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New Releases-April 13th 2019
« on: April 13, 2019, 12:06:51 pm »
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The Abductress (mc mf fd) (new)  by Neal Lowe
While stranded on the road, Tony meets an alluring stranger.

The Adventures of Sultry Girl (mc mf ff md fd cb) (2 new chapters)  by CrystalWitch
A kinky transgender superhero faces of against a litany of equally perverted villains.

Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

Antidote (mc mf) (new)  by rusticize
Anna tries to recover from a serious mistake.

Brenna’s Note (mc mf md) (new)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
A written record of two young lovers’ first meeting, recalled by the lovers in question. Though some of the details are... a bit fuzzy.

But I Don’t Really Want This (mc mf md fd gr hm) (1 new chapter)  by Pomelo
Will and Nicole find their relationship changing again in at first subtle and then not-so-subtle ways.

Cascade Fire (mc mf fd la) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.

Conference Buddies (mc mf fd) (new)  by Adam Smith
Jane and Alan discuss the very silly session about hypnosis they just attended at a conference.

The Crystal’s Slave (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Dr. HypnoD
A man walks into a jewelry store to try out his special crystal. He gets some new toys, but what happens when the police take notice?

Editing Reality Book Two: Sultry Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (new)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Emma and the New World Order (mc ff rb sf) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
A group of German women plan the new World Order where women rule.

Eroticon 2019: Zion and Sidney (mc mf md hm) (new)  by Voltaire
Zion and Sydney decide to embrace their sexual sides by going to Eroticon 2019. They get what they wanted... and then some.

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by AskJeeves
The CEO of a startup gives a compelling presentation to investors.

I Have No Idea (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Tanner wakes up from a blackout, and discovers that he started a billion dollar pharmaceutical company and created a slave paradise with a prototype mind control drug.

Kayley Goes Shopping (mc ff md fd ma) (new)  by Saddle Rider
Kayley Samuels visits a college party.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

Manners Maketh Man (mc mm in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
Mark learns the power of good manners.

Mark’s Journey, Making Love (mc mf md) (new)  by Twirling Thoughts
Mark has to fix the problems he caused when he turned Sammi into a bimbo.

My Dream, Our Dream (mc ma) (new)  by mr. potestas
A woman experiences a wet dream unlike any she ever knew.

A Pacifier for a Cheerleader (mc ff bd) (new)  by Curvasion
A beautiful athlete uses spanking and a pacifier to help a cheerleader learn to obey.

Pledging the Sorority — N.C.U. (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Rayne meets Trisha, the head of the hypnotic sorority that she is pledging. But why does she look so familiar?

A Plethora of Heathers (mc fd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
Heather’s is a restaurant owned by Heather. It’s very profitable.

Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (2 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (1 new chapter)  by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the General’s forces and remain uninfected himself.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

Role Reversal (mc mf fd in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
After seeing hypnosis in action, a daughter with a crush on her father comes up with a plan to usurp her mother’s place in the family.

S.O.S. (mc mf ff md ma cb) (new)  by Jukebox
A new heroine enters the life of WildRose and Sharpe, bearing word of a sinister supervillain who operates beyond the reach of justice. But given that her words are twisted by aphasia inflicted by Doctor Null’s mind controlling technology, will her warnings come too late?

Sexy Shorts (mc mf md in ex) (2 new chapters)  by Pan
A collection of short tales for the whole family.

The Sincerest Expression of Love (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Extantelan
A man with the ability to control the physical actions of others searches for submissive women who appreciate his talent.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations he’d never thought possible.

They Have a Problem (mc fd) (new)  by S. B.
She got the wrong number but all the right ideas. So will you.

A Touch of Green (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Blackie
Ben discovers how powerful the new talent he has really is. He has thrills and regrets. He finds he wants to be more responsible though he’s up against some others with similar talents.

Uplink (mc ff mf ma sf) (1 new chapter)  by nevermind
The promised future has arrived. Mankind has outgrown old Terra and lives peacefully among the stars. But when junior engineer Kyra Warner of the TSS Argo picks up the wrong item from an alien planet, the rest of her crew must soon find out that not everything in this universe is willing to coexist.

Words Unspoken (mc ff) (new)  by tanwen
A vampire makes plans to neutralize the one hunting her.

