The Corruption of Candace Kraft by Scifiscribbler just keeps getting better and more complicated and interesting. Once again a well written, thought out story-line with really good MC in it. The plot is very good with scientist Candace and receptionist Lucy, now Lulu, falling under the sinister sway of a Doctor who is embittered and damaged by life. Once again, the story and MC are first rate here. The chapter today with Lulu's breakup with her boyfriend and then further mental programming now as a poor, compliant guinea pig was hot as hell. The Doctor considers her only good for physical labor. Yikes. That is dismissive. And loved how Candace, springing from her jealousy subtly urges the Doctor to work more drastic, vicious changes to Lulu's mind. Just great stuff. What else will the Doctor do to her now?
Emily's Last Bus Ride, by Daisy Isabella Britt de MelckerThis story was born from comments on Holly's Spa Vacation that, even though Holly is based on a real person who's just all over the place, she seemed inconsistent.
I read this one on the forums, but decided to do a quick skim now that it's published. Alien-alien stuff is a squick for me, although there is stuff to like here beyond that. I always like They Live type illusions on aliens as a concept (although not necessarily just in the sexual context - I mean it's just a fun idea). I also like that it feels quite raw, like a fantasy that just lept straight out from someone's head onto the page.
A big chunk of available for everyone, and I sincerely hope those who spend the time on it will enjoy it. It's damn spicy...
Speaking of Dede, she wrote one of my absolute favorite stories this week......and there was no MC in it yet! Now that is hard to do.
But when you read a setup like she did in The Spa it just means pleasure postponed is pleasure intensified. I LOVE how the author really took good sweet time in letting us get to know Denise. I mean this character comes alive. We know about her background, why she is where she is in life, what she is like, her emotional and financial situation, her personality. It is all there as preamble for what is to come. There is nothing better than getting to know a person before any changes, because it gives real meaning and contrast when the changes start to come. And Dede really showed off all her skills as a writer in doing all this. I really care for this girl, she has a true story to her life.
And man, I can't wait to see where this goes next. That is all a tribute to the writing skill and vision of Dede. GREAT JOB! Thanks for such a terrific and interesting start to a story. I hope this story has many chapters left in it.
Many congratulations to Daisy (https://mcstories.com/Authors/Daisy-Isabella-Britt-de-Melcker.html#) for her second story, Dede (https://mcstories.com/Authors/Dede.html#) for her second story in 10 years, and really nice to see br0adband (https://mcstories.com/Authors/br0adband.html#) again!
The Corruption of Candace Kraft by Scifiscribbler just keeps getting better and more complicated and interesting. Once again a well written, thought out story-line with really good MC in it. The plot is very good with scientist Candace and receptionist Lucy, now Lulu, falling under the sinister sway of a Doctor who is embittered and damaged by life. Once again, the story and MC are first rate here. The chapter today with Lulu's breakup with her boyfriend and then further mental programming now as a poor, compliant guinea pig was hot as hell. The Doctor considers her only good for physical labor. Yikes. That is dismissive. And loved how Candace, springing from her jealousy subtly urges the Doctor to work more drastic, vicious changes to Lulu's mind. Just great stuff. What else will the Doctor do to her now?
There are two more chapters to come, so there's plenty of room to see. But there's also a reason this is set in 2005 - there are a bunch more stories which will keep rolling out (so long as the Patreon keeps giving me a reason to prioritise writing them over other leisure pursuits) in this setting. Candace's corruption won't completely end with this story, and honestly, there are others who will change as a result...
Speaking of Dede, she wrote one of my absolute favorite stories this week......and there was no MC in it yet! Now that is hard to do.
But when you read a setup like she did in The Spa it just means pleasure postponed is pleasure intensified. I LOVE how the author really took good sweet time in letting us get to know Denise. I mean this character comes alive. We know about her background, why she is where she is in life, what she is like, her emotional and financial situation, her personality. It is all there as preamble for what is to come. There is nothing better than getting to know a person before any changes, because it gives real meaning and contrast when the changes start to come. And Dede really showed off all her skills as a writer in doing all this. I really care for this girl, she has a true story to her life.
And man, I can't wait to see where this goes next. That is all a tribute to the writing skill and vision of Dede. GREAT JOB! Thanks for such a terrific and interesting start to a story. I hope this story has many chapters left in it.
Wow thank you SO much! I was a bit worried when I decided to only send the first three chapters, because there wasn't any MC yet. You've just validated my decision!
There are nine more chapters left, so I'll try to have 3 more per update.
And yes, she does have a true story to her life - it's mine, after all. :)
Thanks again!
Dede,
The pleasure is all mine. Reading your story really made my day. It is terrific. The fact that you have nine more chapters to go is fantastic news. Please make each as long as you wish.
