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New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« on: June 08, 2019, 01:59:48 pm »
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Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

Ashes (mc mf ff md) (3 new chapters)  by Blackie
The family raised him not to use his ability on those without the ability. The world isn’t supposed to know the family exists. Or families. When he uses it to defend himself and is seen without knowing who it was, his world turns upside down on him.

Asking For It (mc ff) (new)  by dream-operator
Kate bumps into an old friend from college who used to practice her hypnotism on her.

Author! Author! (mc mf md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
A writer of erotic novels has an accident and wakes up in a world where his stories are true.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

But I Don’t Really Want This (mc mf md fd gr hm) (2 new chapters)  by Pomelo
Will and Nicole find their relationship changing again in at first subtle and then not-so-subtle ways.

Bygone (mc mf ff) (new)  by Sen Oluguat
A collection of short stories.

Cascade Fire (mc mf fd la) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.

Coach (Daddy Jinn) (mc mm) (new)  by Daddy Jinn
Eric catches Coach Peters in his locker sniffing his jockstrap, and decides to punish him.

The Commune (mc ff la) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Holly runs away and meets up with some new friends.

Contract (nevermind) (mc ff ma) (new)  by nevermind
Christine is invited for a job interview that seems too good to be true. She must soon learn that the conditions of her prospective employment are rather unorthodox.

Crossings (mc mf fd ft) (new)  by MɛtaBob
Memory and reason restored, a man mastering magic journeys to new destinations, encountering ever more irresistible women.

Editing Reality Book Two: Sultry Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Emma and the Ultimate Scam Artist (mc ff rb ft) (new)  by Roboman127
Four people try to scam an ancient scam artist.

Every Woman Has a Price (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Redsliver
Owen inherits a set of silver coins from his grandfather that lets him buy anyone.

The Experiment (Chrysostomon) (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Zoe’s experiments with telepathy are a little too successful.

Exposed (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Christine has to deal with an urge she’s never felt before.

Fallen Angela (mc ff mf fd gr) (1 new chapter)  by Cassie the Friendly Succubus
Angela is the reigning Queen Bee of Valley High, until the day rebellious Rachel enters Angela’s turf and threaten her exalted position. But getting rid Rachel is not as easy as Angela thought it would be, and soon Angela finds herself questioning why she’d even want to do so.

Family Spell (mc mf in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
A family starts acting weird when the move into a new home.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (3 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Fit to Serve (mc mf md ma ft) (new)  by Fortunato
Jay gets his girlfriend a maid’s outfit for Christmas, just like the one that Tyrone got his wife.

Good Boy (Daddy Jinn) (mc mm) (new)  by Daddy Jinn
Jacob calls a plumber who happens to have a very good rapport with his clients.

Happy Family (mc mf ff md fd in) (new)  by Baerd
A man is overwhelmed by his wife, daughter, and mother, and wishes he could have a more harmonious family.

Hostel (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Human Inhabitants (mc mf md) (new)  by Chrysostomon
With his mothership dying, an alien who crash-landed on Earth takes up residence in a new vessel.

In the Beginning (mc mf md ma gr sf) (1 new chapter)  by CuyahogaKingKong
A girl living before the dawn of civilization has her life changed forever when she’s taken by a mysterious light in the sky.

Incubus (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Christina summons a demon, who has the ability to grant her greatest desire.

Invasion Now (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by Chrysostomon
An alien invader searches for mates.

The Island (Hemaccabe) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Hemaccabe
A lad finds himself being drawn back again and again to a magic Island which makes the girls in his life so obedient.

Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

Massaged By My Nerdy Brother (mc mf md in) (new)  by BurroGirl18 and Pan
A few innocent massages with her brother goes too far.

The Merger — Spirals (mc mf ff fd) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Mysterious players move to take ownership of the Spirals Nightclub, while Midnight acclimates to her new surroundings in New Chicago.

Metamorphosis (Homealone_447) (mc ff ma) (new)  by Homealone_447
An exobiologist finds a new way of life.

Mind-Control Panties (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
A mysterious figure adds special items to the inventory of trendy clothing stores—panties with special phrases written on them.

Ms. M. and the Poet (mc ff mf fd) (new)  by SinisterJester
A beautiful poet is approached by a mysterious mind controller while in a bookstore and is made to reveal her secret preferences in men in a very public, humiliating, and very pleasurable way.

Muscle Bimbo (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
The nerdy, plain, shy Alex asks goth girl Winter out on a date, only to be told she’s not her type. But after that, Alex finds herself changing.

My Neighbor, Soon to Be Lover (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Miss Tique
A teen reprograms her older neighbour to become the lover she imagined him to be.

Naoko’s Nadir (mc mf ff md hm in be) (new)  by Voltaire
Naoko describes how her life, and the life of her family, became a living hell.

Night Time Nudging (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?

