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New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« on: November 23, 2019, 02:33:06 pm »
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Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

Bedtime Story (mc mf md) (new)  by scifiscribbler
An innocent mistake highlights why bedtime stories are for adults, too.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

Blood on Parchment (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Doctor D.
Alderose’s husband-to-be has been missing for several weeks. Though no one believes her, she’s pretty sure he’s been taken by another woman. Or a monster. She isn’t too sure.

Brain Development Enterprises (mc mf md in) (2 new chapters)  by JC Beleren
A man purchases a series of self-hypnosis recordings to help him become more assertive.

Bubblegum & Plastic (mc ff mf fd md ma in gr) (new)  by Traveling None
Cindy is an anti-porn crusader who’s life changes when she receives an odd bit of hate mail: a doll that looks just like her, only with some impossibly bouncy additions. Soon Cindy finds that the doll, and all of it’s risque sayings are becoming more and more accurate, and the line between woman and bimbo-doll blurs rapidly. Cindy struggles to keep her mind from drifting, even as her own body betrays her. Will Cindy ever become normal again, or will she forever be an empty-headed plaything?

Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Cattle and the Creeping Things (mc ff mf) (new)  by Jukebox
A woman explains to you what life is going to be like now that you can see the Creeping Things.

Crossing the Rubicon (mc mf ff mm fd md) (4 new chapters)  by br0adband
There are moments in a lifetime where, with a single step, a line is crossed, a goal is achieved, a dream becomes a reality. Once that line is crossed, there’s no going back to who or what you might have been before. This is such a journey for one person.

Dead of Night (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by SoVeryFascinated
An actress responds well to a stage hypnosis show ... and so does someone else.

Decisive (mc md ds hm) (new)  by All These Roadworks
Tori hopes that hypnosis will help her with her difficulty making decisions.

Deep Undercover (mc mf md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Paul is a private eye who dabbles in hypnosis. Cassie is his beautiful client. But there’s more to their relationship—and their case—than meets the eye.

Dreams upon Dreams (mc mm) (new)  by Meleva
Prince Dheren needs a bedtime story. With a magical storyteller in the castle, what better nightcap could there be than delving into sorcerous dreams?

Extracts From The Westriver Gazette (mc fd) (new)  by HypnoticHarlequin
Ada Anderson is new in town. And what better way to introduce herself than to write to the local paper?

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (4 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Giselle the Gazelle (mc ff fu) (new)  by AWMBH
Giselle just wants to drift and relax in her dreamy sleep, but a strange buzzing keeps waking her up. Does it have something to do with the strange menagerie of hypnotized beauty queens dressed up as cute and sexy animals all around her?

Her Husband’s Hucow (mc ff ma la gr ds) (1 new chapter)  by CNP
Mary and a few of her old college friends are invited to an almost forgotten friend’s home. What was expected to be a weekend of relaxation and reminiscing soon turns into something more expansive to the exquisite delight of everyone involved.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

House of Hypnosis (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Rhea Corvos
Alice and her realtor look at a house that might be haunted.

I Hate My Master (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by maxrpotter
Mark moves in with a new roommate, and finds himself getting annoyed by a few small things about him, like when he leaves dishes in the sink, or when he leaves his clothes around the place, or when he gives Mark orders that he is unable to disobey.

I Hear and Obey (mc ff mf fd sf rb) (2 new chapters)  by Roboman127
A powerful woman maintains her supply of Slaves from Earth of the past and present.

In Good Hands (mc mf ff md ma in) (1 new chapter)  by Quiet Hypnotist
While living alone under one roof with her horny cousin, Chayenne grows more and more puzzled over her reaction to him. If only she could calm down and figure out what’s wrong. Surely his massages could help?

The Internship (mc ff) (new)  by Greyscribbler
Nichole is looking forward to learning a lot from her internship. She will.

The Mind Control Device (mc mf ff md in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Dean invents a mind control device.

The Mind Masters Of Earth (mc ff sf) (new)  by Delta Wave
It’s been six years since the unscrupulous telepaths, the Mind Masters, took over the world and established a global tyrannical government. A young woman, Maya Hudson, hates the telepaths’ regime with a passion. But, as she’s conscripted for service at the Masters’ governmental complex, her life is about to change drastically...

Mother’s Shadow (mc ff) (new)  by Mind Zapper
The daughter of the most feared sorceress in the known Realms, young Claire struggles with following in her mother’s evil mind-controlling footsteps.

A Price Paid (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by Saddle Rider
Losing a prized possession to mages, a powerful man seeks revenge.

Quest for Tamsin (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
An unexpected journey unearths more buried memories of Elle’s past, and shows Louis the door to a secret realm of pleasure and service.

Refashioned (mc ff ft rb) (1 new chapter)  by zorkmeister
Annabel gets far more than she bargained for when she goes online shopping.

Responding to the Siren’s Song (mc fd) (new)  by Otis
A deeply entranced man professes his desires to his Goddess.

Salem’s Blood (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Jan is invited to go to a grave of a witch but she soon discovers it’s not all pretend.

School Foot Daze (mc fd ft) (new)  by Jake Elwoods
A college student is overwhelmed by the smell of Janet’s feet.

Senioritis (mc mf ff fd md ds bd ft hm) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Marc explores sexuality with a 19-year-old dominant woman.

