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New Releases-March 16th 2019
« on: March 16, 2019, 11:51:54 am »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

The Bank (Roboman127) (mc ff rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
Robberies, kidnappings and Assassinations are being done by strange shiny black PVC women.  Two women going to the bank have their lives changed forever.

Bible Belt Redux (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
When Brodie flashes his ultra-religious sister, she is suddenly obsessed with his cock.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks sheís worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

Bridging Minds (mc mm bd ds) (new)  by GreyNocht
Despite moral misgivings, a brilliant scientist is driven to complete his work.

Carrieís Descent (mc ff) (new)  by BC
Carrie felt lost after she and Charlie split, it seemed she was just going through the motions day to day. Everything changed once evening when Charlie came back.

Cascade Fire (mc mf fd la) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.

The Collaboration (mc mf ds) (new)  by mr. potestas
Brianna and fiancť Larry are just starting their careers in the entertainment industry, and find themselves at a highly consequential party.

College Undercover (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.

The Diary Gradually Changes [Brotherís diary] (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by GiantNut
A brother slowly brainwashes his sister and mother into being devoted sex slaves, and it just so happens that he has a diary to recount the enslavement...

Diary of a Hypnotist (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Atte. Akisa
A hypnotist recounts his exploits, both present and past, for the benefit of posterity.

Dolly Syrup (mc mf ft) (new)  by baubleheadz
A woman gets a new costume in the mail, which she canít wait to try on.

Editing Reality Book One: Naughty Fantasies Created (mc mf gr in ts) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Fallen Angela (mc ff mf fd gr) (1 new chapter)  by Cassie the Friendly Succubus
Angela is the reigning Queen Bee of Valley High, until the day rebellious Rachel enters Angelaís turf and threaten her exalted position. But getting rid Rachel is not as easy as Angela thought it would be, and soon Angela finds herself questioning why sheíd even want to do so.

Field Test (BeautifulFetish) (mc ff mf md fd ma) (1 new chapter)  by BeautifulFetish
Why is Carol tied to a chair, and what was in the water they are trying to force down her throat?

Following Her Dream (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Shadra
Janet takes the necessary steps towards obtaining her dream girl.

Fun with Sabrina & Jon (mc mf fd ft cb) (2 new chapters)  by me-chan
A collection of moments between two ardent lovers and their mind-control dynamic.

The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
A continued look at the marriage of Elle and her hypnotically enslaved husband Louis.

The Hash (mc ma md ds ex) (2 new chapters)  by Angel Raymond
Jen likes to explore, using the chaos of a hash function to visit random places. But this game becomes more interesting than just mathematics when it leads her to meet a mysterious hypnotist on a small island.

Help! Iím Trapped In A Romantic Visual Novel! (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by HypnoticHarlequin
After testing out a strange new VR game, Payton finds herself trapped in a visual novel centered around a very odd school. Can Payton escape with her mind intact?

Keep Looking Where Your Eyes Are Looking Now (mc mf fd) (new)  by Jukebox
Sam helps Leah practice her erotic hypnosis skills, and turns out to be an enthusiastic subject.

Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

Locket (mc mf md) (new)  by catsr42
When heíd asked to speak to her privately Melissa knew he was going to ask her out like so many other boys that thought they had a chance with her had. A mix of boredom and curiosity compelled her to agree and listen to what he had to say. What she hadnít anticipated was when after sheíd turned him down heíd give her a gift.

Losers Canít Be Choosers (mc mf fd hm) (1 new chapter)  by S. B.
As much as he enjoys it, Jonah knows heís addicted to femdom humiliation. Perhaps his sister Angela, a skilled hypnotherapist, can help him with that.

Lyla (mc mf fd) (2 new chapters)  by Neal Lowe
Lyla goes to collect her latest thrallís brother.

A Mage Born (mc ff mf md fd) (new)  by Saddle Rider
A guild apprentice endures a trial by fire as a simple assignment goes awry.

Manners Maketh Man (mc mm in) (new)  by Pan
Mark learns the power of good manners.

The Mask Becomes You (mc ff mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Two college students discover a strange mask that makes the words of the wearer irresistible. They soon discover that itís even hard to resist using the mask, and that the wearerís thoughts may no longer be their own...

