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New Releases-March 16th 2019
« on: March 16, 2019, 11:51:54 am »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

The Bank (Roboman127) (mc ff rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
Robberies, kidnappings and Assassinations are being done by strange shiny black PVC women.  Two women going to the bank have their lives changed forever.

Bible Belt Redux (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Pan
When Brodie flashes his ultra-religious sister, she is suddenly obsessed with his cock.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks sheís worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

Bridging Minds (mc mm bd ds) (new)  by GreyNocht
Despite moral misgivings, a brilliant scientist is driven to complete his work.

Carrieís Descent (mc ff) (new)  by BC
Carrie felt lost after she and Charlie split, it seemed she was just going through the motions day to day. Everything changed once evening when Charlie came back.

Cascade Fire (mc mf fd la) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Torn from his family, a man without a mind continues learning and sharing magic and more with beautiful women.

The Collaboration (mc mf ds) (new)  by mr. potestas
Brianna and fiancť Larry are just starting their careers in the entertainment industry, and find themselves at a highly consequential party.

College Undercover (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.

The Diary Gradually Changes [Brotherís diary] (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by GiantNut
A brother slowly brainwashes his sister and mother into being devoted sex slaves, and it just so happens that he has a diary to recount the enslavement...

Diary of a Hypnotist (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Atte. Akisa
A hypnotist recounts his exploits, both present and past, for the benefit of posterity.

Dolly Syrup (mc mf ft) (new)  by baubleheadz
A woman gets a new costume in the mail, which she canít wait to try on.

Editing Reality Book One: Naughty Fantasies Created (mc mf gr in ts) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Fallen Angela (mc ff mf fd gr) (1 new chapter)  by Cassie the Friendly Succubus
Angela is the reigning Queen Bee of Valley High, until the day rebellious Rachel enters Angelaís turf and threaten her exalted position. But getting rid Rachel is not as easy as Angela thought it would be, and soon Angela finds herself questioning why sheíd even want to do so.

Field Test (BeautifulFetish) (mc ff mf md fd ma) (1 new chapter)  by BeautifulFetish
Why is Carol tied to a chair, and what was in the water they are trying to force down her throat?

Following Her Dream (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Shadra
Janet takes the necessary steps towards obtaining her dream girl.

Fun with Sabrina & Jon (mc mf fd ft cb) (2 new chapters)  by me-chan
A collection of moments between two ardent lovers and their mind-control dynamic.

The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
A continued look at the marriage of Elle and her hypnotically enslaved husband Louis.

The Hash (mc ma md ds ex) (2 new chapters)  by Angel Raymond
Jen likes to explore, using the chaos of a hash function to visit random places. But this game becomes more interesting than just mathematics when it leads her to meet a mysterious hypnotist on a small island.

Help! Iím Trapped In A Romantic Visual Novel! (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by HypnoticHarlequin
After testing out a strange new VR game, Payton finds herself trapped in a visual novel centered around a very odd school. Can Payton escape with her mind intact?

Keep Looking Where Your Eyes Are Looking Now (mc mf fd) (new)  by Jukebox
Sam helps Leah practice her erotic hypnosis skills, and turns out to be an enthusiastic subject.

Laser Tag Party (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Scalar Seventh
Sam Miller just wants to have a fun bachelorette party with her friends. And what could be more fun than ordering pizza, renting out the local laser tag business for the day, and getting everyone Altered to boot?

Locket (mc mf md) (new)  by catsr42
When heíd asked to speak to her privately Melissa knew he was going to ask her out like so many other boys that thought they had a chance with her had. A mix of boredom and curiosity compelled her to agree and listen to what he had to say. What she hadnít anticipated was when after sheíd turned him down heíd give her a gift.

Losers Canít Be Choosers (mc mf fd hm) (1 new chapter)  by S. B.
As much as he enjoys it, Jonah knows heís addicted to femdom humiliation. Perhaps his sister Angela, a skilled hypnotherapist, can help him with that.

Lyla (mc mf fd) (2 new chapters)  by Neal Lowe
Lyla goes to collect her latest thrallís brother.

A Mage Born (mc ff mf md fd) (new)  by Saddle Rider
A guild apprentice endures a trial by fire as a simple assignment goes awry.

