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Title: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: Majorwrll on November 16, 2019, 12:12:15 pm
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Amareth Falls (https://mcstories.com/AmarethFalls/index.html) (mc ff bd ft sf) (1 new chapter)  by Miss_Praxis
In the far future where nanotech has become a burgeoning new enterprise, corporations rule whole planets and individuals are often taken for granted. A former mercenary named Amareth is captured by an evil crime boss and her AI. She is slowly and methodically twisted to their whims.

The Bimbofication of Denise (https://mcstories.com/BimboficationOfDenise/index.html) (mc ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise’s students give her a special box of candy for Teacher Appreciation Day.

Blood on Parchment (https://mcstories.com/BloodOnParchment/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Doctor D.
Alderose’s husband-to-be has been missing for several weeks. Though no one believes her, she’s pretty sure he’s been taken by another woman. Or a monster. She isn’t too sure.

Brain Development Enterprises (https://mcstories.com/BrainDevelopmentEnterprises/index.html) (mc mf md in) (2 new chapters)  by JC Beleren
A man purchases a series of self-hypnosis recordings to help him become more assertive.

Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (https://mcstories.com/CapeCityChronicles/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (new)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Capturing the Spies (https://mcstories.com/CapturingTheSpies/index.html) (mc ff bd ds gr ft) (1 new chapter)  by Sammynona
Lisa and her fellow spies investigate the Marron Corporation, clueless about the hypnotic traps waiting to catch them.

Cara Loft — Crypt Detective (https://mcstories.com/CaraLoftCryptDetective/index.html) (mc mf md gr) (new)  by TheHandsThatLead
Cara Loft has fought the forces of The Guild around the globe, but will she be undone in her own home town of London?

Charm Person (https://mcstories.com/CharmPerson/index.html) (mc mf md) (new)  by Blue Collar Girl and Ius_Magister
Edgar uses real magic during his D&D session to put a spell on his best friend’s girl.

Checkmate I Think (https://mcstories.com/CheckmateIThink/index.html) (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by The Slaver
A millionaire crime boss attempts to outsmart his rivals.

Crossing the Rubicon (https://mcstories.com/CrossingTheRubicon/index.html) (mc mf fd md) (4 new chapters)  by br0adband
There are moments in a lifetime where, with a single step, a line is crossed, a goal is achieved, a dream becomes a reality. Once that line is crossed, there’s no going back to who or what you might have been before. This is such a journey for one person.

The Dark Stone (https://mcstories.com/DarkStone/index.html) (mc mf md in) (new)  by RawlyRawls
A strange rock changes Sam and the women around him.

Dead of Night (https://mcstories.com/DeadOfNight/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by SoVeryFascinated
An actress responds well to a stage hypnosis show ... and so does someone else.

Deputy Karen’s Bad Therapy (https://mcstories.com/DeputyKarensBadTherapy/index.html) (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
Deputy Karen will lose his job if he doesn’t quit smoking, but maybe Doctor Sheridan isn’t the right choice for hypnosis therapy.

Editing Reality Book Three: Naughty Fantasies Unleashed (https://mcstories.com/EditingRealityBookThree/index.html) (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Every Woman Has a Price (https://mcstories.com/EveryWomanHasAPrice/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Owen inherits a set of silver coins from his grandfather that lets him buy anyone.

The Eye of Seduction (https://mcstories.com/EyeOfSeduction/index.html) (mc ff ma hm) (new)  by ShhUrDead
A bored English teacher meets a new student to play with. It’s a good thing she has a guaranteed means of seduction...

Fishbowl (https://mcstories.com/Fishbowl/index.html) (mc hm in sc ws sf) (1 new chapter)  by TriplemintTrish
Sam and Veronica woke up in a laboratory cell. They can see their father asleep in an adjacent cell, connected to theirs by a wall of shatter-proof glass. Before they can get his attention, though, flat metal doors close in and hide him from view. It seems some unknown force has a series of strange experiments planned for the Stevens family.

