Managed to read through Hostel during my break at work. Maybe not the be best place to be reading this kind of story... but I just couldn't wait. Starting to feel like I'm repeating myself every time, but yes, this chapter was as great as the others. Don't worry, 321, I did enjoy that last scene. And regarding that...Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^
Oh god, and that's just the first chapter.
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^Yep, just read the first couple of thousand words of ths... (What Dreams Are Made Of by littlefrog66)...
Calligraphy (https://mcstories.com/Calligraphy/index.html) (mc mf md ma) (new) by Meleva
The sun is gone and the lamps are lit. Lady Nallamae Fairmane, noble heiress and minor duchess, knows what that means: it’s time for her to practice her calligraphy.
"114076 words"... in that context, the long summary makes sense. That one's gonna take a bit^^Yep, just read the first couple of thousand words of ths... (What Dreams Are Made Of by littlefrog66)...
All I can say is that it looks promising, very promising!
Really liked this one. Nothing over the top, just a lightly and classily done story of hypnotic submission.
Calligraphy is a wonderfully-written tale of royalty taking pleasure in one of the least-mundane things they have to do in their structured days, and finding a lot more pleasure than they consciously expected. I love how it was such a sensual read despite the innocuous (at first) motions. Believable, enticing, and plays well to a type of seduction I love. I can see why teachers like that are highly sought after. I don't always go for md, but Meleva seems to impress in any genre.
Well at least it allowed me to remove one from a very long list this week. Still got 26, but none over 10K which will help
Well at least it allowed me to remove one from a very long list this week. Still got 26, but none over 10K which will help
I do endeavor to keep my chapters manageable. It's one of the reasons my stories tend to have chapters than to be one single drop.
Mark’s Journey, Making Love
Oh, a sort of sweet ending to this chapter (story?), love that. I know, not perfect for Sammi, but she's not exactly suffering at the same time. Loved how its told, how it plays out, and everything else here.
High end of definitely enjoyed
Adjustments, another S.B. re-reading, and favorite. Something about how elusive the "information expert" is makes almost always a pleasant read, with how creatively she conquers her targets, and narrates the conquests. In this case, I love how rather honest and pragmatic the suggestions she gives her targets, and how it sort of backfires on her later. Nice to see some bringing actually intelligence and ingenious creativity to the intelligence world.
Getting started, back again
Adjustments (S. B.)
Oh fine, I loved this. The fact it didnt end in the obvious way, the lead to someone at the end, and in truth, the way it all plays out is delightful. So no complaints, but the RSB's do sound fun to deal with, even if I am a good girl, lol
High end of definitely enjoyed. Was tempted to give more, but then I might not get 'punished'!
More sweet, sexy, silly fun to be had in this week's edition of Blizzard. Everyone seems ready to set aside their worries, doubts, and cares for a bit while they put the items from their latest shopping trip to good use. :) Honestly, it couldn't have happened to a nicer group of four people.
Please, Please, Sir, Put Me in My Place
Oh goodness, this was so much fun. Lucy handles the whole gender thing absolutely brilliantly. Again, the spanking stuff does nothing for me, but the rest is brilliant
High end of definitely enjoyed
Laser Tag Party
Have been a fan of this all the way through, but fine, I loved the way the ending all played out. Gorgeously romantic, but with a neat twist. Would I love to be adjusted, you bet I would!
Low end of much enjoyed. As much for the whole series, but happy endings, well...
Anyone want to do the Cliff notes version? =D
I just don't have the time or attention span for a story that long.
What Dreams Are Made Of (https://mcstories.com/WhatDreamsAreMadeOf/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (new) by littlefrog66
Artificial Intelligence Singularity sends back copy to change the world’s future. Recruits genetically engineered sex slaves from 2222 to recreate Master’s Harem, for the man who helped invent the machine that caused it all. Discover that aliens were really responsible for it all. Track down interstellar sentient Mother Ship and set out to save the universe from bad guys. Discover alternate universes. Along the way, they save women from an evil mind-altering drug that turns women into sex slaves and save other planets from wicked alien AI’s.
