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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by EssentialDarkNote on March 22, 2026, 02:28:24 am »
I have Chapter 8 of the Purple pills on Patreon behind a paywall, but if you say nice things about me and send me a DM I can send you a PDF.

I also have the unpaywalled second chapter of my second story, the Ripple Effect. Assuming Simon's good graces, Chapter 5 of The purple pills and Chapter 2 of Ripple Effect should be on EMCSA next week.

https://www.patreon.com/cw/EssentialDarknote
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by EssentialDarkNote on March 19, 2026, 06:53:12 am »
I for one would love more early chapters! And can't wait to see your other story idea too. Do you plan on any chapters set in first-person perspective in the heads of the people being controlled by the pills? If you don't feel it would be too disruptive to change viewpoints, it could be hot to see a pill "conversion" take place from the first person perspective of the one whose mind is being altered.

I have the transformation from the transformed perspective slotted into chapter 18. I hope I can count on your patience to get that far into my story!


My other story (chapter 1) is already on Patreon. I plan to ask simon to upload to EMCSA this weekend (https://www.patreon.com/posts/chapter-1-ripple-153328777?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copyLink&utm_campaign=postshare_creator&utm_content=join_link)

Chapter 1-3 edited with the kind suggestions of this thread are also uploaded. All un-paywalled.
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by MCSkinner on March 19, 2026, 12:41:08 am »
I for one would love more early chapters! And can't wait to see your other story idea too. Do you plan on any chapters set in first-person perspective in the heads of the people being controlled by the pills? If you don't feel it would be too disruptive to change viewpoints, it could be hot to see a pill "conversion" take place from the first person perspective of the one whose mind is being altered.
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by EssentialDarkNote on March 18, 2026, 03:49:22 am »
Thanks. I did set up a Patreon (https://patreon.com/EssentialDarknote?utm_medium=unknown&utm_source=join_link&utm_campaign=creatorshare_creator&utm_content=copyLink).

I have about 25 chapters plotted at this point, and aim to complete 3 a week. I will publish all chapters eventually through EMCSA so if anyone doesn't want to give me money, no one should feel like I am bait and switching them.