Ghost Boy (https://mcstories.com/GhostBoy/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

Guard Post 48 (https://mcstories.com/GuardPostFortyEight/index.html) (mc mf md rb) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Tom patrols an area from his guard post. It’s a lonely job, so he’s given Karen as a companion.

Heaven Scent (Chrysostomon) (https://mcstories.com/HeavenScentChrysostomon/index.html) (mc mf md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
John sends away for a mind control spray.

Her Husband’s Hucow (https://mcstories.com/HerHusbandsHucow/index.html) (mc ff ma la gr ds) (1 new chapter)  by CNP
Mary and a few of her old college friends are invited to an almost forgotten friend’s home. What was expected to be a weekend of relaxation and reminiscing soon turns into something more expansive to the exquisite delight of everyone involved.

Herrick: Arrogant Model Take-down (https://mcstories.com/HerrickArrogantModelTakeDown/index.html) (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
A photographer has had enough of a model’s attitude.

How To Pay Your College Loans (https://mcstories.com/HowToPayYourCollegeLoans/index.html) (mc ff ds bd) (new)  by Skaetlett
Clara can’t pay her college loans, or rent, or anything. She’s stuck at a job she hates with no one around her. Her life turns around when she sees an ad on the dark web recruiting “servants”, and takes drastic measures to turn her life around.

I Hear and Obey (https://mcstories.com/IHearAndObey/index.html) (mc ff mf fd sf rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
A powerful woman maintains her supply of Slaves from Earth of the past and present.

It Started With: Alien Extraction (https://mcstories.com/ItStartedWithAlienExtraction/index.html) (mc mm) (new)  by The Slaver
Yet another Air Force officer is abducted by aliens.

Just a Regular Day (https://mcstories.com/JustARegularDay/index.html) (mc mf fd ma) (new)  by Mindlevel Zero
A day in the life of a deeply-brainwashed husband.

Maggie’s New Assignment (https://mcstories.com/MaggiesNewAssignment/index.html) (mc mf ff mm md fd gr) (new)  by HB5211
Mags was a experienced agent assigned to trafficking, both drugs and human.  When she receives a tip that could prove a break in the case, should she follow it? Sometimes tips are not all they are cracked up to be.

Master PC: Beta (https://mcstories.com/MasterPCBeta/index.html) (mc mf md gr) (new)  by fizzbangboom
Alex’s ex contacts him out of the blue, just as he discovers the Master PC program.

Master’s Marks (https://mcstories.com/MastersMarks/index.html) (mc mf mm md ma hm ds ex ft) (1 new chapter)  by Third Leprechaun
A young man with a mind control device and a penchant for humiliation finds ways to keep himself entertained.

My Baby (https://mcstories.com/MyBaby/index.html) (mc mf in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Eve will do anything to look after her boy.

Note (MoldedMind) (https://mcstories.com/NoteMoldedMind/index.html) (mc) (new)  by MoldedMind
Violet receives a bizarre note from a stranger. Her mind is increasingly preoccupied with its contents.

A Novel Approach (https://mcstories.com/NovelApproach/index.html) (mc mf ff fd ma gr bd) (1 new chapter)  by HB5211
Betsy continues writing erotic fiction based on her real life experiences, while Heather deepens her control. Betsy watches as Samantha is ensnared in Heather’s world providing more inspiration for her second novel.

Pact (https://mcstories.com/Pact/index.html) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva
Truth has tried for twenty years to live quietly, to tend her farm, to forget all about the Pact that she was born to obey and bound to enforce. But an urgent need will pull her back to the magic that she’s spent so long seeking to abandon.

The Perfect Subject (https://mcstories.com/PerfectSubject/index.html) (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Rhea Corvos
Melanie hopes to make some easy money by taking part in a scientific study. The scientists studying her are surprised by what they find.

Pick Me (https://mcstories.com/PickMe/index.html) (mc mf md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
The girls finish their lessons in how to please. Now they hope a master will choose one of them.

A Price Paid (https://mcstories.com/PricePaid/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by Saddle Rider
Losing a prized possession to mages, a powerful man seeks revenge.

