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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #25 on: August 28, 2019, 09:34:52 am »
Yes, Geo, and I commented on that, especially concerning my favourite, but if you want me to mark you down...? :laugh:

Scifi, I'll try and remember to take your advice on that, though given the state of my brain now, no promises given. I love the way its done though

Redsliver, Too many would have just gone 'I want you now,come with me' rather than working it through in a way that works for all parties

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #26 on: August 29, 2019, 12:41:31 pm »
Part 3

At Her Service

I know I say I shouldnt love green fd, but this, yes, I did! Yes, I worked out the logic of Sergei Bely as a name too. The story is great fun, as the tale of now, and the past are spread before us, I must day. Yes, I love the way Gloria got everything sorted out too. Just hope her surname wasnt Swanson, lol?
High end of definitely enjoyed

Bluepilled

Yes, it isnt tagged as incest, but as the description gives away, it plays a big part in this. Being honest, thats the only thing I could have lived without, as the rest of the story is wonderful done, and despite the surname, I do hope his Professor has justice done to him in time. I would suggest Stephanie's slave, but I suspect she has another fate lined up for her? :laugh: Still, as long as she gets something out of it, then...? Oh, this Stephanie could do with some of those pills, seriously! Might need a dancer/actress/sexbot makeover in her transformation lol! :laugh:
I'm going to give it high end of definitely enjoyed, despite the incest, because its such a delightfully feelgood story other than that factor

Hostel

Oh god, I loved the ending. I know I shouldnt love Alice, but I do! Mind, is Celeste the bait for Alice, or is it perhaps one more twist, and Alice is the bait for Celeste? The scene with Jessica is an absolute delight too, as has been the whole story. And yes, fascinated to see how it all ends up. Alice heading to the UK to round up, and brainwash her new assistant, maybe? :laugh: Maybe we should brainwash Emily again, and seal her in a Chicken outfit?
High end of definitely enjoyed. Probably being mean, because this is a great chapter, but I need some scope for the final mark, lol?

Kat and Mouse

Another I'm fascinated to see how it plays out, I know who I'd like to win, but whether that will be the case here, who knows? Story is an absolute delight, either way, that is for sure.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Subject 11

Talking of loving fd stories, here is almost another one. The technique is delicious, and having a Meredith too always helps, though why she wanted children around, no idea? But everything including the sex stimulation of the women technique makes for an amusing read, if all a bit naughty. But seriously, I hate forced pregnancy, so have to mark down for that. But yes, I'm glad to Betsy for tipping me off to read it
Low end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #27 on: August 30, 2019, 12:58:13 am »
I just want to say that Reunion was unexpectedly sweet.

I initially passed over it, as revenge fantasies tend to go too far.  Usually it's minor slights avenged with life-destroying excess.  Not the case here.  This one managed to keep just on the right side for me (although tbh I could have done without the cuck stuff).

I was a bit worried going into Reunion because I got the same mental image you did. (Except you forgot about the revenge-seeking nerd single-handedly enslaving all of the former cool kids in the blink of an eye.)

I shouldn't have worried; unfortunately, I'm lousy at remembering author names and their stories. I'd forgotten Bawarao also wrote Shop of Unearthly Delights.

I'm usually not a big fan of cuck stories myself, but Tom was such a massive and consistent a-hole that it couldn't have happened to a more deserving alleged guy.
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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #28 on: August 30, 2019, 02:45:47 pm »

Hostel

Oh god, I loved the ending. I know I shouldnt love Alice, but I do! Mind, is Celeste the bait for Alice, or is it perhaps one more twist, and Alice is the bait for Celeste? The scene with Jessica is an absolute delight too, as has been the whole story. And yes, fascinated to see how it all ends up. Alice heading to the UK to round up, and brainwash her new assistant, maybe? :laugh: Maybe we should brainwash Emily again, and seal her in a Chicken outfit?
High end of definitely enjoyed. Probably being mean, because this is a great chapter, but I need some scope for the final mark, lol?

Thanks, Merry!
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Emily in a chicken outfit, forever brainwashed to cluck-cluck at everyone she meets? Now there's a Twilight Zone ending I could get behind! Although she's apparently into emus now... do they make emu costumes?

