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New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« on: February 02, 2019, 02:01:57 pm »
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Art Appreciation (Jukebox) (mc md ma) (new)  by Jukebox
Michelle and her friend Penny are given a tour of a very special gallery, and gain a whole new appreciation for the captivating power of art.

The Bank (Roboman127) (mc ff rb) (3 new chapters)  by Roboman127
Robberies, kidnappings and Assassinations are being done by strange shiny black PVC women.  Two women going to the bank have their lives changed forever.

Betsy Visits River City (mc mf ff mm md fd ds bd gr be rb ts sc cb hu) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
Betsy finds herself in River City and is shocked to discover it’s infested with super heroes who will try to stop her doing her own lawful work.

Bimbo-Midas (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

Broad Cast (mc mf md) (new)  by AWMBH and Ice Bear
Jimmy uses his ham radio to dial into the frequency of his hot next door neighbor.

But I Don’t Really Want This (mc mf md fd gr hm) (1 new chapter)  by Pomelo
Will and Nicole find their relationship changing again in at first subtle and then not-so-subtle ways.

Cascade Fire (mc mf fd la) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.

Cassandra’s Gift (mc mf ff md bd) (new)  by Twisted Journey
After a one night stand with a mysterious woman, a man receives mind-control powers, and begins to collect toys to play with.

Chapter 7 (mc ff md ft) (new)  by Downing Street
A headmaster chastises one of her teachers for her sudden wardrobe change.

Christopher, Craig & Co. (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by SoxnTies
The sequel to “Christopher & Craig” and “Campus Case Study”.

College Undercover (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.

The Crystal’s Slave (mc mf md) (new)  by Dr. HypnoD
A man walks into a jewelry store to try out his special crystal. He gets some new toys, but what happens when the police take notice?

Daddy’s Princess (mc mf md in) (new)  by The Lycanthrope
Jeff gives Cheryl the ultimate hypnosis role-play fantasy.

Diversion Tactics (mc ff) (new)  by Sinistra
Chloe knows Dr Mitchell only wants the best for her, but is changing her entire personality really necessary?

Editing Reality Book One: Naughty Fantasies Created (mc mf gr in ts) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (3 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Fleshlight (mc ma rb sf) (new)  by William Lee
Ryan is selected to receive inhuman pleasure.

The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
A continued look at the marriage of Elle and her hypnotically enslaved husband Louis.

Ganbang (mc mf mm fd) (new)  by Chew Toy
Ava justs want a dozen guys to come fuck you till you scream over and over, but it’s really surprisingly hard to arrange.

Happy Valentine’s Day! (mc mf) (3 new chapters)  by TheWeaver
A Valentine’s Day themed writing contest yields very special prizes.

In A Dream (mc ff bd cb) (new)  by Madam Kistulot
Rose couldn’t be happier living in Chronos with Gemini.

Infiltration (Nadiencendia) (mc ff) (new)  by nadiencendia
When Jasmine meets her new roommate, Celeste, she just sees a typical Barbie girl; but she will soon discover that she is in fact something very different.

Institutionalized (mc mf ff md fd be) (new)  by HB5211
Agent Jackie Provost had been investigating Dr. William Best for 18 months.  She was now ready to make an arrest, but before she does, she becomes an unwilling patient.  Will Jackie survive intact, or is the treatment a life altering experience?

Living Dead Girl (mc ff cb hu) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
River City is home to a number of unusual residents, all with strange and unique powers and abilities. Now everyone is a hero or villain, however. Some just wish to be left alone to live their lives. But when Gwen crosses paths with two of the city’s young heroines, it seems that she’ll be drawn off the sidelines and into the adventure, whether she wants to or not.

Losers Can’t Be Choosers (mc mf fd hm) (1 new chapter)  by S. B.
As much as he enjoys it, Jonah knows he’s addicted to femdom humiliation. Perhaps his sister Angela, a skilled hypnotherapist, can help him with that.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

Night Time Nudging (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?

One Sip (mc mf md) (new)  by Quiet Hypnotist
He offers her a glass of water. Who knew a simple cup of water could be this powerful?

Pet Teachers (mc ff ma bd ds hm sc) (new)  by J. F. Gargiulo
A group of teachers attend a summer retreat, the owner of which has special plans for them ...

Police Takeover (mc ff) (new)  by hypnoticassassin
Three police officers are captured while searching for some missing girls.