And if anyone just says nice things about me in the comments I am happy to share chapters in Advance as well. I am also looking into adding AI gen images to PDF Chapters. I also published my second story idea on Patreon, and if Simon lets me I hope to publish the first chapter of that on EMCSA this weekend as well.
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by Elenchos on March 17, 2026, 08:48:23 pm »
Thanks! Enjoying the continuation. Looking forward to seeing more people encounter Chloe’s drinks...
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by EssentialDarkNote on March 17, 2026, 06:20:32 pm »
Chapter 7: Lace and Correction
At eight o’clock, the apartment buzzer sounded. Chen crossed to the intercom and pressed the button. “Come up, Chloe.”
Two minutes later, there was a knock. Chen opened the door to reveal Chloe still in her Brightside apron, her hair slightly disheveled, a canvas tote bag slung over one shoulder. The purple streak in her hair caught the hallway light. She stepped inside, her eyes moving quickly between him and Chen, clearly uncertain of the social dynamics there.
“Hi,” she said, and there was something tentative in her voice. “I came as fast as I could. Should I—do you want me to take off my shoes?”
Chen opened the door wider, stepping aside with that same calm efficiency she’d used all day. “Come in, Chloe. Shoes off please.”
Chloe crossed the threshold, pausing just inside the foyer to take in the apartment: the high ceilings, the river view through the wall of glass, the faint smell of Thai takeout lingering beneath the clean scent of whatever expensive candle Chen had lit earlier. Her Brightside apron was still tied around her waist, black work pants dusted with flour from the pastry case, and the canvas tote bag looked heavy stuffed with lingerie. She looked tired in the way baristas do at the end of a long day—eyes bright but shadowed—but the moment her gaze settled on James, that familiar eagerness flickered back into place.
She shifted the tote to her other shoulder, glancing between him and Chen again. “I… brought everything,” she said, voice soft but steady. “A black lace garter set, a red silk one with the low front, the white strappy thing that’s basically just ribbons, and a couple others I thought you might like. Emerald green, some sheer black panties with the little bows…” She trailed off, cheeks going faintly pink—not embarrassment exactly, more like she was suddenly aware she was standing in a stranger’s luxury apartment reciting underwear inventory to two people.
Chen closed the door behind her with a soft click and gestured toward the living room. “You can set the bag down there. We’ve got time. James and I were just going over some things for next week—meetings at the café, people coming in for coffee. You’ll be helping with the drinks.”
Chloe’s eyes widened a fraction, but she nodded immediately. “Okay. Yeah. I can do that.” She set the tote on the low glass coffee table, the zipper already half-open so a flash of red silk peeked out. Then she looked back at James, waiting, the same way she had that first afternoon in her tiny apartment: open, attentive, ready for whatever instruction came next.
Chen moved to the kitchen island, poured three glasses of water from a pitcher she’d set out earlier, and brought them over. “Sit if you want,” she said to Chloe, handing her one of the glasses. “We can go through what you brought in a minute. First, tell us how your shift went. Any unusual customers? Anything we should know about the rhythm tomorrow morning?”
Chloe took the glass, sipped once, then sat on the edge of the sectional like she wasn’t sure how much space she was allowed to take up. “It was normal. Busy around nine, then slowed down after lunch. Marcus was complaining about the grinder again, but I cleaned it twice so it’s fine. No one asked questions or anything.” She paused, looked at James directly. “I kept the cinnamon tin behind the bar like we talked about.”
For a moment James said nothing. He just watched them. Chloe perched on the edge of the sectional, Brightside apron still tied around her waist, canvas tote spilling lace and ribbon onto the glass table. Chen beside her, posture relaxed but precise, two completely different worlds sitting three feet apart.
The compound didn’t break people. It slotted them into place. Chloe’s instincts—the ones that made her good at reading customers and keeping a café running during the morning rush—hadn’t disappeared. They’d just been redirected. Chen’s mind still worked the same way it always had, mapping networks and anticipating outcomes. The drug hadn’t stripped those traits away. It had turned them toward James.
Chen gave a small, approving nod and sat beside her—not too close, but close enough to make the dynamic clear: colleague, not competitor. “Good. We’ve got three people lined up starting next week. Emails are out; Holder’s the first one likely to respond. Mid-forties, chemist, probably orders black coffee or an Americano. You’ll know him when you see him—he’ll look a little rumpled, like he slept in his car once or twice.”
Chloe listened intently, nodding every few seconds. “I can steer him toward hot if he tries iced. And the others?”
“Reeve—younger, dark hair, probably asks for oat milk latte. Kowalski—older, military posture, black coffee, no sugar. We’ll give you photos once they confirm. You just do what you’ve already done: one dash, right cup, no trace.”
Chloe exhaled, almost a sigh of relief. “Got it. I can handle that.” She glanced at the tote again, then back at James, a small hopeful lift at the corner of her mouth. “Do you… want to see what I got now? Or later? I can change in the bathroom if you want.”
The question hung there, simple and surreal in the same breath—lingerie parade in the middle of a briefing on dosing three new assets into permanent compliance. Chen looked to James, waiting for the call, her expression neutral but attentive.
