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New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« on: September 07, 2019, 10:00:04 am »
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You can now download the BBCode version of the What’s New page at https://mcstories.com/WhatsNew.txt

Antithesis (mc ff) (new)  by Shadra
After a trip to Germany, Bethany is eager to surprise her friend, even if the motivation isn’t entirely her own.

Bluepilled (mc mf md in ds sf) (1 new chapter)  by Somnophile
A brilliant but amoral young scientist’s creation transforms his mother into a gorgeous bombshell...and his slave.

A Change in Tone (mc mf gr in) (new)  by thestepfordgirl
A mastermind’s plan falls into place, with one last obstacle. Then we glimpse into the new world he has created for him... and ‘his’ family.

Dick Picture Perfect (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Will sends a dick pic to a girl, knowing that she would hate it. But it turns out that every woman who sees that picture needs more of it.

Fan Service (mc ma) (new)  by Dr. HypnoD
Amy’s fan is broken, so she calls a local repair service to fix it. But instead of fixing it, Frank gets her a new fan. One that Amy really, really likes.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (3 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Frank & Jessy — Collar Play (mc mf md fd bd ft sf) (new)  by schizo
Jessy purchases some illegal tech for her and Frank to play with.

Ghost Boy (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Intended Attraction (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
In this sequel to Unintended Attraction, our hero starts to take for granted the growing mastery of his ability.

It (mc mm in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Porgy discovers that a clown is living in the gutter.

Lightning & Thunder (mc fd) (new)  by Meleva
A traveling storyteller has a lesson and a challenge for you, regarding her craft and the importance of anticipation.

Massaged By My Nerdy Brother (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by BurroGirl18 and Pan
A few innocent massages with her brother go too far.

Mind-Control Panties (mc mf md in) (2 new chapters)  by mypenname3000
A mysterious figure adds special items to the inventory of trendy clothing stores—panties with special phrases written on them.

The Music Plays on in Her Mind (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by CrystalWitch
Crystal is hypnotized by a collection of erotic stories.

Our Lullaby (mc ff) (new)  by Jukebox
Kenzie hates to admit it, but she needs Tasha to sing her a lullaby to help get to sleep again. Luckily, Tasha has just the song to send her off to dreamland.

Poetry & Blood (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Trixie Adara
Laura gets a new job for a strange romance writer that seems to be too good to be true.

Ready to Serve (mc mf fd md fu) (new)  by GigglingGoblin
Weak-willed Senya runs into a demoness who feeds by tempting her victims into taking control and dominating her, and it quickly devolves into an contest of submissiveness that is embarrassing to everyone involved.

Room With a Secret (mc mf md) (new)  by Maximilian Cummings
Young ladies don’t know or can’t remember a room that makes their minds so open to suggestion.

The Spiral Girl (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by connie k
An unscrupulous hypnotist recounts his fateful meeting with a new subject, and how his plans spiral out of control.

Split Slave (mc ff ma bd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Skaetlett
Delta, a non-binary, kidnapped sex slave with a protective alternate personality, gets auctioned off to a multimillionaire who seems to have more in store than they’re ready for. Their Mistress thinks she knows everything about them and is wrong.

Subscription Model (mc mf ff md fd ma) (1 new chapter)  by scifiscribbler
Jenny is obsessed with porn videos that features hypnosis.

They all became Slaves and Robots for the Robomaster (mc ff md rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
A hidden power converts a man into Roboman The Robomaster.

The Tickle War (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Benign Rasputin
Kerry loves to tickle Jack, and there’s not much he can do about it, until he discovers that Kerry is a somnambulist.

Winter Horror Story (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Mary is turned into a vampire.


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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2019, 11:20:10 am »
Shiny new things! Shiny new things, everyone!  :)

Maybe I'm biased, but Shadra's Antithesis is absolutely fantastic. Hot scenes, covert hypnosis, trigger phrases... plus a plucky (if overwhelmed) heroine doing her best to bring down a devious mind controller. Highly recommend this one!