My New Salon (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Robert Towers
Madeleine is convinced by her roommate to try several new things.

Night Time Nudging (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?

Originals and Outsiders: Assemble (mc mf md cb) (new)  by asianpersuasion
Super powered heroes arenít the apple of the publicís eye, but that doesnít stop Nick, Jason from being recruited to join a team of young teenage superheroes to try and learn how to save the world. Taught and mentored by the great heroes of the previous generation like Luminaire and Darklight or their headmaster, Kyle Albinn, the young kids soon find themselves way in over their heads...

A Plethora of Heathers (mc fd ds hm) (new)  by Betsy Leohtar
Heatherís is a restaurant owned by Heather. Itís very profitable.

A Priest in Her Service (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by The Scrivenerís Paradox
Derekís ordinary life is turned upside down when he finds himself made into a priest of an unusual religion. The job does come with a few perks, however.

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (1 new chapter)  by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the Generalís forces and remain uninfected himself.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

Serving the Gentlemenís Club (mc mm ft) (new)  by tomozco
Ron is compelled to load a special app on his phone, and soon finds himself visiting an exclusive club.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations heíd never thought possible.

This Is Our Story (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.

The Triumphs of the Past (mc mf ma) (1 new chapter)  by Maximilian Cummings
The classic car that Eric obtains seems to have an effect on the women around or in it.

Uplink (mc ff mf ma sf) (1 new chapter)  by nevermind
The promised future has arrived. Mankind has outgrown old Terra and lives peacefully among the stars. But when junior engineer Kyra Warner of the TSS Argo picks up the wrong item from an alien planet, the rest of her crew must soon find out that not everything in this universe is willing to coexist.

We Will Never Speak of This (mc ma) (new)  by AskJeeves
Annette helps her stressed patient Nell to relax.

You Remember (mc mf md) (new)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
Caught in the act, thrown in jail, stripped bare and held by chains, Terezen finds himself slated for a speedy execution. But now you remember how he escaped, donít you?

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2019, 01:07:46 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2019, 01:51:03 pm »
Due diligence: I beta-read ďWe Will Never Speak of ThisĒ and the author has literal backdoor codes to my brain, which is her property now. That said, I found it short, sweet, and hot. It hit a lot of my buttons, which is really rare for a story where everything is consensual.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2019, 03:05:43 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

Aaaah! I can answer all of these questions, but also, I can't!  :o

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2019, 03:47:47 pm »
ďAnnachurian CandidateĒ is so good, filled with som many Action TV tropes and sizzling Hypno scenes. 
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2019, 04:01:07 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

Aaaah! I can answer all of these questions, but also, I can't!  :o

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I'm trusting you to bring it home, 321! This is already the strongest story of the year so far and I hope it stays that way. My two cents.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #6 on: March 16, 2019, 05:56:50 pm »
We Will Never Speak of This: Wow, what a debut! Hot, sexy, smart, and even a little sweet? Nell is certainly getting her money's worth out of these sessions! Loved the smart, on-point dialogue, the slow induction, and the fun coda to wrap up the story.

61 Days in River City: Seven days have passed now, and while Vicky and Sonia kick ass and take names, Violet comes into the possession of a most interesting item. I love the characters here, especially Violet, and I can't wait to see where all of this goes.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #7 on: March 16, 2019, 06:01:13 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

Aaaah! I can answer all of these questions, but also, I can't!  :o

Edit: Okay, magic spoiler tag, do my bidding:

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I'm trusting you to bring it home, 321! This is already the strongest story of the year so far and I hope it stays that way. My two cents.