Manners Maketh Man (mc mm in) (new)  by Pan
Mark learns the power of good manners.

The Mask Becomes You (mc ff mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Two college students discover a strange mask that makes the words of the wearer irresistible. They soon discover that itís even hard to resist using the mask, and that the wearerís thoughts may no longer be their own...

My New Salon (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Robert Towers
Madeleine is convinced by her roommate to try several new things.

Night Time Nudging (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?

Originals and Outsiders: Assemble (mc mf md cb) (new)  by asianpersuasion
Super powered heroes arenít the apple of the publicís eye, but that doesnít stop Nick, Jason from being recruited to join a team of young teenage superheroes to try and learn how to save the world. Taught and mentored by the great heroes of the previous generation like Luminaire and Darklight or their headmaster, Kyle Albinn, the young kids soon find themselves way in over their heads...

A Plethora of Heathers (mc fd ds hm) (new)  by Betsy Leohtar
Heatherís is a restaurant owned by Heather. Itís very profitable.

A Priest in Her Service (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by The Scrivenerís Paradox
Derekís ordinary life is turned upside down when he finds himself made into a priest of an unusual religion. The job does come with a few perks, however.

Resistance 2 (mc mf ff in gr) (1 new chapter)  by Rikimaru
Robert struggles to develop a cure for his infected family while trying to keep the Virus contained and concealed from the Generalís forces and remain uninfected himself.

Return of the Armored Warrior (mc ff md fd cb) (1 new chapter)  by J. Darksong
Erika Patrick, daughter of Tina Patrick, has moved to River City to make a new life for herself. She soon learns that things are a lot rougher in River City than back home in New York, but when Shining Paladin runs into trouble, she finds a mentor, someone who will take her under his wing, and together, they might not only rekindle an old legacy, they might even surpass it.

Serving the Gentlemenís Club (mc mm ft) (new)  by tomozco
Ron is compelled to load a special app on his phone, and soon finds himself visiting an exclusive club.

61 Days in River City (mc mf cb) (1 new chapter)  by Betsy Leohtar
SureShot has a contract to kill Alicia. Sonia intends to stop him, even if she has to kill him, because she wants to kill Alicia herself. All the supers in River City are no help to Sonia at all.

Stop Watch (mc mf md in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A power that is too good to be true becomes a corrupting influence on a man and leads him into temptations heíd never thought possible.

This Is Our Story (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.

The Triumphs of the Past (mc mf ma) (1 new chapter)  by Maximilian Cummings
The classic car that Eric obtains seems to have an effect on the women around or in it.

Uplink (mc ff mf ma sf) (1 new chapter)  by nevermind
The promised future has arrived. Mankind has outgrown old Terra and lives peacefully among the stars. But when junior engineer Kyra Warner of the TSS Argo picks up the wrong item from an alien planet, the rest of her crew must soon find out that not everything in this universe is willing to coexist.

We Will Never Speak of This (mc ma) (new)  by AskJeeves
Annette helps her stressed patient Nell to relax.

You Remember (mc mf md) (new)  by Meleva and Scalar Seventh
Caught in the act, thrown in jail, stripped bare and held by chains, Terezen finds himself slated for a speedy execution. But now you remember how he escaped, donít you?

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2019, 01:07:46 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2019, 01:51:03 pm »
Due diligence: I beta-read ďWe Will Never Speak of ThisĒ and the author has literal backdoor codes to my brain, which is her property now. That said, I found it short, sweet, and hot. It hit a lot of my buttons, which is really rare for a story where everything is consensual.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2019, 03:05:43 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

Aaaah! I can answer all of these questions, but also, I can't!  :o

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2019, 03:47:47 pm »
ďAnnachurian CandidateĒ is so good, filled with som many Action TV tropes and sizzling Hypno scenes. 
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2019, 04:01:07 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

Aaaah! I can answer all of these questions, but also, I can't!  :o

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I'm trusting you to bring it home, 321! This is already the strongest story of the year so far and I hope it stays that way. My two cents.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #6 on: March 16, 2019, 05:56:50 pm »
We Will Never Speak of This: Wow, what a debut! Hot, sexy, smart, and even a little sweet? Nell is certainly getting her money's worth out of these sessions! Loved the smart, on-point dialogue, the slow induction, and the fun coda to wrap up the story.

