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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #25 on: April 21, 2019, 05:50:55 pm »
61 Days in River City

OK, fine, love the ending for Valery. Rest of it is as crazy, and entertaining as ever, loved the scene between the Nurse, and Omega Girl.
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To clarify the timeline between 61 Days and Return of the Armored Warrior, 61 Days happens first, then Return of the Armored warrior..

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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #26 on: April 22, 2019, 09:36:07 am »
Dear Betsy,

I dont have many other authors who complain about their given ratings, from time to time. Thats why the 'awaits grumbles' section is only ever likely to appear on your reviews! :P

To be honest, I could say you disappointed me. Given that Miss Carpenter not only had to be 5 ft 7 inches in height, she had to be blonde, with short hair. Therefore I was expecting it to be pointed out that the need for her to be blonde, if she was going to be sealed in a full body unit, why would these be needed? I guess it could be needed if she's being turned into a mannequin though?
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #27 on: April 22, 2019, 11:00:52 am »

I for one welcome our new Mask-wearing Goddesses and am quite satisfied with their reign this week. Though, that was a pretty hype cliffhanger to be sure~

"I don’t remember taking it out, but the mask is in my hands now."

I absolutely loved the building tension as Tara and the mask fight over what to do about Stacy. Just great. And who knows? Perhaps Tara and the mask can team up and get their own wildly successful daytime talk show, helping families and couples to reconcile all of their differences.  :grin:

Plus, one never forgets one's first mask.
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #28 on: April 22, 2019, 07:37:26 pm »

Pledging the Sorority — N.C.U. (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne meets Trisha, the head of the hypnotic sorority that she is pledging. But why does she look so familiar?

Laura seems hilarious to me. The inductions are well achieved. Randy plays a leading role and deserves it. Her position in history helps, being in a process of learning, being very skilled even with this.

But Trisha between the three, is the one that I find most striking, for its 'evil' and playful attitude.

I hope more of this great group, NCU. And let Randy achieve her goal with her roommate.

Unlimited (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
A hypnotist recounts the final sessions with his sister.

A big applause for Pan. Keeping the rhythm of the story for so many chapters, without losing the final impact, is a challenge. Speechless.

Recommended reading for any fan of progressive hypnosis.
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #29 on: April 22, 2019, 08:07:55 pm »
Thanks for the kind words, everyone! It's so strange to see the final chapters going up.

I'm in the process of reposting the story on Literotica, a new chapter every 2-3 days. So far they've gotten content that took about 2 years over here, and almost every comment is about how SLOW the story is going. :P
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #30 on: April 23, 2019, 04:05:23 am »
Thanks for the kind words, everyone! It's so strange to see the final chapters going up.

I'm in the process of reposting the story on Literotica, a new chapter every 2-3 days. So far they've gotten content that took about 2 years over here, and almost every comment is about how SLOW the story is going. :P

It does not matter how slow a story is as it develops and has something to contribute in each chapter.

I really enjoy the story, it's consistent, the fetishes are well managed. And above all the end is good, what can end up disappointing long stories is to reach an end aimlessly.

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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #31 on: April 23, 2019, 02:04:44 pm »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (3 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

I must admit, Budda's resistance to it all sometimes seemed a bit much in the sometimes overwhelming concept of MC erotica, but it was probably not unrealistic. Oh, and yes, Budda's side of things was finally quite engaging! I think Bobbi might have misread him a little, but its doubtful the truth would really displease her. The addition of a third perspective really does twist this game of perversion in unexpected ways! A slow burn thus far, but now certainly an engaging ride ...

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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #32 on: April 24, 2019, 04:27:33 am »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (3 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

I must admit, Budda's resistance to it all sometimes seemed a bit much in the sometimes overwhelming concept of MC erotica, but it was probably not unrealistic. Oh, and yes, Budda's side of things was finally quite engaging! I think Bobbi might have misread him a little, but its doubtful the truth would really displease her. The addition of a third perspective really does twist this game of perversion in unexpected ways! A slow burn thus far, but now certainly an engaging ride ...

Thank you again for the feedback.
The conflict here (as I see it) is that both these two have wanted to get together for a while but on top of all those issues involved, Bobbi precipitates all this in her desire to be physically dominated. Meanwhile she is extremely self conscious about her body development and her true dread is being judged and rejected on those grounds because if that were to happen it would crush her fragile self esteem. Bubba on the other hand has his self image tied up in being a gentle protector type, but his true inner kink is causing sadistic humiliation for which he is terrified to fully embrace because to do so means the dissolution of his prior self.
Kacy is there now to throw a little chaos in to the mix, plus she has a super power. :P
Also you need three to represent the id, ego, and super ego. Not to mention the dark triad (though I don't see myself getting that deep in to it)
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #33 on: April 24, 2019, 12:20:00 pm »
Part 3

Binding Rings

Fine, I guessed the incest was coming, ah well...Even more so as I suspect the focus on birth control is going to lead to something I'll hate even more. The story is well done, but this chapter was pretty much just total turn off for me.
No rating, taste issues, big time

It Runs in the Family

And talking of incest infatuation, here's some more! Again, I guessed given Connie's desire for it, it was going to happen, so I was prepared. And all female is slightly less horrible for me, though not greatly. Again, the story line is great, just my turn off with incest, and of course the only other focus here was sex, so...
Again no rating, for same taste issue

Paperback

First of two I've already read, though due to my brain issues, both seemed fresh as it has been a while. Yes, Mordred does write some great stuff, and this is no exception. I dont get the bare foot thing, but I can live with it, and I'm sure the 'director' would have methods of making me love it, anyway! :laugh: Its great quality, and I'd love to perform in his work, if it ever happened.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Whatever Gets You Through The Night