Was sad to see One Hot Summer Redux by Anonymous 043 come to an end. I really liked everything about it, the characters, the setting, the swim team and Rachel and her mother and of course the good coach who everyone trusts. And the induction and MC scenes were first rate as well. I know this story was a shout out to an earlier version but Anonymous really ran with it and made it so good. I wish it had gone on longer because I thought this was the best chapter yet with what was coming for Rachel and best friend Sharon. Damn!
The Girls of S.L.E.E.P. concluded like I was hoping it would. Trisha proved convincingly how she'll be in-charge of it all, expertly taking the successful hypnotists from previous chapters and ensuring their compliance. Fitting end to a great start of a sorority, that and the roommate situation with Rayne was also satisfying.
Blizzard continues to be fantastic. I'm a sucker for romantic stories and you won't find many that are this sexy and engaging. I like how Gene has grown over the course of the story, and he has a great scene in this week's chapter. And then! Drama!Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.
Paid a visit to The Spa and came away happy, although I suspect that our pretty schoolteacher is going to come away with more than just happy memories! I especially loved the nasty Ms. Devereaux (I may have sat next to her myself once or twice- I'm guessing that we all have!) We just get a glimpse of mind control before this week's installment ends, but I'm excited to see what comes next!
Precognition, by TheHandsThatLead
Another promising start. This one seems like it might be digging in for the long haul, but if it's all as good as Chapter 1 then I'll probably stick with it. Well written and hot.
The Corruption of Candace Kraft (https://mcstories.com/CorruptionOfCandaceKraft/index.html) by scifiscribbler (https://mcstories.com/Authors/scifiscribbler.html)
Total body sculpting on the other hand, I can take or probably leave. Dunno why that's less believable that rewriting the firmware of someone's brain, but flights are fancy like that. :shrug:
S.B.'s Untold Stories with Alice this time is proving to be really entertaining. A nice amount of humor, putting Alice what feels a little like a drug trip (but adult me now wonders if that wasn't a hidden belief about Wonderland). I can't tell which version of a familiar character I liked better, but I'm curious to see who and what after the intermission brings.
The Corruption of Candace Kraft (https://mcstories.com/CorruptionOfCandaceKraft/index.html) by scifiscribbler (https://mcstories.com/Authors/scifiscribbler.html)
Total body sculpting on the other hand, I can take or probably leave. Dunno why that's less believable that rewriting the firmware of someone's brain, but flights are fancy like that. :shrug:
Body sculpting is going to continue on in the setting, but there's only one story (The Island of Doctor Bimbeau) where it's going to the foreground. The rest of the time... it's there because, ultimately, the series grew out of that pun. (Although Candace has rather hijacked the setting since I started writing down this version...)
Yes, it’s not a "problem” per say, and I generally try not to slag off on stuff that doesn’t really do it for me. I only mentioned it because I was so enamored with the proceedings up to that point, then suddenly they have a machine that can completely remake a person inside and out. It brought on a sense of dread thattheyhe had achieved total victory, which might spell the end of delicious dramatic tension. Perhaps an irrational fear, but OP equipment necessarily complicates the telling of a compelling narrative. I realize the next two chapters are already written and I’m just armchair editorializing, but felt I should qualify my previous statement.
Regardless, I remain very much into the tone of the story and all the little things you’re doing along the way. Very effective stuff.
One more huge thumbs up for The Perfect Subject! Wow, this fast paced and unexpected delight left me breathless in more ways than one!
Packback (https://mcstories.com/Packback/index.html) is one of those stories that sneaks up on you. Scott and Megan find romance, and also challenges, as they try to negotiate life on and off the trail. If only there were a helpful and powerful hypnotist to help sort everything out! ;) I'm a sucker for romance stories, so this one really hit high marks for me. I'm still a little afraid of Megan, though.
shoutouts to:
Searching For Eden (https://mcstories.com/SearchingForEden/index.html) (mc mf fd rb) (new) by Carol J.
nice short story that had me wanting to see what the other options did.
Blowjob Fairy (https://mcstories.com/BlowjobFairy/index.html) (mc mf fd gr hu) (new)
fun idea
The Perfect Subject (https://mcstories.com/PerfectSubject/index.html) (mc mf md) (new) by Rhea Corvos
very hot
Can't believe I missed Anonymous-043's new version of the Centurea Montana story, One Hot Summer — Redux (https://mcstories.com/OneHotSummerRedux/index.html) last month. I found his new story when looking up his debut, "Package Deal," which has become a real favourite in the last few years. It really delivers the goods on the mother-daughter enslavement plot that I'm always in favour of seeing.
Great work!