Yew and Me (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Writer345
Lilith Yew, powerful leader of the Martian colonization movement, faces more threats to her efforts to establish human colonies on Mars.
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2019, 02:05:36 pm »
Antidote was fun. Perfectly paced.

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2019, 03:00:03 pm »
As someone who remembers reading "The Book" back when it was first being posted, chapter by chapter, to alt.sex.stories - and thereby discovered this genre/kink - I had to read "A Touch of Green" first.  Blackie has not lost his talent.

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2019, 03:13:36 pm »
Holy shit, Blackie is back!? The Book was already legend when I first started writing! 22 years between stories has to be a record, right?
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2019, 05:59:31 pm »
I had to read "A Touch of Green" first.

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2019, 09:49:26 pm »
It's been twenty one years, four months, and seventeen days since we last heard from Blackie on the Archive.

This is the first time he's posted in my lifetime.

And it's good. Really good.

Man is a legend.

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2019, 11:28:04 pm »
A Touch of Green (mc mf ff md) (new)  by Blackie
Ben discovers how powerful the new talent he has really is. He has thrills and regrets. He finds he wants to be more responsible though he’s up against some others with similar talents.

Even though Blackie’s The Book should have been given the Pulitzer Prize for Mind-Control Fiction, I almost skipped reading A Touch of Green. The story is, after all, something like 130,000 words—all posted at once.

But I did read it, and I’m glad I did. ATOG has plot and characterization, romance (although not conventional romance), harems, and a nice-guy mind-controller. This is the story I would have written (or would have tried to write) if I’d thought of the story first. Six stars out of five!
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2019, 09:02:36 am »
The book is what got me into MC. If it wasn't the first I read it is the first I remember. I just saw ATOG posted and shot here to see if it was true. I will read asap.
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #8 on: April 14, 2019, 09:17:30 am »
Getting started

Antidote

Oh goodness, what a cracking piece. To see if Anna recovered or not, go read for yourself, its worth it. I know, you might have an idea on an mc story site, but... Wonderful piece, delightful build, though I doubt anyone would desire to give me the QS treatment somehow? :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed

Eroticon 2019: Zion and Sydney

Fine, lets just say this wasnt my thing, and leave it at that. No, nothing for me what so ever, unless there is a 'bootleg gin' option among the drinks. Think carefully, darlings, lol.
No rating, obviously. Drink of above, or 'Silver Slurp' and I might be open to discuss, but otherwise, definitely not

Mark’s Journey, Making Love

One of those stories where I have mixed feelings about Mark. He's been a jerk, but he knows he's been a jerk, is trying to correct things, so... definitely looking forward to seeing how things do play out from here.
I'll be kind, high end of definitely enjoyed. Probably should be standard, but for Sammi's sake...?

My Dream, Our Dream

Pretty sure that if anyone did this with me, they'd hide my body away, and use the prettier one on the outside! :laugh: It has the usual Mr P weird moments, but plenty of good ones too. And fine, an orgasm like that might be quite something to experience, so...
Definitely enjoyed

A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, Betsy knows why I'm grumpy with this, 2 characters that didnt appear here! :P OK, it didnt need them, and was a brilliantly done chapter, so... I could definitely imagine the only 'Heather' I know as the Protag in here, I must admit.
Fine, I wont sulk, as accused of last week, high end of definitely enjoyed. :angel:

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #9 on: April 14, 2019, 10:58:23 am »

My Dream, Our Dream

Pretty sure that if anyone did this with me, they'd hide my body away, and use the prettier one on the outside! :laugh: It has the usual Mr P weird moments, but plenty of good ones too. And fine, an orgasm like that might be quite something to experience, so...
Definitely enjoyed


Glad you definitely enjoyed this weird one! :D I really wanted to do a MC story that was a full-on dream sequence, even if it was a quickie. I also wanted to play with perspective in ways even I don't normally do, and also really wanted to do more than a single paragraph of the eccentric first person plural. The coming ebook this is connected with plays with perspective perhaps more radically for anyone interested in quick shifts into weirdness.

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« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2019, 11:14:45 am »
Mark’s Journey, Making Love

One of those stories where I have mixed feelings about Mark. He's been a jerk, but he knows he's been a jerk, is trying to correct things, so... definitely looking forward to seeing how things do play out from here.
I'll be kind, high end of definitely enjoyed. Probably should be standard, but for Sammi's sake...?