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #29 on: August 30, 2019, 03:17:03 pm »
Dhampir (mc ff mf fd) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Ellen awakens with supernatural abilities, and a thirst for blood.

As an aside, someone please correct me, Dhampirs don't seen terribly common in pop culture. They are there, though, failed movie franchise or no. Indeed, my later Passions Multiverse-Unbound Stories did have "hybrids" and vamps out during the day, but can't say I directly looked to Dhampir mythology for those stories ... Anyway, this had a great air of mystery about it from the start. It would seem Ellen was not always this way, and that really made me want to read on! Well, Ellen may not of been of the traditional hybrid variety, but her new existence, especially in how there was no choice but to accept it, was an interesting read. An overall vivid story.

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #30 on: August 30, 2019, 04:51:34 pm »
Emily in a chicken outfit, forever brainwashed to cluck-cluck at everyone she meets? Now there's a Twilight Zone ending I could get behind! Although she's apparently into emus now... do they make emu costumes?

Can't say for certain about emu costumes, but surely you could find an ostrich one SOMEwhere. Whether Emily would be ok knowing it wasn't technically the right bird, though... is another question.

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #31 on: August 30, 2019, 05:15:47 pm »
Last 4

Flower Girl

Not my sort of story to really mark, but if you like sexual set up pieces, you'll love this, its delightfully done.
No rating, taste issues only

The Need to Serve

Seriously wouldnt do me any harm to be where Miss Johnson is for 2-3 weeks from Monday, though if I'm getting covered up, it needs to be a robot suit. Oh, and seriously I did not see where the Rosie thing was going, kudos for that, neat touch. As for that ending, another Betsy cliffhanger finish, lets face it.
High end of definitely enjoyed

The New Boss (Astropirate)

I'm not a fan of cuckold stuff, I'm also not a fan of the all omnipotent, mighty controller stuff, especially when he's such a jerk. But those who like their mc straight forward, and to the point, this is probably for you, as its decently written, just not my thing
No rating, taste issues

Reunion (Bawarao)

I guess its fair to say that events do tend to play out in a way I enjoy, and some of the twists were very nicely handled too. Dont make assumptions early on, and you'll be fine
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #32 on: August 31, 2019, 10:33:12 am »
Thanks so much for the kind review, Merry.

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #33 on: August 31, 2019, 04:17:45 pm »
The Need to Serve

Seriously wouldnt do me any harm to be where Miss Johnson is for 2-3 weeks from Monday, though if I'm getting covered up, it needs to be a robot suit. Oh, and seriously I did not see where the Rosie thing was going, kudos for that, neat touch. As for that ending, another Betsy cliffhanger finish, lets face it.
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Thank you Merry. I'm really glad you liked the Rosie ending. I'm rather proud of it. As for Miss Johnson, well, what can I say? She'll be back and you'll just have to wait? Maybe she does get a robot suit? She escapes and goes to America? Actually delete that robot suit comment. She's definitely not going to do that. I've already done that somewhere else. I do wonder what will happen to Miss Johnson though. Do you have any ideas in keeping with the story?
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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #34 on: August 31, 2019, 04:22:13 pm »
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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #35 on: September 01, 2019, 05:07:21 am »

At Her Service

I know I say I shouldnt love green fd, but this, yes, I did! Yes, I worked out the logic of Sergei Bely as a name too. The story is great fun, as the tale of now, and the past are spread before us, I must day. Yes, I love the way Gloria got everything sorted out too. Just hope her surname wasnt Swanson, lol?
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I'm always glad to hear stuff like that but are you telling me you knew beforehand that Sergei comes from the Latin Sergio meaning ‘attendant’ which is another word for ‘servant' and Bely can stand for white, clear, transparent, blank?  ;) Pleased you liked it and no, her surname isn't Swanson. Thank you, dear.
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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #36 on: September 01, 2019, 03:42:29 pm »
I know there are some that dont like incest, but others that do, so... just nice to be warned, thats all. I enjoyed this despite that anyway

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Re: New Releases - August 24th, 2019
« Reply #37 on: September 04, 2019, 02:53:32 pm »
At risk of being the echo in the cavern here, I have really been enjoying both Hostel and Kat and Mouse. I only regret I’m not finding time to read much else right now as there seems to be a lot of great stuff coming out!