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Title: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: 321 on December 28, 2019, 10:38:49 am
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Absence of All Morality (https://mcstories.com/AbsenseOfAllMorality/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by browndj98
A man without morals mentally enslaves and fucks an unwilling hair salon owner.

Advent Calendar (https://mcstories.com/AdventCalendar/index.html) (mc mf md ma) (new)  by scifiscribbler
Evelyn’s boyfriend brought a calendar home to get her in the festive spirit. It doesn’t seem to be working.

The Armageddon Archives (https://mcstories.com/ArmageddonArchives/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by mr. potestas
Life in California is now different after the apocalypse, as that part of the world is now ruled by Demon King Asmodeus.

Binding Rings (https://mcstories.com/BindingRings/index.html) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (https://mcstories.com/CapeCityChronicles/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Christmas Eve (https://mcstories.com/ChristmasEve/index.html) (mc mf md fd) (new)  by 321
The tree is up and the presents are wrapped, and Kate is looking forward to spending a relaxing evening with her husband. A very, very relaxing evening...

Daughter (https://mcstories.com/Daughter/index.html) (mc mf ff fd in) (new)  by Pan
Jim and Lauren return home to find someone waiting for them: the daughter they never had.

Drone Metastasis (https://mcstories.com/DroneMetastasis/index.html) (mc mf ff fd bd ft) (1 new chapter)  by Half Shim
A nuclear family experiences the Hive invasion as it insidiously takes over their city.

Every Woman Has a Price (https://mcstories.com/EveryWomanHasAPrice/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Owen inherits a set of silver coins from his grandfather that lets him buy anyone.

Free Will Debate (https://mcstories.com/FreeWillDebate/index.html) (mc md) (new)  by Sen Oluguat
Tom and Rachel have a friendly debate about free will.

How To Pay Your College Loans (https://mcstories.com/HowToPayYourCollegeLoans/index.html) (mc ff ds bd) (1 new chapter)  by Skaetlett
Clara can’t pay her college loans, or rent, or anything. She’s stuck at a job she hates with no one around her. Her life turns around when she sees an ad on the dark web recruiting “servants”, and takes drastic measures to turn her life around.

Incubus (https://mcstories.com/IncubusJenniferKohl/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Christina summons a demon, who has the ability to grant her greatest desire.

The Internship (https://mcstories.com/Internship/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Nichole is looking forward to learning a lot from her internship. She will.

Invisible (SleepyTimeSlut) (https://mcstories.com/InvisibleSleepyTimeSlut/index.html) (mc ff mf fd ma) (new)  by SleepyTimeSlut
When Kara discovers that she can become invisible at a party, the formerly shy little mouse finds it quite ... freeing ...

Out of Mind-Control 2 — Still A Mystery (https://mcstories.com/OutOfMindControlTwo/index.html) (mc ff mf ft rb) (1 new chapter)  by Catsuit78
Even five months after their investigations the Inspector and Trish can’t grab a breather as spandex-clad men and women disappear and Trish finds herself in the crosshairs. Is the Syndicate behind this? And what are they up to?

Pact (https://mcstories.com/Pact/index.html) (mc ff mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva
Truth has tried for twenty years to live quietly, to tend her farm, to forget all about the Pact that she was born to obey and bound to enforce. But an urgent need will pull her back to the magic that she’s spent so long seeking to abandon.

The Picture of Doreen Gray (https://mcstories.com/PictureOfDoreenGray/index.html) (mc mf md) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Some cultures used to believe that a photo would take their soul away.

Pink Cloud (https://mcstories.com/PinkCloud/index.html) (mc mf md) (new)  by Jukebox
On the last night of a hypnokink convention, Carmella has a fantasy on the wish board. And with the help of a friendly and respectful hypnotist, her wish is about to come true.

A Price Paid (https://mcstories.com/PricePaid/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by Saddle Rider
Losing a prized possession to mages, a powerful man seeks revenge.

Resolutions (Trixie Adara) (https://mcstories.com/ResolutionsTrixieAdara/index.html) (mc ff ex hm) (new)  by Trixie Adara
Four friends drunkenly make New Year’s Resolutions which will turn out to drastically control their lives in the coming weeks and months.

The Role of a Lifetime (https://mcstories.com/RoleOfALifetime/index.html) (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Denise has been a struggling actress in Hollywood for years, only getting bit parts, but a new opportunity has come along, will it be the role of a lifetime for her?

Savannah’s Hypnotic Socks (https://mcstories.com/SavannahsHypnoticSocks/index.html) (mc ff ft) (1 new chapter)  by Fibaro
A co-ed gets a pair of hypnotic socks that she uses on her roommate.

The Secret of Brookrose College (https://mcstories.com/SecretOfBrookroseCollege/index.html) (mc ff mf in sf la) (1 new chapter)  by Templeton Rose
Who or what is enslaving this all-female college’s faculty and students, and using them to breed futa clones?