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (2 new chapters)  by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the General’s forces and remain uninfected himself.

She Needs This (mc ma) (new)  by Lateo
A sexy brain parasite makes Emily take a whole new interest in her reflection.

Special Delivery (Milo Minderbinder) (mc mf fd) (new)  by Milo Minderbinder
Michael, a UPS driver, makes a delivery to Tessa’s mansion, and soon finds himself her prisoner.

Spellthief Stolen (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
All she has to do is cross a garden, climb a tower, steal some spells, and get out. Just another job. Nothing simpler.

This Is Our Story (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.

Transformation Gala (mc gr) (new)  by Mandy Galileo
Amanda arrives at the club and undergoes some changes.

Unlimited (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
A hypnotist recounts the final sessions with his sister.

The Voice (mc ff) (new)  by Greyscribbler
Leah has been kidnapped, but the owner of the voice will make sure that she’s safe.

Wolfords (mc ff hm) (new)  by Trixie Adara
Michelle works for a terror of a boss, Mrs. Wasserman, who has a new product that may help with Michelle’s low productivity.

The Youth of the Dark Lord (mc mf md ma hm) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
An apprentice magician has a plan for getting laid.


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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2019, 04:27:32 pm »
One hell of an update this week.  Downing Street!

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2019, 04:47:08 pm »
Greyscribblers College Undercover had a reveal today based off the last chapter. A twist. Carol had a talk with Janet and girl named Gabrielle. The story plunges into new levels of darkness and despair. That's not a bad thing, many thoughtful MC stories do. Tough to read though if you have come to like Carol. But some of the best stories I've read and liked were tough to read. Is there any way out? I doubt Wainwright will just let it go even with Carol's ploy. Not sure where is will end and that's a good thing for any reader. Just have to buckle up and take the ride no matter where it goes. I have my seat-belt on tight. It was another terrific chapter.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2019, 07:01:51 pm »
I'm still sporadic in my EMCSA reading, but when I do hit the Recent Additions page, I can never resist reading a story featuring a character with my smut-peddling name. So naturally I read Jukebox's Art Appreciation. (I also admit to getting an extra thrill out of his use of Michelle for the story's main character name, since I have the utmost respect for our former admin!)

Jukebox is one of those authors who can get me to ignore my hypno squick while reading. Part of it is because he's just that good of a writer, and part if it is because I wouldn't mind moving past my hypno squick. It would open up a whole new realm of the EMCSA for me. :P

I do like the idea of using art to enthrall people. Jukebox excels at hypnotic writing. He gives his characters so much presence that it's easy for me to hear their thoughts in my head and forget that I'm reading. So it was easy for me to fall into the same trance as Michelle.

Once I came back to myself, I was a bit disappointed Penny wasn't the POV character, because I'm apparently similar to story-Penny. ;) Thanks for the fun read, Jukebox!

And speaking of secretly wanting to move past my hypno squick, I also read Daddy's Princess by the Lycanthrope, because I have just a bit of a Daddy kink. I am not the target audience for romantic EMC. I generally like my EMC dark and black-hearted. That being said, this is a scorching story that hits so may of my buttons. Age regression? Check! Pseudo-incest? Check! Virginal daughter seducing her dear, dear Daddy? Check! Dear, dear Daddy fighting (and ultimately succumbing to) temptation? Check!

If it weren't for the romantic framing and the hypnosis, I'd say Lycanthrope wrote this story just for me. If romantic erotic hypnosis is your jam, and if Daddy play doesn't turn you off, this story is so worth a read! It's hot, focused on mutual pleasure, and the ending...oh, man, the ending is hotter than everything that's come before it!

And if romantic hypnosis isn't your jam, this story is still worth a read. Thanks, Lycanthrope!

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #4 on: February 02, 2019, 07:48:46 pm »
I submitted a story this week, after reading them for about twenty years! After talking to a play partner about doing a hypnotic induction while having her stare into her own eyes through a mirror, I wrote a little body horror-ish drabble which turned into a longer story. I hope people enjoy it!