Chloe looked up at him, and there it was—that small, almost imperceptible shift in her expression. The compound had wired her so perfectly that the anticipation looked real, felt real, even if the root of it wasn’t.
Chen shut her laptop with a quiet snap. She stood, smoothed the front of her blouse with one quick pass of her hand, and said in that calm, even tone she used for everything now, “I’ve got some calls to make. The bedroom’s yours. I’ll be out here if you need me.”
James held out his hand. Chloe slid hers into it without a second thought, her fingers warm and sure. He led her down the short hallway to Chen’s bedroom. The sheets were still messy from earlier, pillows dented, the faint smell of skin and sex hanging in the air. Chloe’s eyes flicked over the bed, then back to him, quiet and waiting.
He closed the door softly behind them.
“Come here,” he said, barely above a whisper.
She stepped right into him. Her fingers went to the buttons on her work shirt and started undoing them one by one, slow and deliberate. The black apron came off first, dropped over the back of a chair. Then the shirt opened and slid down her arms. Underneath was just plain white cotton—simple bra, nothing fancy, the kind of thing she had always worn on workdays without thinking twice. Afternoon light slanted through the half-closed blinds, turning her skin warm gold.
He walked her backward until her legs hit the mattress. She sat, then lay back, hands already undoing her jeans. That purple streak spilled across the pillow like a bright streak of paint. Outside the door, Chen’s voice drifted in low snippets—professional, detached, talking numbers and deadlines—while in here he tugged Chloe’s jeans down her thighs. She kicked them off, leaving just the plain white cotton panties and bra.
She looked up at him through her lashes, lips parted, waiting.
For a moment he simply looked at it—the plain white cotton, soft and practical—the kind of thing someone threw on before a long shift behind a coffee bar. It wasn’t wrong, exactly. But the sight of it created a small, quiet friction in his mind. He had given her cash with a specific purpose in mind. Not just to buy something pretty, but to mark the difference between the life she’d had before and the one she stepped into when she came to him. The cotton underwear belonged to the first version of Chloe—the one who worked long shifts, wiped down counters, and went home too tired to think about anything else.
A slow breath slipped out of him—half sigh, half something sharper. Chloe hadn’t resisted him; she’d simply tried to anticipate what he might want in the moment, the way she might rush a drink out during the morning rush. But that wasn’t quite the point. The lingerie wasn’t about convenience. It was about presentation, about the quiet reinforcement of what she had become inside this new structure forming around him.
“Chloe,” he said quietly, “I gave you cash this morning. Specifically, for something nicer. Something that would make you feel the way you’re supposed to feel when you come to me like this.”
Her eyes flickered—just a tiny flash—then steadied. She bit her lip, small and quick.
“I have them,” she said softly. “They’re in my bag. I just… I came straight from the boutique. I thought maybe you’d want me like this first. Quick. Ready.”
He kept his fingers where they were, feeling the soft cotton under his thumb.
“Chloe,” he said, low and even, “stand up.”
She rose immediately, smooth and obedient, eyes locked on his.
He glanced toward the canvas tote she’d dropped just inside the door. “Go get them. Bring them here.”
She nodded, quick and eager, and crossed the room. The bag rustled as she bent to pick it up—paper tags crinkling, fabric shifting. She came back and held it open for him.
He reached in without breaking eye contact. First came the blue corset set: midnight lace, structured boning, dramatic cups, high-waisted panties with sheer sides. Then the red babydoll: sheer scarlet chiffon, short hem, lace trim that barely covered anything.
He held them up, letting the light catch the colors and textures.
“Everything off,” he said quietly. “Then you model them for me. Slowly. One at a time. I want to see exactly what I paid for.”
Chloe’s breath hitched—just enough to sound excited—and she set the bag aside. She reached behind, unhooked the plain bra, let it fall. Then the panties slid down and off. She stood naked in the soft light, completely at ease under his gaze.
She started with the blue set. The bra hooked in the back with quick, sure movements. She adjusted the straps, smoothed her hands over the lace, turned slowly so he could see how it cinched her waist and lifted everything just right. The panties came next—she stepped into them carefully, drew them up her thighs, the sheer panels flashing skin.
She turned again, arms raised slightly, showing it off.
She removed it just as carefully and folded it on the bed and reached for the red babydoll. The chiffon slipped over her head and floated down her body like liquid. She adjusted the straps, ran her fingers along the lace edges, then looked up at him.
“Which one do you like more?” she asked, voice soft and a little husky. “Or should I keep switching until you decide?”
He stepped closer, close enough to feel her warmth.
“Both are perfect,” he said, running one finger along the folded blue corset, then across the red chiffon brushing her thigh. His hand settled on her waist, thumb tracing the lace edge.
“And from now on, when I give you money for lingerie, you don’t show up in plain cotton. You show up like this—wearing something beautiful, something that reminds both of us you’re mine before I even touch you.”
“Yes,” she whispered, leaning into his hand, eyes half-closed. “I understand.”
Only then did he pull her all the way against him, mouth finding hers as the red fabric whispered between them.
He drew her closer, the sheer chiffon sliding against his shirt, thin enough to show every curve underneath. His fingers followed the lace trim down the plunging front, then slipped one strap off her shoulder. The babydoll shifted, baring more skin to the light.
