eeeek am i a published writer now? :D
eeeek am i a published writer now? :D
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Daisy, I agree with Mordred. I thought “Tales of Hypnotopia” was wickedly terrific story. Very well done!! Loved it.Yay! Thank you! :D Also congrats on your 200th forum post! :D
Well, you can write an AU version of my fic. :3 Just let me read it when you're done~eeeek am i a published writer now? :D ♥♥♥Weird, right?
It's a good story. Still super tempted to write a rebuttal piece of my own that imposes a happy ending on it though. Which is a sign of quality, badly written downer stories don't effect me.
Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!
eeeek am i a published writer now? :D
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Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!
Agreed! A hot merry-go-round of controlling and being controlled, of trigger phrases and trances and rapidly-shifting power dynamics... is Part 9 here yet? :grin:
The Succubus’ Game
And quite a game it was too. As to what really happened there, who knows? Certainly makes a nice teaser for the main story, when released.
Definitely enjoyed
Completely forgot to mention Paperback previously, so let's go ahead and rectify that. What a wonderful conclusion to a great story. That twist, or really all the twists, were just so expertly delivered, and hot to boot. Really glad I gave this series a chance all those weeks ago, wouldn't change a thing about the story. Well... except maybe a request for more?
I read so very little while I was working on my own story. This unfortunately meant that I haven't kept up with any story by Mr. Scade. Reading An Episode of Lingerie Enslavement really has me regretting this. Reminds me of the wonderful stories from him that I used to read so many years ago. I'll have to find the time to go through anything I may have missed for sure. As for this story? Absolutely loved it, of course. When the main character investigates a bit too far into what her sister is up to, that scene and the resulting ones were just so delicious. Certainly a story I'll be reading each and every week is updated.
With so many great stories coming out, though, it seems my Saturdays are going to be almost entirely booked!
Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!
Agreed! A hot merry-go-round of controlling and being controlled, of trigger phrases and trances and rapidly-shifting power dynamics... is Part 9 here yet? :grin:
I'll add another round of agreement to that.
At this point, it looks like all three of them have at least one other who has a trance trigger. Tiffany got out of the direct control, but seems to have forgotten that Lucy left a trigger command in her mind. Lucy now has two triggers in her, and Tiffany has a trigger for each of the others, but in theory whoever gets a chance to use their triggers privately first has the best chance to come on top (though while they're together, it's more of a Mexican standoff).
Plus whatever the note said.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm also into a chapter of Ashes by Blackie. I know The Book is a classic of our genre and a favorite for good reason, but Blackie's 2019 output has hit me harder than The Book for reasons I can't quite explain. I'm digging what I've read of Ashes so far. Again, if you like slow builds, this may be a story for you. I'm willing to wait however many chapters it takes to get to the sexy bits (likely Chapter 3, given Simon's submission guidelines) because Blackie's nailing the characters and the narrative.
Officer Friendly was freaking awesome, perfectly paced and plotted.
I really wished that there had been some physical description of the ladies in the harem to the point of differentiating them, but given the PoV was another female I admit that my (personal) complaint is groundless... it wasn't that kind of story and I doubt I am the intended demo audience anyway. In fact I am surprised that I enjoyed it that much, a story of a woman's fall told through her perspective (I'm going to have to try telling a story like that).
This was great, thanks.
It's Saturday. You know what that means? Why, another quality submission by 321, of course! Back at it with another delicious chapter of Hostel. The plot thickens, as we learn just what it is that's going on at this quaint inn in Berlin. As ever, the writing is of envious quality, hot as all hell, and 321 still manages it all at a pace that has me jealous. Maybe hold off on reading, because then you won't have to wait an entire week for the next chapter. Who am I kidding though, no one should wait for this.
I really liked the newest chapter of In the Beginning, and I never felt that Elias was being an asshole, especially when compared to some of the Controllers that stalk the corners of the Archive. In fact, I found the chapter rather sweet. He seems to genuinely care about Ahn, and his use of mind control is established as something that he knows is a dick move, and something he feels at least a bit guilty about. As far as non-consensual mc goes, you can hardly get any less evil in my opinion. Of course, it's still wrong -- we can't get around that -- but he's being as little an asshole as he could be without outright not controlling her. And at that point, it wouldn't be an MC story anymore. ::)
As you see in a moment, I love Elias, and seriously, if he wants to transform me into a big boobed (seems to be his thing) version of the lady in my avatar (past life me), I'd be so grateful
I read so very little while I was working on my own story. This unfortunately meant that I haven't kept up with any story by Mr. Scade. Reading An Episode of Lingerie Enslavement really has me regretting this. Reminds me of the wonderful stories from him that I used to read so many years ago. I'll have to find the time to go through anything I may have missed for sure. As for this story? Absolutely loved it, of course. When the main character investigates a bit too far into what her sister is up to, that scene and the resulting ones were just so delicious. Certainly a story I'll be reading each and every week is updated.