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2019, 02:58:59 pm »
Am I just dumb or is there nothing new on the panties story? I don’t see any chapters after the August 31st one.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2019, 05:21:30 pm »
Maybe I'm biased, but Shadra's Antithesis is absolutely fantastic. Hot scenes, covert hypnosis, trigger phrases... plus a plucky (if overwhelmed) heroine doing her best to bring down a devious mind controller. Highly recommend this one!

Thank you as always for the kind words. You enjoying is of course all I could ask for, given the premise. =)

I goofed so hard... I never noticed that the italics never transferred when I converted the story to txt format. This is such a catastrophic failure... Sorry to any readers if certain lines read really strangely.


Edit: Thank you so much Simon, I don't know how to repay you. You're the best!
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #4 on: September 07, 2019, 06:20:38 pm »
I goofed so hard... I never noticed that the italics never transferred when I converted the story to txt format. This is such a catastrophic failure... Sorry to any readers if certain lines read really strangely.

Going through a several-thousand-word manuscript to give Simon his markup is always frustrating.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2019, 06:22:15 pm »
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2019, 07:53:12 pm »
Simon to the rescue! Antithesis has italics now!

Given that, I am upgrading my rating from "fantastic" to "even more fantastic-er"  :)

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2019, 07:55:08 pm »
Some really good stuff this week.

Lets start with 321's terrific Hostel. Oh you fooled me 321. I thought Celeste was going to go against Rebecca because she liked things as they were at the end of the last chapter. Ohhh I do love being fooled! It makes the reading all the more fun and interesting. Payback for a couple turns in Blood Sport 321? I have always felt turnaround is fair play. Unless you fooled me on a deeper level even than I think and Celeste did indeed betray Rebecca as I suspected but you now have me thinking she didn't. That ending of the this chapter, snap....Hmmmmmm.....What's going to happen after that snap I wonder 321? I'm suspicious. With you so hard to tell. And I do enjoy that so. Keep me guessing 321, keep me guessing.

Also really liked Frank and Jessy's Collar Play. Interesting plot and characters. They are delving into dark, illegal things. Nothing bad could happen, right? Jessy learns the hard way in chapter one that if you give someone control over you, even some you think loves you and you think you know, you are taking a very big risk.


ScifiScribbler's Subscription Model. This story has a very interesting complex plot as Jenny falls deeper and deeper under control and into a world that she never suspected. The characters are also so well drawn and defined. Not only is the story top rate the MC in it is just smoking hot. I mean burning. Unusually so. So many great depictions. The shower scene in the last chapter just the latest. So hot the water there started to boil and it was coming out of the cold spigot. Ssssssssssss....This is just such an excellent story and so fun to read on all levels.

And then of course we have Shadra's Antithesis. Hard to put tricky, involved plotting into a short but Shadra did just that. So much so that you really have to follow carefully to get all the story. And that's a good thing.

I loved the part where Marissa was reading the love portion of the book. The reader of course did not know it was a character reading and assumed it was a character in your story narrating their own experience. Very well done and had me totally fooled.

I thought Dawn was a force for evil when she was at the airport looking for someone. But in the end she was on the side of good trying to help the girls against evil Alice. Once again a lovely turn of tables for the reader. Well done in all regards including the delicious MC.

That's all I have had time to read so far. I will try to get the others as the week goes on.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #8 on: September 07, 2019, 09:27:40 pm »
We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #9 on: September 08, 2019, 03:29:02 am »
ScifiScribbler's Subscription Model. This story has a very interesting complex plot as Jenny falls deeper and deeper under control and into a world that she never suspected. The characters are also so well drawn and defined. Not only is the story top rate the MC in it is just smoking hot. I mean burning. Unusually so. So many great depictions. The shower scene in the last chapter just the latest. So hot the water there started to boil and it was coming out of the cold spigot. Ssssssssssss....This is just such an excellent story and so fun to read on all levels.