Thanks, HaveHerSleepAndObey and fumanchu! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I spent today sketching out the next episode (and a bit of the next one after that!)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #8 on: March 16, 2019, 09:25:10 pm »
"This Is Our Story" continues to make me very, very happy. :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #9 on: March 17, 2019, 10:46:19 am »
Blizzard continues to be a wonderful, character-driven story. I love the little details that Redsliver adds to each chapter. Anyone who has ever lived alone has probably experienced something akin to Gene's bandage situation, where the half-baked solution works just fine for you, but really isn't something you want to offer to the guests who have dropped by unexpectedly. The power has come back on around town, which is probably a good thing, although I'm hoping for another building-shaking blizzard to keep these four cooped up for a little longer. :-)

Following Her Dream features a thrilling standoff between Janet and Violet this week. Both of them claim to have just put a massive, elaborate scheme into effect, complete with mesmerized pawns carrying out their orders, but only one of them can be telling the truth. Which one is it? Some great scenes in here as we find out. And then the chapter closes with an absolutely heartbreaking sentence! This story just keeps getting better and better.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #10 on: March 17, 2019, 03:04:02 pm »
Following Her Dream features a thrilling standoff between Janet and Violet this week. Both of them claim to have just put a massive, elaborate scheme into effect, complete with mesmerized pawns carrying out their orders, but only one of them can be telling the truth. Which one is it? Some great scenes in here as we find out. And then the chapter closes with an absolutely heartbreaking sentence! This story just keeps getting better and better.

Thank you for the generous compliment! Even I was getting emotional writing it, so I'm glad to hear that it's coming across with the readers as well. Small hint, the next chapter is proving to be equally difficult for me to write in the same way =) I've had a few people get the impression that this was the finale, but as the hint implies, there's still more to come!

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #11 on: March 17, 2019, 04:38:09 pm »
61 Days in River City: Seven days have passed now, and while Vicky and Sonia kick ass and take names, Violet comes into the possession of a most interesting item. I love the characters here, especially Violet, and I can't wait to see where all of this goes.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #12 on: March 17, 2019, 06:36:09 pm »
Blizzard continues to be a wonderful, character-driven story. I love the little details that Redsliver adds to each chapter. Anyone who has ever lived alone has probably experienced something akin to Gene's bandage situation, where the half-baked solution works just fine for you, but really isn't something you want to offer to the guests who have dropped by unexpectedly. The power has come back on around town, which is probably a good thing, although I'm hoping for another building-shaking blizzard to keep these four cooped up for a little longer. :-)

Glad you're liking it. I had that a no band-aids situation when I was just out of college. The lady friend was not impressed. I decided to cut Gene a little slack to work in Ninja Turtles. Saying Max is the Donatello or the Ravenclaw is such great shorthand for she's an overfocused nerd. I think you'll like what's coming, there's lots of rocky weather ahead.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #13 on: March 18, 2019, 11:27:43 am »
Dolly Syrup (mc mf ft) (new)  by baubleheadz
A woman gets a new costume in the mail, which she can’t wait to try on.

This got right to it, and I honestly prefer that sometimes. I've certainly fallen prey to this -- it can be far too easy to throw too much exposition up at the start to get it over with! Anyway, I really liked how this was part of an ongoing thing, giving this a day-in-the-life feel, especially in how it was certainly a rather special day. It is not always easy to go through the details of a transformation without droning on, but this story just barely made it work. There was no way to know precisely all the details behind this doll TF, but in the realms of MC erotica, such things are probably inevitable.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #14 on: March 18, 2019, 04:44:30 pm »
Dolly Syrup

I never have and probably never get full-on lovedoll transformations, but I was very much digging this right up to the oven mitt hands.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #15 on: March 18, 2019, 05:13:37 pm »
A Mage Born

I very much enjoyed this for the compelling characters and some really quite wonderful prose! The plot is engrossing and moves at a near perfect pace. The only thing I would really criticize is that it felt a little bit jarring to be introduced to a completely new POV halfway through, even if I ended up liking that character very much. It's also a bit light on the MC for my liking, which is purely a matter of taste and in no way a detriment to the story's quality. Some of that magic backfiring or Stranix hiring his own Mages would have pushed my buttons more, but that wasn't the story you were telling, and that's cool!

So, despite some personal taste issues, I really liked this. Very well done!

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #16 on: March 18, 2019, 05:19:42 pm »
Dolly Syrup

I never have and probably never get full-on lovedoll transformations, but I was very much digging this right up to the oven mitt hands.