Senioritis (https://mcstories.com/Senioritis/index.html) (mc mf ff fd md ds bd ft hm) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Marc explores sexuality with a 19-year-old dominant woman.

Snippets from a Multiverse (https://mcstories.com/SnippetsFromAMultiverse/index.html) (mc ff) (new)  by sunt
In a vast multiverse, many stories are taking place at all times. Sometimes, the actors of those stories may bear great resemblance to each other across parallel worlds...

The Society (Chrysostomon) (https://mcstories.com/SocietyChrysostomon/index.html) (mc ff mf fd la) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Girls are joining a new group that has sinister plans.

Space Nut (https://mcstories.com/SpaceNut/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Adam discovers a crash landed alien who shares a taste for women with him, and together they will have them all, no matter the price.

Too Many Questions — Third Wheel (https://mcstories.com/TooManyQuestionsThird/index.html) (mc mf fd) (new)  by S. B.
Josh, Monica (and Steve) talk about hypnosis, trust and chastity.

A Villainous Deal (https://mcstories.com/VillanousDeal/index.html) (mc mf md gr cb) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
SuperbGal has been captured, yet again, but this time seems different.  Can she overcome the villain and escape one more time?

Waif (https://mcstories.com/Waif/index.html) (mc mf md bd ds) (new)  by Crayz Maddy
A young woman finds herself lost in a whole new life after being kidnapped and brainwashed using a new experimental drug.

Wine Mom (https://mcstories.com/WineMom/index.html) (mc ff gr) (new)  by Kallie
Katherine, an overworked businesswoman, experiences a sudden change of pace when her intern gives her some enchanted wine.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Pan on December 28, 2019, 10:49:22 am
The ultimate troll would have been "There will not be an update next week. The next update will be the weekend of January 11th"...
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: scifiscribbler on December 28, 2019, 11:09:41 am
Wow. I didn't check, but I did just assume that 'Advent Calendar' would be a title that already existed, and I'd get 'Advent Calendar (scifiscribbler).
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: 321 on December 28, 2019, 11:25:12 am
Wow. I didn't check, but I did just assume that 'Advent Calendar' would be a title that already existed, and I'd get 'Advent Calendar (scifiscribbler).

There was no "Christmas Eve," either. It's always nice when you don't have to think of a backup title for a story.

Advent Calendar is fantastic. I think I was as eager to see those windows opened as Evelyn!


Cape City Chronicles delivers another solid chapter. Did I mention how much I love the comic book chapter titles? Because I love them. I also loved this line:
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Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: scifiscribbler on December 28, 2019, 11:26:05 am
Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (https://mcstories.com/CapeCityChronicles/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

This is just getting better.

I'm reminded of that old-school approach to superhero comics where there are always some short-term, mid-term and long-term plots popping up in a given series, with plenty of continuity-heavy crossing over.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Midori Konton on December 28, 2019, 12:21:19 pm
Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (https://mcstories.com/CapeCityChronicles/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

This is just getting better.

I'm reminded of that old-school approach to superhero comics where there are always some short-term, mid-term and long-term plots popping up in a given series, with plenty of continuity-heavy crossing over.

Thank you!

And yeah, I'm doing that deliberately. My view has always been that a superhero comic is basically just a soap opera with fighting instead of fucking. But it's got that same structure--a melodrama where at any given time you've got at least three plots, one of which is just starting, one of which is hitting its climax, and one of which is somewhere in the middle.

I'm just adding the fucking back in. ;)
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Midori Konton on December 28, 2019, 12:24:26 pm
Cape City Chronicles delivers another solid chapter. Did I mention how much I love the comic book chapter titles? Because I love them. I also loved this line:
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Thank you! I'm enjoying them too. Gotta have those exclamation points!

Hee, I'm glad you liked that line! I like to stick a little humor in here and there, especially when my other ongoing project is something darker like Incubus.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: scifiscribbler on December 28, 2019, 12:32:22 pm

There was no "Christmas Eve," either. It's always nice when you don't have to think of a backup title for a story.

Advent Calendar is fantastic. I think I was as eager to see those windows opened as Evelyn!


Thank you - I wrote most of this story in late October, and it was a really nice way to prepare for the holiday season.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: fascinated on December 28, 2019, 02:21:14 pm
Christmas Eve was just terrific. Really cute, really hot, every thing you want a short story to be.

Although Kate's trancey alter-ego should have been named Eve. The joke's right there! :)
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Pan on December 28, 2019, 04:55:31 pm
I submitted the first two chapters of The Twisted Love Potion, but accidentally included the wrong files, so they didn't get included in this week's update. I hope this doesn't cause a time paradox. :(
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: CerebusOne on December 28, 2019, 04:57:05 pm
Because of circumstances lately that is taking pretty much all my time I was not able to comment on last weeks offerings. Things are not much better for me this week but I will give a few short comments on some stories I was able to read.