Obviously, there's no part of this review I'm unhappy with, but I'm really glad to hear that it connected basically the way I wanted it too when I first woke up one lunchtime with the phrase "I'm going to help you brainwash me" and built a story backward from it.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #10 on: September 08, 2019, 10:11:37 am »
ScifiScribbler,

That story you told is a very interesting way for your story to be conceived and  birthed. And you certainly were the right doctor to deliver it to the world. Thanks for such a tremendous effort. The time and thought you put into it are obvious. It was my pleasure to give it the review I did.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #11 on: September 08, 2019, 01:44:55 pm »
“Hostel” continues to amaze me, balancing hot hypnosis scenes with a thrilling multi chapter narrative with so many intricate twists.  Rebecca is trying so hard to do the right thing.....”

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #12 on: September 08, 2019, 02:51:01 pm »
S.B.'s Femdom MC Flash Fiction continues with some nice new entries. Liked the writing of them all, but Burn the Ice was definitely up my alley. Playful, clever interaction with the right dash of gentle and dominance. Hope they don't catch a cold on the ice or anything.

Lightning and Thunder from Meleva was a nice piece of meta storytelling for me. Loved how it played out with all the possible distractions and interruptions, and how they were utilized to make the storytelling so engrossing by the end of it. The woman naturally knows how to keep a captive audience once she has them, or him. I bet the guy will be releived that he'll get to extend relief to her soon too.

And Jukebox's Our Lullaby is probably one of the best stories that's had anything to do with lullabies. Clever lyrics, sweet interactions, and I kind of wish someone would do an audio recording of a scenario like this; would be as equally entertaining as what I read in this one.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #13 on: September 08, 2019, 05:10:05 pm »
Am I just dumb or is there nothing new on the panties story? I don’t see any chapters after the August 31st one.

New chapters have been added earlier - 7 and 10 - which can be picked out by looking at the individual chapter update dates.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #14 on: September 08, 2019, 05:14:53 pm »
S.B.'s Femdom MC Flash Fiction continues with some nice new entries. Liked the writing of them all, but Burn the Ice was definitely up my alley. Playful, clever interaction with the right dash of gentle and dominance. Hope they don't catch a cold on the ice or anything.


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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #15 on: September 08, 2019, 07:07:13 pm »
Am I just dumb or is there nothing new on the panties story? I don’t see any chapters after the August 31st one.

New chapters have been added earlier - 7 and 10 - which can be picked out by looking at the individual chapter update dates.

Yep I knew it. Dumb as a brick is I. Cheers mate thanks.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #16 on: September 08, 2019, 10:20:33 pm »
Shiny new things! Shiny new things, everyone!  :)

Maybe I'm biased, but Shadra's Antithesis is absolutely fantastic. Hot scenes, covert hypnosis, trigger phrases... plus a plucky (if overwhelmed) heroine doing her best to bring down a devious mind controller. Highly recommend this one!

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I've really been enjoying "Hostel" and then as if that's not been good enough, you've induced Shadra to write and submit another story too!  "Antithesis" was definitely a fun (and hot) read, and "Following Her Dream" was one of my favorite stories and actually brought me back here after a bit of an absence.  Enough of that though, I'm definitely looking forward to more "Hostel" and whatever else comes from this new 'collaboration!'

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #17 on: September 09, 2019, 05:48:01 am »
We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

Has the rule changed on TG stories?  Because they weren't allowed on mcstories for a long time. 

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« Reply #18 on: September 09, 2019, 09:38:14 am »
We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

Has the rule changed on TG stories?  Because they weren't allowed on mcstories for a long time.

It's been an unwritten rule for a long time, but being unwritten makes it harder to check up on.

There has been a blanket ban on TG-centric stories (the stereotypical example being "Zap! You're a woman now. (MC) Zap! You're okay with being a woman now. 10k+ words about how it's different being a woman and/or trying out the new sexual organs.") but incidental TG has been allowed. And transgender characters are fine - it's the "magical" transformation that appears to be the issue.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #19 on: September 10, 2019, 02:25:02 pm »
I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #20 on: September 10, 2019, 03:59:38 pm »
I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #21 on: September 10, 2019, 04:18:23 pm »
I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it

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« Reply #22 on: September 10, 2019, 04:37:03 pm »
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #23 on: September 10, 2019, 05:40:30 pm »
I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it

We'll all be here when you get back  :)

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #24 on: September 11, 2019, 06:49:15 pm »
We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

Has the rule changed on TG stories?  Because they weren't allowed on mcstories for a long time.