I'm with you there - it was very well written, leaves just enough out that your brain can fill in the details, but then once it went to hands/etc., I don't know... Is there such thing as "imagined uncanny valley?"  I saw the hands in my head and it just was too far for me.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #17 on: March 18, 2019, 05:34:58 pm »
Carrie's Descent

I also enjoyed this quite a lot. It's a great debut from this author and it's got a good mystery going for it. I might have a thing for
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and I'm eager to learn what the deal is with that mysterious building/complex. Who built it? Who is Eve, who put her there? And what will become of our protagonists? Or rather, what will they become? Descents are always something I like to read about and there are certainly worse things to do than "go down" :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #18 on: March 18, 2019, 06:42:20 pm »
Yes, I found "Carrie's Descent" interesting too...  I like the way that when it answers questions, it seems to pose at least two more!  I'm hoping that the author can keep up a consistant standard in subsequent episodes.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #19 on: March 18, 2019, 10:37:34 pm »
Dolly Syrup was a nice tf story, maybe a bit light on the mind control side of things.  I did enjoy the final transformation sequence personally.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #20 on: March 18, 2019, 10:49:14 pm »
The parts of "College Undercover" where Carol conditions Janice are always the sexiest parts and this was no exception.  This was a lot more evil than the others, but still sexy.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #21 on: March 18, 2019, 11:44:36 pm »
Carrie's Descent

I also enjoyed this quite a lot. It's a great debut from this author and it's got a good mystery going for it. I might have a thing for
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and I'm eager to learn what the deal is with that mysterious building/complex. Who built it? Who is Eve, who put her there? And what will become of our protagonists? Or rather, what will they become? Descents are always something I like to read about and there are certainly worse things to do than "go down" :)

Looking forward to more!

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #22 on: March 19, 2019, 02:13:31 pm »
The parts of "College Undercover" where Carol conditions Janice are always the sexiest parts and this was no exception.  This was a lot more evil than the others, but still sexy.

This. Except Iíd say this time was a lot more evil than the others, which made it EVEN SEXIER.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #23 on: March 19, 2019, 03:13:31 pm »
The parts of "College Undercover" where Carol conditions Janice are always the sexiest parts and this was no exception.  This was a lot more evil than the others, but still sexy.

This. Except Iíd say this time was a lot more evil than the others, which made it EVEN SEXIER.

I'm kind of hoping that the story ends with Carol running a sort of specialized whorehouse where she MC's the girls to be more dedicated.  Take your part-time weekend hooker and lock her in a room for a while and give her the words.   :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #24 on: March 19, 2019, 03:15:05 pm »
I've never actually read the end of a Greyscribbler story (haven't yet checked out Fair Share, and Business & Pleasure is unfinished) so maybe this is overly optimistic, but I'm still hoping Carol breaks free and gets (at least some of) her old life back...
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #25 on: March 19, 2019, 06:03:14 pm »
I'm kind of hoping that the story ends with Carol running a sort of specialized whorehouse where she MC's the girls to be more dedicated.  Take your part-time weekend hooker and lock her in a room for a while and give her the words.   :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #26 on: March 20, 2019, 11:22:18 am »
Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

There are weeks that I wonder why I keep coming back to MC Stories. I don't care for the sociopathic stories. I really have a problem with them, unless the sociopath loses in the end. Rarely does that happen here.

Different strokes for different folks, I guess.

But then I encounter stories like Laser Tag Party, and I'm reminded why I come back. The site is a little like a slot machine, giving out good stories just often enough that I keep pulling the lever.

This story is FUN.

When I read the first installment, I was so inspired that I ended up writing my own, sorta-kinda similar story, but based on something everyone hates: a mandatory corporate team building weekend. Maybe the story will see the light of day sometime. But that's show much I enjoyed the first installment.

And now we have a second chapter of fun from Scalar Seventh.

The writing is good. Portions are just a little bit complicated, as the author describes the games that are about to be played. But that's brief, and then the games themselves happen. The author does a good job explaining events from the perspective of one of the guests at Sam's party.

It's *fun*. Nice job, Scalar Seventh.


