The Title Game...

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Hungry Hungry Hypnos

Beth and Lisa both want to lose ten pounds before attending their impending ten year high school reunions. It only made sense that they listen to Beth's new weight-loss "dreamtapes" on a series of weekend sleepovers. Strange, though, how their reduced appetite for sweets is being replaced by an increasingly irresistible wish to eat each other.

Well, finally, I went totally f/f on this one. It was difficult for me to resist including Beth's boyfriend, George, into the fun and games, but after listening to the "how to write a hot sex scene" audio files that Jo emailed, it all worked out somehow.


Next: How Ally Ames Became a Virgin Again

[The Worm]

How Ally Ames Became a Virgin Again

Synopsis:  Ally Ames, a serial dater, routinely uses hypnosis to erase the memories of all her failed relationships.  But what happens when all those repressed memories start bubbling to the surface?

Yes, I admit it, I was inspired by "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind."  I thought it worked.  I'm especially proud that the hypnotherapist didn't use the situation to his own advantage, even though he was gradually falling in love with her.  I figured it was a nice change of pace.

(Damn.  Might actually write that one...  8))

Delinda Davenport and the Temple of Poontanagi.

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(Damn.  Might actually write that one...  8))

Go for it, Worm! It has all the makings of a really satisfying story.

[Baragon]

(To oytg: Never read "The Trouble with Girls I take it?")

Anyway:
Delinda Davenport and the Temple of Poontanagi.

Exploring lost ruins, deciphering ancient writings, circumventing ancient death traps and heavily armed thugs, it was all in a days work for Delinda Davenport.  But something about the mysterious Temple of Poontangi was different, and she was trying to figure out what was making her look at the many phalic symbols so intensely.

Powdered Dragonballs

[The Worm]

Powdered Dragonballs

Synopsis:  A young woman mistakes an ancient Chinese aphrodesiac for chocolate drink mix.  Hilarity ensues.

Okay, I didn't quite get where I was going with this one.  I was in a bit of a rush when I wrote it, 'cause I was about to his a contest deadline, and after I spent so much time writing the scene where she shares the drink with her entire sorority house, I had to rush the ending.  Still, if you've read the lesbian orgy scene, you know it was worth it.  Would've been nice to have written a proper ending for it, though....

The Cheerleader Effect

[Geo]

The Cheerleader Effect

Hubert Bigge-Dix has a dream. Where the Beachboys wished “they all could be California girls,” Hubert is both more and less discriminating. And, thanks to the new school PA system his dad’s company installed, he can do something about it.

OK, it should be well known by now that my upbringing left me Cheerleader-deprived. As a result I see them as sexual icons, not “the snooty bitches that made my life hell in high school.” And Jo has hinted at having been a cheerleader. That really helped solidify things into a hardcore fixation. Damn you, Jo.

This one went too gonzo. I happen to like gonzo, so I didn’t really notice until it was far too late. The subliminals brainwashing all of the schools girls into acting like cheerleaders was fine. The now-obsessed girl geniuses using the fundamental formula of the universe to recreate them selves as cheerleaders was goofy. Having their work become a plague and infest the world was going balls to the walls. Throwing in aliens, Greek gods, blood-crazed dancing hamsters, and copious mentions of the forum, its members, and other stories just went too far. You needed a crane to suspend the disbelief.

The Fiendish Dr. Fuk Yootu

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The Fiendish Dr. Fuk Yootu

World-renowned and noble-hearted entomologist Dr. Richard Longo thinks he's found a cure for malaria with his procedure to alter the mating habits of mosquitos. But when one of his own modified carriers bites him in the ass, an insidious alter-ego is born.

I intended this story as an homage to every black-and-white B-flick that I ever guiltily enjoyed, and it did end up with that "I like this even though I hate this" kind of tone. It seems that some people couldn't buy into the whining-as-mc device, but I actually modeled the Fuk Yootu mc'ing on a former co-worker at my old Wendy's job. This guy Hal would complain about every f*cking thing in sight, and then end up riding home with some hot chick, like the incessant griping just wore a girl down right into his bed. And really, didn't the whining make you happy when Sharon turns the tables, and covers him with Skin-So-Soft? That was so much fun to write.

Next: Big Tits Sink Ships

[Baragon]

(I can't help it.)
Big Tits Sink Ships

Fanfict Warning:  The Evil Doctor Hell has declaired war on the shiping lanes.  But instead of unleashing his robo-kaiju to do the deed themeslves, he created a Hypno monster to brainwash Sayaka into using her robot's missle tits to blow her targets to bits.  Thing is, Dr. Hell is also having trouble raising the funds to keep building his 500 foot tall Robo-Kaiju's, so he decides to also take steps to tap revenues from the Porn industry.

Dial N for Nympho

[The Worm]

Baragon, just for future reference, you're supposed to include your review of the story, as well as a synopsis.  Good stuff so far, though.

*****

Dial N for Nympho

Synopsis:  A bizarre telecommunications malfunction causes all of the telephone transmissions going into a sorority house to be spliced with a continuous loop of a psych major's subliminals experiment.  Horny hilarity ensues.