It's been an unwritten rule for a long time, but being unwritten makes it harder to check up on.

There has been a blanket ban on TG-centric stories (the stereotypical example being "Zap! You're a woman now. (MC) Zap! You're okay with being a woman now. 10k+ words about how it's different being a woman and/or trying out the new sexual organza .") but incidental TG has been allowed. And transgender characters are fine - it's the "magical" transformation that appears to be the issue.

Well dumbass did a violet Beauregard on a pill he found at his wife’s house after she got bimbofied, and didn’t consider maybe I shouldn’t take a pill my son made. Which apparently aside from fixing all that ails you, and hypnotizes you briefly after ingestion, also turns you into a hot chick slowly over time.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #25 on: September 11, 2019, 07:17:57 pm »
Whew, meant to post something much earlier, but I didn't get around to reading much until today.

To start with, I'm sorry to hear about what you're going through, Merry. I hope all goes well!

Thanks once again to Simon for so graciously taking the time to fix the error I made with my story for this week. It is greatly appreciated.

And speaking of Antithesis, thanks to CerebusOne, Fumanchu, BethanyP, and of course 321 himself for the kind words about the short. Like I said at the end of the story, the idea came about as a joke, and grew into something I never intended to write, but couldn't resist. It was fun, and I hope people were able to catch the few references that I managed to put in. Despite how it ended, I haven't quite decided if the story will continue, but I'm certainly not closed off to the idea. Perhaps someday, should the inspiration strike.

And now onto the main event!

Seems only natural to talk about Hostel first. Sometimes I feel like a broken record, but I love everything about 321's work. The characters, even the antagonists, are so wonderful (and wonderfully written!), the story is so engaging, and the hypnosis is just... flawless. I've never been disappointed, and this chapter is no exception to that. Well... I do have one complaint. It could have used more Jessica! I've heard some very intriguing theories about what might be happening... but I'll wait to see what unfolds first.

The Tickle War was a great piece, and I'm actually sad to see that it's already over. Very well written, and the scene near the beginning with her driving was pretty. dang. nice. I enjoyed the change of pace from the usual story, wherein everything is loving and friendly and lighthearted, and really reminds me of the story Crutch. Just a very sweet, lovely tale through and through.

I read The Spiral Girl as a result of a recommendation by a friend. Just fantastic descriptions of the induction and where things went with the girl. While I'm not a fan of Brandan, and the way he carries himself, I think the rest of the story more than made up for that. I did more or less predict what was going to happen with the character mentioned at the end (the tags hinted at it) but was actually surprised that the story pretty much confirmed it with the last sentence. Have to say, I am looking forward to seeing how things play out in the coming chapters.

Because of what CerebusOne said, I decided to check out Subscription Model. Admittedly I still have a lot of catch up to do, so I can't really say much about the story, certainly nothing about the recent chapter, but the premise seems interesting, and leaves me curious enough to continue. The quality of the writing certainly helps persuade me as well!

That's all I have to say for now! Hopefully I'll find time for more reading before the weekend. Gotta find something to keep me busy until there's more Hostel!

Thank you again to everyone that enjoyed Antithesis!!

PS. Regarding the TG ban. I believe that yes, it is strictly just for stories involving transformations between genders. From what I recall, it was partly because the MC was used as an excuse for the transformation and didn't really play into the story in any other way, and partly because of just how many such stories there were. At least that's what I recall reading. Could be off.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #26 on: September 11, 2019, 08:25:39 pm »
So would the ban effect an inadvertent TG story, as the character did it to them self and the MC is merely capitalizing on their ignorance

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #27 on: September 11, 2019, 10:54:21 pm »
So would the ban effect an inadvertent TG story, as the character did it to them self and the MC is merely capitalizing on their ignorance

Ultimately, only Simon can say for sure where he draws the line. If the story followed the dad rather than the son, and focused on his new life after the pills' effect rather than the transformation period, then it would be a lot more likely to get rejected - evidently the story as it stands hasn't been, but we don't know how close to the line it came, nor if, rather than a line, there's a fuzzy area where the same exact story might get accepted one time and rejected another...
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #28 on: September 12, 2019, 02:36:08 am »
Or how far the transformation will go

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #29 on: September 12, 2019, 10:23:47 am »
Thank you, Shadra!

