple and Straightforward is anything but that. This is real brain twister, not just for Maria and Aurelia but for the reader. And the journey is so very nice and steamy too.

Wish I had more time to read right now and comment but not this "weekend" because I don't have one.

 


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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2019, 11:09:37 pm »
I love 321’s work.  Great additions to both “Deep Under Cover” and “Hostel”.  This week, I’d like to particularly call out his portrayal of  Rebecca’s subjective perspective.  She has a moral base, but it’s constantly at  war with the innate hotness of hypnotizing beautiful women.

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2019, 09:20:42 am »
Ghost boy has an interesting start, good world building, I do wonder where you will go with this so let’s see with chapter 3

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2019, 09:46:57 am »
Hard to type with a busted hand, so I'll keep this short. The Mask Becomes You, Deep Undercover, Hostel, and Subroutine are all fantastic and welcome reads this week. Thank you to these authors for such wonderful stories to help make my weekend a bit better.

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #7 on: July 28, 2019, 10:54:48 pm »
Carefully Random's The Mask Becomes You delivers yet another amazing chapter.

Tara is forced to choose between saving herself and saving, in a manner of speaking, the friend she's fallen in love with. Some heart-tugging and sexy scenes follow as Tara struggles with the consequences of her choice. And just when things seem to be at their worst...

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Meanwhile, Kallie's Subroutine continues to go deeper down the rabbit hole. Lori's friends gather together for a movie night. Gee, what could possibly go wrong? It's not like one of them is a brainwashed drone on a new mission, right? I love scenes like this, and Kallie really nails it here. Fantastic.

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Finally, Kat and Marisa return in SoVeryFascinated's Kat and Mouse. The hypnotic music file is a classic MC trope, and this one is a doozy, dropping one of our heroines into a deep trance and programming her for... well, we'll find out in due time! A great start to what promises to be a great story.
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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #8 on: July 30, 2019, 05:45:47 pm »
Thanks, CerebusOne, fumanchu, and Shadra! I'm glad that you enjoyed this week's offerings.

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #9 on: July 31, 2019, 02:32:32 pm »
Yes, a very late start to the week, but thats what seizures will do to you, but now...

Adaptation (Jukebox)

Another excellent, and well thought out story from the master of these. Thats definitely quite a lesson for one member of human race, at least. Just wondering when they'll change human women to be able to cope with these new men
High end of definitely enjoyed

From the Sea

Oh goodness, what a story, and all those lucky women lol. Feel a bit sorry for the guy, but I cant say he was a likely character, but pushed off a cliff, well...?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Man Pleaser

I cant say anal sex does anything for me, but its a clever concept at least, especially with how it all plays out. Yes, I had sort of works out who the man pleaser might end up being
Definitely enjoyed

A Song in the Rain

One of those sad but sweet mc stories is the best way to describe this. Very nicely done, and very clever ending too, if inevitable, I hoped
High end of definitely enjoyed

Upgrades

Talk about putting Roberta through the whole wringer of situations here! Of course I like the ending, and what will be at least, and I'll have no issues if I do ever recover enough to write her again, as promised. Another quality River City story here
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #10 on: July 31, 2019, 03:38:35 pm »
Kudos to Jukebox for teaching me a new word this week, saltation.

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #11 on: July 31, 2019, 06:26:26 pm »
From the Sea

Oh goodness, what a story, and all those lucky women lol. Feel a bit sorry for the guy, but I cant say he was a likely character, but pushed off a cliff, well...?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Just when I think I can't dislike Bob Seger any more than I do, he goes and tries to cover up a massive environmental disaster!

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #12 on: August 01, 2019, 08:06:53 am »
From the Sea

Oh goodness, what a story, and all those lucky women lol. Feel a bit sorry for the guy, but I cant say he was a likely character, but pushed off a cliff, well...?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Just when I think I can't dislike Bob Seger any more than I do, he goes and tries to cover up a massive environmental disaster!