The Silken (mc ff mf mm in ft) (new)  by Templeton Rose
Gina visits the new upscale hosiery boutique in town.

Sisters (SleepyTimeSlut) (mc ff mf in) (1 new chapter)  by SleepyTimeSlut
Kenzie used to be a smart, serious student. But when her sister starts filling her iPod with “special” music, Kenzie becomes a little dumber, a lot more horny, and way more agreeable.

Space Nut (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Adam discovers a crash landed alien who shares a taste for women with him, and together they will have them all, no matter the price.

Sssslipping Into the Jungle (mc mf md ft) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Actress Jennifer gets lost while on a shooting break in India, only to come across a well known hypnotic serpent.

Succubus Summoned (mc ff mf fd md be) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Cara is a succubus and is summoned by her Master. She must travel across country.

Teacher’s Lazy Friday Night (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Patrax
Katie doesn’t understand why she changed into her sexiest lingerie after coming home from school. Her mind has been very murky lately.

Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Wildwood (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by notorioushypno
A mind control conspiracy spawns small-town hokum, entangling a group of plucky university students, some deadbeat locals, and a team of federal investigators.

Wires (mc sf) (new)  by MoldedMind
On a routine visit to the server room, Jessie gets more than she bargained for.

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover (mc ff mf fd ds) (2 new chapters)  by Alan Smithee
Senator Delacroix has a lot on his plate. His wife is cheating, an important vote is coming up, and the new intern? She might be a witch.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2019, 03:41:10 pm »
Teacher’s Lazy Friday Night (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Patrax
Katie doesn’t understand why she changed into her sexiest lingerie after coming home from school. Her mind has been very murky lately.

Well I'm jumping in first this time! The title grabbed my attention right away, being a teacher myself. I was wondering where it was going and the discovery elicited a number of different feelings from me...

I'm now wondering if there will be more. Well written and well paced story!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2019, 03:59:41 pm »

Mother’s Shadow (mc ff) (new)  by Mind Zapper
The daughter of the most feared sorceress in the known Realms, young Claire struggles with following in her mother’s evil mind-controlling footsteps.


MindZapper's first posted story and it's fantastic! The descriptions, the way he described the twist and the feelings of Claire... and knowing there's much more to come! I'm honored to have had a chance to preview it and give feedback during the process!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #3 on: November 23, 2019, 04:44:32 pm »

Mother’s Shadow (mc ff) (new)  by Mind Zapper
The daughter of the most feared sorceress in the known Realms, young Claire struggles with following in her mother’s evil mind-controlling footsteps.


MindZapper's first posted story and it's fantastic! The descriptions, the way he described the twist and the feelings of Claire... and knowing there's much more to come! I'm honored to have had a chance to preview it and give feedback during the process!

Thank you Dede! I appreciate your mention and thrilled you enjoyed my opening. A great deal of thanks for how well this turned out goes to MetaBob. He challenged me to tighten my prose not in one editing pass, or even two, but in at least 5 editing passes. The chapter increased a good 1000 words based on his suggestions for edits and additions.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #4 on: November 23, 2019, 04:46:30 pm »
Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Holy hell, that was a hot brainwashing session!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2019, 04:52:26 pm »
Comments on some of the stories I managed to read today:

321s Deep Undercover. Paul is giving it the old college try but every time Tara goes back into the Avery hole it shakes me to the core. Too dangerous. Every time back on that limb it gets thinner and weaker. This is such a dangerous game and you feel like one they will lose.

Loved how Cassie is talking about Tara and what she would tell her. It is her.....talk about a split personality. She has become shattered by this MC yo yo.

Meagan and Tara scene at the end with Avery calling the shots so very hot and well written. "Duh".

The we have 321s second entry Hostel. Man what a tense crazy twisted ride with ebbs and flows. Loved that scene where Rebecca is controlling new hot bartender Grace. Grace is obviously very willful and has plans for her future....well.......she did but now is in the clutches of the 'new' Rebecca, or one could call her Alice II. You get the idea all that is left for Grace in her life is serving her.

Her good friend Emily who Rebecca cared so much for is now also a slave to her. Rebecca is leaving a trail of hypnotic destruction in he wake. Celeste, the cause of this says she may have created a monster. Rebecca counters the she created a mistress. Both are correct.

Yet even now there is still a semblance of the old caring Rebecca when she realizes the real Celeste would not want her having sex with Grace.

As 321 so expertly and often does, once again we exit with a cliff hanger. Edwin and Amanda have assumed the upper hand......until the lights go out. TENSION.

Now the long wait to see what happens. UGH!!! Thanks 321.


Also gotta mention Greyscribbler's The Internship. I have always been a sucker for the, young girl interns at company......big changes to come....stories and when I saw Grey was doing this one my heart soared, lol. The reason is Grey understand MC in a very unique way, he understands pacing like few other and also is not afraid to write long stories that really involve plot and character and change. All thing I love. And I was not disappointed in the lest with the first chapter as lovey young Nicole begins what she thinks will be the next small chapter of her life and that I suspect will become the large permanent part of her life, the only part of her life that will matter eventually. As usual Scribbler does a great job with plot and characters. We meet Nicole her boss Miss Henderson, who is extremely well executed here, and the icy Clara, Henderson's PA. The dynamics here between them are very subtle and interesting.