Part 3
Yew and Me
Well, this chapter livens things up in so many ways, especially at the end. Hopefully one of the 'Masters' is interested in mature British women to drone? Might have already caught a Russian eye, anyway? :laugh:
High end of definitely enjoyed
Hostel
Shame its only young, good looking girls that get all the interesting jobs via the hostel! :laugh: But yes, I'd love the brainwashing treatment at the end, regardless. Great story, highly recommended as a read. I suppose Alice might need an 'old administrator' to keep everything moving smoothly? ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed
I was never offered the chance to be thoroughly brainwashed while there!
I was never offered the chance to be thoroughly brainwashed while there!
That you recall =P
I was never offered the chance to be thoroughly brainwashed while there!
That you recall =P
It might be why I'm into all the numbers station stuff, I'm a sleeper spy! :grin:
61 Days in River City
Wasnt a lot here for me either, in truth. We are clearly beginning to get towards the big ending, in more senses than one, mind. I dont think River City will be sorry when these 2 get out of town, mind, lol.
Low end of definitely enjoyed
Probably doesnt help that its very rare I wear stockings, and I dont have a phone infatuation to help me get into this story.
Part 4
Binding Rings
My bind to this story ends here. The incest, the way Jason is now behaving, and everything else, not for me. So I stopped a short way into this chapter, due to all that.
No rating, obviously
An Episode of Lingerie Enslavement
Maybe someone needs to provide me with some of this lingerie, to spike up my sex life? :laugh: Probably doesnt help that its very rare I wear stockings, and I dont have a phone infatuation to help me get into this story. Its a well told story, and if you are into all that stocking fetish, you'll probably love it
But for my tastes, best I can do is low end of definitely enjoyed
Paperback
The ending is a bit of a mess for me, and the whole illness thing does nothing for me too. Fine, the director deserves what he gets, and Stella's ending is better than it looked like being, but anyway... Equally I love the whole Matrix/imprint thing, what can I say? But certainly more than a few interesting twists and turns at the end of this, thats for sure. So if I'm the lucky lady to become Stella, maybe we can discuss?
Definitely enjoyed, as a compromise
Uplink
Oh fine, this had just about everything this week, and I loved it. I'm assuming there must be at least one more chapter, due to the situation at the end? Hopefully Hera is looking for me, lol? Great stuff
High end of definitely enjoyed. Another that may well get more when matters are decided?
Last 4 to follow
Probably doesnt help that its very rare I wear stockings, and I dont have a phone infatuation to help me get into this story.
Maybe you just need some nice music to have a change in perspective? =D
Blizzard
As entertaining as ever, if all a little complex for my poor busted brain, nowadays. Great story, and again, what relationship(s) come out of this, heaven knows? Great fun in interim, ignoring the sex bits, lol, I'm awkward that way! :laugh: Lovely feelgood story.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Blizzard is the perfect thing to read on this cold and snowy (yes, really!) afternoon. Oh, these two lines of dialogue warmed me more than any radiator!
“It’s hot. Don’t burn your tongue.”
“Yeah, she’s got plans for it soon."
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It's been awhile since I read it, but I think it was the way she responded to the creeper at the beginning that doesn't exactly win her any sympathy points. Yes, he's a shitty person that should be fired, but the way she acted didn't do anything to get people on her side either.
It's been awhile since I read it, but I think it was the way she responded to the creeper at the beginning that doesn't exactly win her any sympathy points. Yes, he's a shitty person that should be fired, but the way she acted didn't do anything to get people on her side either.
Properly Handled (https://mcstories.com/ProperlyHandled/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd in) (2 new chapters) by ExtantelanThanks again for the input, glad you are liking my work so far. :p
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.