Performance Upgrade (mc rb) (new)  by Fortunato
Lydia visits the Invention Show, and gets an upgrade from Professor Iverson.

Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (1 new chapter)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

Questions & Answers (mc ff bd ds cb) (new)  by J. Darksong and Vanderbilt
As the dawning End of Days draws ever nearer, Lacie Frasier seeks answers from a most unlikely source and pays a high price to learn the truth. Although, she soon finds that she rather enjoys the rather unique payment methods...

Quick Like a Flash (mc ff) (new)  by Jukebox
A conservative commentator goes back over a recording to try to figure out when she fell under the sway of Queen Maeve.

Rise of Prepsalon (mc ft) (new)  by fembotheather
The goth-themed chain store at the mall where Brie works is taken over by a preppy-themed chain.

Role Reversal (mc mf fd in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
After seeing hypnosis in action, a daughter with a crush on her father comes up with a plan to usurp her mother’s place in the family.

Selfless (mc ff) (new)  by MoldedMind
Margaret runs into a hippie in the business apparel section of the department store. Despite her initial frustration, she is talked into following Loralee to the changing room, and where Loralee teaches her how to let everything go… including herself.

The Selkie (mc mf md) (new)  by Chrysostomon
John steals the skin of a Selkie, which puts her under his control.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Skeinbound (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva
Three young women set out on a winter’s journey, to prove their new adulthood or perish in the process. One trying to keep them fed, one trying to keep them safe, and one who’ll try anything to keep them all together.

A Small Legal Problem (mc mf ff md rb) (new)  by E. Mencio
In a patriarchical world, Anne faces a strict penalty for her adultery.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations he’d never thought possible.

Tina Mesmerized and Enslaved (mc ff ft) (new)  by Ogawa
Tina goes on a modeling assignment at a lingerie catalogue company.

Trials and Trances (mc ff mf fd) (new)  by CrystalWitch
Four friends begin a hypnotic roleplaying game.

Undress Code (mc mf ff ft) (new)  by Mania
Celest is concerned the school’s strict new “Thongs Only” dress code might be turning her daughter into some kind of slut.

Using Ursula (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
There’s only one way to stop Dion from using his step-sister Ursula.

Vacancy (mc mf fd) (new)  by Jukebox
The owner of a quiet roadside motel is wakened on a dark and stormy night by someone asking about the vacancy. It turns out she means something very different than the sign intended.

Vampire Lovers (mc mf ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Bea goes to visit her Aunt in the big city. She finds it to be much stranger than she anticipated.

WeaverTV: The Newlyweaved Game (mc mf mm ff) (2 new chapters)  by TheWeaver
Three couples. Revealing answers. Life-changing results. It’s the classic game of Newlywed couples but with more of a Weaver twist.

We’ve been observing your Earth… (mc mf in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Xax comes to Earth to observe two humans mating.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (2 new chapters)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

Yew and Me (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Writer345
Lilith Yew, powerful leader of the Martian colonization movement, faces more threats to her efforts to establish human colonies on Mars.


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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2019, 03:09:05 pm »
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2019, 05:51:26 pm »
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #3 on: June 08, 2019, 05:52:44 pm »
Sheesh, June 8th already! Where did summer go?

Ok,

I'll start with Nevermind's Contract. This was a lovely tour de force of nice, smart woman, going for a job interview that turns out to be life changing interview. I love these kinds of stories if done right, with a certain touch of description and word and Nevermind sure does it as he turns a person with a conscience, who had so much to offer herself and the world into a slavish monster. And man, how hot he makes the process! loved it.

Then of course we have 321's Hostel. Which by the way is sooooooo much better than the movie of that name. I mean they should change the name of the movie as it doesn't deserve it anymore.

Alice, ugh, so horrific. She has poor Rebecca eating out of her hands, or should I say trance, doing her dirty work for her.

A very interesting piece falls into place where it seems Rebecca had romantic feelings for Emily and put some suggestions into her back in the day. Some very mild salacious ones. It shows several things about Rebecca. First she has an interest in good friend Emily and also she put her conscience on the back burner a bit to plant some small little ideas.

And speaking of that, insidious Alice now has Emily thinking not only is she in a different area than Rebecca, but that her old friend is back home! Alice, Alice, you are so subtle and evil.

And lastly we have a very fascinating end part here. There is a woman sitting in a chair, undergoing induction of some kind by two men, Kyle and Arthur. A very strong induction apparently. Is this Emily? Who are these men? What is their purpose? Friends for foes of Alice?

At the end we have Alice and girl, in a similar situation. She's in a chair, undergoing programming. Was this the same girl, passed onto Alice for completion? Or someone different?

And boy, the hypnotic commands Evil Alice puts into her! Yes Dearie, you don't want to get on Alice's bad side. But then, she is nothing but bad.

Greyscribbler's Exposed takes some steps down the narrative line. Christine does some things to her body to expose her even more and ends up having a close encounter with co-worker Tania.....which leads to her boss Greg and her having and even closer encounter.