61 Days in River City: Seven days have passed now, and while Vicky and Sonia kick ass and take names, Violet comes into the possession of a most interesting item. I love the characters here, especially Violet, and I can't wait to see where all of this goes.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #7 on: March 16, 2019, 06:01:13 pm »
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Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
While handling what seems to be a routine kidnapping case, a trio of sexy private investigators uncover a diabolical mind control conspiracy.

I love this story so much, but Iím kinda fearful that itíll wind up being an unsatisfying ending. Itís already set up for the trope that the good girls win in the end and all the sexy brainwashing is wasted. But I also can see this going for the trope of a bad ending where some of the girls do stay brainwashed but somebody ends up dying and the whole thing ends up messy. I wish it would follow the rarer trope of all the women staying hypnotized slaves and just having more sex. Hoping that having this be the first review and post gives it a better chance to be seen by the writer.

Aaaah! I can answer all of these questions, but also, I can't!  :o

Edit: Okay, magic spoiler tag, do my bidding:

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I'm trusting you to bring it home, 321! This is already the strongest story of the year so far and I hope it stays that way. My two cents.

Thanks, HaveHerSleepAndObey and fumanchu! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I spent today sketching out the next episode (and a bit of the next one after that!)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #8 on: March 16, 2019, 09:25:10 pm »
"This Is Our Story" continues to make me very, very happy. :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #9 on: March 17, 2019, 10:46:19 am »
Blizzard continues to be a wonderful, character-driven story. I love the little details that Redsliver adds to each chapter. Anyone who has ever lived alone has probably experienced something akin to Gene's bandage situation, where the half-baked solution works just fine for you, but really isn't something you want to offer to the guests who have dropped by unexpectedly. The power has come back on around town, which is probably a good thing, although I'm hoping for another building-shaking blizzard to keep these four cooped up for a little longer. :-)

Following Her Dream features a thrilling standoff between Janet and Violet this week. Both of them claim to have just put a massive, elaborate scheme into effect, complete with mesmerized pawns carrying out their orders, but only one of them can be telling the truth. Which one is it? Some great scenes in here as we find out. And then the chapter closes with an absolutely heartbreaking sentence! This story just keeps getting better and better.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #10 on: March 17, 2019, 03:04:02 pm »
Following Her Dream features a thrilling standoff between Janet and Violet this week. Both of them claim to have just put a massive, elaborate scheme into effect, complete with mesmerized pawns carrying out their orders, but only one of them can be telling the truth. Which one is it? Some great scenes in here as we find out. And then the chapter closes with an absolutely heartbreaking sentence! This story just keeps getting better and better.

Thank you for the generous compliment! Even I was getting emotional writing it, so I'm glad to hear that it's coming across with the readers as well. Small hint, the next chapter is proving to be equally difficult for me to write in the same way =) I've had a few people get the impression that this was the finale, but as the hint implies, there's still more to come!

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #11 on: March 17, 2019, 04:38:09 pm »
61 Days in River City: Seven days have passed now, and while Vicky and Sonia kick ass and take names, Violet comes into the possession of a most interesting item. I love the characters here, especially Violet, and I can't wait to see where all of this goes.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #12 on: March 17, 2019, 06:36:09 pm »
Blizzard continues to be a wonderful, character-driven story. I love the little details that Redsliver adds to each chapter. Anyone who has ever lived alone has probably experienced something akin to Gene's bandage situation, where the half-baked solution works just fine for you, but really isn't something you want to offer to the guests who have dropped by unexpectedly. The power has come back on around town, which is probably a good thing, although I'm hoping for another building-shaking blizzard to keep these four cooped up for a little longer. :-)

Glad you're liking it. I had that a no band-aids situation when I was just out of college. The lady friend was not impressed. I decided to cut Gene a little slack to work in Ninja Turtles. Saying Max is the Donatello or the Ravenclaw is such great shorthand for she's an overfocused nerd. I think you'll like what's coming, there's lots of rocky weather ahead.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #13 on: March 18, 2019, 11:27:43 am »
Dolly Syrup (mc mf ft) (new)  by baubleheadz
A woman gets a new costume in the mail, which she can’t wait to try on.