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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #27 on: March 20, 2019, 02:54:48 pm »
Let the mayhem (finally) begin

The Collaboration

Clearly I need to find a 'partner' to write stories for me! :laugh: Oh, and someone to hypnotise me, seemingly. Fine, a courtesan, at my age might not be my perfect role, but it would be fun, other than anal sex at least! ::) Fun quickie, in more senses than one
High end of definitely enjoyed

Losers Canít Be Choosers

OK, I roared with laughter at the lines about Clarissa, and Catsuits, the author knows why already! Will Angela manage to turn events around? I hope so, but again someone already knows that! Beyond my usual Gail issues (and some love those), this is a great section of the story
High end of definitely enjoyed. See, mentioning Clarissa, and catsuits is worthwhile, lol! :P

A Plethora of Heathers

The sort of story Betsy does so brilliantly. I wonder who the new lucky victim might be, can only wish it was me! Yes, those tubes sound fun. Cant wait to read more of this!
Oh what the hell, low end of much enjoyed, why not? Well, there is her ego, but otherwise...

61 Days in River City

In truth, 2 Betsy gems this week, especially the Violet section of this. What will her 'gift' bring for her? Nothing wrong with other section in truth, but that was preferred piece.
Equally, her ego will explode if I give her 2 'too good' ratings, so I'll give high end of definitely enjoyed. Love you, Betsy xxx

We Will Never Speak of This

Fun hypno piece, I could probably do with a Nell job done on me, not that I can afford the appointments any more, but other than that... Oh, and lovely the ending too.
Definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #28 on: March 20, 2019, 07:21:33 pm »
I read the latest chapter of Night Time Nudging and thought it was incredibly hot. Nice work, MindSpark!

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #29 on: March 20, 2019, 09:09:49 pm »
Let the mayhem (finally) begin

The Collaboration

Clearly I need to find a 'partner' to write stories for me! :laugh: Oh, and someone to hypnotise me, seemingly. Fine, a courtesan, at my age might not be my perfect role, but it would be fun, other than anal sex at least! ::) Fun quickie, in more senses than one
High end of definitely enjoyed


Glad I finally pushed your buttons at the higher level! I really wanted to put together something truly contemporary here. Journeys into Passion really aims to explore erotica much more freely than I have, allowing me to just do stories that would not fit inside an overarching mythology. The main story has a structure inspired by the Twilight Zone -- with very quiet MC and sci-fi elements, but the goal was to make both these stories directly relevant to today without actively being social commentary. A lot of fun, and perhaps a necessary palate cleanser to some of the stranger stories I'm working on already.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #30 on: March 20, 2019, 10:46:25 pm »
Actually did a double-take when I saw The Mask Becomes You was in this update. Was one of my favorite stories at the time that it was being written, and I was really sad when I realized that it seemed to fall to the wayside. So glad to see that it's finally back, and this chapter did not disappoint.

I hope this also means a continuation of Algorithm, as that story held promise, and it left off at such a cliffhanger...

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« Reply #31 on: March 21, 2019, 06:17:48 am »
Actually did a double-take when I saw The Mask Becomes You was in this update. Was one of my favorite stories at the time that it was being written, and I was really sad when I realized that it seemed to fall to the wayside. So glad to see that it's finally back, and this chapter did not disappoint.

I hope this also means a continuation of Algorithm, as that story held promise, and it left off at such a cliffhanger...

I was sad too! Life just got in the way. Thanks, Iím glad you liked the latest piece of The Mask becomes You :D I had a concern that it may have lost itís kick due to the unplanned hiatus, but now that Iím back into it Iím really enjoying my plans for the next few chapters, although admittedly an ending is on the way.

As for Algorithm, itís definitely on my radar, though right now Little Pink Pills seems to be flowing much easier from ideas to the page.

Iíd say I may have something within a month, Iím gonna try and round up some of my older stories before posting some new ones (of which I may have half a dozen semi written / quasi planned out O_o)

Also trying to split my time between writing and catching up on some of the recent stories on here, anything over 10,000 words is rather daunting but Iím working through College Undercover and am meaning to check out The Hash and This is Our Story. :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #32 on: March 21, 2019, 10:30:25 am »
Part 2

Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate

The author already knows I'd love a part in this series, though a much more mature brainwashing 'victim' would be needed for me! This works beautifully for the sort of series this is designed to be, Charlies Angels like. Yes, I'd love to be caught by the doctor, no, I dont want to be rescued! I do know the ending, for now at least, but more on that at right time.
High end of definitely enjoyed. Could have given more, but I need to not be too good about said Doctor. Might not brainwash me if I am! :angel:

