The Mark of P (https://www.mcstories.com/MarkOfP/index.html) (mc mf md fd gr) (new) by HB5211This one has a great start; really grabbed my attention. Now if I could just get a chance to read without family disturbances; must have started it 3 or 4 times now.
A young detective takes on the case of missing women who mysteriously reappear with no knowledge of what happened to them. They share one thing in common. All are branded with the letter “P” on their inner thigh.
This Is Our Story (https://www.mcstories.com/ThisIsOurStory/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.
If the sexiest part of "College Undercover" was the part where Carol and the other whore program each other in the police station, the second sexiest part was the part where Carol programs the new whore. Enjoyed this installment the first time around and I'm still enjoying it.
GreyScribblers College Undercover keeps on rolling with great content as usual. Man, this was a dark chapter, that's saying something for a story that is pretty dark all around.
Carol/Stephanie now turned Copeland in dealing with Brenda!!! The saddest part is her Stephanie side tries to rationalize it to her Carol side, but she knows what she did and how wrong it is. How does she come back from that? How does she not get destroyed by what she's becoming and doing? For the first time in this story I realize Carol, all of Carol, may disappear for good.
The Mark of P (https://www.mcstories.com/MarkOfP/index.html) (mc mf md fd gr) (new) by HB5211This one has a great start; really grabbed my attention. Now if I could just get a chance to read without family disturbances; must have started it 3 or 4 times now.
A young detective takes on the case of missing women who mysteriously reappear with no knowledge of what happened to them. They share one thing in common. All are branded with the letter “P” on their inner thigh.
Betsy Visits River City
At least Billie hasnt (yet) met anyone from her own era, who knew her then, that might ask tricky questions! :laugh: Sounds like Joystick might appeal to a few ladies, hmm? ;) So will he sort out the monster, will he satisfy a lady (or more)'s needs? As entertaining as ever, for sure.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Since I trust 321 and love 321's writing I wanted to check out SoVeryFascinated's Gabby The Gray.
321 was right. This is an amazing story that gets better and better. The world building, characters you fall in love with, the winding, interesting plot, the MC, the attention to detail in dialogue and description, it's all here. The time, effort and thought put into this story has to be tremendous and it shows. Great, great stuff. Once you get into the plot you can't stop reading. The writing itself is highly sophisticated and top notch. Very unusual in the best possible way.
This is actually a thing Conner briefly ruminates on during book 2, as he notes that, with months having gone by, Hailey doesn't seem to have backslid. iirc there's some mention of how Hailey's frustrated that her efforts to slim down still don't seem to be yielding results, while Hayleigh is still working hard to maintain her figure. The TIOS program is usually pretty literal about interpreting/enforcing its editor-in-chief's commands (whether or not he realizes he's made them).This Is Our Story (https://www.mcstories.com/ThisIsOurStory/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.
I'm still enjoying this story a lot. In Chapter 2, fattie-turned-hottie Hailey gives an inept blowjob (it's her first time), but at least she's willing. Knowing Ice Bear, Hailey's fellatio skills will get much better.
I have a question for Ice Bear: When Hayleigh (the slim, toned, busty goddess of the school) and Hailey (the fat, flabby loser) got their bodies switched, did they keep all of their old personalities and attitudes? Will now-fat Hayleigh hit the gym, while now-shapely Hailey overeats, skips workouts, and eventually becomes fat and flabby? Or did the body-swap also swap each girl's attitudes toward her body, so that Hailey, even as she otherwise still thinks like a desperate loser, is a gym rat now?
The reason for my question: Everybody but Conner thinks that each girl has "always" looked this way. But to "explain" why Hailey is slim and toned, she would have to have a gym-rat lifestyle, which is not her own (former) lifestyle, it's the lifestyle that Hayleigh had before the swap. Similarly, to "explain" Hayleigh's now-obese body, she would have to have the practices of a fat person, practices which came from Hailey.
Or maybe the body-swapping magic also locks in each girl's body? This would mean that no matter how Hailey pigs out and skips workouts, she will always be slim and toned; while Hayleigh could exercise till Doomsday and not lose an ounce or an inch.
I'm enjoying "This Is Our Story" but not sure it counts as mind control.
Saint Barbra’s Reform School
This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed
This Is Our Story
This is more body swap, than mind control at this point, but I really dont care. Hailey sounds so much like she deserves something good happening in her life, just love it. And fine, Conner is the type of guy who deserves a good break too. I also love the way the author is thinking through side matters (organ transplant as example), as well as the standard stuff. If he wants to somehow arrange a body swap for me, before March, with a young Ginger Rodgers, or my avvie, I'd much appreciate it, lol!
Another that I could easily give slightly more to, but I'll stick with high end of definitely enjoyed for now
Spellthief Stolen
This was always on a length limit, and in truth, showed nothing in the first half to really interest me at all. Shorter, I'd have pushed on, but nearly 15K, not going to happen!
No rating, length reasoning
I Just Can’t Say No
Unfortunately, I could quite easily say no. Much though I'd love to be put in 'drone mode', Jim is a lot of a jerk, to put it mildly. Obviously, if he wants to try and change my opinion? :laugh: Not too many points for subtlety, I must say. Bimbo fans will get slightly more from this than me.
I'll give it enjoyed, but that really relates to the concept of drone mode, and processing, and little else.
Alterations: Kathryn’s Confidence
I could do with someone paying for me to go to this place, or finding the money to go myself, anyway... Fine, I'm sure the alterations cant turn a 60 year old into a young sex kitten, but besides that...But yes, regardless of that, for assistance with acting (or dancing) roles, oh please... Fine, I'd love having that done to me, even if he is being naughty, oh fine, it appeals! ;)
High end of definitely enjoyed. Almost got more, but an appointment could secure that, shall we say...? ;)
I'm enjoying it so far, but it does look like it's settling in for the long haul...
Saint Barbra’s Reform School
This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day ;)
Saint Barbra’s Reform School
This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day ;)
Well that was horrible ;)
I've submitted an update to Simon, hopefully it's better this time around :)
Losers Can’t Be Choosers
Thing with this is, 'Clarissa' quite likes the idea of being turned into a latex clad drone! ;) So, if it doesnt happen for real, in the 'production', can we at least have a minds eye picture, lol? :angel: Or backfires, latex clad Domme? Gail continues to play naughty, I only hope justice comes into play at the end, but we will see? And then of course, there is Nick, Angela, and maybe Gail butting her nose in, hmm?
High end of definitely enjoyed. Sorry, cant afford the Patron stuff, however much I'd love to know what happens next to Clarissa!
Saint Barbra’s Reform School
This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! :laugh: Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day ;)
Well that was horrible ;)
I've submitted an update to Simon, hopefully it's better this time around :)
Might be wise, or you might get sent to the reform school, heaven forbid! :P