She Needs This (mc ma) (new)  by Lateo
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #5 on: February 02, 2019, 07:50:31 pm »
Its been 22 years since the first one I read, and I still get a chill when I see Downing Street's name on the update list.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #6 on: February 02, 2019, 09:08:23 pm »
I really enjoyed this installment of College Undercover.  I was half afraid Carol would sink down deeper, and half afraid she wouldn't

Personally, I like darker stories where the good guys are wounded and bear the scars to prove it.  That level of realism makes the story better, imo, not worse.  Is it too dark?  Not at all.  If anything, I think there's still room to go as we are dealing with some rather unsavory characters.  Pimps, gangsters, corrupt officials.... that just doesn't make for a story that's all sunshine and butterflies.

What's going to happen next?  No idea.  Honestly, I never imagined a lot of what happened in this chapter, so I can't think of how things might pan out in the next.  I just wish I didn't have to wait an entire week to find out!


This is Our Story -- really fascinating and I'm hooked.  Great writing, character development and all that.  The premise is fun, but it's the unintended consequences that always get me going.  As with College Undercover, the unintended consequences make the story  far more realistic and enjoyable.

How will everyone deal with Angelica's new addiction?  How does she rationalize it?  She knows about the program, and she must suspect that her sudden fascination with Owen isn't exactly natural, but what can any of them do about it?

And what's up with Hayliegh's submissiveness?  Is that a quirk of the program?  Will Angelica be turn out submissive towards Owen since she's now reliant upon him for her fix?  Is that why she was so nonchalant about going to school and riding with Owen in the car? 

Anyhow, two great stories that I hope go on to 100 chapters or more.  Kudos, gents.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #7 on: February 03, 2019, 02:05:00 am »
I wrote and submitted my first story this week after years of reading the site. I've spent a lot of my time in the past using Second Life to create images and share them via Flickr (see link to my photo stream in my signature - you'll need to be logged in on at least a free account to see many of the pictures due to ratings), but someone finally encouraged me to write a story so there we go this week. I hope you all enjoy it and would welcome feedback to help me with writing another story in the future.
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #8 on: February 03, 2019, 08:16:46 am »
I admire the optimism of a first time author, posting 35 chapters, around 50K in words, if they're hoping for a ton of readers. Just saying. Shame, sounds interesting, only wish it had been posted in sections as I wont bother now
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #9 on: February 03, 2019, 08:42:21 am »
Part of my first story got put up, and I'm a mix of nervousness and excitement. I've been lurking around here for years, silently enjoy everyone's writing. After getting some ideas I decided it was time to share them. This is a new experience for me and I'm excited to  see where it goes. Hope guys like it!

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #10 on: February 03, 2019, 10:10:24 am »
Part of my first story got put up, and I'm a mix of nervousness and excitement. I've been lurking around here for years, silently enjoy everyone's writing. After getting some ideas I decided it was time to share them. This is a new experience for me and I'm excited to  see where it goes. Hope guys like it!

Will probably get to that one on Tuesday, with luck

Getting started

Fleshlight

Oh please, I need the female version of this Fleshlight urgently, if not sooner! :grin: Now thats a really delicious way to be turned into a robot, I must say. Loved the way the transformation was done, and the pacing was pure delight, quick enough to love it, slow enough to enjoy reading about it. Yes, I'll borrow a strap on, if required! :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed. For me, probably more, but generally, I think thats fair

Magical Girl Syn

Nice to see Ruthie in the story again, I think she's sweet. Loved the whole bit of Cyn's issue too, very good, and how it was dealt with. Carice is quite a character, as the author says. Really enjoying this as a whole
High end of definitely enjoyed

One Sip

Fun hypno story here. Build is delightfully done, all the way through to the inevitable ending. Me, I would have drunk well before that! ;)
Definitely enjoyed

She Needs This

Now I know why I dont use any of those food supply companies! :laugh: Or maybe I should do? ;) I could have done without the tattoo stuff, but otherwise a great little story.
Definitely enjoyed

Transformation Gala

I'm just glad I wasnt a fan of Amanda before we got to the gala, or I would have hated this more. Of course, if they want to offer me a more interesting transformation, just saying...? ;) This sort of bimbofication/slut making stuff rarely does anything for me, this was no exception to that rule. Story is OK, if that is your thing
High end of enjoyed.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2019, 10:39:29 am »
Getting a kick out of Blizzard now that there are clues the synopsis is coming to fruition.   It's shaping up to be the Hallmark Channel Holiday Movie, if Hallmark had grown-ass men banging hot coeds. 