Pitter patter my heart. Fair enough, I do think the next two parts to Mark's Journey, Making Love, will be a bit more your style. Maybe that'll earn a high end of definitely enjoyed... or better. I hope you dove into it so quickly because you're glad to see me back  ;)
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2019, 01:21:07 pm »
I dive into them in length order in truth, shortest to longest. Well, rounded to the nearest 100 words at least. You did get a high end this time, so lets see if you can repeat, or more?

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The Crystal’s Slave

Well, the editing was better than the first 2 chapters, which made it a bit easier to read. Well, it gets interesting at the end, when things might not be going entirely to plans, but lets see where it goes from there. Its sex driven, its not terrible subtle, but I've seen worse. And of course, some like their stories that way
High end of enjoyed

Hot Blood: Sexiness and Lust in a Silicon Valley Startup

This gets more fun by the week, even if in a story sense, we go back in time this week. Great plot, some great characters, got a lot going for it.
High end of definitely enjoyed. If Lavinia fancies convincing me to give more, she's free to do so

Resistance 2

Oh my, what an ending. So what happens now, who knows? The sex does nothing for me, but the logic behind why we're getting it is pretty good. Ah well, the wait for the reveal will be an interesting one, for sure
Definitely enjoyed

Return of the Armored Warrior

I wonder if Gene fancies making a suit for disabled senior? Oh please, that just sounds so much fun! I'll definitely pass on the training unless he can do something amazing, mind. We all know by now, JD writes a cracking good story, and this is no exception. Why do I think things wont be too easy for Tina, mind?
High end of definitely enjoyed

They Have a Problem

Well, someone has a problem, thats for sure, and I dont think its the noisy neighbours, lol? Fun piece of hypno mc, that I did work out where we were leading to, but it was nicely done, all the same. Great line at the end, even if I could see it coming
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« Reply #12 on: April 14, 2019, 03:37:44 pm »
@merrybrooks and here I was thinking you were just excited I was back  :D
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« Reply #13 on: April 14, 2019, 04:21:31 pm »
@merrybrooks and here I was thinking you were just excited I was back  :D

Sorry, my misfiring brain isnt up to complex things like excitement at present, nor is likely to be for quite a while, so I'm told. Not up to a few other complex things too! ::)
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #14 on: April 14, 2019, 06:51:19 pm »

They Have a Problem

Well, someone has a problem, thats for sure, and I dont think its the noisy neighbours, lol? Fun piece of hypno mc, that I did work out where we were leading to, but it was nicely done, all the same. Great line at the end, even if I could see it coming
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« Reply #15 on: April 14, 2019, 08:46:42 pm »
I just saw ATOG posted and shot here to see if it was true. I will read asap.

I ought to have re-edited it before sending it to Simon. I've spotted a couple glaring mistakes. To me if not to others.
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #16 on: April 15, 2019, 03:05:55 pm »
A Plethora of Heathers

Fine, Betsy knows why I'm grumpy with this, 2 characters that didnt appear here! :P OK, it didnt need them, and was a brilliantly done chapter, so... I could definitely imagine the only 'Heather' I know as the Protag in here, I must admit.
Fine, I wont sulk, as accused of last week, high end of definitely enjoyed. :angel:

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« Reply #17 on: April 15, 2019, 03:28:53 pm »
A Plethora of Heathers

Well, Betsy's story has got me intrigued...  I havn't been able to work out where it's going but it is definitely going somewhere so I'll tag along for the ride.

Definately enjoying it, thanks Betsy!
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« Reply #18 on: April 15, 2019, 03:35:14 pm »
A Plethora of Heathers

Well, Betsy's story has got me intrigued...  I havn't been able to work out where it's going but it is definitely going somewhere so I'll tag along for the ride.

Definately enjoying it, thanks Betsy!