Probed (https://mcstories.com/Probed/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd rb la sf) (1 new chapter)  by MCaesar
A group of college students are abducted by aliens wishing to study human sexuality.

Rumor (https://mcstories.com/Rumor/index.html) (mc ff) (new)  by Kallie
A girl runs into Allison at a party, and Allison tells her all sorts of strange rumors about herself. But the strangest thing is, they all turn out to be true.

Savannah’s Hypnotic Socks (https://mcstories.com/SavannahsHypnoticSocks/index.html) (mc ff ft) (1 new chapter)  by Fibaro
A co-ed gets a pair of hypnotic socks that she uses on her roommate.

Senioritis (https://mcstories.com/Senioritis/index.html) (mc mf ff fd md ds bd ft hm) (3 new chapters)  by MɛtaBob
Marc explores sexuality with a 19-year-old dominant woman.

Service Call (nevermind) (https://mcstories.com/ServiceCallNevermind/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (new)  by nevermind
Linda’s had a crazy night out that she’s coming to regret. Mistakes have been made. Mistakes that need to be corrected.

Space Nut (https://mcstories.com/SpaceNut/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Adam discovers a crash landed alien who shares a taste for women with him, and together they will have them all, no matter the price.

Sssslipping Into the Jungle (https://mcstories.com/SssslippingIntoTheJungle/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Actress Jennifer gets lost while on a shooting break in India, only to come across a well known hypnotic serpent.

Stop Watch: Genesis (https://mcstories.com/StopWatchGenesis/index.html) (mc mf ff md fd in ts) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
Mike continues to use his timestopping power on his family.

Untold Stories (https://mcstories.com/UntoldStories/index.html) (mc mf fd hu) (1 new chapter)  by S. B.
Enough with the same boring tales of handsome princes and damsels in distress! It’s time for fairytales to go kinky, one childhood memory twisted at a time.

Voodoo Doll Testing (https://mcstories.com/VoodooDollTesting/index.html) (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by Oddballs
Jordan shows up at Vincent’s front door, wanting to test his new project out on him.

Vox Dominus (https://mcstories.com/VoxDominus/index.html) (mc mf md) (new)  by Mesmerciless
Seb discovers he can hypnotize women with the power of his voice.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (https://mcstories.com/WhateverGetsYouThroughTheNight/index.html) (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

Wildwood (https://mcstories.com/Wildwood/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by notorioushypno
A mind control conspiracy spawns small-town hokum, entangling a group of plucky university students, some deadbeat locals, and a team of federal investigators.

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover (https://mcstories.com/WitchTheWhipHisWifeAndHerLover/index.html) (mc ff mf fd ds) (new)  by Alan Smithee
Senator Delacroix has a lot on his plate. His wife is cheating, an important vote is coming up, and the new intern? She might be a witch.

Zack and Millie (https://mcstories.com/ZackAndMillie/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by scifiscribbler
Zack and Millie have a detailed flatmate’s agreement, but only one of them knows about it.

Zero Percent (https://mcstories.com/ZeroPercent/index.html) (mc mf md) (new)  by Jukebox
Stasia plays games while waiting for her ride and winds up getting drained. Oh, and her phone battery is low, too.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: walter_kovacs on November 16, 2019, 05:51:34 pm
The Eye of Seduction (https://mcstories.com/EyeOfSeduction/index.html) (mc ff ma hm) (new)  by ShhUrDead

Pretty good story, nice job for a first submission! A little bit expositioney (not that I can talk :P) but the meat and potatoes of a solid story are all here. Always would prefer to see things from the subject's perspective sometimes to get a good internal look at what's going on inside their head, but that's just personal taste. It seems like it's going to be a multi-part story, so I'll keep an eye out for future chapters.

Amareth Falls (https://mcstories.com/AmarethFalls/index.html) (mc ff bd ft sf) (1 new chapter)  by Miss_Praxis

First chapter is a Heinlein reference, check.
Farscape swearing, check.
Paragraphs about orbital engineering, high-burn starships and carbon nanotubes, check.

Yep, it's SciFi!