Good stuff!
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #12 on: February 03, 2019, 11:17:12 am »
From Downing Street's Chapter 7

"Of course she would wear stockings. She would wear stockings every day, everywhere, all the time, even to bed. And fishnets. And lace, and colours and patterns and anything else that Kyle liked. She would dress like Hottie Heidi in stockings and too-short miniskirts and high-high heels..."

I giggled my way all the way though this story,  as it was obvious where it was going.  But for that paragraph, all I can say is, "Thank you, Downing Street."
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #13 on: February 03, 2019, 12:59:19 pm »
Magical Girl Syn

Nice to see Ruthie in the story again, I think she's sweet. Loved the whole bit of Cyn's issue too, very good, and how it was dealt with. Carice is quite a character, as the author says. Really enjoying this as a whole
High end of definitely enjoyed


Yeah, my original plan was for Ruthie to be rather more of a major supporting character, Meghan to be rather less, and Carice not at all. This is not how it's turned out, lol.

Thanks as always for the kind words!
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #14 on: February 03, 2019, 05:04:22 pm »
Part 2

Betsy Visits River City

OK, What Billie can do with time, well, I'm stunned. She hid that one from me, and I created her! :laugh: I would say that Rotwang would probably have designed her a flying vehicle, as in Metropolis, to get round the travel issue. As to what Faye, and Betsy were getting up to with those dildos, I really dont want to know! :angel: As crazy, and entertaining as ever.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Bimbo-Midas

Talk about stupid, and I dont mean the girls here, though without a doubt, they are! :laugh: Part of me wants Lucille to keep her looks, but get her brains back at the end, but anyway... Good entertaining stuff, and at some point, Jimmy might realise...?
Definitely enjoyed

Daddy’s Princess

Having done an amazing hypnosis session with the author, I more than believe that he could do something like this, though I assume without the actual sex stuff! :laugh: Certainly the regression has vague memories, though we went back a lot further than that! Yes, I could have done without the Daddy stuff (even if it is totally fake), but eac to their own fantasy, I guess? Other than that though, really good.
High end of definitely enjoyed. (Yes, Lyc, the 'Daddy' bit probably cost you another much to add to your collection)

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction

Touchdown was by far my favorite of this trio, though I am wondering if the bar has any connection to a hotel bar in the west of Ireland? The other 2 were OK, but the middle one stood out a mile for me.
Compromise? Definitely enjoyed

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Yes, Jonah is in a mess, and for that reason, and both the Felicia scene, and the focus on the rape (even if strictly true) did little for me, in all honesty. Not really anything here for me, though the writing is as good as ever
High end of enjoyed is a sort of random mark for this. Could have should have easily said no rating on taste, equally

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #15 on: February 03, 2019, 05:12:55 pm »

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction

Touchdown was by far my favorite of this trio, though I am wondering if the bar has any connection to a hotel bar in the west of Ireland? The other 2 were OK, but the middle one stood out a mile for me.
Compromise? Definitely enjoyed

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Yes, Jonah is in a mess, and for that reason, and both the Felicia scene, and the focus on the rape (even if strictly true) did little for me, in all honesty. Not really anything here for me, though the writing is as good as ever
High end of enjoyed is a sort of random mark for this. Could have should have easily said no rating on taste, equally


Yes, the bar definitely has a connection.  ;)

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #16 on: February 03, 2019, 05:14:43 pm »
I submitted a story this week, after reading them for about twenty years! After talking to a play partner about doing a hypnotic induction while having her stare into her own eyes through a mirror, I wrote a little body horror-ish drabble which turned into a longer story. I hope people enjoy it!

She Needs This (mc ma) (new)  by Lateo
A sexy brain parasite makes Emily take a whole new interest in her reflection.

Congrats on your first submission to the EMCSA! I did enjoy it. I love body horror, especially when the victim is controlled into embracing and/or welcoming the change. I'm looking forward to your next story!