Field Test (BeautifulFetish)

Oh fine, the abuse is a bit more than I personally enjoy, but otherwise, loving this. Loved the way Simean gave her the illusion of escape, even if you knew it wasnt going to happen, or indeed, was that all part of the control?
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Marked down, my tastes only

Keep Looking Where Your Eyes Are Looking Now

Its green fd, but thats about my only issue with this. Its delightfully told, and done, and he gets some benefits at least, so... Classic JB Hypno type piece.
Definitely enjoyed

Resistance 2

How much longer can Robert continue to resist? Lot long, I suspect. In the meanwhile, the women have gained another stud to keep them relatively satisfied. And now, another woman too. More sex driven than my tastes, but for most people, just fine
Low end of definitely enjoyed

Return of the Armored Warrior

Eugene, and JD have a lot in common, on the care front at least. Sadly he hasnt got an armored outfit for me, but other than that... Oh, PS, love Gwen as a character. Bit like a JB piece, goes without saying, beautifully written.
High end of definitely enjoyed

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #33 on: March 21, 2019, 03:13:49 pm »
The parts of "College Undercover" where Carol conditions Janice are always the sexiest parts and this was no exception.  This was a lot more evil than the others, but still sexy.

This. Except Iíd say this time was a lot more evil than the others, which made it EVEN SEXIER.

Glad you both enjoyed it. And yes, Carol wasn't exactly being nice.

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« Reply #34 on: March 21, 2019, 03:15:09 pm »

I'm kind of hoping that the story ends with Carol running a sort of specialized whorehouse where she MC's the girls to be more dedicated.  Take your part-time weekend hooker and lock her in a room for a while and give her the words.   :)

All I will say is that I have already written the end of the story.  It's the parts between there and here that I'm still working on.

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« Reply #35 on: March 21, 2019, 03:16:22 pm »
I've never actually read the end of a Greyscribbler story (haven't yet checked out Fair Share, and Business & Pleasure is unfinished) so maybe this is overly optimistic, but I'm still hoping Carol breaks free and gets (at least some of) her old life back...

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« Reply #36 on: March 21, 2019, 08:33:55 pm »
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Poor Carol.  In my defence, I did allow her to end up loving the sex, and she's still got all her marbles (well almost all, since she's incapable of wearing anything but the sluttiest of clothing any more, and she doesn't even realise it).  Although I haven't posted the stories here yet, I've written lots about Simeon and Mira, and they really are a nasty pair of sadists.  Long-term come-uppances are in order, I think everyone will agree.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #37 on: March 22, 2019, 09:39:23 am »
I've never actually read the end of a Greyscribbler story (haven't yet checked out Fair Share, and Business & Pleasure is unfinished) so maybe this is overly optimistic, but I'm still hoping Carol breaks free and gets (at least some of) her old life back...

Which old life would that be?  :)  She's had a few...

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #38 on: March 22, 2019, 09:49:37 am »
If they could make me enjoy sex, then I'd really be impressed! :laugh: :angel:

Part 3

Dolly Syrup

Oh fine, thats 1 costume I wouldnt mind trying on myself! Indeed, might be only way you could get me interested in sex, something like that. So yes, apart from the jealously factor, perfect sort of story for me. Nicely written too. So, if someone wants to get me one of those valves...? ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed, almost tempted to more, for personal reasons

Fallen Angela

Not that either women is terribly likeable, but other than that, pretty good...At least the worse woman is on the receiving end, lol. Interesting story, thats for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed. Nearly gave standard version, but had better not annoy Rachel! :laugh:

The Hash

Loving the play between Eric and Jen here. Loved the twist re the book, and the library too. I dont get the Hash thing, but the story is fun
High end of definitely enjoyed

Locket

He hardly seems likeable, but still a step up on Melissa, so who cares? Clever enough use of the locket, I must say. Might be a blessing I'm polite, and not terribly pretty, lol! :laugh: Mind, the right person, the right locket...
Definitely enjoyed