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #19 on: April 16, 2019, 11:40:01 am »
Part 3

But I Don’t Really Want This

Title is a little out of date by now! :laugh: What can I say? It moves the story along, but not much of interest to me. But fine, I'm intrigued as to where this ends up by now, and chapters are thankfully short
High end of enjoyed

Magical Girl Syn

Interesting game of chess here, between Carice, and just about everyone else in the chapter! Fascinating reveal in here, thats for sure.
Definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Betsy already knows that the treatment of the reporter wasnt my scene, to be fair, she knew that would be the case before writing it. She says its needed, but we will see? I'm not sure that the scaring the bimbo's into sanity is going to work for me either. Still, knowing Betsy and me, genuine shock therapy being used wouldnt surprise me in the slightest!
Based on suggestion, rather than that, or rewriting their minds with a helmet or something, I'm going to have to only give it high end of enjoyed. I await the complaints! :laugh:

Stop Watch

Oh well, the ending might be setting us up for the thing I dont enjoy? Fine, the sex, and the humiliation stuff with Emily does nothing for me, but its nicely written at least.
Low end of definitely enjoyed

Yew and Me

I would say poor Svetlana, but fine, I'd love whats going to happen to her being done to me! Another great chapter here, thats for sure, and looking forward to more. Snag would seem to be my lack of Russian stopping me getting converted! ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #20 on: April 16, 2019, 12:01:39 pm »
Part 3

Yew and Me

I would say poor Svetlana, but fine, I'd love whats going to happen to her being done to me! Another great chapter here, thats for sure, and looking forward to more. Snag would seem to be my lack of Russian stopping me getting converted! ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed


Thanks for the vote of confidence, Merry, I'm glad (and relieved) that you enjoyed it...  The story has barely begun, so no spoilers! 
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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #21 on: April 17, 2019, 04:51:35 pm »
Part 4

I Have No Idea

Love the idea of a mermaid airlock, but yeah, I want a mermaid tail fitted, and provided to get me interested in there. Most of rest is either sex, or blanked out stuff, due to whatever. Mind, having had a few seizures myself now, I know how he feels! Thankfully I've avoided pregnancy issues though! :laugh:
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Hate rating anything like this, in truth.

Pledging the Sorority — N.C.U.

Fun 'hypno' piece, that I thought was very cleverly, and amusingly done. Fine, being the victim would be fun.
Definitely enjoyed

S.O.S.

Fine, I will have a certain Abba song in my head for days now! I loved the clever message method used, even if it did take my brain a while to catch to it, but I'll blame that on my brain issues, lol! :P Nicely done, and right result in end too
Definitely enjoyed

Words Unspoken

Whats the comment, I shouldnt love this, but I do? Very cleverly played out, on all people's parts, and I guess all will be happy of sorts in the end? If a vampire wishes to discuss that matter with me, feel free to do so. I do hope the 2 girls got their 'happy ending', mind, though I will never know.
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #22 on: April 17, 2019, 07:03:51 pm »
Magical Girl Syn

Interesting game of chess here, between Carice, and just about everyone else in the chapter! Fascinating reveal in here, thats for sure.
Definitely enjoyed


Thanks! I do love writing her, and she is turning out to be very good at exactly the kind of "chess match" I enjoy writing.
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« Reply #23 on: April 18, 2019, 01:59:51 pm »
Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) (2 new chapters)  by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.

I must admit, Budda's side of things is still far less interesting that Bobbi's. It is interesting to see his perspective -- knowing what Bobbi is doing, but he's still really dull. What is interesting, intentionally subliminal here or no, is how stage hypnotists will point out how those that stubbornly think they can't be hypnotized are probably the easiest to hypnotize. Budda stubbornly keeps thinking subliminal messaging does not affect him that much, when they probably are. This is also literally aligned with my own actual learnings in psychology and overall social science: it is not necessarily that hard to influence people if you know what you are doing. I always like to say that doing what your boss is asking of you is the lightest level of hypnotic suggestion, because you are literally following another's will. I'm not gonna lie, Bobbi's side of things is a lot more fun. Things are moving along enticingly ...

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Re: New Releases-April 13th 2019
« Reply #24 on: April 18, 2019, 04:05:48 pm »
61 Days in River City

Betsy already knows that the treatment of the reporter wasnt my scene, to be fair, she knew that would be the case before writing it. She says its needed, but we will see? I'm not sure that the scaring the bimbo's into sanity is going to work for me either. Still, knowing Betsy and me, genuine shock therapy being used wouldnt surprise me in the slightest!
Based on suggestion, rather than that, or rewriting their minds with a helmet or something, I'm going to have to only give it high end of enjoyed. I await the complaints! :laugh:

No complaints at all from me Merry. Instead I thank you for ploughing your way through it and giving it a review. And don't worry. Your problematic section is very much a rarity in the story. You may like the next chapter a lot more. Or you may not. I await your comments with trepidation.

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Now is it me but was that final "we will see?" said in a threatening tone?
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