Things are still moving along here. Maybe getting a bit mushy, but I really like how Kacy's/Kitten's and Budda's relationship is evolving. Kacy and Bobbi's relationship is even hotter. They are really hot together, and the thought of Bobbi really joining them soon is really hot. Sure, Bobbi clearly did not expect the monster she released in Budda, but she also didn't expect liking it so so much! Messed up and wild story.
After last week's cliffhanger of Carefully Random's The Mask, I'm sad to see the follow up not in this update. However, a new chapter of Algorithm is a more than suitable substitute. And what a chaoter this was, answering the questions left by its OWN cliffhanger! Such an exciting read, as we see just what Tiffany's plan was, and how it all plays out. And what, another cliffhanger? If I didn't know any better, I'd say Lucy was writing this story, with how cruel these waits are. Once again, another story that will make waiting an entire week seem unbearable.
Yay! More Algorithm! And it was *nuclear* hot. Best chapter yet!
Agreed! A hot merry-go-round of controlling and being controlled, of trigger phrases and trances and rapidly-shifting power dynamics... is Part 9 here yet? :grin:
I'll add another round of agreement to that.
At this point, it looks like all three of them have at least one other who has a trance trigger. Tiffany got out of the direct control, but seems to have forgotten that Lucy left a trigger command in her mind. Lucy now has two triggers in her, and Tiffany has a trigger for each of the others, but in theory whoever gets a chance to use their triggers privately first has the best chance to come on top (though while they're together, it's more of a Mexican standoff).
Plus whatever the note said.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
Plus Tiffany will forget the whole night at midnight, she seems to have forgotten about that, too.
Part 3
Algorithm
Talk about making things complicated here! But fine, I loved every minute of that, in truth. I cant see a truce arising here, but who wins out in end, who knows? Yes, I still want to be a victim of that device, so much
High end of definitely enjoyed
I read the whole of Algorithm in one fell swoop and can happily echo what others have said before: This some of the most sizzling hot stuff I have read in while, especially this week's chapter.
One minor gripe I have is that everyone seems strangely laissez-faire about the whole mind control business and -- in the case of Erin and Lucy -- really eager to immediately abuse it. It made me feel like I had missed a chapter where it is explained why they aren't more shocked about the fact that such a thing exists and why they are so ready to turn (basically) evil. We get to see inside Tiffany's head, and know that she's a fetishist, so we get why she wants to act the way she does. But when Erin acts the same way, it seems kind of out of nowhere.
All that being said: Yes, it might feel a bit unmotivated, BUT the result is so, so hot that I don't care why Lucy suddenly became the angel of vengeance. I'm just glad that she is, becuase it means that the ensuing battle of wills has that much more heat and weight.
That was a bit ramble-y, I hope you get what I mean. Don't let the length of the criticism discourage you. I just had a hard time conveying my point with brevity. I'm really enjoying this story!
Sadly, I’m late to the “Algorithm” Show. I’m now caught up, and it is every bit as good as my friends Shadra and 321 said it was. So many twists, so many temporary victories and defeats.
Whatever Gets You Through The Night
The delight of this is even the side characters (Oh, Nunzio...) are fun to read. As for the scene when Helen, and Mander get together, hilarious stuff. Tense ending, though instinct says Maria will survive, too big a character? Tank firing scene, oh dear!
High end of definitely enjoyed
Properly Handled (https://mcstories.com/ProperlyHandled/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd in) (2 new chapters) by ExtantelanThanks again for the input, glad you are liking my work so far. :p
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.
Things are still moving along here. Maybe getting a bit mushy, but I really like how Kacy's/Kitten's and Budda's relationship is evolving. Kacy and Bobbi's relationship is even hotter. They are really hot together, and the thought of Bobbi really joining them soon is really hot. Sure, Bobbi clearly did not expect the monster she released in Budda, but she also didn't expect liking it so so much! Messed up and wild story.
Just a note taking this week off, so no new chapters but I'm glad you liked Kacy/Bobbi, as I felt that was the best stuff I've written in 10+ years (not that I've been writing all that time, just its been that long since my creative writing courses.) Had you asked me before, I would have said a 1000+ word sex scene was excessive but I think I pulled it off (I know I like reading it). If you've read MindSpark's (very good) Night Time Nudging you'll note its pretty clear why I don't consider Bubba to be the true antagonist of my story. That honor goes to my hot little pancake princess. :P. It will soon be time for her to take center stage in the latter part of the narrative.
And thanks again for the kind words, it is greatly appreciated.