To add, that should have been a likeable character, but as all should know, my brain no longer functions normally (and not in a fun mc way, sadly), so these things will happen
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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #13 on: August 01, 2019, 02:05:03 pm »
Part 2

Deep Undercover

Who truly is in charge of events around here? Madame Franz, maybe? Now wouldnt that be something! :angel: Sorry, but Paul is just too obvious lol. :P Another excellent chapter in a great story. And no, I'm not yet brainwashed to say that!
High end of definitely enjoyed

Dick Picture Perfect

No, you really dont want to send me this picture, lol. This chapter involves plenty of sex, so (as for most) if thats your thing, its probably fine, but did little for me
High end of enjoyed

Relaxation Therapy — Expanded Functions

I wonder if this would work on my busted brain, because if it would, I'd love to give it a try, that chair sounds so much fun. Story shows plenty of promise, thats for sure. About the only way I'd do exercise, thats for sure. Good, fun story
High end of definitely enjoyed

Uniforms Control Your Mind

Any of these uniforms suitable for retirees on medical grounds, lol? Certainly first, or last of this trio, I would love to experience. Three good short pieces
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #14 on: August 01, 2019, 02:33:04 pm »
Well, now that I can type with both hands again (Its not what you think. My dog and I were attacked by another dog. We're both fine now. Get your mind out of the gutter.  :P ) just wanted to mention another story I read this week.

I'm glad 321 had recommended Kat And Mouse, because wow, what a promising start to a story. Will definitely add this to the list of stories I look for each and every update.

I've had people recommend Gabby the Gray by the same author, so  in the event Kat isn't updated every week, maybe I'll have another potentially great story to keep me busy.

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #15 on: August 01, 2019, 03:29:13 pm »
Dick Picture Perfect

No, you really dont want to send me this picture, lol. This chapter involves plenty of sex, so (as for most) if thats your thing, its probably fine, but did little for me
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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #16 on: August 01, 2019, 04:19:46 pm »
Dick Picture Perfect

No, you really dont want to send me this picture, lol. This chapter involves plenty of sex, so (as for most) if thats your thing, its probably fine, but did little for me
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True, out of my stuff, DPP is going to favor sex more than Blizzard or Price, which I think will be more in your tastes. But I still expect to amuse you with some of the humor. Thanks for reading!

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #17 on: August 01, 2019, 05:03:05 pm »

I'd read S.B.'s A Song in the Rain before, but it didn't seem quite familiar until getting into it. Not forgettable, but S.B. writes enough where it's easy to forget if he's written something when there's a lot of good stuff of his to read. I'm sort of glad I'd forgotten it because it was pleasure to read as if it was the first time all over again. A very sweet story, hits several romantic notes I really like, and a very satisfying ending. I hope I can forget about this again someday to re-live the "first time experience" all over again.


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A Song in the Rain

One of those sad but sweet mc stories is the best way to describe this. Very nicely done, and very clever ending too, if inevitable, I hoped
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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #18 on: August 02, 2019, 12:56:25 pm »
Part 3

First Meeting (scifiscribbler)

OK, all know I love Rom MC, and this sort of works as that. I loved the build, in more senses than one, and the way the restaurant staff reacted to them was just delightful too
High end of definitely enjoyed

Hostel

Oh fine, I love the ending, and at this end of the week, it should be safe to say that wouldnt it be fun to see the tables quite literally turned on Alice now? Great stuff with Rebecca, and Emily here, among the other delights.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Split Slave

Interesting place to leave things here too. Its a fascinating story in so many ways too. I do find the whole 'we' thing a bit off putting, but thats my only complaint
High end of definitely enjoyed

Under the Gun

I'm looking forward to seeing more of this, thats for sure. Who will win out in the end, for starters, and by how far? I'm not a huge cb fan, but this might well be fun
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-July 27th 2019
« Reply #19 on: August 03, 2019, 01:58:01 pm »
And now that last 4

Kat and Mouse

Oh my, I'm loving this, and I already have more to read next week too! Two great characters, and someone else messing around with both of them, seemingly. Oh, and the title is a great pun too
High end of definitely enjoyed

Laser Tag Party

Fine, I loved the Liss/Mel and Sam play revealed here, very neat! A fascinating game of human soccer, with lots of other entertainment thrown in as well.
Definitely enjoyed , length markdown for that

Simple and Straightforward

Fine, I loved the play between the characters, author, and audience in here, all very nicely handled, entertainingly too. Simple and straightforward, no, but well done, definitely.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Subroutine (Kallie)

Oh please, seriously, if they need another latex drone, tell them to give me a call! Yes, I'd happily let that spiral work its stuff on me. Story is well told to. Lucky Madison, oh yes. What will happen with Jae, hmm?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Finally, thats it for this week, hopefully the next week, no health issues to hinder progress. Thanks as always to all authors, reviewed or otherwise
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