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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #17 on: February 03, 2019, 05:39:39 pm »
Another very sexy installment of "Binding Rings".  Hopefully though the protagonist doesn't spend too much time ridden with guilt.  Looking forward to the mother and aunt finding out about each other.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #18 on: February 03, 2019, 07:53:20 pm »
She Needs This

Now I know why I dont use any of those food supply companies! :laugh: Or maybe I should do? ;) I could have done without the tattoo stuff, but otherwise a great little story.
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I'm glad you liked it! The tattoo stuff was actually a lot less detailed in my first draft, but my girlfriend went ballistic that the tattoo wasn't covered in more depth when she read through. Her comments on the google doc: "this is very poor tattoo aftercare practice... but also it's porn. the risk is infection. why would she touch it? I guess if you ate a brainwashing egg"

Congrats on your first submission to the EMCSA! I did enjoy it. I love body horror, especially when the victim is controlled into embracing and/or welcoming the change. I'm looking forward to your next story!

Thank you so much! I'm actually an enormous fan of your writing, so I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I also really like corruption and body horror in MC. I have a story about a demon-summoning that leads to a gradually increasing possession bubbling around in my head for my next story.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #19 on: February 03, 2019, 09:22:01 pm »
I submitted a story this week, after reading them for about twenty years! After talking to a play partner about doing a hypnotic induction while having her stare into her own eyes through a mirror, I wrote a little body horror-ish drabble which turned into a longer story. I hope people enjoy it!
Your story... gave me ASMR, which I'm not sure I can say about any others on the Archive. :)
It was enjoyable and memorable, and stands out from the crowd for sure. I definitely hope you keep writing.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #20 on: February 03, 2019, 10:26:13 pm »
Daddy’s Princess (mc mf md in) (new)  by The Lycanthrope
Jeff gives Cheryl the ultimate hypnosis role-play fantasy.


Thank you Badpenny and Merry Brooks for the reads and reviews.

I'm glad I could maybe ease you past your squick, Badpenny, and push a few of your happy buttons.

You are correct, Merry Brooks, I wouldn't do this in a clinical hypnosis session. On the other hand, I've been a hypnotist for over 40 years and my life wasn't always just clinical hypnosis. Not everything in the story happened in one "play time," but all of it HAS happened over multiple "play times." The daddy scenes I've done have all been at the request of the ladies involved.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #21 on: February 04, 2019, 12:36:30 am »
Bimbo-Midas

Talk about stupid, and I don’t mean the girls here, though without a doubt, they are! :laugh: Part of me wants Lucille to keep her looks, but get her brains back at the end, but anyway... Good entertaining stuff, and at some point, Jimmy might realise...?
Definitely enjoyed

If I understand you right, Merry, this week's rating is a slight downgrade from last week's. Fear not, eventually Jimmy will get a clue.
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #22 on: February 04, 2019, 02:22:00 pm »
Greyscribblers College Undercover had a reveal today based off the last chapter. A twist. Carol had a talk with Janet and girl named Gabrielle. The story plunges into new levels of darkness and despair. That's not a bad thing, many thoughtful MC stories do. Tough to read though if you have come to like Carol. But some of the best stories I've read and liked were tough to read. Is there any way out? I doubt Wainwright will just let it go even with Carol's ploy. Not sure where is will end and that's a good thing for any reader. Just have to buckle up and take the ride no matter where it goes. I have my seat-belt on tight. It was another terrific chapter.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #23 on: February 04, 2019, 02:24:31 pm »
I really enjoyed this installment of College Undercover.  I was half afraid Carol would sink down deeper, and half afraid she wouldn't

Personally, I like darker stories where the good guys are wounded and bear the scars to prove it.  That level of realism makes the story better, imo, not worse.  Is it too dark?  Not at all.  If anything, I think there's still room to go as we are dealing with some rather unsavory characters.  Pimps, gangsters, corrupt officials.... that just doesn't make for a story that's all sunshine and butterflies.

What's going to happen next?  No idea.  Honestly, I never imagined a lot of what happened in this chapter, so I can't think of how things might pan out in the next.  I just wish I didn't have to wait an entire week to find out!


Thanks Ferrum.  There'll be a chapter for the next update.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #24 on: February 04, 2019, 05:34:57 pm »
Bimbo-Midas

Talk about stupid, and I don’t mean the girls here, though without a doubt, they are! :laugh: Part of me wants Lucille to keep her looks, but get her brains back at the end, but anyway... Good entertaining stuff, and at some point, Jimmy might realise...?
Definitely enjoyed

If I understand you right, Merry, this week's rating is a slight downgrade from last week's. Fear not, eventually Jimmy will get a clue.