Nicole feels the first tendrils of change but nothing overwhelming. As usual, Grey takes his good old, simmering, burning time with the inductions. Can't wait to see where this is going.

Finally there is Zorkmeister's Refashioned. I have to say I think this story has started to enter rare territory for me. Perhaps to get on my all time great list. It just keeps getting better, more intricate and hotter. So hot it burned my eyes when I read this chapter.

Annabel continues to get a real mental work over and now a physical one too since she has moved in with crush Lauren and the other girls. Lauren who we knew was also being inducted at a later stage was revealed this week to not only be a very strongly inducted slave but also with a evil underbelly to her happy, loving top coat. It is obvious now she feels nothing for Annabel but only acting out her programming.

Also the conspiracy and power of the controllers is revealed to be even larger than first thought. Not only the internet site is involved but so is the fitness company Medusa. Oh yeah, it sure is aptly named because it seems to have many heads.

In very powerful and hot scene, Annabel has regrets about introducing one of her old friends Sonya, who has a very nice and happy married life to the web site which of course will over time divest her of all husband and happiness and turn her into a empty drone with no real feelings.

Annabel's desperate sad feelings which may have led her to try escape all this and warn Sonya were quickly put to rest by her 'love' Lauren. By the time Lauren was done with her she didn't care about Sonya at all except as a sex object. Lauren...such a good and caring girlfriend.....

Like the other stories mentioned Zorkmeister really takes time to plot things out, make the characters very real and believable and not rush this very involved, intricate hot as hell story.

Can't wait to see what happens next: Will we meet Sonya? And if so, how much of change will be starting in her? Lauren seemed very interested in her when she noticed how hot she was in the picture on Annabel's phone. She also now knows Annabel had feelings for her friend, wanted to protect her. What is Lauren's intentions for Annabel? What are Medusa's intentions for all the girls as it reshapes there minds and bodies?





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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2019, 05:09:13 pm »
I don't know how Cerebus gets through these so fast.

Also, confessing to a curiosity how Bedtime Story will go down - it's about as close as I get to romantic hypno fiction.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #7 on: November 23, 2019, 05:24:50 pm »
Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Holy hell, that was a hot brainwashing session!

Thank you! One of my better ones, I think.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #8 on: November 23, 2019, 05:26:04 pm »
Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Didn't realise it was a bimboification story (not really my thing), but I did think it was well written and I liked the descent into it.

Extracts From The Westriver Gazette (mc fd) (new)  by HypnoticHarlequin
Ada Anderson is new in town. And what better way to introduce herself than to write to the local paper?

Epistolary can be hard to do, but it's a neat format when it works. I wasn't sure quite which direction this was going in until it became obvious, but it was a nice story.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #9 on: November 23, 2019, 05:29:39 pm »
Teacher's Lazy Friday Night has a 15 year old student controlling his teacher. I think that's against archive rules usually?

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #10 on: November 23, 2019, 06:00:57 pm »
Typo on the age?  18~15?

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #11 on: November 23, 2019, 06:03:04 pm »
Typo on the age?  18~15?

It was typed out as "Fifteen" and is repeated 3 times, so I think this one is pretty ironclad.

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« Reply #12 on: November 23, 2019, 06:31:28 pm »
Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Didn't realise it was a bimboification story (not really my thing), but I did think it was well written and I liked the descent into it.

Thank you Walter! I didn't really think it was 'bimbofication' when I wrote it, although there are some commonalities there. I intended it to be true MC/mind altering than anything. Regardless I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #13 on: November 23, 2019, 07:26:36 pm »
It was typed out as "Fifteen" and is repeated 3 times, so I think this one is pretty ironclad.

Maybe somebody should notify Simon about it?

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #14 on: November 23, 2019, 08:01:11 pm »
Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Didn't realise it was a bimboification story (not really my thing), but I did think it was well written and I liked the descent into it.

Thank you Walter! I didn't really think it was 'bimbofication' when I wrote it, although there are some commonalities there. I intended it to be true MC/mind altering than anything. Regardless I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

I really enjoyed Denise's reaction in this one. Vaguely aware of the changes taking place, but too addicted to the changes to do anything about it. Becoming more overtly sexual as a natural consequence of her initial vanity. Great stuff!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #15 on: November 23, 2019, 08:07:06 pm »
Based on the descriptions, I'm looking forward to reading the following: Vanity by Dede, Bubblegum & Plastic, Giselle the Gazelle, and Refashioned. This is the most exciting collection of story descriptions I've seen at one time in a fair while! :D

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #16 on: November 23, 2019, 08:09:28 pm »
Teacher's Lazy Friday Night has a 15 year old student controlling his teacher. I think that's against archive rules usually?

It was typed out as "Fifteen" and is repeated 3 times, so I think this one is pretty ironclad.

Maybe somebody should notify Simon about it?

Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #17 on: November 23, 2019, 08:41:09 pm »
Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

What I'm wondering about is the *legal* standards. Not sure if posting these kinds of stories isn't breaking the law?