Cape City Chronicles continues with a great plot and hot as hell MC. I really love the time and effort Jennifer Kohl has put into all facets of this story. You can sense it when you read it. Great plot, interesting characters, twists and turns, it has it all going on. I really his a terrific piece of exciting literature an MC.

321's Christmas Eveis a return to our old heroes from Amnesic. Who says heroes can't have their kinky games? James and Kate sure do. Still can't get over their kid being named Alice, Lol. Nice to revisit them in kinder circumstances. A very nice, warmhearted follow up to their original story.

Drone Mestasis continues its multi-thread dark plot and I love it as the the family is assaulted on all fronts by the hive. The MC in this story is top notch. So is the plot. Great stuff and fun as hell.

The Intership is just a classic MC story. I love how Scribbler also has brought in Nichole's family into the insidious plans of the controllers. It really opened the story up past the lone girl at work gets controlled trope. But then Scribbler is such a great story teller it does not surprise me. I love this wicked story.

Last but certainly not least is The Hands That Lead's Role of a lifetime. As I have said before, always been a sucker for the young girl goes to college, work, whatever and...well...you know what happens. If the story is done right.

Hands does it right as poor Rebecca goes to Hollywood to become a star. Well....you know..lol. The story is very well conceived and the MC hot. What else can one ask for? Very good.

That's all I have time for. I apologize to the other writers who put in their hard time and effort, I wish I could read and comment but I currently just have almost no time at all to do this.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: walter_kovacs on December 28, 2019, 05:01:43 pm
The ultimate troll would have been "There will not be an update next week. The next update will be the weekend of January 11th"...

I scanned the update for that first thing  :grin:

Next week will be a big one I feel...
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Midori Konton on December 28, 2019, 06:52:03 pm
Cape City Chronicles continues with a great plot and hot as hell MC. I really love the time and effort Jennifer Kohl has put into all facets of this story. You can sense it when you read it. Great plot, interesting characters, twists and turns, it has it all going on. I really his a terrific piece of exciting literature an MC.

Wow! High praise, thank you!
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: 321 on December 28, 2019, 09:38:21 pm

321's Christmas Eveis a return to our old heroes from Amnesic. Who says heroes can't have their kinky games? James and Kate sure do. Still can't get over their kid being named Alice, Lol. Nice to revisit them in kinder circumstances. A very nice, warmhearted follow up to their original story.

I guess Kate won that bet. Maybe their next kid will be a James? I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story!

Christmas Eve was just terrific. Really cute, really hot, every thing you want a short story to be.

Although Kate's trancey alter-ego should have been named Eve. The joke's right there! :)

Edit! Edit! Edit! :-) This idea is definitely going on the back of one of those business cards. Thank you so much for the kind words!
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Fortunato on December 28, 2019, 11:45:59 pm
I've read a little of this week's update, starting with the amazing Wine Mom. Looking forward to more as time allows, but next week's update could just break the whole internet.

-Fortunato
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: TheHandsThatLead on December 28, 2019, 11:48:42 pm
Last but certainly not least is The Hands That Lead's Role of a lifetime. As I have said before, always been a sucker for the young girl goes to college, work, whatever and...well...you know what happens. If the story is done right.

Hands does it right as poor Rebecca goes to Hollywood to become a star. Well....you know..lol. The story is very well conceived and the MC hot. What else can one ask for? Very good.

Thanks CerebusOne, glad you enjoyed it :)
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: StoryFan on December 29, 2019, 10:28:11 am
Any more BMBZ radio? it was really good.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: TheHandsThatLead on December 29, 2019, 11:47:07 am
Any more BMBZ radio? it was really good.

Thanks, no plans at the moment for a sequel, but I never say never ;)
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: ironflower on December 29, 2019, 12:48:29 pm
Just dropping in to say 'A Villainous Deal' is excellent. I'm a sucker for superheroines getting taken down.  >:D
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: greyscribbler on December 29, 2019, 03:21:40 pm
The Intership is just a classic MC story. I love how Scribbler also has brought in Nichole's family into the insidious plans of the controllers. It really opened the story up past the lone girl at work gets controlled trope. But then Scribbler is such a great story teller it does not surprise me. I love this wicked story.

Thanks CerebusOne.  I like thinking about how what happens fits into the rest of the victim's life.  We'll see more of Nichole's family in the last few chapters.

Greyscribbler
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Dede on December 29, 2019, 10:04:47 pm

The Role of a Lifetime (https://mcstories.com/RoleOfALifetime/index.html) (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Denise has been a struggling actress in Hollywood for years, only getting bit parts, but a new opportunity has come along, will it be the role of a lifetime for her?