Yes, I've got to the point where I want to hit him with something heavy, in sheer frustration, hence the markdown! :laugh:

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Thank you Badpenny and Merry Brooks for the reads and reviews.

I'm glad I could maybe ease you past your squick, Badpenny, and push a few of your happy buttons.

You are correct, Merry Brooks, I wouldn't do this in a clinical hypnosis session. On the other hand, I've been a hypnotist for over 40 years and my life wasn't always just clinical hypnosis. Not everything in the story happened in one "play time," but all of it HAS happened over multiple "play times." The daddy scenes I've done have all been at the request of the ladies involved.

Thanks again for the reads and the comments!

I didnt doubt it wasnt done other than at the ladies requests, I know you too well for that, just the whole hint at incest thing is a turn off for me. Yes, strictly the regression would count as clinical stuff with me, the Jean Harlow moments, I'm not quite so sure? :laugh:
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #25 on: February 04, 2019, 05:45:50 pm »
Getting a kick out of Blizzard now that there are clues the synopsis is coming to fruition.   It's shaping up to be the Hallmark Channel Holiday Movie, if Hallmark had grown-ass men banging hot coeds. 

Good stuff!

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #26 on: February 04, 2019, 06:33:37 pm »
I don't recall a "twist" in the most recent installment of "College Undercover".  Great chapter, though, Carol has just about accepted her destiny.  And it's always very sexy when she programs other women.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #27 on: February 04, 2019, 07:06:08 pm »
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #28 on: February 05, 2019, 03:19:19 pm »
Betsy Visits River City

OK, What Billie can do with time, well, I'm stunned. She hid that one from me, and I created her! :laugh: I would say that Rotwang would probably have designed her a flying vehicle, as in Metropolis, to get round the travel issue. As to what Faye, and Betsy were getting up to with those dildos, I really dont want to know! :angel: As crazy, and entertaining as ever.
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #29 on: February 05, 2019, 04:13:17 pm »
Even more so, given I want that part in any production. Apologies sent to Faeryfaye accordingly :angel:

Part 3

Binding Rings

Kudos to any incest story which I can find sweet, but this one has pretty much made it. I guess mainly because he is trying to learn to give something back, as well as take, but it also might be the delightful pace at which events take place. I still cant really get into mother/son stuff, but all the same...
Low end of definitely enjoyed

But I Don’t Really Want This

Well I have to say that Will is now taking things beyond my personal comfort zone, so I didnt get much out of this chapter. Those more into humiliation will get far more, as its well written.
No rating as a get out, taste issues only

The Crystal’s Slave

Desperate need of a good edit here. Huge paragraphs, including conversations, which make it hard to work out who is who. Story would win no prizes for subtlety either, and not my thing.
No rating, see above

Diversion Tactics

Well, I feel sorry for the boyfriend, but otherwise...Good job I dont appeal to lesbian dominatrix hypnotists, maybe? :laugh: All nicely done, and good ending to finish too
Definitely enjoyed

Resistance 2

Enjoyed this offering far more, other than the incest. Story line was strong, and very cleverly played out once Meghan got out of the house, and what followed from there.
Definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #30 on: February 06, 2019, 10:00:43 pm »
Bimbo-Midas (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.

This is still a fun read. What is interesting is how it's not really clicking yet. The gears are turning in Jimmy's head, but the puzzle just has not yet come together completely. Instead of being a frustration, I'm feeling more ponderous. How long would it take for even a MC writer to figure out that they are somehow rewriting people mentally and physically? Unless we're a real-life hypnotist, we might be just like Jimmy here. Something so fantastical could not possibly be happening, right? If it was, missing the obvious on the mechanisms might be likely. Technically, there is nothing normal about transforming someone physically and mentally like what is happening in this story! This is as fun as interesting.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #31 on: February 06, 2019, 10:17:16 pm »
There's a blizzard raging outside, so why not pass the time by playing a little Solitaire reading some great stories!  :)

Redsliver's Blizzard is first up, naturally. This story continues to be sexy and sweet and engaging... and now, perhaps a bit of looming sadness? Certainly Gene's not-so-much-of-a-dream appears to be having some real world consequences this week. And thanks for shoveling the front walk, Gene!

Over in Betsy Visits River City, our heroes face off against their toughest opponent yet: the local bureaucracy! I loved the interplay between the characters here, and it was nice to see the bimbos return. I really have grown fond of them.