Greg...Hmmmmm.....someone is behind all this. First suspect up to the plate.


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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2019, 10:21:12 pm »
If “Hostel” had 100 chapters, I’d eagerly read each.  There’s so much to praise.  The attention to setting detail, the very hot hypnosis, the discipline in slowly revealing plot and potential antagonists.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2019, 03:43:18 am »
Yes, I've got to agree with fumanchu...  Hostel is a really Intriguing story, the possibilities for development are endless - Hey, fumanchu, are you sure that 100 chapters would be enough?
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2019, 05:31:33 am »
Asking For It was amazing! I really hope to see more stories from you, dream-operator. :)

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2019, 07:12:03 am »
Yes, I've got to agree with fumanchu...  Hostel is a really Intriguing story, the possibilities for development are endless - Hey, fumanchu, are you sure that 100 chapters would be enough?

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2019, 07:35:33 am »
Unfortunately, Hostel is only 20th of 32 for me, but I'm looking forward to it,for sure. Did manage 2 last night, but...
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #9 on: June 09, 2019, 08:59:25 am »
Won't lie, I'm super anxious about how my latest chapter is recieved.  Never written anything this sex heavy before.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #10 on: June 09, 2019, 10:24:10 am »
I've read and enjoyed each of the following: Mind Control Panties, Rise of Prepsalon, Undress Code and WeaverTV: The Newlyweaved Game. The new Mind Control Panties story and Undress code were both really hot, Rise of Prepsalon is classic preppification and not just because of the setting, I must have missed the first installment of The Newlyweaved Game on its initial release, but I read it and the following episodes and they're very effective and fun multi-transformee stories with a lot of potential for additional followups.

Selfless was good, too, as written, but it didn't really work for me personally and I don't quite know why. I guess I got excited for a hippie-style change and it didn't really happen, but it looks like it's open for continuation so maybe there's going to be something more along those lines later on.

I also read Tina Mesmerized and Enslaved, but something about the style in which it's written didn't really do anything for me, so I can't recommend it unfortunately.

I'm looking forward to reading more of Muscle Bimbo and Night Time Nudging and I'm going to try to also get to The Commune, Contract, Every Woman Has a Price, Family Spell, Happy Family, Metamorphosis, Naoko's Nadir, and A Small Legal Problem.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #11 on: June 09, 2019, 10:25:49 am »
Won't lie, I'm super anxious about how my latest chapter is recieved.  Never written anything this sex heavy before.

Be batch 3, so will be a while yet, hopefully tomorrow

Getting started on the marathon week

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction

In truth, I know I shouldnt, but barring issues at the end of a couple of these (blood related), I thought these were wonderful. I mean, if  she wants to clone Timmy for me, in Tim... The Alexandra story, as always is an absolute delight, and I'm sure Lucy enjoyed the whole event too. Oh, and a latex clad vampire, well she can either be me, or transform me into one of her kin, please.
Probably should mark down to definitely enjoyed, because of the violence issues, but the rest is so good, what the hell, high end of definitely enjoyed. Mind, I do expect a reward from one of the ladies, lol.

Fit to Serve

Oh please, does someone want to get me one of those maid outfits, pretty please, I love them! I would prefer the one that comes with perfect French accent, but other than that... Yes, Jay definitely deserves a maid, lol
High end of definitely enjoyed

Incubus

I somehow suspect I'd enjoy submitting to Karnath, but anyway... Love the way the whole chess match is playing out, I must say. What is Ashley's fate, hmm?
High end of definitely enjoyed

The Island (Hemaccabe)

I know, it was 16 months, but it was fun before, so I gave it a try...  I'd either forgotten how unoriginal this had got, or it got that way here, but anyway... Falls into the old 'why have 6, when I can have 200' syndrome, and I just switched off. I'd rather I'd left it where it was in all truth, but what is done...
Going to go no rating, because the rest of the story was so much better than this bit

Performance Upgrade

Unsurprisingly I loved this, and yes, I'd loved the chance to sit in that seat, and have done to me, especially given the performance outcomes. Definitely a fan of the new ending over the original one. Now thats one acting troupe (even if I had a say, which I wouldnt) I would never want to leave! Where do I apply for processing, and roles?
Low end of much enjoyed. Yes, bias, but I really dont care. High end of definitely enjoyed, probably, otherwise

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #12 on: June 09, 2019, 10:28:09 am »
Also, another fine chapter of “Algorithm”.  Hot, but takes the time to examine the moral issues.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #13 on: June 09, 2019, 12:11:30 pm »
I plan to dive into Algorithm and Hostel this week. I fell behind on reading things while I was sick.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #14 on: June 09, 2019, 12:25:57 pm »

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction

In truth, I know I shouldnt, but barring issues at the end of a couple of these (blood related), I thought these were wonderful. I mean, if  she wants to clone Timmy for me, in Tim... The Alexandra story, as always is an absolute delight, and I'm sure Lucy enjoyed the whole event too. Oh, and a latex clad vampire, well she can either be me, or transform me into one of her kin, please.
Probably should mark down to definitely enjoyed, because of the violence issues, but the rest is so good, what the hell, high end of definitely enjoyed. Mind, I do expect a reward from one of the ladies, lol.