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #18 on: November 23, 2019, 10:05:23 pm »
Can some of this discussion be moved to a more appropriate thread?
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #19 on: November 23, 2019, 10:32:43 pm »
Algorithm by Carefully Random

The technologically-initiated sort of MC that I generally avoid as too impersonal, too easy, but a lot of people have said how much they like this so I thought I would give it a go, too, and I’m glad I did. Because the easy induction isn’t the point in this piece, the writing is, and I'm enjoying it very much. A lot more to read here, but the piece is worth it.

Decisive by All These Roadworks

I read one of this author's other pieces and few weeks ago and much prefer this one.
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, to the point, with a clever twist. It could definitely be a multi-part-er if the author wanted to go that route.

Giselle the Gazelle by AWMBH and Mother's Shadow by Mind Zapper

It’s difficult for me to say anything about either of these two pieces since I had a hand in editing them, but I wouldn’t have if I didn’t like them … I think they’re both very good and highly original. Enthusiastic kudos to both authors, one a first-timer, the other a third-timer!

Hostel by 321

I started reading this several weeks ago and have slowly been making my way through it. It can be a little difficult to follow who’s been turned into whom, but otherwise this is wonderfully executed.

The Spa by Dede

Fun stuff. I read the first 7 chapters, a very relatable and well-written buildup to a rather sudden and complete
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. As with the previously-mentioned multi-part pieces, I’ll get to more later.

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover by Alan Smithee

Shapow! Taut and juicy! Love the concept and execution!

Many thanks to all authors I cited here, as well as to every other writer who contributes to Simon's wonderful archive!
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #20 on: November 23, 2019, 10:41:14 pm »
Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

What I'm wondering about is the *legal* standards. Not sure if posting these kinds of stories isn't breaking the law?

Unless an actual flesh-and-blood child is involved, or images, it is legal in the U.S. Probably. Mostly.

I still wouldn't do it, because ew, and most websites won't allow it, especially since no payment processor will allow it, but Simon shouldn't face any legal repercussions for it.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #21 on: November 23, 2019, 11:18:47 pm »
The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover by Alan Smithee

Shapow! Taut and juicy! Love the concept and execution!

Wow thanks! This one was a struggle to write (kept throwing out chapters and redoing them) so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #22 on: November 24, 2019, 02:17:24 am »
Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

What I'm wondering about is the *legal* standards. Not sure if posting these kinds of stories isn't breaking the law?

I am not a lawyer, but no, it's not illegal in the US.  Communication between an adult (writer, artist, etc) and another adult (reader, viewer, etc) is protected under the 1st Amendment.  The only thing they could nail you on is Obscenity for stories, and it has to be something pretty darned obscene for them to go after, because no one wants to open the box of worms that is an appeal for an obscenity conviction, since Obscenity laws are blatantly unconstitutional.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #23 on: November 24, 2019, 05:36:28 am »
Okay, thanks for explanations. And sorry for derailing the thread somewhat...

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover by Alan Smithee

Shapow! Taut and juicy! Love the concept and execution!

Wow thanks! This one was a struggle to write (kept throwing out chapters and redoing them) so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

I admit I haven't read this one, Walter, but I love how you're homaging Greenaway with this title :)

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #24 on: November 24, 2019, 05:55:27 am »
Ah....321.  No one does Manchurian intrigue better.  Echoing Cerebus regarding “Deep Undercover”, you care for Cassie but can’t wait for her to be triggered, either by Paul or Avery (or by another hypnotized minion.  321 is so good at catching the subjective views of his characters.

You especially see this with “Hostel”.  He effortlessly shows us Rebecca inner thoughts.as she goes from heroine, enthusiastic hypnotic dom, and mesmerized slave.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #25 on: November 24, 2019, 08:43:04 am »
I'd like to call attention to this story:

Cattle and the Creeping Things (mc ff mf) (new)  by Jukebox

Not that much when it comes to actual mind control, but... excellent horror writing!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #26 on: November 24, 2019, 10:50:36 am »
Teacher’s Lazy Friday Night (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Patrax

Potential age squick aside (or not, since Simon has taken it down), this had a really good and somewhat unique depiction of psychic control from a victim's perspective. Also super hot resistance if that sort of thing does it for you. Hopefully the author wasn't put off and decides resubmit an edited version.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #27 on: November 24, 2019, 11:04:44 am »
I don't know how Cerebus gets through these so fast.

Also, confessing to a curiosity how Bedtime Story will go down - it's about as close as I get to romantic hypno fiction.

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lol, you made me laugh out loud with that remark. Thanks! I just read. I pick the stories whose descriptions appeal to me the most and kind of go down the line. It does take time though.

I don't know how you write so many terrific stories. You amaze me.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #28 on: November 24, 2019, 11:10:28 am »
Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

What I'm wondering about is the *legal* standards. Not sure if posting these kinds of stories isn't breaking the law?

Delta Wave.

No. It's not against the law in any way. It is fiction. It is protected by law. Thankfully. You can write, make a movie, sing or paint about anything you want. It is artistic expression. This has been adjudicated by the courts long ago. It is not real, no one is getting hurt. Books and films have been made about every possible situation under the sun. The shame is you have certain sites, and people, who are into censorship and want things banned. Everyone has their own censor, it works one hundred percent of the time. If you see something you don't want to read or watch....don't. It's just that easy.

