New Releases-September 7th, 2019

[ElmerFudd]

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Antithesis (mc ff) (new)  by Shadra
After a trip to Germany, Bethany is eager to surprise her friend, even if the motivation isn’t entirely her own.

Bluepilled (mc mf md in ds sf) (1 new chapter)  by Somnophile
A brilliant but amoral young scientist’s creation transforms his mother into a gorgeous bombshell...and his slave.

A Change in Tone (mc mf gr in) (new)  by thestepfordgirl
A mastermind’s plan falls into place, with one last obstacle. Then we glimpse into the new world he has created for him... and ‘his’ family.

Dick Picture Perfect (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Will sends a dick pic to a girl, knowing that she would hate it. But it turns out that every woman who sees that picture needs more of it.

Fan Service (mc ma) (new)  by Dr. HypnoD
Amy’s fan is broken, so she calls a local repair service to fix it. But instead of fixing it, Frank gets her a new fan. One that Amy really, really likes.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (3 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Frank & Jessy — Collar Play (mc mf md fd bd ft sf) (new)  by schizo
Jessy purchases some illegal tech for her and Frank to play with.

Ghost Boy (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

Intended Attraction (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
In this sequel to Unintended Attraction, our hero starts to take for granted the growing mastery of his ability.

It (mc mm in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Porgy discovers that a clown is living in the gutter.

Lightning & Thunder (mc fd) (new)  by Meleva
A traveling storyteller has a lesson and a challenge for you, regarding her craft and the importance of anticipation.

Massaged By My Nerdy Brother (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by BurroGirl18 and Pan
A few innocent massages with her brother go too far.

Mind-Control Panties (mc mf md in) (2 new chapters)  by mypenname3000
A mysterious figure adds special items to the inventory of trendy clothing stores—panties with special phrases written on them.

The Music Plays on in Her Mind (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by CrystalWitch
Crystal is hypnotized by a collection of erotic stories.

Our Lullaby (mc ff) (new)  by Jukebox
Kenzie hates to admit it, but she needs Tasha to sing her a lullaby to help get to sleep again. Luckily, Tasha has just the song to send her off to dreamland.

Poetry & Blood (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Trixie Adara
Laura gets a new job for a strange romance writer that seems to be too good to be true.

Ready to Serve (mc mf fd md fu) (new)  by GigglingGoblin
Weak-willed Senya runs into a demoness who feeds by tempting her victims into taking control and dominating her, and it quickly devolves into an contest of submissiveness that is embarrassing to everyone involved.

Room With a Secret (mc mf md) (new)  by Maximilian Cummings
Young ladies don’t know or can’t remember a room that makes their minds so open to suggestion.

The Spiral Girl (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by connie k
An unscrupulous hypnotist recounts his fateful meeting with a new subject, and how his plans spiral out of control.

Split Slave (mc ff ma bd ds hm) (1 new chapter)  by Skaetlett
Delta, a non-binary, kidnapped sex slave with a protective alternate personality, gets auctioned off to a multimillionaire who seems to have more in store than they’re ready for. Their Mistress thinks she knows everything about them and is wrong.

Subscription Model (mc mf ff md fd ma) (1 new chapter)  by scifiscribbler
Jenny is obsessed with porn videos that features hypnosis.

They all became Slaves and Robots for the Robomaster (mc ff md rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
A hidden power converts a man into Roboman The Robomaster.

The Tickle War (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Benign Rasputin
Kerry loves to tickle Jack, and there’s not much he can do about it, until he discovers that Kerry is a somnambulist.

Winter Horror Story (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Mary is turned into a vampire.

[321]

Shiny new things! Shiny new things, everyone! 

Maybe I'm biased, but Shadra's Antithesis is absolutely fantastic. Hot scenes, covert hypnosis, trigger phrases... plus a plucky (if overwhelmed) heroine doing her best to bring down a devious mind controller. Highly recommend this one!

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

[shini90]

Am I just dumb or is there nothing new on the panties story? I don’t see any chapters after the August 31st one.

[Shadra]

Maybe I'm biased, but Shadra's Antithesis is absolutely fantastic. Hot scenes, covert hypnosis, trigger phrases... plus a plucky (if overwhelmed) heroine doing her best to bring down a devious mind controller. Highly recommend this one!