The second part should be ... quite different, for all concerned.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #30 on: September 12, 2019, 11:34:15 am »
Winter Horror Story (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Mary is turned into a vampire.

Vampirism and MC erotica can be happy, bloody bedfellows. This well written and vivid piece was done with clear ease. The pacing was perfect, moving from carefree hopping in the snow to being taken by Lilith herself. This felt kind of like one of those gripping flashbacks in one of those contemporary vamp tales, many of which mediocre at best. All right, this was kinda predictable, and more than familiar. However, if you love vampires and erotica, this quickie is not to be missed.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #31 on: September 14, 2019, 05:14:12 pm »
Sadly found out Thursday that pretty much all is brain issue, will all things permitting write a little more on matter tomorrow when stronger
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #32 on: September 14, 2019, 06:30:23 pm »
I'm so sorry, Jean. My heart aches that you have to deal with all this.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #33 on: September 15, 2019, 02:21:39 am »
Sadly found out Thursday that pretty much all is brain issue, will all things permitting write a little more on matter tomorrow when stronger

I'm so sorry, Merry, you are in my thoughts and prayers.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #34 on: September 15, 2019, 08:01:25 am »
Thanks both of you. I'll get my computer expert when she gets back next weekend (Friday) as I suspect laptop isnt perfect either,but bulk is clearly me
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #35 on: September 19, 2019, 02:56:29 pm »
Wow, The Spiral Girl is outstanding! Ive liked connie k's stuff before, but this takes it to a whole new plane! Looking forward to the next installment, especially the turn I sense coming.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #36 on: September 20, 2019, 11:16:37 am »
Thank you, so much, Bob!

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #37 on: September 20, 2019, 03:50:30 pm »
You're very welcome, connie!

By the way, I tried sending my first PM through this site yesterday, to you, about the single word in The Spiral Girl that I stumbled over. Did you receive that PM?

No worries if you disagree with my thought ... I just wanted to learn if the message was sent (and received) since it didn't appear in my Sent Items. That may be a Setting somewhere, I don't know.
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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #38 on: September 20, 2019, 06:15:38 pm »
By default, messages aren't saved to your outbox. There's a setting somewhere to always save them, or you can hit the checkbox below every message you send.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #39 on: September 20, 2019, 06:24:36 pm »
You're very welcome, connie!

By the way, I tried sending my first PM through this site yesterday, to you, about the single word in The Spiral Girl that I stumbled over. Did you receive that PM?

No worries if you disagree with my thought ... I just wanted to learn if the message was sent (and received) since it didn't appear in my Sent Items. That may be a Setting somewhere, I don't know.

Lol yep as Shadra says you have to enable messages being saved to the outbox. I got tripped up by that recently too!

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #40 on: September 20, 2019, 06:31:49 pm »
Might have actually been you that tipped me off to it xD I didn't change it until recently myself, and only cuz I saw it mentioned a week or two ago somewhere around here.

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #41 on: September 21, 2019, 01:55:21 pm »
Yes, Bob, I got it and replied.

Thank you again!

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Re: New Releases-September 7th, 2019
« Reply #42 on: October 12, 2019, 11:18:12 am »
Antithesis by Shadra

Yes, an interesting story coming out of the Hostel idea, though I'm not sure how much Alice would approve of the idea of someone doing this, I must say. Dont worry, Alice, I'd still love to try that brainwashing system of yours in time, anyway.
Its well written, and the way the airport scene plays out is fun, as I'm sure will be their time in Berlin together. Definitely glad the author asked me to read, for sure
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