I read the first 4 chapters, and there was a lot to enjoy (esp the internal state of the protagonist). It has started entering squick territory for me with some of the more advanced bodymods, and even prior the whole covered in latex stuff has never been my scene, but I think this would be an excellent story for those that are into that side of things. It's well written and I appreciated that a lot of thought was put into the SF side of things.

How To Pay Your College Loans (https://mcstories.com/HowToPayYourCollegeLoans/index.html) (mc ff ds bd) (new)  by Skaetlett

Unless it was covert, I don't believe there was any MC in this first chapter, but I enjoyed it quite a bit nevertheless. I'm certainly interested to see how this develops once they start hypnotising her. The mention of a large staff seems to imply she's not the first and probably won't be the last addition to their harem.


Vox Dominus (https://mcstories.com/VoxDominus/index.html) (mc mf md) (new)  by Mesmerciless


Another first time author here. I liked this one a lot. It's not breaking into any crazy new ground so far but I can always use more stories in the subgenre of "woah, I just discovered that my voice compels people!" There's a high school/university sort of dynamic, but hard to see what direction it's going to take just based on this first chapter.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: Skaetlett on November 16, 2019, 06:26:42 pm
Quote from: walter_kovacs on November 16, 2019, 05:51:34 pm
How To Pay Your College Loans (https://mcstories.com/HowToPayYourCollegeLoans/index.html) (mc ff ds bd) (new)  by Skaetlett

Unless it was covert, I don't believe there was any MC in this first chapter, but I enjoyed it quite a bit nevertheless. I'm certainly interested to see how this develops once they start hypnotising her. The mention of a large staff seems to imply she's not the first and probably won't be the last addition to their harem.

Author of this fic here! Thanks for reading! Yeah, HTPYCL isn't gonna have any MC for a chapter or two (including this chapter), but there's gonna be tons of MC content. My first long story was sort of like that as well, though it was different because I, well... dumped 8 or so chapters on the website at first. Needless to say, I will get to the good stuff ASAP, and I hope you continue to enjoy! ^^
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: walter_kovacs on November 16, 2019, 10:50:27 pm
I just realised that my story The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover was incorrectly tagged as MF. There's none of that in the current chapters.

Quote from: Skaetlett on November 16, 2019, 06:26:42 pm

Author of this fic here! Thanks for reading! Yeah, HTPYCL isn't gonna have any MC for a chapter or two (including this chapter), but there's gonna be tons of MC content. My first long story was sort of like that as well, though it was different because I, well... dumped 8 or so chapters on the website at first. Needless to say, I will get to the good stuff ASAP, and I hope you continue to enjoy! ^^

All good, looking forward to it!
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: wizzy on November 17, 2019, 05:18:09 am
Master pc:beta and charm Person are great detailed stories.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: gyrd on November 17, 2019, 10:19:05 pm
"Vox Dominus" off to a slow start.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: mrexcellent on November 18, 2019, 08:01:44 am
Master PC: Beta is a great story. I love the combination of mind control and humiliation. A slow build that paid off and left room for nearly infinite possibilities. Very excited for what fizzbangboom will do next, both within this series and with other stories.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: 3rdLeprechaun on November 18, 2019, 02:53:52 pm
"Rumor" was fucking fantastic. Really enjoyed that. The way her confusion was conveyed was awesome.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: Dede on November 19, 2019, 06:07:07 am
Quote from: 3rdLeprechaun on November 18, 2019, 02:53:52 pm
"Rumor" was fucking fantastic. Really enjoyed that. The way her confusion was conveyed was awesome.

Thanks for the recommendation! I read it just now and came to the same conclusion, much to my own surprise!
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: walter_kovacs on November 20, 2019, 03:00:55 am
Service Call (nevermind) (https://mcstories.com/ServiceCallNevermind/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (new)  by nevermind

Enjoyed this one a lot. Wastes minimal time, and is effective in communicating the protagonist's mental state which always a plus for me. A direct sequel wouldn't be necessary but the MC aspects (the company, the process and so on) are fun so it would be good to see more in the same setting.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: MCaesar on November 20, 2019, 08:58:20 pm
What's the etiquette for commenting on stories or chapters from previous weeks? I sometimes have thoughts, but I'm chronically a week behind, and I don't want to show up in the most recent thread like a dork who just finishing Breaking Bad. Should I just post in the week-old thread?
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: Shadra on November 20, 2019, 09:42:57 pm
Quote from: MCaesar on November 20, 2019, 08:58:20 pm
What's the etiquette for commenting on stories or chapters from previous weeks? I sometimes have thoughts, but I'm chronically a week behind, and I don't want to show up in the most recent thread like a dork who just finishing Breaking Bad. Should I just post in the week-old thread?