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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #15 on: June 09, 2019, 01:50:22 pm »
Performance Upgrade: It's one of the best robot transformation stories I've read.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #16 on: June 09, 2019, 03:04:41 pm »
I like the addition on the end of performance upgrade.  Raises some possibilities for a sequel/continuation.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #17 on: June 09, 2019, 03:27:05 pm »
I am so thrilled to get such great responses from Performance Upgrade and Fit to Serve. French accent is coming. There are many chapters to come and lots of fun elements to play with there as it's my intention to write kind of the 'everything I want to say about French maid mind control/transformation' in a single shot.

Erebus, we will see what becomes of Lydia now that she's not quite human in due time as Brandon sets out to find her. That story is in the works and will tie much of what I'm working on together (but still be a standalone story in its own right). In the meantime, keep your eyes open for The Damned in the Arena later this month where we meet a familiar professor in a very different time and place.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #18 on: June 09, 2019, 04:38:26 pm »
Probably the vampire, she can bite me, turn me, and then provide the latex dress

Part 2 (of 7)

Fallen Angela

Was just about on the time gap, but gave it a go. No, wouldnt bother again, not really my thing mainly, and would seem to have felt that way last time too
No rating, taste issues

The Merger — Spirals

Another vampire I wouldnt mind being a meal for in this. Fun hypnosis piece in this, mixed into a thoroughly entertaining piece, with great characters, and the hypnosis scene is hilarious
High end of definitely enjoyed

Selfless

Next time you're looking for someone. Loralee, over here! I'll pretend to be bossy and stuff if I have to? :angel: Oh, please, she could enslave me anytime she wished! Be in heaven serving her
High end of definitely enjoyed

Trials and Trances

RP Games do little for me, simply because I dont get involved in that sort of thing. Therefore a lot of it sailed over my head. Danielle hardly seemed a charmer, anyway
No rating, no idea what to give, as not my thing

Yew and Me

Well, I hope the Ward sisters are OK at least. Glad Lily did all she did, thats for sure. Fascinated to find out where Karpova fits in all this hierarchy, I must say. There are deaths, (warning for sensitive souls) but generally for the best.
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #19 on: June 09, 2019, 05:32:05 pm »
Thank you for the mention, Fortunato. I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :)
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« Reply #20 on: June 09, 2019, 11:41:57 pm »
Wow, 60+ stories! Is it January 4th, 2020 already?

Looks like some great stuff here!

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« Reply #21 on: June 10, 2019, 01:21:28 am »

Yew and Me

Well, I hope the Ward sisters are OK at least. Glad Lily did all she did, thats for sure. Fascinated to find out where Karpova fits in all this hierarchy, I must say. There are deaths, (warning for sensitive souls) but generally for the best.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #22 on: June 10, 2019, 08:01:01 am »

Yew and Me

Well, I hope the Ward sisters are OK at least. Glad Lily did all she did, thats for sure. Fascinated to find out where Karpova fits in all this hierarchy, I must say. There are deaths, (warning for sensitive souls) but generally for the best.
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« Reply #23 on: June 10, 2019, 04:26:20 pm »
Questions & Answers (mc ff bd ds cb) (new)  by J. Darksong and Vanderbilt
As the dawning End of Days draws ever nearer, Lacie Frasier seeks answers from a most unlikely source and pays a high price to learn the truth. Although, she soon finds that she rather enjoys the rather unique payment methods...

A Vanderbilt sighting! Awesome! And with J. Darksong! Yes! Superhero goodness must follow.

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« Reply #24 on: June 10, 2019, 05:03:14 pm »
Part 3

Blizzard

Good luck keeping up with all those girls, Gene! :laugh: Oh, and love the timing of the ending too. I can pass on the sexual mayhem, but hey, the rest is good fun, so...
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In the Beginning

Intrigued by events here, in other senses, but all the sex is just a turn off for me! Still love the way she's being treated though
High end of enjoyed, as little more than sex here

Quick Like a Flash

OK, I loved this, but more conservative readers may either want to pass, or have a good sense of humour, just saying. But yes, Maeve could have her wicked way with me anytime, even if I'm likely to be supporting her anyway. Fun for me, at least, but just saying...
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61 Days in River City

Seems you cant keep 'Betsy' out of anything here. Yes, the 'play off' between the 4 supers earlier is just plain hilarious. As for the scene with Viking, just loved it..
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Vacancy