I'm finally all caught up again on Magical Girl Syn, and this week's chapter did not disappoint. I'm really enjoying how our heroes are, in spite of all of the madness and the danger, still dedicated to the idea of getting to the bottom of things and putting an end to them. Morgan and Lawrence (and of course Syn) are great characters, and you can't help but root for them.

I haven't caught up with College Undercover, but Greyscribbler's The Voice is a wicked slow-burn brainwashing story. Nicely done.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #32 on: February 06, 2019, 10:27:05 pm »
Getting a kick out of Blizzard now that there are clues the synopsis is coming to fruition.   It's shaping up to be the Hallmark Channel Holiday Movie, if Hallmark had grown-ass men banging hot coeds. 

Good stuff!

After I've won the super-lottery prize and purchased the Hallmark network, this will be the first order of the day. And the second. And the...

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #33 on: February 07, 2019, 12:33:07 am »
Bimbo-Midas (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Doctor MC, Mad Scientist
A leprechaun gives Jimmy a ring that turns any woman whom Jimmy touches into a bimbo.

This is still a fun read. What is interesting is how it's not really clicking yet. The gears are turning in Jimmy's head, but the puzzle just has not yet come together completely. Instead of being a frustration, I'm feeling more ponderous. How long would it take for even a MC writer to figure out that they are somehow rewriting people mentally and physically? Unless we're a real-life hypnotist, we might be just like Jimmy here. Something so fantastical could not possibly be happening, right? If it was, missing the obvious on the mechanisms might be likely. Technically, there is nothing normal about transforming someone physically and mentally like what is happening in this story! This is as fun as interesting.

Jimmy's denial is getting big pieces broken off of it, but he still believes on some level that there is a "logical" explanation for all this. He's an engineer, so he believes in impersonal "rules of the universe" that govern everyone, all the time. Jimmy's philosophy simply does not dream that his girlfriend and two other women are changing just because of a conversation he had with two men, almost two weeks ago.

But Jimmy's denial won't last forever. Next week, he will get a clue.
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #34 on: February 07, 2019, 03:43:27 am »
There's a blizzard raging outside, so why not pass the time by playing a little Solitaire reading some great stories!  :)

Redsliver's Blizzard is first up, naturally. This story continues to be sexy and sweet and engaging... and now, perhaps a bit of looming sadness? Certainly Gene's not-so-much-of-a-dream appears to be having some real world consequences this week. And thanks for shoveling the front walk, Gene!


Thanks! Why do only unhappy things loom? Oh, well at least the walk is shoveled. And good luck with the super-lottery, looking forward to optioning Blizzard.

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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #35 on: February 07, 2019, 10:20:06 am »
Part 4

Art Appreciation (Jukebox)

Wouldnt say no to a guided tour of that gallery myself! :angel: I suspect he selects visitors a lot younger than me, mind! Deliciously paced, delightfully done, and if Gustav ever needs more mature women for his plans, tell him to give me a call! ;) A JB Gem!
High end of definitely enjoyed. More with an invite to the gallery!

Blizzard

I'm going to be very sorry when the weather actually improves here! As much fun as ever, combined with some clever pondering on life stuff from Sam. I love feelgood stories, this is definitely one of those
High end of definitely enjoyed

Broad Cast

Thoroughly enjoyed this too, becoming a bit of a habit this batch. All delightfully done, sadly I dont know of any neighbours with radios, or a desire for my less than sexy body, lol! :laugh:
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Police Takeover

Ah well, there had to be one! Biggest issue is again with this author, the fact that its nigh impossible to read easily, in major need of an edit. The story was at least entertaining, as much as I could tell, if pretty straightforward stuff.
I'll give it high end of enjoyed, because the mc method is something I would enjoy done to me, so I'll be kind. Decent edit, probably definitely enjoyed, but without that... ::)

The Voice

Oh, and talking of mc methods I'd love used on me, here is another one! Oh fine, I did work out who 'the voice' was, but the brainwashing stuff was delightfully done. And yes, should she ever want a more mature slave to work her command on, tell her to give me a call!
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #36 on: February 07, 2019, 04:31:42 pm »
Final 4 (I'd missed a bestiality tag)

Chapter 7

I've seen praise for this previously, just going to add my own little piece of it to the collection. I only wish I could write half as well. Fun story of the effects of subliminals in a school setting on both staff, and pupils. Go read!
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Happy Valentine’s Day!