Chloe sighed softly, tilting her head to give him her neck. He kissed the pulse there, then lower, tasting her skin as he traced the fallen strap’s path.
His hands gathered the hem of the babydoll, sliding it up slowly. He pulled it off over her head; it drifted to the floor like silk. She stood bare, skin flushed, nipples tight in the cool air, purple hair bright against the pillow when he guided her back onto the bed.
She lay back, legs parting just enough. He settled between them, knee braced, weight hovering above her.
He kissed her slow and deep, tongues lazy, her quiet sounds humming against his mouth. His hand drifted down her stomach, lower, finding her already wet. She arched at the first touch, hips chasing his fingers, a soft moan slipping out.
“Tell me what you need,” he murmured against her ear.
“You,” she breathed. “Inside me. Now. Please.”
He pulled back just long enough to strip off his clothes—shirt, belt, pants gone in quick movements. Then he was back, settling between her thighs, pressing against her.
She lifted her hips, legs wrapping around him. He slid in slow, feeling every inch of her open around him—warm, tight, perfect. She gasped, nails grazing his shoulders, urging him deeper.
He set a steady rhythm, deep and deliberate, each thrust hitting just right. Her hands roamed his back, tracing muscle. She moaned his name—soft, broken—face flushed, lashes fluttering.
He shifted angle, drove deeper; she tightened around him with a shudder. His hand found her breast, thumb circling until she arched hard, back bowing off the bed.
“Beautiful,” he rasped. “Just like this—open for me.”
She came quietly but intensely—body clenching, thighs shaking, a long sigh escaping. He followed right after, burying himself deep, hips grinding through the last pulses.
When it was over he stayed inside her, braced on his forearms, breathing against her neck. Chloe’s fingers traced lazy circles on his shoulders, her face soft and content—everything about it so seamless it almost felt real.
Through the door, Chen’s voice kept its steady, professional rhythm—numbers, dates, arrangements—while right here, warm and still joined, Chloe lay beneath him, exactly as he’d shaped her to be, the red babydoll crumpled on the floor like proof of the promise.
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by EssentialDarkNote on March 14, 2026, 04:35:17 am »
Chapter 6: Surrender in Silk
By the time Chloe finished wiping down the espresso counter, the late-afternoon crowd had dwindled to a couple of students hunched over laptops and an older man nursing his drip coffee by the window, lost in his own world.
Marcus slid behind the bar just as she stacked the last clean cup.
“Clocking out already?” he asked, knotting his apron strings with a quick tug.
“Yeah.” Chloe tapped the order screen closed, her fingers lingering a second too long on the cool glass. “My shift is done.”
Chloe untied her apron, the strings whispering against her hips as she folded it neatly on the hook. The motion was automatic—end of shift, same as always.
Except tonight her pulse thrummed low and steady, a quiet drumbeat that had nothing to do with caffeine.
She slipped her hand into her tote and felt the envelope again. The crisp edges of the bills inside pressed against her fingertips. More cash than she usually let herself spend in a month. And James had made clear what it was meant to buy.
A slow, liquid warmth curled through her belly at the thought.
Chloe stepped out the back door of Brightside into the cooling air. The street had settled into that golden end-of-day hush—office workers gone, sidewalks breathing easier. She slung the tote over her shoulder and started toward the bus stop, already certain of her destination.
Ten minutes later the bus carried her across the river into Georgetown. The streets narrowed, grew busier, brick storefronts glowing under early-evening lights. She stepped off on M Street as the sky softened to molten gold. Couples lingered at outdoor tables; boutique windows spilled warm amber across the sidewalk.
Tonight she let herself look.
One window stopped her: lace-draped mannequins under soft spotlights, silk cascading over chrome, delicate straps and sheer panels that promised skin beneath. She pushed the door open, and a small bell chimed as she entered.
The woman behind the counter looked up and smiled—tall, dark hair in a loose knot, makeup so flawless it made Chloe jealous. She was beautiful, objectively, undeniably so. But the feeling stopped there—cool, distant, almost clinical. No spark. No pull. No flicker of want. Chloe’s body didn’t tighten or warm the way it did the second she pictured James watching her.
“Hi there,” she said, voice low and welcoming. “Let me know if you need anything.”
Chloe drifted toward the racks, pulse quickening. The saleswoman stepped closer, plucked a deep-red babydoll from the hangers, and held it up. The chiffon shimmered like spilled wine.
“This one’s a favorite,” she murmured. “And if you’re feeling something more… structured, the corset sets are exquisite.”
Chloe followed her to the fitting rooms, arms already laden with lace. The curtain closed again, sealing her in soft privacy.
She hung the pieces on the brass hook and faced the mirror. Work shirt still clinging faintly to her skin, black pants, hair mussed from the shift, a trace of flour dusting one sleeve.
She peeled off the shirt, then the bra, nipples tightening instantly in the cool air. The red babydoll slipped over her head like cool water. Chiffon whispered down her body, brushing her breasts, skimming her ribs, fluttering against the sensitive skin of her hips.
She looked up.
The woman in the mirror was still her—yet unmistakably different. The lace framed her breasts in delicate scallops, the sheer fabric clinging where her skin was already warming. Her nipples pressed against the thin fabric, clearly visible through it.
Chloe exhaled shakily. Her thighs shifted together, a subtle press that sent a faint, aching pulse straight to her core.
James will see me like this.