Not Rosie's (Garden joke) Hotel, I trust? Love the piece with Samantha at the end, as well as the main section
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« Reply #25 on: June 10, 2019, 05:23:45 pm »
61 Days in River City

Seems you cant keep 'Betsy' out of anything here. Yes, the 'play off' between the 4 supers earlier is just plain hilarious. As for the scene with Viking, just loved it..
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« Reply #26 on: June 10, 2019, 07:24:31 pm »
Yeah, was pretty sure that's what you'd say.  I wound up lopping off the non-sex part to include in the next chapter
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« Reply #27 on: June 11, 2019, 03:24:49 am »

So, I tried to get into Every Woman Has a Price, but to be totally honest, the slang/language barrier was so difficult to wade through, I finally gave up. The writing style was a little unusual but I made it through that okay, but at several points, I literally could not figure out what was being said or thought by the various characters. Maybe if there was a translation guide...

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« Reply #28 on: June 11, 2019, 12:55:41 pm »

So, I tried to get into Every Woman Has a Price, but to be totally honest, the slang/language barrier was so difficult to wade through, I finally gave up. The writing style was a little unusual but I made it through that okay, but at several points, I literally could not figure out what was being said or thought by the various characters. Maybe if there was a translation guide...


Language barrier? OK, that's going to gnaw at my brain stem and cause me to revisit these chapters forty times. There's a few Maritimer-isms in there as most of my stories take place in Eastern Canada. I never thought twice that they'd be opaque when reading. Once more into the breach, I guess.

Seriously though, thanks for reading. Shame it wasn't for you.

Part 3

Blizzard

Good luck keeping up with all those girls, Gene! :laugh: Oh, and love the timing of the ending too. I can pass on the sexual mayhem, but hey, the rest is good fun, so...
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Lower grade than usual but it was a sexual chapter and I'm pretty sure I got you with the rest of the details. Thanks for reading!

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« Reply #29 on: June 11, 2019, 03:05:24 pm »
Language barrier? OK, that's going to gnaw at my brain stem and cause me to revisit these chapters forty times. There's a few Maritimer-isms in there as most of my stories take place in Eastern Canada. I never thought twice that they'd be opaque when reading. Once more into the breach, I guess.

Maybe it's just a fellow Canadian talking, but I didn't notice anything out-of-place.

I did wince at Red Green, though. But that's because I understood it, not because I didn't. :)

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« Reply #30 on: June 11, 2019, 06:57:29 pm »
Rise of Prepsalon
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Wonderfully entertaining! I loved this. A sinister wave of preppiness taking over the world? Ominous preppy pod people everywhere? Way to go, FBH! This is great stuff, sweet readers, and hive fans in particular will enjoy this, but so will others.
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« Reply #31 on: June 11, 2019, 09:36:54 pm »
Betsy's 61 Days in River City was fantastic, as always. Perhaps even more so this week. Lots of action, lots of suspense, and a visit from my two favorite characters. Too many killer one-liners here to even pick a favorite; I can't wait to see what happens next!

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« Reply #32 on: June 11, 2019, 10:35:11 pm »
Language barrier? OK, that's going to gnaw at my brain stem and cause me to revisit these chapters forty times. There's a few Maritimer-isms in there as most of my stories take place in Eastern Canada. I never thought twice that they'd be opaque when reading. Once more into the breach, I guess.

Maybe it's just a fellow Canadian talking, but I didn't notice anything out-of-place.

I did wince at Red Green, though. But that's because I understood it, not because I didn't. :)

Thanks, I've been looking for anything that wasn't in context or just weird. I'm not sure where to look and still worry I'm a bit too close to things to see any problems. Also, I'm so glad it made you wince, that's made it worth including.

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« Reply #33 on: June 11, 2019, 10:56:59 pm »
Rise of Prepsalon
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Wonderfully entertaining! I loved this. A sinister wave of preppiness taking over the world? Ominous preppy pod people everywhere? Way to go, FBH! This is great stuff, sweet readers, and hive fans in particular will enjoy this, but so will others.

Seconding this. Hive isn’t generally my thing, but constant teetering on the edge between submission and resistance is, and Prepsalon had that in spades.
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« Reply #34 on: June 12, 2019, 12:03:14 am »
Thanks, I've been looking for anything that wasn't in context or just weird. I'm not sure where to look and still worry I'm a bit too close to things to see any problems. Also, I'm so glad it made you wince, that's made it worth including.

Well, I'm not a Maritimer, but I do speak it fluently, so maybe I'm not your best gauge. :) But I have enjoyed reading stories localized in Canada. I haven't had the guts to do it myself, except for vaguely referencing.

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« Reply #35 on: June 12, 2019, 12:22:37 am »
Blizzard was hot and sexy and romantic as always. I love these characters, I love their interactions, and I love where the story has taken us so far.

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« Reply #36 on: June 12, 2019, 02:17:34 am »
Thanks 321, I'm really enjoying writing it!