Stop Watch

If my world ever stops, other than for seizure, I'll be concerned, lol. Mind, if anyone thinks I'm attractive...? :laugh: Until we get to the actual incest, I'm going to love this, for sure, as its delightfully told.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #39 on: March 22, 2019, 02:26:34 pm »
Part 4

Blizzard

About the only time I find a blizzard to be fun. 3 cute ladies. 1 adorable guy, and a fun situation, need I say more? Only question here is who (or how many) Gene ends up living with here. Great piece of Rom MC, and I'm not certain he even realises it yet
High end of definitely enjoyed

Fun with Sabrina & Jon

I could audition for Susan's role, happily! Title sums this up perfectly, though there are a few side members involved this time around. Just love the events in the second chapter, especially his resistance
High end of definitely enjoyed

Uplink

Oh to be drone, lol! :P And all this before the actual uplink commences. Process isnt terribly original, but doesnt stop me being jealous of the victims, or victims to be.
High end of definitely enjoyed. Probably ought to give less, so they make me part of hive mind, to get the better mark!

You Remember

Couldnt really get into this, but that may be because I couldnt really get into the related story. Or quite possibly, just not my thing.
No rating, for reasons above

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #40 on: March 22, 2019, 02:41:17 pm »
Blizzard

About the only time I find a blizzard to be fun. 3 cute ladies. 1 adorable guy, and a fun situation, need I say more? Only question here is who (or how many) Gene ends up living with here. Great piece of Rom MC, and I'm not certain he even realises it yet
High end of definitely enjoyed


Thank you, as always. I'm having a lot of fun feeling out which characters would, could, or should realise things.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #41 on: March 22, 2019, 04:22:38 pm »
A Plethora of Heathers

The sort of story Betsy does so brilliantly. I wonder who the new lucky victim might be, can only wish it was me! Yes, those tubes sound fun. Cant wait to read more of this!
Oh what the hell, low end of much enjoyed, why not? Well, there is her ego, but otherwise...

What can I say except thank you so much Merry. High praise indeed. I'll ignore that bit about my ego.

61 Days in River City

In truth, 2 Betsy gems this week, especially the Violet section of this. What will her 'gift' bring for her? Nothing wrong with other section in truth, but that was preferred piece.
Equally, her ego will explode if I give her 2 'too good' ratings, so I'll give high end of definitely enjoyed. Love you, Betsy xxx

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #42 on: March 22, 2019, 05:45:56 pm »

Losers Canít Be Choosers

OK, I roared with laughter at the lines about Clarissa, and Catsuits, the author knows why already! Will Angela manage to turn events around? I hope so, but again someone already knows that! Beyond my usual Gail issues (and some love those), this is a great section of the story
High end of definitely enjoyed. See, mentioning Clarissa, and catsuits is worthwhile, lol! :P


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« Reply #43 on: March 22, 2019, 10:21:58 pm »

Fun with Sabrina & Jon

I could audition for Susan's role, happily! Title sums this up perfectly, though there are a few side members involved this time around. Just love the events in the second chapter, especially his resistance
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« Reply #44 on: March 22, 2019, 10:34:19 pm »
Still one of my favorite stories to keep up with, The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle continue to go in interesting directions that surprise even my inclinations. Wasn't sure I would've liked the idea of a Louise, but the inclusion seems to really work, and instead of making the dynamic strained, it works to enhance it in classic Elle style for me. It was also nice to see the friend make an appearance, as well as the talk of where someone's will ends and another's control begins. Great chapter.

Keep Looking Where Your Eyes Are Now, as someone else pointed out, is classic Jukebox stuff, the kind I miss seeing on a regular basis. It's really cute how sexy Leah leads Sam down, especially at the end where it all seems like a natural part of what will be the funnest dynamic between them.

We Will Never Speak of This is also in the vein of a story with a sensuously slow and believable sense of inducing and control, followed by a surprisingly sweeter ending than expected. Really thought Nell was going to be the vessel Annette needed to deposit all the lust she was feeling, but I'm sure she felt some pleasure anyway. Really envy Annette's husband though.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #45 on: March 22, 2019, 10:39:10 pm »
I've never actually read the end of a Greyscribbler story (haven't yet checked out Fair Share, and Business & Pleasure is unfinished) so maybe this is overly optimistic, but I'm still hoping Carol breaks free and gets (at least some of) her old life back...