That last remark was not aimed at you personally. It was a general comment for mass consumption. Never understood why anyone would want to censor because that is a very slippery slope against our rights and it is dangerous. You see, one day something you don't like is censored. Then someday someone may not like what you do and want that censored. Once again that remark was not aimed at you but to people in general, especially those who support censorship. Artist rights are a very important freedom and should always be protected and fought for.

My advice to anyone who sees something they don't like is chill out. Don't play morals Gestapo. The person who wrote it had a vision and took the trouble to do it. For them it was important enough to put their time and effort and thought. That is not easy to do. I know because Ive done it. For those who haven't, try it and you find it is true. If you don't like it, just ignore it and move on. It's not going to kill you to do so and believe it or not, others may like that story even if you don't. You wouldn't want someone censoring what you like would you? What you can read or write. And I can tell you for a fact there are many people who would love to censor all the stories on here. Every single one of them. Every week. They see these stories, that we love and enjoy, as perverted and sick. For those in the past who have reported stories or in the future will want to, think about that before you go trying to get one banned because of your personal preference.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #29 on: November 24, 2019, 12:15:43 pm »
I'd really like to propose that any further discussion on this matter should continue on a separate thread... Let's not derail it any further

As for the new releases, I also liked:

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #30 on: November 24, 2019, 02:39:37 pm »
I admit I haven't read this one, Walter, but I love how you're homaging Greenaway with this title :)

The story connection is negligible (just a focus on strong colours but contextualised for an EMC story), but I loved the title. You'll (possibly) be pleased to note that note that the uh, funeral scene from the film is not featured in this story  :grin:

Someone recommended the film without telling me what it was and that was quite an adventure for my lighthearted 80's movie night, let me tell you that.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #31 on: November 24, 2019, 02:50:41 pm »
I'd like to call attention to this story:

Cattle and the Creeping Things (mc ff mf) (new)  by Jukebox

Not that much when it comes to actual mind control, but... excellent horror writing!

Jukebox has been writing stories for 19 years, and I dare say this is among his best. This could easily find a home in any mainstream short-story compilation, and I hope that it does. Easily equal to early King shorts. Yeah, I'm gushing a bit. This one was good.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #32 on: November 24, 2019, 06:24:22 pm »
Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

We don't often get to see what happens after the "happily-ever-after" (i.e., after the enslavement). Erin's active role in her own slavery, as well as pushing Tiffany to be more Mistress-y, will be very interested and exciting to read moving forward. Tantalizing cliffhanger with Josh, I guess Tiffany had a blind spot when she reprogrammed him.

Brain Development Enterprises (mc mf md in) (2 new chapters)  by JC Beleren
A man purchases a series of self-hypnosis recordings to help him become more assertive.

I read this one on Literotica as it was being published, so I know how it goes. Suffice it to say that I am very much a fan. Honestly, I could take or leave the side plot with Barbara; Kenzie is the real star!

Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Holy moly, what a wonderful brainwashing scene. I love Kohl's other works, so I'm excited to see what more is in store here; especially promising is the hint of foreshadowing about the sister.

The Mind Control Device (mc mf ff md in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Dean invents a mind control device.

I've said it before about this author, and I'll say it again. His works are like ice cream; not the best, not the most substance, but damn do I love to indulge in them.

Mother’s Shadow (mc ff) (new)  by Mind Zapper
The daughter of the most feared sorceress in the known Realms, young Claire struggles with following in her mother’s evil mind-controlling footsteps.

This was absolutely delicious. First-person perspective of being brainwashed is my absolute favorite, and the way that this author portrays the experience is magical. It is their first addition to the archive, and I eagerly await their future works.

Sisters (SleepyTimeSlut) (mc ff mf in) (1 new chapter)  by SleepyTimeSlut
Kenzie used to be a smart, serious student. But when her sister starts filling her iPod with “special” music, Kenzie becomes a little dumber, a lot more horny, and way more agreeable.

I loved this story way back when it the first chapters came out, and I love it now. The twist seemed a bit rushed, and the story as a whole is a bit unpolished, but the brainwashing is just searingly hot.

Wildwood (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by notorioushypno
A mind control conspiracy spawns small-town hokum, entangling a group of plucky university students, some deadbeat locals, and a team of federal investigators.

I've been following this story since the beginning, and wow. Just wow. This chapter is far and away the best chapter in the entire story so far, as well as my choice for the best update of the week. As previously mentioned, first-person perspective of brainwashed slavery is my favorite, and when juxtaposed with the action that has been building in the previous chapters, this chapter was like a full-body immersion into the just what exactly it would be like to be one of Sal's girls. I've read and reread this chapter a dozen times so far, and I still get the shivers every time. I'm sure that there must be further development with the story, and I'm sure that not every chapter will be this perfect, but as far as I'm concerned this chapter is precisely what I want from the rest of the story. Just perfect, obedient bliss.

Wires (mc sf) (new)  by MoldedMind
On a routine visit to the server room, Jessie gets more than she bargained for.