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« Reply #37 on: June 12, 2019, 02:18:13 am »
I find it interesting that on a thread around here someone complained about young people in stories not using slang and so sounding old, while here some people are complaining about a story using slang and not understanding the text. It's an interesting dichotomy.
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« Reply #38 on: June 12, 2019, 03:28:46 am »
Was it slang or dialect?

the meaning behind most slang can be inferred (by a majority of readers) through context clues.

Depending how 'thick' (hehehe) it is dialect can be difficult to decipher sometimes.

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« Reply #39 on: June 12, 2019, 09:14:02 am »
Scalar7th, I tend to write what I know, so unless I was creating something like Gotham, Metropolis or Smallville, I fall back on that I know that I know Nova Scotia, PEI, and No Funswick pretty well. Plus, Halifax has a bunch of colleges and a couple universities so it makes it kind of prime for including a lot of young beautiful people from everywhere. I also tend to get a lot of "Man, it's so cool to have something clearly Canadian." from Canadian readers.

Clearly I need to do this more. About the only Canadian bit I have is a supporting character in Joanna's War being a retired veteran from Calgary.

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« Reply #40 on: June 12, 2019, 10:16:54 am »
Fourth Segment

Algorithm

Another delightful section here, though fine, I think Lucy is getting away lightly, but thats for now, whats for the future, who knows? Could be interesting if they actually made me think I was my past life self, I must admit, though hopefully I'd get her dancing skills, I'd need them. Definitely looking forward to more
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Asking For It

A lovely piece of Rom MC, and yes, she really is asking for it, lol, though having her hand forced might have been enjoyed too. A delightful piece of ff hypno stuff
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Contract (nevermind)

If I was still up to stuff as complex as work, I'd love to do a job application for here. Maybe they can come up with something that repairs my brain, as well as totally controlling me, that would be fun. I'm sure Susie could come up with some work I could do regardless, lol. A few nice twists and turns for good measure too, along with a great tale
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Hostel

Oh seriously, if Alice wants someone to help out with the Admin, brainwash me! I know, I'm too old for the escort stuff, and not pretty enough, but mind controlled like that, oh please! Looks like Alice has a side line, and that she may not be the only one in the business too
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Undress Code

Might have been the opposition in this batch, but this was a bit of a let down for me, it was all just a bit too obvious, and a bit too silly for me. Whats the comment, it could have been condensed into 3000 words, and be sharp, but all a bit drawn out for some reason? But equally, if just having women turned into sex sluts is your thing?
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« Reply #41 on: June 12, 2019, 10:28:43 am »
Thank you CW and Midori! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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« Reply #42 on: June 12, 2019, 10:29:25 am »
I find it interesting that on a thread around here someone complained about young people in stories not using slang and so sounding old, while here some people are complaining about a story using slang and not understanding the text. It's an interesting dichotomy.

I found that amusing too :)
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« Reply #43 on: June 12, 2019, 12:12:28 pm »

Hostel

Oh seriously, if Alice wants someone to help out with the Admin, brainwash me! I know, I'm too old for the escort stuff, and not pretty enough, but mind controlled like that, oh please! Looks like Alice has a side line, and that she may not be the only one in the business too
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« Reply #44 on: June 12, 2019, 04:50:23 pm »
Yes, she does. If she needs an Admin assistant (ideally not needing too much mobility) she really ought to give me a call, or a brainwashing session :laugh:
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« Reply #45 on: June 13, 2019, 12:35:57 pm »
5th section

But I Don’t Really Want This

Yes,I've decided I really dont want this any more, the nature of it now has turned me off completely, just getting a bit 'vindictive' for my tastes.
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Exposed

So is the manager behind all this, or just reaping the benefits of whatever it is? Believe me, I've had areas given the laser treatment, and just the thought of having it done 'down there' makes me wince, let alone actually having it done! I do feel so sorry for Christine, but it makes for a great story.
High end of definitely enjoyed.

Questions & Answers

Oh god, some of that M/s play sounds amazing, though way above my standards (of course) even before my body and brain went wrong. And now I can say it, one of my regrets in life is now going to be not doing cow play, and all that milking stuff! At least the world isnt going to end before I get to the neurologist, one relief at least? :laugh: Loved this story, high end of definitely enjoyed.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night

2 chapters in one go, due to the break. First chapter holds more of a story for me, the second is more setting up the next big event, I suspect. Usual comments about great characters coming out, even in minor roles, like the receptionist here.
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« Reply #46 on: June 14, 2019, 10:41:34 am »
Part 6, almost there!

Bygone

The concept of each section was actually pretty good, but no one will be surprised to hear I hated how all 3 played out! I know, I like 'happy' endings' and these were just the opposite. But if you like depressing endings, you'll love these as everything else is nicely done.
No rating, I cant rating depressing endings easily, so not even trying!

