Just like with Gabby the Gray I found Kat and Mouse a little difficult to read. The characters were just so damn likeable and well written that I found myself getting tense and worried, cringing internally at the twists, wanting them to be okay, wanting to jump in and help. SoVeryFascinated did a wonderful job. A little too wonderful.
Son of Sleep (https://mcstories.com/SonOfSleep/index.html) (mc mf md in sf) (new) by JC Beleren
A high school outcase learns he’s a son of the Greek god Hypnos.
Son of Sleep (https://mcstories.com/SonOfSleep/index.html) (mc mf md in sf) (new) by JC Beleren
A high school outcase learns he’s a son of the Greek god Hypnos.
Magically endowed teenage boys aren't my personal delight, but Son of Sleep has a pretty excellent tone and vibe to it, a great sort of tongue-in-cheek mixed with clear writing prowess. Seems like an excellent entry into the genre for those who might enjoy it. I'm keeping my eyes open for JCBeleren's future works; he's certainly befitting of the name!
Son of Sleep (https://mcstories.com/SonOfSleep/index.html) (mc mf md in sf) (new) by JC Beleren
A high school outcase learns he’s a son of the Greek god Hypnos.
Magically endowed teenage boys aren't my personal delight, but Son of Sleep has a pretty excellent tone and vibe to it, a great sort of tongue-in-cheek mixed with clear writing prowess. Seems like an excellent entry into the genre for those who might enjoy it. I'm keeping my eyes open for JCBeleren's future works; he's certainly befitting of the name!
Incubus
Yes, Jenny is back. Mind, in this Christina has her hands more than full with events going on. Will she win out, or will she finally succumb like the rest, who knows? Will be fun finding out, for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed
Magical Girl Syn
Jenny again, and my preferred story of the two. Can Syn save Ruthie, or not.. Can Syn save any of the girls, in truth? Tons of great characters here, good to see them back
High end of definitely enjoyed
I enjoyed the two new chapters of 'Listening to Jack'. Nice scenes further fleshing out the state of the town and Jack's level and methods of control.
Blizzard
Fun to see not everything goes perfect with the harem, lol. Fun piece, with all 3 girls getting to test Gene out to some degree or another. Another nice add to the series
High end of definitely enjoyed
Son of Sleep (https://mcstories.com/SonOfSleep/index.html) is off to an interesting start. I want to read more of this. I like that Hypnos himself gets some significant story time- usually in tales like this, the god shows up to bestow some MC powers and then vanishes from the plot. Poor Alex, though. His life would probably be at least a little easier if his mind control powers came from a- ahem- more visible body part. ;)
I looooved this story. Popped over to Literotica to discover the entire first chapter is finished: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4036186&page=submissions
Blizzard (https://mcstories.com/Blizzard/index.html) was fantastic this week. I thought I knew what was going to happen next. I was wrong!
I love that fact that, for our four protagonists, "boots" is now a verb. :)
The Request is a story I read based on someone's recommendation. Turns out they gave the wrong title, but I'm so glad for the mistake. This story was so creative and detailed. I'm not familiar with the larger universe this apparently takes place in, but has me curious about it. I do wish the "green" part had more, especially with the customer, but I still had fun reading.
The Request
Oh, very good, some very neat twists in here I must say. Oh, and I loved the way it all played out too, especially events at the end. Makes for a good read, thats for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed
S.B.'s Beneath the Blue is a charming little sea story on land, with two ladies who seem to have a strong effect on each other. Finding out what kind of effect was a fun little ride, seeming like a little misdirection at first, then delivering with a rather musical note of hypnotic fun. Really liked the treatment between them, and how it all ended up in the end.
Beneath the Blue
I must admit it, I didnt remember this, but yes, its fun, and if someone wants to be Chloe for me, be my guest! Mind, its a fine case of maybe you didnt expect things to end up as it does, Estefania! Or maybe she did want it to end that way. A very fun story, but I might be biased, maybe?
High end of definitely enjoyed
Beneath the Blue had a twist that I feel I should have figured out. Hindsight bias at its finest, I suppose. Clever little tale.