A wonderful vignette. I wish that there was more focus on the brainwashing and reprogramming, but the imagery of being bound and wrapped in wires was excellent. I did greatly enjoy the brief attention paid to having strange thoughts, noticing that they are strange, and not caring that they are implanted (and in fact welcoming her own brainwashing). I really like this kind of subtle mental manipulation.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #33 on: November 24, 2019, 07:05:00 pm »
Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Holy moly, what a wonderful brainwashing scene. I love Kohl's other works, so I'm excited to see what more is in store here; especially promising is the hint of foreshadowing about the sister.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #34 on: November 24, 2019, 07:10:35 pm »
I'd like to call attention to this story:

Cattle and the Creeping Things (mc ff mf) (new)  by Jukebox

Not that much when it comes to actual mind control, but... excellent horror writing!

Jukebox has been writing stories for 19 years, and I dare say this is among his best. This could easily find a home in any mainstream short-story compilation, and I hope that it does. Easily equal to early King shorts. Yeah, I'm gushing a bit. This one was good.

321,

Just had time to read the story and I agree with you, just a great short. Here is the other thing, how reliable is the narrator? Is the story true or is the narrator insane? That adds to the whole atmosphere of the story.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #35 on: November 24, 2019, 07:36:58 pm »
Wow. This has been an amazing update!

Algorithm gives us a great new chapter that deftly handles several threads at the same time. We've got the inevitable negative fallout from someone having their mind toyed with. We've got a cute, if certainly imperfect romance between two of our leads. And hovering in the background is... something not good. Something- someone, that is- is moving around in the shadows and is plotting something for our characters. Oh man, this story just gets better and better!

Speaking of things in the background, Cattle and the Creeping Things! I said this earlier and I'll say it again, this is one of the finest pieces of MC fiction that I have ever read. One of the things I love about it is that you completely get into the main character's head, even though there's actually very little written to describe them. The MC is subtle and creepy. I cannot recommend this story enough!

Speaking of amazing stuff, can we talk about the brainwashing scene in Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow...? Smart, hot, and sexy. Brilliantly written. Pop!

I'm a big fan of SoVeryFascinated's work, so it's probably no surprise that I liked this week's chapter of Dead of Night. Wonderful creepiness throughout. The scene where
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Story idea: A national pageant with 50 beautiful contestants. What if they all got hypnotized at once? And so AWMBH's Giselle the Gazelle begins. Who on earth is behind this crazy setup, and why? And when will the lions wake up? So many questions here, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Mother's Shadow is a nice fantasy short by first-time author Mind Zapper. Some great interplay between the characters, and some hot hot HOT mind control going on throughout. Pop!

I've praised Vanity before as well, but it deserves a second round. Dede has a real talent for describing slow, delicious, and sexy decents into MC enslavement. There's a great theme going on here, as Denise's vanity contributes to her downfall, and vice-versa. A lovely short story!

If you haven't been reading Wildwood yet, this chapter is all the prodding you need to read the whole thing. This chapter is packed full of sexy scenes and beautiful, mind-controlled slaves. The story doesn't end here, which means that there is more intrigue to come. Fantastic stuff.

Finally (and I have more to read this week!) there's a nifty little sci-horror story going on with MoldedMind's Wires. Technological horror isn't something you see all that often on this site, but it is one of my favorite genres. I wonder if Jesse will be back to make some special modifications to her workplace's computers...

More to come! Good work, everyone!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #36 on: November 24, 2019, 09:04:10 pm »
Speaking of amazing stuff, can we talk about the brainwashing scene in Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow...? Smart, hot, and sexy. Brilliantly written. Pop!

Aww. <3 Thank you!

Pop!
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #37 on: November 24, 2019, 10:08:08 pm »
Cattle and the Creeping Things (mc ff mf) (new)  by Jukebox

Something something squirrels on Rick and Morty. Jukebox is hit or miss for me, and sadly this one was a miss. Not that it matters, since other people are enjoying it (more than) just fine, but yeah, "Squirrels, Dude."

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #38 on: November 25, 2019, 01:37:11 pm »
The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover by Alan Smithee

Shapow! Taut and juicy! Love the concept and execution!

Wow thanks! This one was a struggle to write (kept throwing out chapters and redoing them) so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

I often skip the green stories, but this one pulled me in. Thoroughly enjoying it!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #39 on: November 25, 2019, 02:51:49 pm »
Hm. I don't know if it's good form, but... has anyone read my story, by chance? *twiddles fingers nervously*

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #40 on: November 25, 2019, 03:14:14 pm »
Hm. I don't know if it's good form, but... has anyone read my story, by chance? *twiddles fingers nervously*

Not yet, but I'll mark this post and read it tonight or tomorrow night when I get some more time  :)

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #41 on: November 25, 2019, 05:54:54 pm »
Speaking of amazing stuff, can we talk about the brainwashing scene in Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow...? Smart, hot, and sexy. Brilliantly written. Pop!

Aww. <3 Thank you!

Pop!

Got to agree. Nice to see a bit of topspin on something like that.

It hasn't topped Button Pusher, but that's a flat-out unfair comparison - Button Pusher is my platonic ideal for supers brainwashing.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #42 on: November 25, 2019, 08:26:04 pm »
Speaking of amazing stuff, can we talk about the brainwashing scene in Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow...? Smart, hot, and sexy. Brilliantly written. Pop!

Aww. <3 Thank you!

Pop!

Got to agree. Nice to see a bit of topspin on something like that.