Thank you, Merry. Just you wait for next issue where I wrap things up by killing everyone. You'll love it.
More sweet, sexy, silly fun to be had in this week's edition of Blizzard. Everyone seems ready to set aside their worries, doubts, and cares for a bit while they put the items from their latest shopping trip to good use. :) Honestly, it couldn't have happened to a nicer group of four people.
Thanks! Glad you like the characters, makes it satisfying to throw a wrench in the works now.
What Dreams Are Made Of (https://mcstories.com/WhatDreamsAreMadeOf/index.html) (mc mf ff md) (new) by littlefrog66
Artificial Intelligence Singularity sends back copy to change the world’s future. Recruits genetically engineered sex slaves from 2222 to recreate Master’s Harem, for the man who helped invent the machine that caused it all. Discover that aliens were really responsible for it all. Track down interstellar sentient Mother Ship and set out to save the universe from bad guys. Discover alternate universes. Along the way, they save women from an evil mind-altering drug that turns women into sex slaves and save other planets from wicked alien AI’s.
Well I am still reading this epic and am about a quarter of the way through Part One and have to agree with Grey Shadow that a 'a good proof-read' would have made a good story a little easier to read... Although the story is well thought out and flows seamlessly from scene to scene.
I must say that I am inpressed by what I have read so far, especially by the level of cynicism which this style of 1st person POV (with flash-backs) needs. Incidentally I would be very interested to know just how long it has taken littlefrog66 to write this fascinating story.
I won't promise a review when I get to the end but, based on what I have read so far, I would recommend it to anyone who might be interested.
Nice one, littlefrogg66, although I rather wish that you had posted it in weekly, easy-to-read installments..
Blizzard
A bit focused on all the sex combinations for me, but it made for a fun read, all the same. But beyond that, as much fun as ever.
Definitely enjoyed
Thanks to all of the people reading and saying nice things about "Kat and Mouse." Maybe I'm being immodest (or just plain wrong) when I say this, but I think it gets even better in the chapters you haven't seen yet.
I have to say, while I have been enjoying Hostel as is, at this point in the story I'm just going to be honest. It's a terrible adaptation of the movie. I was giving it some creative freedom in the beginning, but it doesn't seem to be following anything from the film. I just don't get it. I'll give it a few more chapters. Hopefully by then I start to see what I had expected. If not, I guess I'll just have to cut my losses. Sometimes people just take too many liberties, I guess...
I have to say, while I have been enjoying Hostel as is, at this point in the story I'm just going to be honest. It's a terrible adaptation of the movie. I was giving it some creative freedom in the beginning, but it doesn't seem to be following anything from the film. I just don't get it. I'll give it a few more chapters. Hopefully by then I start to see what I had expected. If not, I guess I'll just have to cut my losses. Sometimes people just take too many liberties, I guess...
HA! I'm not sure what the prize is worth, but you win the update thread this week! So many liberties with the "source material".
HA! I'm not sure what the prize is worth, but you win the update thread this week! So many liberties with the "source material".
I have to say, while I have been enjoying Hostel as is, at this point in the story I'm just going to be honest. It's a terrible adaptation of the movie. I was giving it some creative freedom in the beginning, but it doesn't seem to be following anything from the film. I just don't get it. I'll give it a few more chapters. Hopefully by then I start to see what I had expected. If not, I guess I'll just have to cut my losses. Sometimes people just take too many liberties, I guess...
HA! I'm not sure what the prize is worth, but you win the update thread this week! So many liberties with the "source material".
I didnt even know there was a movie until that post. I tell you what, if this ever gets made into a movie, I want to audition for the part of Alice! :grin:
(Only because I'm way to old to play any of her victims!)