Hate this idea.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #46 on: March 23, 2019, 01:45:28 pm »
Part 5

Following Her Dream

Well, that wasnt what I was expecting to happen, thats for sure! :o But yes, I thoroughly approve, though now I desperately want to read the next chapter (yes, its up on update), but I mustnt until the right time. Talk about making me look at Janet, and Violet, in a totally different light, absolutely.
High end of definitely enjoyed. I suspect the next chapter is either getting a higher, or lower rating, depending on events! :angel:

Originals and Outsiders: Assemble

The trouble for this author, as with all of us that write about River City, is that we have to match up to the originator, and master of the genre. This is decent enough, but not as strong as the 'originals', and also needs a bit of an edit too. Having said that, fascinated to find out what happens in 20 minutes or so.
Low end of definitely enjoyed

A Priest in Her Service

Well, so far at least I'd call this green fd, but I can see where the md is coming from, I guess? Decent enough, if nothing special in the sense of a Goddess story, I'd say. Yes, the young, and beautiful conditions probably annoy me, lol. :P At the same time, fascinated to see where this goes from here
Definitely enjoyed

This Is Our Story

So who will Conner end up dating, and/or how many? Yes, this is my sort of story, and I'm sure I will be delighted for all as to how things play out. Well, maybe not Angelica, but who knows? Wouldnt be hard to convince me of a happy ending for her, I might add.
High end of definitely enjoyed.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #47 on: March 23, 2019, 03:44:55 pm »
Following Her Dream

Well, that wasnt what I was expecting to happen, thats for sure! :o But yes, I thoroughly approve, though now I desperately want to read the next chapter (yes, its up on update), but I mustnt until the right time. Talk about making me look at Janet, and Violet, in a totally different light, absolutely.
High end of definitely enjoyed. I suspect the next chapter is either getting a higher, or lower rating, depending on events! :angel:

I've been eagerly awaiting your review for this chapter, and I was so glad after reading what you just wrote! Thank you so much for the kind words. I promise this chapter wasn't written just to get a more favorable review haha.

Also, meant to say this earlier, but I'm sorry to hear about what you have been going through. Stay strong, eh?

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #48 on: March 24, 2019, 02:23:15 pm »
I'll stay as strong as I can, under circumstances, but really wont know full picture until after neurologist :angel:

And last, but by no means least

Carrieís Descent

Well, thats quite a story, for sure. If Eve happens to need a single, older woman to go in that chamber...? It is long, but its delightfully told, lets just say. Not sure if we're going to find out more, or if thats it, in truth.
Definitely enjoyed

Help! Iím Trapped In A Romantic Visual Novel!

Payton, or Purin, end result, who knows? One thing's for sure, if I do ever try a VR system, I must be careful what it might do to me, lol. :laugh: Mind, if its called ROBOT, might make me keener to use it! Certainly thoroughly into this well written story, for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Laser Tag Party

Maybe I'm just not enough into games, or competitive enough for this? Maybe someone should alter me so I can find out? Its fun enough reading it mind, just really hard for an 'old wrinkly' like me to get into, as I am.
Low end of definitely enjoyed. Willing to be altered to discuss? ;)

The Triumphs of the Past

Remind me to be careful if I ever get an offer to go in a car with Max! :laugh: Mind, this is fun to read, I must say. Who, me, insert a gearknob in my 'bits', I dont think so! Unless...? Great read
Definitely enjoyed. Would have been high end 120 words less, lol! :P

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #49 on: March 24, 2019, 06:05:05 pm »
I'll stay as strong as I can, under circumstances, but really wont know full picture until after neurologist :angel:


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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #50 on: March 25, 2019, 10:25:34 am »
Good luck and best wishes Merry!!!  Sending positive thoughts your way <3

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« Reply #51 on: March 25, 2019, 10:26:42 am »
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #52 on: March 25, 2019, 06:26:07 pm »


Carrieís Descent

Well, thats quite a story, for sure. If Eve happens to need a single, older woman to go in that chamber...? It is long, but its delightfully told, lets just say. Not sure if we're going to find out more, or if thats it, in truth.
Definitely enjoyed


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