Thank you as always for the kind words. You enjoying is of course all I could ask for, given the premise. =)

I goofed so hard... I never noticed that the italics never transferred when I converted the story to txt format. This is such a catastrophic failure... Sorry to any readers if certain lines read really strangely.

Edit: Thank you so much Simon, I don't know how to repay you. You're the best!

[scifiscribbler]

I goofed so hard... I never noticed that the italics never transferred when I converted the story to txt format. This is such a catastrophic failure... Sorry to any readers if certain lines read really strangely.

Going through a several-thousand-word manuscript to give Simon his markup is always frustrating.

[Pan]

I use MultiMarkup when writing, so I don't ever have to think about it!

[321]

Simon to the rescue! Antithesis has italics now!

Given that, I am upgrading my rating from "fantastic" to "even more fantastic-er" 

[CerebusOne]

Some really good stuff this week.

Lets start with 321's terrific Hostel. Oh you fooled me 321. I thought Celeste was going to go against Rebecca because she liked things as they were at the end of the last chapter. Ohhh I do love being fooled! It makes the reading all the more fun and interesting. Payback for a couple turns in Blood Sport 321? I have always felt turnaround is fair play. Unless you fooled me on a deeper level even than I think and Celeste did indeed betray Rebecca as I suspected but you now have me thinking she didn't. That ending of the this chapter, snap....Hmmmmmm.....What's going to happen after that snap I wonder 321? I'm suspicious. With you so hard to tell. And I do enjoy that so. Keep me guessing 321, keep me guessing.

Also really liked Frank and Jessy's Collar Play. Interesting plot and characters. They are delving into dark, illegal things. Nothing bad could happen, right? Jessy learns the hard way in chapter one that if you give someone control over you, even some you think loves you and you think you know, you are taking a very big risk.


ScifiScribbler's Subscription Model. This story has a very interesting complex plot as Jenny falls deeper and deeper under control and into a world that she never suspected. The characters are also so well drawn and defined. Not only is the story top rate the MC in it is just smoking hot. I mean burning. Unusually so. So many great depictions. The shower scene in the last chapter just the latest. So hot the water there started to boil and it was coming out of the cold spigot. Ssssssssssss....This is just such an excellent story and so fun to read on all levels.

And then of course we have Shadra's Antithesis. Hard to put tricky, involved plotting into a short but Shadra did just that. So much so that you really have to follow carefully to get all the story. And that's a good thing.

I loved the part where Marissa was reading the love portion of the book. The reader of course did not know it was a character reading and assumed it was a character in your story narrating their own experience. Very well done and had me totally fooled.

I thought Dawn was a force for evil when she was at the airport looking for someone. But in the end she was on the side of good trying to help the girls against evil Alice. Once again a lovely turn of tables for the reader. Well done in all regards including the delicious MC.

That's all I have had time to read so far. I will try to get the others as the week goes on.

[nametag]

We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

[scifiscribbler]

ScifiScribbler's Subscription Model. This story has a very interesting complex plot as Jenny falls deeper and deeper under control and into a world that she never suspected. The characters are also so well drawn and defined. Not only is the story top rate the MC in it is just smoking hot. I mean burning. Unusually so. So many great depictions. The shower scene in the last chapter just the latest. So hot the water there started to boil and it was coming out of the cold spigot. Ssssssssssss....This is just such an excellent story and so fun to read on all levels.

Obviously, there's no part of this review I'm unhappy with, but I'm really glad to hear that it connected basically the way I wanted it too when I first woke up one lunchtime with the phrase "I'm going to help you brainwash me" and built a story backward from it.

[CerebusOne]

ScifiScribbler,

That story you told is a very interesting way for your story to be conceived and  birthed. And you certainly were the right doctor to deliver it to the world. Thanks for such a tremendous effort. The time and thought you put into it are obvious. It was my pleasure to give it the review I did.

[fumanchu]

“Hostel” continues to amaze me, balancing hot hypnosis scenes with a thrilling multi chapter narrative with so many intricate twists.  Rebecca is trying so hard to do the right thing.....”

“Antithesis” began as a tribute to another writer but quickly became its own special thing

[me-chan]

S.B.'s Femdom MC Flash Fiction continues with some nice new entries. Liked the writing of them all, but Burn the Ice was definitely up my alley. Playful, clever interaction with the right dash of gentle and dominance. Hope they don't catch a cold on the ice or anything.