Every Woman Has a Price

I think my price would be about 5 cents, if that high! :laugh: One of those I need to see more to really get an opinion on, but its got promise. I might need to sort out all the characters at some point too.
Low end of definitely enjoyed, a typical wait and see rating for me

Ms. M. and the Poet

I know, its one of those stories where I should feel sorry for Amber, and all that, but I cant! She doesnt seem the likeable type, and Ms M, I just love her style, reminds me of how I'd behave in her place! :laugh: Fine, I do feel sorry for Eric, but I suspect he enjoyed it really. Oh fine, the ending goes a bit further than is really my thing, and yes, the humiliation factor is beyond my comfort zone, but all the same... I suspect she's have me dancing through the store in a chorus girl leotard, lol.
Compromise mark, low end of definitely enjoyed. Almost gave it a straight, and I'm sure Ms M could convince me to do so, with the right offer? ;)

Tina Mesmerized and Enslaved

Seeing I'm not meant to be naughty, and rude nowadays, especially to first time writers, I'm just going to say this did nothing for me, and needs a major edit. I guess if you like repetitive, nasty humiliation, but otherwise, just give a miss.
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« Reply #47 on: June 14, 2019, 10:46:55 am »
I am so thrilled to get such great responses from Performance Upgrade and Fit to Serve. French accent is coming. There are many chapters to come and lots of fun elements to play with there as it's my intention to write kind of the 'everything I want to say about French maid mind control/transformation' in a single shot.

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« Reply #48 on: June 14, 2019, 01:52:20 pm »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (1 new chapter)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

In some ways this was probably the least wild installment. That is not to say that there was anything wrong here. I greatly enjoyed the events. There was a wonderful weirdness at the end of this chapter. Indeed, we are certainly moving forward to a conclusion that might not be as predictable as it would seem. Mesmerized for more!

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« Reply #49 on: June 14, 2019, 03:12:28 pm »
Betsy's 61 Days in River City was fantastic, as always. Perhaps even more so this week. Lots of action, lots of suspense, and a visit from my two favorite characters. Too many killer one-liners here to even pick a favorite; I can't wait to see what happens next!

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« Reply #50 on: June 14, 2019, 03:22:28 pm »
Vampire Lovers (mc mf ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Bea goes to visit her Aunt in the big city. She finds it to be much stranger than she anticipated.

Perhaps the theme of finding out about someone you never really knew is not necessarily that new, but it can always lead to a good gothic-style story. I must admit that I always have mixed feelings about dramatic backstory being thrown at the reader at the start, but it certainly did color the story in a very particular way. I must admit, too, that this moved rather slowly for me. However, it was engrossing, keeping me reading onward. Not a bad diversion for those looking for a slow burn where the assholes get their due.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #51 on: June 14, 2019, 05:56:59 pm »

Greyscribbler's Exposed takes some steps down the narrative line. Christine does some things to her body to expose her even more and ends up having a close encounter with co-worker Tania.....which leads to her boss Greg and her having and even closer encounter.

Greg...Hmmmmm.....someone is behind all this. First suspect up to the plate.

Thanks CerebusOne, glad you're enjoying it.  All will be revealed (pun intended) in part 3.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #52 on: June 14, 2019, 05:58:17 pm »
Exposed

So is the manager behind all this, or just reaping the benefits of whatever it is? Believe me, I've had areas given the laser treatment, and just the thought of having it done 'down there' makes me wince, let alone actually having it done! I do feel so sorry for Christine, but it makes for a great story.
High end of definitely enjoyed.

Hi Merry

Glad you're liking it.  Yes, Christine isn't having the easiest time. But then once a mc'er sets their sights on you...

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #53 on: June 14, 2019, 06:01:13 pm »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (1 new chapter)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

In some ways this was probably the least wild installment. That is not to say that there was anything wrong here. I greatly enjoyed the events. There was a wonderful weirdness at the end of this chapter. Indeed, we are certainly moving forward to a conclusion that might not be as predictable as it would seem. Mesmerized for more!

Thanks for the kind words, after tomorrow this will become the most pedestrian story I have going on here. While I enjoyed the format and got a chance to ape a couple of my favorite MC stories (ala Mindspark's work which inspired me) I look forward to wrapping this up eventually.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #54 on: June 15, 2019, 08:58:06 am »
Every Woman Has a Price

I think my price would be about 5 cents, if that high! :laugh: One of those I need to see more to really get an opinion on, but its got promise. I might need to sort out all the characters at some point too.
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That's an excellent point. I'm going to draft up a cast list and post it with next chapter. Glad you liked it!

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #55 on: June 15, 2019, 04:32:38 pm »
The final four,with lots of length markdowns!