Okay, the basic plot's been done to death, and the phych student wasn't quite as sympathetic as I'd have preferred, and sure, the twenty-girl lesbian orgy was juuuuuuuuuust a bit gratuitous, but still, I didn't think this one was half-bad.

Let Them Eat Kate

[Archibael]

Let Them Eat Kate

Synopsis: Blooming actress Kate...er... "Homes" marries into a celebrity-ridden cult, and is soon brainwashed into being a full, card-carrying member.  But the brainwashing has gone too deep, and soon Katie has decided the cult needs new leadership-- and she's not above using the organization's own techniques to control it.

This started out as an attempt to show how mind control really works, and was almost an essay on brainwashing techniques.  But there was very little eros there, aside from the orgiastic events of the second chapter, and I sympathized with Kate rather than her captors.  So the second half became a fun little romp through Celebrity Nutville and added a little femdom to the mix.  'Course, I had to go back and rewrite the first half a bit, but it remained largely intact.  Overall, I'm pleased with it.

Something Wicked This Way Cums

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Something Wicked This Way Cums

There is always a unique odor wafting in the breeze the night the circus arrives in town. But why is young Mary Steeples, the minister's beautiful daughter, intoxicated by the scent this year, to the point that she climbs out her bedroom window in the night to see the circus tent erected? And why, though their grins remain unchanged, are all of the clowns growing circus tents in their pants when they find her?

A damned hot sex ride in this one, if I say so myself, especially when Lupina, the contortionist, and Helga, the snake charmer, show off their particular talents. I had some misgivings about having Mary run off with the circus at the end — it might have been enough of a transformation to have her experience just the one night of sex magic. Sometimes you just don't know which of two endings works the best, but IMHO, this was the happiest possible outcum, and sets up great possibilities for a sequel.

Next: One Hundred Bottles of Beth In Her Walls

[The Worm]

One Hundred Bottles of Beth In Her Walls

Synopsis:  Beth, a sexually repressed young woman, makes a bizarre discovery when renovating her bedroom.  Soon after, all of her repressed sexuality is brought to the surface, and she's never the same again.

Okay, this is definitely one of my weaker ones.  There's a reason I don't write stories that are this moody and atmospheric, y'know!  Sure, I thought the whole gypsy curse thing was a good idea, but it could've used a bit more of an explanation.  The least I could've done was come up with a better explanation of how the bottles appeared in the walls, and how they filled up with her sexual energy.  And that lesbian threesome felt gratuitous and tacked-on.  (Still fun, though.)

Double-Header

[XRay_Specks]

Double-Header

Two telepaths go Head-to-Head, each unaware of the other's manipulations.

I was pleased with the way this turned out. The two main characters kept getting one another more and more aroused and uninhibited, which would lead the one to get even more freaky on the other's brain, and so on...
The final scene was maybe the hottest I ever wrote, with both participants just wild crazy hot for each other. I don't know about the ending, I was waffling between having them short out their MC powers and be left in that state permanently, or wake up the next day, realize what happened, and just become a loving couple. You can see which way I went.


I'll Teach You A Lesson!

[KiTA]

I'll Teach You A Lesson!

Desperate to fix their grades, Amber and Mary undergo an experamental learning enhancement therapy, but soon find themselves unable to disagree with anything they read.

I'll admit it, I was inspired by Neon Pink and Toilet Trained with this one.  But when the Nudist club hands Amber the pamphlet and she reads it without thinking, I knew I had something.  Mary falling prey to the grafitti on the bathroom's wall was pretty fun, too.  And hey, having two extremely smart heroines was a welcome change -- especially after they both memorized the entire encyclopedia!

Naked Nancy and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Year

[Baragon]

Naked Nancy and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Year
Nancy was mean, bitchy, and proud of it.  Until the day she picked the wrong person to ridicule.

Well, the story was more about humiliation and revenge than sex, but it was done in a way that made it clear the Naked in the title was partially inspired by Naked Gun.  And I'll admit it, I laughed out loud when Nancy sang the star spangled banner, and the sprinklers came on and melted the disolving stitches holding her clothes together.  Oh, and the sex scenes were prety hot too.

The Training Bra

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Let Them Eat Kate

Synopsis: Blooming actress Kate...er... "Homes" marries into a celebrity-ridden cult, and is soon brainwashed into being a full, card-carrying member.  But the brainwashing has gone too deep, and soon Katie has decided the cult needs new leadership-- and she's not above using the organization's own techniques to control it.

I'm sorry, that plot was just so unbelievable, riduculous, and far-fetched, that I just couldn't get into the story at all. I just couldn't suspend my disbelief for long enough.

[Archibael]

I'm sorry, that plot was just so unbelievable, riduculous, and far-fetched, that I just couldn't get into the story at all. I just couldn't suspend my disbelief for long enough.

I know.  The last part is plausible, but the first part is pretty out there...

