This is wonderful and the post credits are the zinger wont spoil but i see where its going and holy cow this is gonna take a (deliciously) dark turn isnt it
Thank you!
Mind control is psychological horror genre for me, always has been: I'm hoping to be able to layer dark and light to create the complex-yet-satisfying outcome I've been dreaming of!
Same here as you've surely read most of my stories trend toward horror if not flat out slasher tropes
This is the part where I come across like a poorly-read moron. Believe it or not, it's your Hypnopics Collective work that made the most impression on me.
I saw your name and went looking in my collection (when I grab stuff I put the artist's name as a prefix) and it's your Relationship Fixer photo manipulations that caught my eye. In particular, for some reason or another, Relationship Fixer 5 (I just checked, I gave it a Rating whenever it came out, so at least I did that)... I guess I've got a thing for the "objectively correct person being mind controlled into devolving into the objectively incorrect position."
For some odd reason... the unshakable association in my head is sports-related (cheerleaders, soccer teams and the like) - and, in particular, a line of female soccer players standing lined up in a rainstorm at night.
One of the reasons why I'm super-appreciative of feedback is because I know how easy it is to NOT give it - even if you really enjoyed it. I know I'm terrified of posting comments because I AM one of those weirdos that can go on-and-on about minutiae... actually I used to call myself "scary feedback guy" when I was a more-prolific poster.
Gah, I digress. I'll run through your backlog - any suggestions for a starting point?