I don't think there's any issues posting a review from a previous week's submission. It's not that uncommon, even. I'm sure any author would be glad to hear feedback regardless of when it is provided, and I doubt anyone here would have anything to fuss about. I'd say the only actual limit is that the review threads are archived at some point.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: MCaesar on November 20, 2019, 11:24:45 pm
Quote from: Shadra on November 20, 2019, 09:42:57 pm
I'm sure any author would be glad to hear feedback regardless of when it is provided, and I doubt anyone here would have anything to fuss about.

Oh, no doubt. What I was more wondering is where should I post my comments? Would it be inappropriate to put them in the current week's thread, even though it's old news? Are the authors less likely to see a comment in last week's thread, even if that's probably the more appropriate place for it?
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: BethanyP on November 20, 2019, 11:30:16 pm
Thank you for everyone who takes time to make recommendations here ... I'm a bit new here and don't yet know all of the writers, and this is one of those weeks where two stories I might not have read ("Rumor" by Kallie and "Service Call" by nevermind) got mentioned and I went back to read them.  In both cases I'm glad I did, they were great reads, and not only that there were a couple of other stories by each writer that I found I also loved.  So again ... thanks!
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: walter_kovacs on November 21, 2019, 12:27:59 am
Quote from: MCaesar on November 20, 2019, 11:24:45 pm
Quote from: Shadra on November 20, 2019, 09:42:57 pm
I'm sure any author would be glad to hear feedback regardless of when it is provided, and I doubt anyone here would have anything to fuss about.

Oh, no doubt. What I was more wondering is where should I post my comments? Would it be inappropriate to put them in the current week's thread, even though it's old news? Are the authors less likely to see a comment in last week's thread, even if that's probably the more appropriate place for it?

I would basically say that if it's a story that had no updates this week, you should bump the older week's thread. Not that you'll get in trouble for doing it the other way around, but that'd make the most sense in that case.

If it's a story where it had an update this week and you just got to it, there's no trouble reviewing just the older week's content in the newer thread. I'd probably do that.
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: Mind Zapper on November 21, 2019, 03:28:38 pm
Quote from: Majorwrll on November 16, 2019, 12:12:15 pm
Service Call (nevermind) (https://mcstories.com/ServiceCallNevermind/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (new)  by nevermind
Linda’s had a crazy night out that she’s coming to regret. Mistakes have been made. Mistakes that need to be corrected.


Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed Nevermind's story.  Well written, great pacing, such excellent hypnotic beats layered into the story.  It was hot and delicious.  Great job!
Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: walter_kovacs on November 23, 2019, 05:20:40 am
Wildwood (https://mcstories.com/Wildwood/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by notorioushypno

I read the first chapter or two at release, but only now just caught up on it. The first chapter or two didn't really hook me for whatever reason, but once I got further into it the plot started speeding up and it did get very good. I think there might be one or two more updates to go, but if you're looking for a good longer (but not super epic length) story, this might be it.

Title: Re: New Releases-November 16th 2019
Post by: MCaesar on November 26, 2019, 10:55:11 pm
This time on Day-Old Thoughts On Week-Old Stories, I just read Just A Regular Day.

This story fell into the category I think of as pure indulgent fantasy, and I mean that in the best possible way. There's not really a plot, no conflict to resolve, and characters are revealed, but they don't really develop along the way. Don't even care about any of that, though. It's short, sweet (like actually wholesome, which I have a huge soft spot for), and it mashes some of my buttons harder than me playing Mortal Kombat.

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