Part numbers are a total mess here, but thats a minor matter. Typical mixed bag, enjoyed the first 2, far less keen on the last one. Same formula as previously, so suspect you either love, or hate by now
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Living Dead Girl

Well, thats one hell of a place to leave events, I must say! :o Mad professor has been dealt with, but now, with our 3 young ladies...?
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This Is Our Story

Thoroughly enjoying this tangled web of a story, that seemingly gets more tangled every week. How this all ends up, no idea, but I'm definitely looking forward to the ride
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« Reply #37 on: February 08, 2019, 03:38:44 pm »
The Voice

Oh, and talking of mc methods I'd love used on me, here is another one! Oh fine, I did work out who 'the voice' was, but the brainwashing stuff was delightfully done. And yes, should she ever want a more mature slave to work her command on, tell her to give me a call!
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« Reply #38 on: February 08, 2019, 05:07:49 pm »
A little while, but not too long! :laugh:
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #39 on: February 08, 2019, 10:00:46 pm »
Infiltration (Nadiencendia) (mc ff) (new)  by nadiencendia
When Jasmine meets her new roommate, Celeste, she just sees a typical Barbie girl; but she will soon discover that she is in fact something very different.

This was one of the authors that brought me into MC erotica. Even if I did not like all this author's offerings in the long run, they are always well written. Certainly intentional, this starts like nothing special, but quickly pulls the reader into the story. Before I even knew it, this became a surreal cross between Lovecraft and the distinct possibility of walking in on a roommate at an inopportune time. Especially when you don't really know your roommate yet, college or elsewhere, you could walk in on them watching porn, casually drying off from a shower, or who knows what! Can't say I've read all of this author's work, but this felt like a departure in some ways. The less than normal themes meshed quite well with the general weirdness of it all. Hopefully, we will get parts 2 and 3!

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« Reply #40 on: February 08, 2019, 11:40:52 pm »
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After a one night stand with a mysterious woman, a man receives mind-control powers, and begins to collect toys to play with.

Since I did read this one...

The Merry Brooks take would be "No Rating - personal taste" even without marking down for length. The writing's not terrible, though the ending needs a lot of work, but the main character's a bit of an asshole and, while cautious about STDs, is cavalier about people literally eating shit, which is a significantly bigger infection risk (admittedly not directly to himself) than unprotected sex. There's also a conveniently large sample of women who are into inflicting pain, and happy to take whatever they dish out. And then there's the treatment of the almost-ex girl-friend, who gets sentenced to daily torture for life.

So, yeah, 'pathic controller in a 'pathic world, means some serious personal taste issues for me.
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Re: New Releases-February 2nd 2019
« Reply #41 on: February 08, 2019, 11:45:09 pm »
I have to say that grey_shadow's post just made me want to dive off the deep end into Cassandra's Gift because it sounds demented af, even if it doesn't conform to my usual tastes.

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« Reply #42 on: February 09, 2019, 04:15:05 pm »
Made me glad I never even gave it a try! :laugh:
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« Reply #43 on: February 16, 2019, 11:38:52 am »
Dear Mr Potestas, thank you very much from your reading and from your encouragement! I am a great fan of your writing so it is amazing to read your opinion on my work. As you say, this is in fact a bit different from my usual stuff, particularly because it involces no foot fetish (although I may include one or two hints in the next chapters). I am not normally into "alien" stories, but this one seemed to stick with me. When I have the time, I will write and post part 2! Thanks again


Infiltration (Nadiencendia) (mc ff) (new)  by nadiencendia
When Jasmine meets her new roommate, Celeste, she just sees a typical Barbie girl; but she will soon discover that she is in fact something very different.

This was one of the authors that brought me into MC erotica. Even if I did not like all this author's offerings in the long run, they are always well written. Certainly intentional, this starts like nothing special, but quickly pulls the reader into the story. Before I even knew it, this became a surreal cross between Lovecraft and the distinct possibility of walking in on a roommate at an inopportune time. Especially when you don't really know your roommate yet, college or elsewhere, you could walk in on them watching porn, casually drying off from a shower, or who knows what! Can't say I've read all of this author's work, but this felt like a departure in some ways. The less than normal themes meshed quite well with the general weirdness of it all. Hopefully, we will get parts 2 and 3!