It hasn't topped Button Pusher, but that's a flat-out unfair comparison - Button Pusher is my platonic ideal for supers brainwashing.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #43 on: November 25, 2019, 11:21:23 pm »
Damn, lot of eyes on this update. Almost wish I'd finished my latest, but it wasn't happening. Oh well.

Time for the inaugural installment of Day-old Thoughts on Week-old Stories with MCaesar. Today is Wildwood by notorioushypno:

I've been on a kick for a while, where I like stories that have a lot of building dramatic tension, and make myself nauseous as they get more tense. I'm a glutton for punishment that way, and Wildwood has been delivering.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #44 on: November 26, 2019, 03:43:12 am »
The Mind Masters Of Earth (mc ff sf) (new)  by Delta Wave
It’s been six years since the unscrupulous telepaths, the Mind Masters, took over the world and established a global tyrannical government. A young woman, Maya Hudson, hates the telepaths’ regime with a passion. But, as she’s conscripted for service at the Masters’ governmental complex, her life is about to change drastically...

It's exposition heavy, especially for such a short piece. What happens is nice, but again - it's short! Until right at the end I expected it to have a "... to be continued" type thing but it appears to just be a one-and-done. I would definitely read more if you wanted to continue in the same world, seems a shame to have it end after you built it up so much!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #45 on: November 26, 2019, 08:04:03 am »
Thanks to everyone who's been reading and enjoying Wildwood. I really appreciate the feedback. I've never done a story this long or complex, and all of these comments are giving me the confidence to try something more ambitious. Although I think I'll stick to shorter pieces in the immediate future.

With respect to what MCaesar wrote, I'm very grateful for the criticism. It's definitely making me look more seriously at what I wrote/what I'm currently working on. I don't know what the etiquette is for responding, but I pretty much agree with everything you wrote. Touching on your points more specifically, though:

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #46 on: November 26, 2019, 09:10:56 am »
In Good Hands (mc mf ff md ma in) (1 new chapter)  by Quiet Hypnotist
While living alone under one roof with her horny cousin, Chayenne grows more and more puzzled over her reaction to him. If only she could calm down and figure out what’s wrong. Surely his massages could help?

This series is truly excellent. I wonder what the inspiration was?  :angel:

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Nichole is looking forward to learning a lot from her internship. She will.

I haven't read this yet, but hot damn am I excited to.

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Kenzie used to be a smart, serious student. But when her sister starts filling her iPod with “special” music, Kenzie becomes a little dumber, a lot more horny, and way more agreeable.

Looooooved the mother/aunt twist in this one. Hot as hell, totally logical, and immediately filled my brain with a thousand story ideas.

The rest of the tale is also great.

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Teacher’s Lazy Friday Night (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Patrax
Katie doesn’t understand why she changed into her sexiest lingerie after coming home from school. Her mind has been very murky lately.

Loved this; immediately clicked through to read more Patrax stories, and was disappointed to see that it was their first. Hope it comes back, and hoping for many more!
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #47 on: November 26, 2019, 09:46:23 am »
Thanks to everyone who's been reading and enjoying Wildwood. I really appreciate the feedback. I've never done a story this long or complex, and all of these comments are giving me the confidence to try something more ambitious. Although I think I'll stick to shorter pieces in the immediate future.

Not really good at giving reviews, but do want to take the time to mention that I also have been enjoying this story. Would probably second the criticism about Mary, would have loved to see more of her falling victim. I do also have trouble trying to remember the vast amount of characters, but I think that's more an issue on my end than a problem with the story. But yes, eagerly waiting for more, especially since you said it'll be wrapping up soon!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #48 on: November 26, 2019, 02:23:30 pm »

Also gotta mention Greyscribbler's The Internship. I have always been a sucker for the, young girl interns at company......big changes to come....stories and when I saw Grey was doing this one my heart soared, lol. The reason is Grey understand MC in a very unique way, he understands pacing like few other and also is not afraid to write long stories that really involve plot and character and change. All thing I love. And I was not disappointed in the lest with the first chapter as lovey young Nicole begins what she thinks will be the next small chapter of her life and that I suspect will become the large permanent part of her life, the only part of her life that will matter eventually. As usual Scribbler does a great job with plot and characters. We meet Nicole her boss Miss Henderson, who is extremely well executed here, and the icy Clara, Henderson's PA. The dynamics here between them are very subtle and interesting.

Nicole feels the first tendrils of change but nothing overwhelming. As usual, Grey takes his good old, simmering, burning time with the inductions. Can't wait to see where this is going.


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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #49 on: November 26, 2019, 02:51:05 pm »
The Mind Masters Of Earth (mc ff sf) (new)  by Delta Wave

It's exposition heavy, especially for such a short piece. What happens is nice, but again - it's short! Until right at the end I expected it to have a "... to be continued" type thing but it appears to just be a one-and-done. I would definitely read more if you wanted to continue in the same world, seems a shame to have it end after you built it up so much!

Thank you for an opinion :)

Yeah, it's a weird story. I'm kind of thinking of writing something more in this setting, but I don't have anything concrete planned yet. Just bits of ideas...