Lightning and Thunder from Meleva was a nice piece of meta storytelling for me. Loved how it played out with all the possible distractions and interruptions, and how they were utilized to make the storytelling so engrossing by the end of it. The woman naturally knows how to keep a captive audience once she has them, or him. I bet the guy will be releived that he'll get to extend relief to her soon too.

And Jukebox's Our Lullaby is probably one of the best stories that's had anything to do with lullabies. Clever lyrics, sweet interactions, and I kind of wish someone would do an audio recording of a scenario like this; would be as equally entertaining as what I read in this one.

[grey_shadow]

Am I just dumb or is there nothing new on the panties story? I don’t see any chapters after the August 31st one.

New chapters have been added earlier - 7 and 10 - which can be picked out by looking at the individual chapter update dates.

[SB]

S.B.'s Femdom MC Flash Fiction continues with some nice new entries. Liked the writing of them all, but Burn the Ice was definitely up my alley. Playful, clever interaction with the right dash of gentle and dominance. Hope they don't catch a cold on the ice or anything.

No colds though things are bound to get hot, eventually. Thank you, me-chan, and not surprised by your choice at all as by now I already have a good grasp of what really pushes your buttons.

[shini90]

Am I just dumb or is there nothing new on the panties story? I don’t see any chapters after the August 31st one.

New chapters have been added earlier - 7 and 10 - which can be picked out by looking at the individual chapter update dates.

Yep I knew it. Dumb as a brick is I. Cheers mate thanks.

[BethanyP]

Shiny new things! Shiny new things, everyone! 

Maybe I'm biased, but Shadra's Antithesis is absolutely fantastic. Hot scenes, covert hypnosis, trigger phrases... plus a plucky (if overwhelmed) heroine doing her best to bring down a devious mind controller. Highly recommend this one!

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

I've really been enjoying "Hostel" and then as if that's not been good enough, you've induced Shadra to write and submit another story too!  "Antithesis" was definitely a fun (and hot) read, and "Following Her Dream" was one of my favorite stories and actually brought me back here after a bit of an absence.  Enough of that though, I'm definitely looking forward to more "Hostel" and whatever else comes from this new 'collaboration!'

[KiTA]

We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

Has the rule changed on TG stories?  Because they weren't allowed on mcstories for a long time. 

[grey_shadow]

We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

Has the rule changed on TG stories?  Because they weren't allowed on mcstories for a long time.

It's been an unwritten rule for a long time, but being unwritten makes it harder to check up on.

There has been a blanket ban on TG-centric stories (the stereotypical example being "Zap! You're a woman now. (MC) Zap! You're okay with being a woman now. 10k+ words about how it's different being a woman and/or trying out the new sexual organs.") but incidental TG has been allowed. And transgender characters are fine - it's the "magical" transformation that appears to be the issue.

[Merry Brooks]

I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it

[Betsy]

I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it

Take good care of yourself, petal.

[Writer345]

I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it

Sorry to hear that...  Please take care, Merry, we rely on you to keep us all sane!

[Merry Brooks]

Thanks, both of you

[321]

I am either having major problems with my laptop or with my brain, and my expert on computers is away for another 10 days. So unlike to be around much before then. I think its brain, but...Cant read stories at present, not up to it

We'll all be here when you get back 

Please take care of yourself. Here's hoping for a speedy laptop and brain recovery!

[nametag]

We may need a GR tag and create a TG tag for Bluepilled if that story continues the way it appears it’s going with the main characters dad, slowly transforming

Has the rule changed on TG stories?  Because they weren't allowed on mcstories for a long time.

It's been an unwritten rule for a long time, but being unwritten makes it harder to check up on.

There has been a blanket ban on TG-centric stories (the stereotypical example being "Zap! You're a woman now. (MC) Zap! You're okay with being a woman now. 10k+ words about how it's different being a woman and/or trying out the new sexual organza .") but incidental TG has been allowed. And transgender characters are fine - it's the "magical" transformation that appears to be the issue.

Well dumbass did a violet Beauregard on a pill he found at his wife’s house after she got bimbofied, and didn’t consider maybe I shouldn’t take a pill my son made. Which apparently aside from fixing all that ails you, and hypnotizes you briefly after ingestion, also turns you into a hot chick slowly over time.