This got right to it, and I honestly prefer that sometimes. I've certainly fallen prey to this -- it can be far too easy to throw too much exposition up at the start to get it over with! Anyway, I really liked how this was part of an ongoing thing, giving this a day-in-the-life feel, especially in how it was certainly a rather special day. It is not always easy to go through the details of a transformation without droning on, but this story just barely made it work. There was no way to know precisely all the details behind this doll TF, but in the realms of MC erotica, such things are probably inevitable.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #14 on: March 18, 2019, 04:44:30 pm »
Dolly Syrup

I never have and probably never get full-on lovedoll transformations, but I was very much digging this right up to the oven mitt hands.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #15 on: March 18, 2019, 05:13:37 pm »
A Mage Born

I very much enjoyed this for the compelling characters and some really quite wonderful prose! The plot is engrossing and moves at a near perfect pace. The only thing I would really criticize is that it felt a little bit jarring to be introduced to a completely new POV halfway through, even if I ended up liking that character very much. It's also a bit light on the MC for my liking, which is purely a matter of taste and in no way a detriment to the story's quality. Some of that magic backfiring or Stranix hiring his own Mages would have pushed my buttons more, but that wasn't the story you were telling, and that's cool!

So, despite some personal taste issues, I really liked this. Very well done!

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #16 on: March 18, 2019, 05:19:42 pm »
Dolly Syrup

I never have and probably never get full-on lovedoll transformations, but I was very much digging this right up to the oven mitt hands.

I'm with you there - it was very well written, leaves just enough out that your brain can fill in the details, but then once it went to hands/etc., I don't know... Is there such thing as "imagined uncanny valley?"  I saw the hands in my head and it just was too far for me.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #17 on: March 18, 2019, 05:34:58 pm »
Carrie's Descent

I also enjoyed this quite a lot. It's a great debut from this author and it's got a good mystery going for it. I might have a thing for
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and I'm eager to learn what the deal is with that mysterious building/complex. Who built it? Who is Eve, who put her there? And what will become of our protagonists? Or rather, what will they become? Descents are always something I like to read about and there are certainly worse things to do than "go down" :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #18 on: March 18, 2019, 06:42:20 pm »
Yes, I found "Carrie's Descent" interesting too...  I like the way that when it answers questions, it seems to pose at least two more!  I'm hoping that the author can keep up a consistant standard in subsequent episodes.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #19 on: March 18, 2019, 10:37:34 pm »
Dolly Syrup was a nice tf story, maybe a bit light on the mind control side of things.  I did enjoy the final transformation sequence personally.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #20 on: March 18, 2019, 10:49:14 pm »
The parts of "College Undercover" where Carol conditions Janice are always the sexiest parts and this was no exception.  This was a lot more evil than the others, but still sexy.

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #21 on: March 18, 2019, 11:44:36 pm »
Carrie's Descent

I also enjoyed this quite a lot. It's a great debut from this author and it's got a good mystery going for it. I might have a thing for
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and I'm eager to learn what the deal is with that mysterious building/complex. Who built it? Who is Eve, who put her there? And what will become of our protagonists? Or rather, what will they become? Descents are always something I like to read about and there are certainly worse things to do than "go down" :)

Looking forward to more!

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #22 on: March 19, 2019, 02:13:31 pm »
The parts of "College Undercover" where Carol conditions Janice are always the sexiest parts and this was no exception.  This was a lot more evil than the others, but still sexy.

This. Except Iíd say this time was a lot more evil than the others, which made it EVEN SEXIER.
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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #23 on: March 19, 2019, 03:13:31 pm »
The parts of "College Undercover" where Carol conditions Janice are always the sexiest parts and this was no exception.  This was a lot more evil than the others, but still sexy.

This. Except Iíd say this time was a lot more evil than the others, which made it EVEN SEXIER.

I'm kind of hoping that the story ends with Carol running a sort of specialized whorehouse where she MC's the girls to be more dedicated.  Take your part-time weekend hooker and lock her in a room for a while and give her the words.   :)

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Re: New Releases-March 16th 2019
« Reply #24 on: March 19, 2019, 03:15:05 pm »
I've never actually read the end of a Greyscribbler story (haven't yet checked out Fair Share, and Business & Pleasure is unfinished) so maybe this is overly optimistic, but I'm still hoping Carol breaks free and gets (at least some of) her old life back...
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