[Geo]

The Training Bra

See Danni run. Danni will run. Run, Danni, run.
See Danni get herself in shape for her first marathon.
See her boyfriend get frustrated at the lack of attention he’s receiving and what all the exercise is doing to Danni’s soft, curvy, feminine endowments.
See Danni try on her new sports bra.
See Danni try to pack her newly-enlarged breasts into her old clothing.
See Danni’s altitude change.
See Danni f**k. Danni will f**k. F**k, Danni, F**k. F**k. F**k. F**k!

Written for the Overflowing Bra, I considered posting at EMSCA on a lark but didn’t. Not enough MC, for one.

The Girl With Kaleidoscope Eyes

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The Girl With Kaleidoscope Eyes

Hillary can see the world with exhilirating clarity after her corrective laser surgery, including her roommate, Karen, and Karen's odd, almost constant adoring expressions. But why would her sense of smell be heightened, too? She could swear she smelled lust emanating from every room in the dorm.

Until now, I've avoided a college campus setting for my stories, but thought it was time to try my hand at one of the old standby's. By far the most f/f sex I've written. I'm going to have to do more of that in the future.

Next: Snakes On A Brain 

[Archibael]

Snakes On A Brain

Synopsis: Samantha Carter, invaded by another Goa'uld parasite, proceeds to couple her newfound encyclopedic knowledge and her understanding of science to seduce and enthrall waves and waves of worshippers... and the rest of Stargate Command, starting with Dr. Janet Fraiser.

I hate fanfic; why, then, did I write one for Stargate: SG-1?  And why write one which took place more than three years ago in story continuity terms?  It wasn't even all that creative a story: Hathor made a better seductress.  I guess I just always wanted to see Amanda Tapping and Teryl Rothery get it on, and my fantasies were the only place this could legitimately happen.


This Is Gonna Hurt Me More Than It Does You

[Baragon]

This Is Gonna Hurt Me More Than It Does You
Following the tale of Roger Smith, a very powerful telepath.  Unfortunately for him, his telepathy means that the dozens of serial recruitment MC plots unfolding near his hometown give him horrific migrains.  What's a telepath to do?

Wrote this mainly as a counterpoint to most Telepathic MC stories, where the telepathy is basicly one way without any sort of feedback.  Hence we have Roger who's power instead keeps pushing him to keep taking action.

Tag, your it.

[KiTA]

Tag, your it.

Amanda's life falls apart after a sexual encounter in the back room at a party.

I'll admit it, I was very, very hesitant about writing this one.  It's not quite a rip off of Suehirogari's TAG -- whereas TAG was hypnotizing a group of girls to accept the rules of a perverted game of Tag, this one is demonic possession with a twist.  The general theme is the same, I admit -- a odd situation passed on via mind control.  But in this story, it's not hypnosis, but rather a lust demon forcing "it" to run around seducing anyone and everyone she sees.

I especailly liked the twist as to how "it" gets passed on.  Since love trumps lust, in theory anyway, "it" can't stop until she can get a woman to cry out "I love you" when she is having sex -- but then the poor woman gets to borrow the demon for a while.

Anyway, I'm particularly prowd of the scene at the beach and at the concert.  Seeing Amanda bounce from person to person, unable to stop herself, unable to orgasm, and unable to even drag her "marks" off for a bit of privacy was a big plus for me.

"Always run a virus scan on all attachments", and other important tech tips for Cybernetic equipped women.

[Baragon]

"Always run a virus scan on all attachments", and other important tech tips for Cybernetic equipped women.

In the future when cybernetic enhancement has progressed to the point where most computers are run by a brain implant, some people STILL don't take computer security seriously.

In all honesty, I was partially inspired in this story by what I've seen on the WWII Private Snafu cartoons.  Hence the decision to do a collection of shorts, each featuring a different MC sex virus that could have been easily defeated by proper security procedures.

They do it every time.

[The Worm]

(Okay, what the heck was this doing on page two?!?!)

They Do It Every Time

Synopsis:  Joe and his drinking buddies wonder why all of their formerly frigid wives suddenly have mind-blowing orgasms every time they have sex.

I'm very disappointed with the way this one turned out.  I mean, seriously, who talks about their sex lives with their drinking buddies?  And the ending, with the blatantly gratuitous "areobics class" lesbian orgy and the instructor hypnotizing the men as they stumble on it, could be seen coming a mile away, in the dark, by a blindfolded man with cataracts.

It's Amazing What You'll Find At a Yard Sale

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It's Amazing What You'll Find at a Yard Sale

Synopsis: A man buys a used sexbot at a yard sale. Little does he realize that this 'bot has been reprogrammed.

A classic be-careful-what-you-wish-for cautionary tale, inspired in part by 'Fantasy Island'. The first third or so is the standard stuff you might do with a sexbot, but then comes the twist. I figured once I revealed that the 'bot was given nonstandard programming, the reader would expect it to run amok after receiving a poorly worded command, so I kept that info hidden until the amokness begins. I think the initial (pre-amok) sex scene was a little dull, but the final scene with all the fancy setup came out just how I imagined it.


Grin and Bare It