Laser Tag Party

The games seem to be doing less for me of late, but seems we're nearing the end, anyway. Still love the idea of being altered at least, which has to be something?
High end of enjoyed (markdown)

Metamorphosis (Homealone_447)

Yes, investigating a mysterious alien pod, what can possibly go wrong? Plenty, seemingly! Tentacle lovers will get more out of this than me, I'm sure, but they dont do a lot for me, especially when all they're interested in is impregnation!
Enjoyed

Rise of Prepsalon

Fine, no surprise, I loved this, as Heather knows how to work my buttons hard. Yes, I'd love the full Prep make over, though I'd prefer the Stepford Housewife version of that, all the same. Oh fine, I'd worked out Sabrina's fate a while out, but the resistance was a great fight. Highly recommended, if you havent read it already.
High end of definitely enjoyed (markdown). Open to being 'convinced' to give more, mind? ;)

A Small Legal Problem

Another method I'd love used on me! Story is nicely done, but could definitely do with a good edit. And yes, for 'Fae Ray', I have to give a markdown, given she's one of my favourites, and I'd love to meet her in a wax chamber sometime! Oh, its Fay Wray!
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Probably generous for the double markdown, plus edit issues, but I might get digitised if I'm nice to the author, lol.

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #56 on: June 15, 2019, 07:53:42 pm »

Rise of Prepsalon

Fine, no surprise, I loved this, as Heather knows how to work my buttons hard. Yes, I'd love the full Prep make over, though I'd prefer the Stepford Housewife version of that, all the same. Oh fine, I'd worked out Sabrina's fate a while out, but the resistance was a great fight. Highly recommended, if you havent read it already.
High end of definitely enjoyed (markdown). Open to being 'convinced' to give more, mind? ;)



Thanks Merry! It's probably one of the more mc-heavy stories I've got.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #57 on: June 18, 2019, 06:06:30 pm »
Late response, but fuck, Asking For It was really amazing. There was a lot of subtlety I enjoyed concerning it and watching their dynamic was titillating. I am honestly excited for more from dream-operator

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #58 on: June 18, 2019, 07:51:42 pm »
Two more late reviews!

Asking For It was well-done. A nice slow burner about old friends, hypnosis, and passion. I loved the little secret trigger and how it was incorporated into the story. Lovely!

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In The Beginning is also taking us to new heights (literally, I suppose!). What an interesting relationship we've got going on here, with a Master who is clearly interested in Ahn for more than just what he was able to physically transform her into, and an Ahn who, thankfully, still retains all of the things that make her such an enjoyable character to root for.

The question is, why go back to One Zillion BC* to cruise for smart cave-chicks? Perhaps this just one of many stops in many time periods to collect many Brides of the Master? A sexy Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure**? Hmm...

(*I may have been slightly exaggerating)

(**Also, a sexy MC-themed B&TEA spoof sounds like an interesting story idea...)

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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #59 on: June 18, 2019, 08:33:57 pm »
Two more late reviews!

Asking For It was well-done. A nice slow burner about old friends, hypnosis, and passion. I loved the little secret trigger and how it was incorporated into the story. Lovely!

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

In The Beginning is also taking us to new heights (literally, I suppose!). What an interesting relationship we've got going on here, with a Master who is clearly interested in Ahn for more than just what he was able to physically transform her into, and an Ahn who, thankfully, still retains all of the things that make her such an enjoyable character to root for.

The question is, why go back to One Zillion BC* to cruise for smart cave-chicks? Perhaps this just one of many stops in many time periods to collect many Brides of the Master? A sexy Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure**? Hmm...

(*I may have been slightly exaggerating)

(**Also, a sexy MC-themed B&TEA spoof sounds like an interesting story idea...)

Ok that's actually a great idea I wish I'd thought of.  But I'm glad people are still enjoying it and are interested in knowing more.  I've been chipping away at the next chapter in little bits, I've hit a stretch that's important but not coming as naturally.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #60 on: June 19, 2019, 01:12:58 am »
The question is, why go back to One Zillion BC* to cruise for smart cave-chicks? Perhaps this just one of many stops in many time periods to collect many Brides of the Master? A sexy Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure**? Hmm...

This is actually a well-known science fiction trope. The usual idea is that changes to the timeline made in far-back prehistorical times don't propagate into the historical future. Things that happened in 7000 BC are all totally lost and forgotten by the time writing is invented.
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #61 on: July 07, 2019, 09:49:46 pm »

This is actually a well-known science fiction trope. The usual idea is that changes to the timeline made in far-back prehistorical times don't propagate into the historical future. Things that happened in 7000 BC are all totally lost and forgotten by the time writing is invented.

What happens in the cave stays in the cave, man. ;)
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Re: New Releases-Saturday June 8th 2019
« Reply #62 on: July 08, 2019, 12:56:32 am »

This is actually a well-known science fiction trope. The usual idea is that changes to the timeline made in far-back prehistorical times don't propagate into the historical future. Things that happened in 7000 BC are all totally lost and forgotten by the time writing is invented.

What happens in the cave stays in the cave, man. ;)
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