College Undercover (https://mcstories.com/CollegeUndercover/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.
Night Time Nudging (https://mcstories.com/NightTimeNudging/index.html) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter) by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?
This Is Our Story (https://mcstories.com/ThisIsOurStory/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.
Night Time Nudging (https://mcstories.com/NightTimeNudging/index.html) (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter) by MindSpark
When a brother learns that his sister uses ASMR to sleep at night, an idea sparks in his head. What if he replaced the audio-files his sister listens to with hypnotic recordings?
"At the end of the day, it’d be me who Sammy would be pleasuring with her mouth.
Quite literally, in fact."
...what on earth is the non-literal meaning of that phrase?
Shadra's Following Her Dream is back and man, what an exciting chapter! Janet undergoes quite a transformation between the first sentence of this chapter and the final one! There's a little rebellion brewing behind the scenes here, and I can't wait to see what happens next (and how)!
College Undercover (https://mcstories.com/CollegeUndercover/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Greyscribbler
Carol goes undercover to find out what happened to missing college girls.
Magnificent, as always.
Scribblers College Undercover serves up his usual great writing in the continuation of the devolution of Carol, ex cop now whore. In this chapter we get a very well described up close and personal look of her double gilded cage, the one in her mind and the one she now lives in.
This Is Our Story (https://mcstories.com/ThisIsOurStory/index.html) (mc mf md) (1 new chapter) by Ice Bear
Connor, the editor-in-chief of the high school yearbook, discovers that edits he makes to the yearbook come true in real life.
Of all Ice Bear's stories, this is probably the least hot and the most interesting. I'm reading not for the erotica (except for when he teases me with the step-sister), just because I want to see what happens next.
The Acts — The Shutdown
OK, fine, as a female submissive, I'd love that sort of processing. Not that anyone would really want me, but...I guess it depends how much cosmetic enhancement they can actually do? :laugh: Oh fine, its dark, and might give some in power the wrong idea if they read it, but fine, I'd want to go to that lab to be processed!
High end of definitely enjoyed
"College Undercover" -- excellent as always. Although one wonders where the story is going. I guess there's the other shoe to drop when, as seems likely, someone from the mob world finds out about Carol's past life.
Speaking of reminders, watching Carol go through her very careful motions in this week's College Undercover reminded me a bit of the ending (spoilers!) of The Stepford Wives, where all of the women/robots drift through the grocery store placidly, lost in a dream created by the programming in their minds. I'm not sure if Carol's going to be able to escape this any more than Stepford's Joanna was able to escape her creepy town. Not that Carol much wants to, I suspect. Or is that policewoman still hiding inside of her?
The Acts — The Shutdown (mc mf md) (new) by TheHandsThatLead
Three friends flee north to escape the acts during the government shutdown, will they find their freedom?
I think Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate gets off to a terrific start. Aside from just being hypnotic AF and hot as hell, there's also the quality of the writing. See, maybe I'm attacking a sacred cow by saying this, but the Charlie's Angels episode "Attack Angels" (the most obvious influence on this story) is terribly written. This story has much better dialogue and grasp of character.
I Have No Idea
Fine, I admire Mel's attitude, if not her pregnancy. Loved the whole scene around the suit, at the club too. Oh fine, if I can have a no pregnancy clause in my contract, playing cosplay on that island would be a lot of fun.
High end of definitely enjoyed
The Acts — The Shutdown (mc mf md) (new) by TheHandsThatLead
Three friends flee north to escape the acts during the government shutdown, will they find their freedom?
I liked this story a lot. I enjoyed it more than earlier stories by the author. That might have to do with my particular perverse tastes but it could also be that the author is improving in leaps and bounds.
You could say dark, evil cabal stuff appeals to me or you could say dark, evil cabal stuff really, really appeals to me. Also, the story is excellent in it's simplicity.
Bible Belt Redux (https://mcstories.com/BibleBeltRedux/index.html) (mc mf md in) (new) por Pan
[iWhen Brodie flashes his ultra-religious sister, she is suddenly obsessed with his cock.
Brain Freeze (https://mcstories.com/BrainFreeze/index.html) (mc ff) (new) por Jukebox
During a power outage, Quiana is visited by a lesbian neighbor bearing homemade ice cream.
The Smell of the Greasepaint, the Roar of the Crowd (https://mcstories.com/SmellOfGreasepaintTheRoarOfTheCrowd/index.html) (nuevo mc md md md ft) (new) de Calico Jack
Mezmo the Clown recruits Cassie and her son to be assistants for a birthday party show.
Plus, though technically unsurprising, the twist at the end of this chap made this story just that much more captivating.
Following Her Dream
My big issue with this is Janet isnt likeable, but compared to Violet... ::) Its a cracking good game of chess, mind, though I do feel sorry for Rachel, all the same.
Definitely enjoyed
And now, those final 4...
Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate
I will say I have actually already the full 'script' of this elsewhere, and made suggestions about the Professor turning a more mature woman into a mindlessly obedient 'robot' for his harem, or otherwise, as I dont think I can play parts that young. So fine, the story is delicious, the brainwashing process sounds awesome, and something I'd definitely love used on me, acting, or for real! And yes, its captured its target perfectly, in more senses than one.
Low end of much enjoyed. Probably should have given it less, so the professor wants to capture, and convince me, but anyway... ;)
And now, those final 4...
Action Force: The Annachurian Candidate
I will say I have actually already the full 'script' of this elsewhere, and made suggestions about the Professor turning a more mature woman into a mindlessly obedient 'robot' for his harem, or otherwise, as I dont think I can play parts that young. So fine, the story is delicious, the brainwashing process sounds awesome, and something I'd definitely love used on me, acting, or for real! And yes, its captured its target perfectly, in more senses than one.
Low end of much enjoyed. Probably should have given it less, so the professor wants to capture, and convince me, but anyway... ;)
Wow! I know it might be silly to say that I'm really honored, but wow, I am really honored! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.
I'll have Doctor Franz send the van for you immediately. :)
Paragraphs
A novel way of writing a story I guess, and I could see why it was done, but fine, my arthritic wrists, and hands didnt enjoy all the extra scrolling involved because of that. Amusing piece of green fd though
Low end of definitely enjoyed (yes, first ever health markdown, lol)
S.B. delivers with a wonderful Choose-Your-Own-Mind-Control story in Paragraphs... except there's not much choosing going on here, is there? :)