The thought landed hot and certain. She imagined his gaze darkening, the way his hands might follow the edge of the lace before pulling her closer. A shiver ran down her spine and settled low in her body.
She turned slowly, watching the fabric float and cling. The hem teased the tops of her thighs; one small shift and it would ride higher, exposing the damp heat gathering there.
This wasn’t about looking good for anyone who might glance her way.
This was for him. For the way his eyes would devour her. For the way he’d claim every inch she offered.
She reached for the midnight-blue set next.
The bra was heavier, the lace more intricate. She fastened it, the underwire lifting her breasts higher, the cups cradling them with firm, possessive pressure. Then the corset. She stepped into it, drew the laces tight—slowly, deliberately—each pull cinching her waist, forcing her spine straighter, her breasts higher, her breathing shallower and quicker.
When she looked again, her breath snagged.
The corset sculpted her: waist dramatically narrowed, hips flared, cleavage rising with every inhale. The deep blue lace bit gently into her skin, leaving faint pink impressions she already knew she’d trace later with her fingertips—and hope he would too.
She smoothed her palms down her sides, feeling the rigid boning, the way it held her exactly where he might want her: presented, shaped, ready.
A stray thought flickered: Is this what it’s supposed to feel like?
Not force, but guidance—pressure gently steering her body into the right lines.
James is going to lose his mind when he sees this.
She pictured him stepping behind her, hands sliding over the corset laces as his mouth found the curve of her neck, fingers slipping lower until she whimpered his name. The fantasy sent fresh heat flooding her core.
Chloe tilted her head, studying the reflection—flushed cheeks, parted lips, eyes fiery with want.
She smiled, slow and secret.
Chloe studied her reflection for another moment, fingers resting lightly against the lace at her waist. The feeling that had been moving through her since last night was unfamiliar—stronger and steadier than the fluttery crushes she’d had in the past, the kind that faded after a few weeks or dissolved under the awkward weight of real conversation. This was different. Deeper. It sat somewhere warm in her chest, pulling her thoughts back toward him again and again. A small part of her, quiet but persistent, knew it was strange to feel this intensely about someone she’d only just met. She should probably question it, turn the thought over the way she might with anything that felt too sudden. But every time the doubt surfaced, it dissolved almost as quickly as it appeared. Because whatever the reason, the truth underneath it felt impossible to deny: she was wildly, almost irrationally drawn to James, and the thought of seeing the look on his face when he saw her like this made her pulse quicken with a kind of anticipation she’d never experienced before.
Chloe slipped out of the midnight blue set and hung it carefully back on the hook, taking a moment to smooth the lace where it had folded. For a second she simply stood there in the quiet of the fitting room, the warm light soft against the walls, her mind drifting back to the thought that kept returning—James seeing her like this. The idea sent another small rush of anticipation through her chest.
She reached for the next piece on the hanger.
This one was black lace, more delicate than the corset set but still bold in its own way. The garter belt fastened snugly around her waist, thin straps hanging down toward her thighs. She clipped them slowly, one at a time, concentrating on the small metal clasps. When she straightened and looked at herself again, the effect surprised her. The lace framed her hips and waist in a way that felt almost dramatic, like the version of herself in the mirror had stepped slightly outside the person she usually saw.
Chloe turned once, then again, watching how the lace shifted with her movement. James would definitely notice this one. The thought made her smile.
She tried another set after that—emerald lace that caught the light softly—and then a lighter white piece made of thin ribbons and barely-there straps. Each one made her pause in front of the mirror a little longer, imagining the moment she walked into the apartment and his expression changed.
By the time she slipped back into her jeans and work shirt, her pulse had picked up slightly, the excitement sitting warm and steady in her chest.
She folded the sets over her arm and stepped out of the fitting room.
The clerk glanced up from the counter with the same calm smile.
“Find some things you liked?”
Chloe nodded, suddenly eager. “Yeah,” she said, setting the small stack on the counter. “I’ll take all of them.”
The total flashed on the screen, but she barely looked at it. She pulled the envelope from her bag, sliding the bills across the counter with a quick, decisive motion.
She couldn’t wait to see him.
The clerk folded the lace into crisp sheets of tissue paper and slid everything into a smooth black shopping bag. Chloe thanked her, tucked the bag carefully into her tote, and stepped back out onto M Street. The evening air had cooled, the sidewalks busier now with people drifting between restaurants and glowing storefronts. For a moment she just stood there, then pulled out her phone and opened the message thread. The address James had sent earlier was still there near the top of the screen. She tapped it, letting the map load, her eyes flicking quickly over the route. Bus first, then a short walk. Easy. Chloe slipped the phone back into her pocket, adjusted the tote on her shoulder, and started down the block toward the bus stop with quick, purposeful steps. The anticipation in her chest had sharpened into something brighter now—an impatient energy that made it hard to move fast enough.
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by EssentialDarkNote on March 13, 2026, 04:00:45 am »
Mad (or at least ethically questionable) scientists call at all hours of the night! :) 