Have you ever read a story and felt like the author was writing it just for you?
From the main character having the same name as me, to having an almost exactly same high school experience, and same fantasies... it is just uncanny! And so I was hanging on every single word...!!!
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: TheHandsThatLead on December 30, 2019, 08:51:32 am
Just dropping in to say 'A Villainous Deal' is excellent. I'm a sucker for superheroines getting taken down.  >:D

Thanks ironflower.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: TheHandsThatLead on December 30, 2019, 08:53:31 am

The Role of a Lifetime (https://mcstories.com/RoleOfALifetime/index.html) (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Denise has been a struggling actress in Hollywood for years, only getting bit parts, but a new opportunity has come along, will it be the role of a lifetime for her?

Have you ever read a story and felt like the author was writing it just for you?
From the main character having the same name as me, to having an almost exactly same high school experience, and same fantasies... it is just uncanny! And so I was hanging on every single word...!!!

Thanks Dede, I promise I didn't read your mind from afar while writing it... or did I? ;)
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: Fortunato on December 30, 2019, 11:43:52 am
Another thumbs up for The Role of a Lifetime.

-Fortunato
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: TheHandsThatLead on December 30, 2019, 04:13:51 pm
Another thumbs up for The Role of a Lifetime.

-Fortunato

Thanks Fortunato.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: BigJohn on December 31, 2019, 01:35:34 am
Loved Pink Cloud by Jukebox. I tend to always enjoy their work but the characters in this story were incredibly sweet and endearing. Couldn't help but smile at how cute and respectful they were.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: mr potestas on January 01, 2020, 07:36:33 pm
Resolutions (Trixie Adara) (https://mcstories.com/ResolutionsTrixieAdara/index.html) (mc ff ex hm) (new)  by Trixie Adara
Four friends drunkenly make New Year’s Resolutions which will turn out to drastically control their lives in the coming weeks and months.

This probably was the intent of the author to portray as such, but I always found New Year's Resolutions to be a joke. People will put all this thought into doing something positive, only to just not do it. I personally made a Resolution years ago to not do Resolutions! So, having women actually follow erotically charged Resolutions can only be a farce. Even the first part, which largely introduced this whole thing, delivered, in albeit more intriguing than hot ways. The Resolutions themselves were not erotically charged, but it seems instead that the interpretation of them became erotic. I'll look forward to more.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: MCaesar on January 08, 2020, 04:27:41 pm
Some weird Day-Old Thoughts on Week-Old Stories about Snippets from a Multiverse.

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The characters of Geraldine Linventeur and Daphne Miller may be familiar to some of you from my Mind Control University story, though no prior knowledge is required here.

Eeeeeehhh... I suppose. I guess I can't really say for sure, since I've probably read at least a hundred thousand words of MCU (or however many it was up to Truce Week, when I burned out on the genre altogether), but there's a lot of context to this one that, if you don't have it, will probably make this story sound like nonsense. Who is Geraldine? Who's Daphne? What's their relationship, that one would perform cartoon villainy just to give the other a nice gift? I know, but how could someone who isn't into MCU expected to know (or care) about any of that?

That said, it was nice to get a taste of the old MCU again. Fantastic folks in that community, back in the day. Memers and shitposters nonpareil. I think this board could learn a thing or two from them.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: MCaesar on January 08, 2020, 11:35:27 pm
Oh, also read Daughter, so I have a Thought about that.

Short and exceedingly concise. Tells you what it's all about pretty much right away, but still has a small surprise or two along the way. Squicky for some, I'm sure, but lively and fun to me.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: MCaesar on January 09, 2020, 04:27:25 pm
Re: Thoughts on Invisible.

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Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: MCaesar on January 11, 2020, 04:37:45 pm
Last for this batch, my Thoughts on Advent Calendar:

The main highlight of this one, for me, was how deliberately and methodically it progressed. Every day, every picture, we are presented with a little piece of programming. Sometimes it's subtle, and sometimes it's so obvious, even the protagonist figures it out. But each day is a discrete step on the inevitable road to the end. It was a pretty neat structure, and turned into a nice, enjoyable story.
Title: Re: New Releases - December 28th, 2019
Post by: scifiscribbler on January 12, 2020, 05:25:45 am
Last for this batch, my Thoughts on Advent Calendar:

The main highlight of this one, for me, was how deliberately and methodically it progressed. Every day, every picture, we are presented with a little piece of programming. Sometimes it's subtle, and sometimes it's so obvious, even the protagonist figures it out. But each day is a discrete step on the inevitable road to the end. It was a pretty neat structure, and turned into a nice, enjoyable story.

Thanks! Had a lot of positive feedback on this one, but honestly I'm mostly glad that I seem to have got to this idea before much had been done with it.