The other I'd previously read. Didnt remember any of it mind, after a month! Its a good build chapter to the next one (which I have already read recently) with events in the second half at least. First half is just sweet, and delightful
High end of definitely enjoyed

Yew and Me

Yes, I want one of those exosuits, and helmets. Seriously, I do! But apart from that, I would swap places with Svetlana too. Mind, I now have less mind to lose than most, lol. :P Story is developing delightfully, and thoroughly looking forward to seeing what happens next. Well, unless either of the suggested events happens, and I forget everything but total obedience...?
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #34 on: April 24, 2019, 03:18:32 pm »
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #35 on: April 24, 2019, 04:56:22 pm »

Yew and Me

Yes, I want one of those exosuits, and helmets. Seriously, I do! But apart from that, I would swap places with Svetlana too. Mind, I now have less mind to lose than most, lol. :P Story is developing delightfully, and thoroughly looking forward to seeing what happens next. Well, unless either of the suggested events happens, and I forget everything but total obedience...?
High end of definitely enjoyed


Thank you for your kind words, Merry, I'm glad that you are enjoying it.  I tried for a slow burn in this story and hope that I succeeded.  It's going to be a couple of weeks before you.........  Noooo!  I mustn't!  No SPOILERS!
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #36 on: April 25, 2019, 07:25:57 am »

Yew and Me

Yes, I want one of those exosuits, and helmets. Seriously, I do! But apart from that, I would swap places with Svetlana too. Mind, I now have less mind to lose than most, lol. :P Story is developing delightfully, and thoroughly looking forward to seeing what happens next. Well, unless either of the suggested events happens, and I forget everything but total obedience...?
High end of definitely enjoyed


Thank you for your kind words, Merry, I'm glad that you are enjoying it.  I tried for a slow burn in this story and hope that I succeeded.  It's going to be a couple of weeks before you.........  Noooo!  I mustn't!  No SPOILERS!

Before my exosuit and helmet arrive? Before I find myself in Svetlana's place?
Dont worry, happy to wait, not going anywhere otherwise until mid June, after visit to Neurologist. Not using whats left of my mind, anyway! ;)
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #37 on: April 26, 2019, 11:35:27 am »
And so to complete

The Adventures of Sultry Girl

First of the 2 chapters did absolutely zero for me. Second chapter was a bit more amusing, and fine, the ending helped no end. Seems these adventures are going to be very hit or miss for me, depending on nature.
High end of enjoyed, as a compromise? In truth, hard to mark posted together.

Oopsie

Whereas the end here ensured this was a total turn off for me. It had a few decent moments before then, but nothing all that exciting. But yes, me and endings like that, unless Master got what he deserved (which I doubt), massive no!
No rating, obviously, taste issues, big time

The Return of Dr. Mecuniam

I know fading away like that might be a blessing for me at present, but what happens to Asala, no, again a massive turn off for me. Like before, there were parts early on I enjoyed, but could see it was heading in a direction I wouldnt enjoy, and so it proved. Its wonderfully written, just totally not my thing
Again no rating on taste issues.

Romantic Girls Tell Many Tales

Oh goodness, this is classic slapstick comedy clashing with mind control, and its hilarious, wonderfully so. There is an irony in the end which I loved too. Its wonderfully done, and if Eliza can spare her, I'm in love with Anna, and her way of doing things.
I hate having to do the length markdown on this, as it stops a rare sighting, but I must. So yes, high end of definitely enjoyed

Susan Doesn’t Live Here Any More

I wonder if Connor could repair me? Would take a hell of a lot more than just a removed scar, thats for sure! :laugh: Oh, its dark, and sinister, but equally has a few really delightful moments thrown in as well. Not hard to see why I've seen praise for the author, its wonderfully told. Fascinating mix of sweet, and sour going on in here.
Another length markdown of course, so definitely enjoyed will have to do.

Seriously, if you have the time, and you need to do so, go read either of last 2 stories here.

Thats it for this week, thanks as always to all authors, reviewed or not
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #38 on: April 26, 2019, 03:56:53 pm »
Dolly Dagger (mc mf ff fd) (new)  by Jukebox
Trace goes to retrieve his wife from the clutches of the sinister Nadia Volkov, and finds out that there’s more to sympathetic magic than he believed.

Like most Jukebox tales, this was very smooth and vivid right from the start. Nadia was quite fun and self-assured. She had no need to bluff, but obviously got the better of others knowing they would assume she wanted to hide her intentions. That and Nadia was the only one here that seemed to know what was really going on, while others made quick and inaccurate assumptions. In the end, one of the greatest mistakes is assuming that the only things that have power are the things you believe, and that makes it hard to realize that power can be wielded via anyone's belief. Nadia's was the one in control, making Trace's disbelief meaningless. Trace was just a possessive idiot in the end. His wife is probably much better off with a sapphic witch!

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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #39 on: April 28, 2019, 09:07:48 am »
On Susan Doesn't Live Here Anymore, anybody else feel a kind of bait and switch happened there?  The story took a very sudden and sharp turn toward the dark side?
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Re: New Releases - Saturday, April 20th, 2019
« Reply #40 on: April 29, 2019, 01:10:47 pm »
On Susan Doesn't Live Here Anymore, anybody else feel a kind of bait and switch happened there?  The story took a very sudden and sharp turn toward the dark side?
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« Reply #41 on: April 29, 2019, 02:54:48 pm »
I didn't think it was an accident, but it felt more like a gotcha! at the readers expense than anything else.  Especially coming so late in the story.

In a longer piece I think I could really have been into it, especially if we got to see the journey.  It's that sudden, jarring shift.
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