In chapter 5, James is tempted by a location or entity referred to as “Hartwell”, but that name isn’t mentioned elsewhere that I can see.
That and a few other things made me think it could use another editing pass.

Hartwell was supposed to be the name of the veterinary research  facility I must have edited it out.
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by Elenchos on March 12, 2026, 08:22:50 pm »
Mad (or at least ethically questionable) scientists call at all hours of the night! :) 

In chapter 5, James is tempted by a location or entity referred to as “Hartwell”, but that name isn’t mentioned elsewhere that I can see.
That and a few other things made me think it could use another editing pass.
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Writing Workshop / Re: Story: The Purple Pills
« Last post by EssentialDarkNote on March 12, 2026, 03:10:51 am »
Great chapter! Really loving this.

Couple of things I noticed:

The pills seem to do more than just make the recipient compliant and helpful; they’re compliant and helpful to James specifically. That made perfect sense with Chloe. She knew who gave her the pill and they were together when she took it. Dr. Chen was talking with James as the pill took effect, but is that it? The targets imprint on whomever they’re with when the pill effects hit? If that’s what’s intended, no notes. If not, you might consider making things a bit clearer (or not, if it’s intentional).

If they’re in the Washington, DC area in the evening, before 8 p.m., it’s pretty early in the morning for Rashid to be calling. Dubai’s either 8 hours or 9 hours ahead, depending on Daylight Saving Time. Minor, but I notice little things like that.

Please continue. It’s a great story, especially the MC element. Hot.

Thanks for your notes. After writing chapter 5 I went ahead and did some clean up. I make clear in chapter 2 that the pill works like a duck imprinting on its mother. The first person to give them commands after it takes effect becomes their reason for existence.

As for the time in Dubai, Chapter 4 should take place in the early early to mid afternoon, making it late in Dubai (something I hadn’t really considered, so thanks for pointing it out), but I don’t necessary think it’s unreasonable for Khalil to be awake around midnight. Or maybe he is in Europe on a business trip. If it becomes important I could clarify but I don’t anticipate Khalil coming back into the story .
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