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #50 on: November 26, 2019, 04:18:52 pm »
With respect to what MCaesar wrote, I'm very grateful for the criticism. It's definitely making me look more seriously at what I wrote/what I'm currently working on. I don't know what the etiquette is for responding, but I pretty much agree with everything you wrote. Touching on your points more specifically, though:

You're most welcome. I prefer "critique" to "criticism," though, as it's all meant to be constructive. Criticism has a bit more of a negative connotation. I hope it came across as "hey, cool story, and here's some stuff you might not have thought of." Gripe was probably not the best word for my to use, either. "Note" or "thought" would be closer.

Having mulled over the Mary bit, I think the story would benefit either from investing more in it, or as you said, paring it down. If you had made her a background character in Molly's story, then the focus would have been tighter on the scooby-gang, and you could have made the reveal of Mary being enslaved be a smaller, but still impactful moment.

I'm not a critic by trade, though, so take everything I say with a grain of well-meaning salt.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #51 on: November 28, 2019, 10:46:23 pm »
Personally, I love the Mary plot line, and would love to see it revived with more development. Right now, Mary, Molly, and Patti are all enslaved... This is delicious. I want more.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #52 on: November 30, 2019, 09:22:28 am »
Better late than never I suppose ... I remember reading Wildwood when I first saw it and I'd never gotten around to going back to it until I started seeing how many people are enjoying it.  So I finally did go back to read it over the last few days and it's wonderful, thank you to notorioushypno and thank you to all the reviewers who said something, and maybe I'll even learn something about jumping to conclusions too soon.  I too loved Mary's plotline, and hope there's more of it, though it seems I'm diving in much closer to the end than the beginning.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #53 on: November 30, 2019, 11:37:59 am »
The Mind Masters Of Earth (mc ff sf) (new)  by Delta Wave
It’s been six years since the unscrupulous telepaths, the Mind Masters, took over the world and established a global tyrannical government. A young woman, Maya Hudson, hates the telepaths’ regime with a passion. But, as she’s conscripted for service at the Masters’ governmental complex, her life is about to change drastically...

What is interesting is the underlying theme of "nothing was as expected." In some ways, that is always how the present is in hindsight. Into the 1970s, it was expected that we would be colonizing our solar system by as early as the 1990s or have destroyed ourselves in WWIII before the twenty-first century. 2021 will certainly not be exactly as expected by those living in the tail end of 2019! Anyway, I did enjoy the old school, alien invasion undertones, as well as hints of They Live. The eroticism here was definitely for those more interested in the mind control itself, especially for those looking for minimal struggle and total control. An interesting, albeit very quick, cerebral piece.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #54 on: November 30, 2019, 12:41:50 pm »
Salem’s Blood (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Jan is invited to go to a grave of a witch but she soon discovers it’s not all pretend.

This does not go quite where one might expect, and that is a great thing. As a result, this was more reminiscent of Dracula A.D. 1972, but better in some ways. We all pretty much know how a Dracula story is going to go, but there was no way to know where Salem's Blood was going to go. Louise had her own opportunistic agenda -- Dracula did not seem to have one in 1972. Jan, though, was absolutely amazing. Perhaps she did get a good laugh in the end, but certainly not in the way she was expecting earlier!

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #55 on: November 30, 2019, 01:30:34 pm »
School Foot Daze (mc fd ft) (new)  by Jake Elwoods
A college student is overwhelmed by the smell of Janet’s feet.

Mind control? Foot fetish? How could I resist!? Definitely for those that are really into feet, even through the associated MC aspects. So, yeah, I personally found it all a pretty hot and fun read. What was interesting here was how that scent did not enthrall everyone. It seemed polarizing in a way, giving a degree of mystery as to what makes one repelled or enthralled. The guy did not seem to have a foot fetish at the start. At the same time, others turned out to be aware of what she could do to people. It all gave off the scent, I mean, sense that Janet was still learning about her power over others. Fun overall with a nice laugh at the end.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #56 on: December 01, 2019, 12:48:15 pm »
Just wanted to say that ‘Giselle the Gazelle’ is one of the most original MC stories I’ve read in years! Thoroughly enjoying so far and thanks for posting it, AWMBH. I also highly recommend his & Nickelmodeltales 'And... Freeze'

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #57 on: December 01, 2019, 04:29:31 pm »
School Foot Daze (mc fd ft) (new)  by Jake Elwoods
A college student is overwhelmed by the smell of Janet’s feet.

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I personally found it all a pretty hot and fun read.

Thanks for the recommendation ... I just read it and enjoyed it, too.
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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #58 on: December 05, 2019, 04:18:50 pm »
Today on Day-Old Thoughts On Week-Old Stories: Extracts From The Westriver Gazette.

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Re: New Releases-November 23rd 2019
« Reply #59 on: December 06, 2019, 03:02:02 am »
Hm. I don't know if it's good form, but... has anyone read my story, by chance? *twiddles fingers nervously*

I did. I read an earlier version, too, and gave you quite a lot of editing feedback, noticing that you used almost all of it.

But without crediting my efforts.

Speaking of good form, I appreciate that AWMBH and Mind Zapper, who I also provided quite a lot of editing feedback to and who submitted stories the same week, credited my efforts at the end of their stories. Even though AWMBH spelled my name wrong so Simon didn't hyperlink it.

That was one of the busier weeks I've ever had as an editor. My own writing still isn't back on track. I don't think I'll be doing quite so much of that again.
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