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« on: December 14, 2005, 01:27:54 PM »

I've decided to write a Christmas story...   Full of holiday spirit!
Accordingly, therefore, apropos of nothing,



I hereby, unilaterally, with the absolute authority invested in me by NO ONE AT ALL,
declare, ordane, order and require the existence of...

A Christmas Story Story Scrum[/size]
The rules?  Write as much Chrismas/Hannukah/Kwanza/Festivus/Equinox Orgy story as you want between now and December 25th!

The prize?  NONE!  (Isn't that simply tooo fabulous?)  Grin

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« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2005, 03:51:32 PM »

Oh good, GregM... it gives me a chance to repost my classic rewrite, er... my rewrite of a classic Christmas tale (yess, it's a cheat, but I've already written a Christmas "story" this week... Tongue ).

So here's my version of "The Night Before Christmas", that I wrote for some, um... sapphic friends of mine two years ago.  It's got a chunk of "nasty" sexual language in it, so if such things bother you, please don't read it.  Smiley

Just informationally, I have two female roommates and we share the upper floor of a rental home...

'TWAS THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS   -  (Ff, NC, Bondage, 'nuf said)

'Twas the night before Christmas, when all through the house
not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse.
And the stockings they tied with such infinite care
Made certain that Jo wasn't going nowhere.

Her roommates had bound her all snug in her bed,
Totally naked, all four limbs quite spread.
They had snuck in and grabbed her while she was asleep,
And tied her and gagged her 'til she couldn't peep.

When out in the kitchen there arose such a clatter,
both sprang from her bed to see what was the matter.
Leaving poor Jo to just struggle and scream,
But actually hoping it wasn't a dream.

The change in her nipples and flushy pink glow,
went well with the moisture that gathered below.
When, what to her nearly-glazed eyes should appear,
but nine sexy women in catsuits so sheer.

With a sensuous leader, who cut to the quick,
telling poor Jo that her name was Ms. Nick.
"I know what you wished for, and that's why we came,"
then she turned to the others and called them by name:

"Now Helga! Now Inga!
Now, Gretchen and Terri!
And Mei Ling, Ashanti,
Rebecca and Mary!
Let's see to our captive!
Let's make the gag better!
Then lick her tit! Lick her slit!
Make her much wetter!"

So the beautiful women surrounded her bed,
and one of them ripped the tape off of her head,
then stuffed in three panties, two black and one blue,
Jo tasted her roomies, and Ms. Nicholas too.

And then, in a twinkling, they wrapped her mouth tight
with a scarf made of silk and some tape that was white.
Jo's struggles were useless, but lifting her head
she saw Mistress Nicholas move to the bed.

She was dressed all in leather, from her head to her feet,
with buckles and zippers that really looked neat.
With a bundle of "toys" that she held in her hand,
'til she started to pass them around to her band.

Her eyes--how seductive! Her hair, how divine!
Her lips so attractive, the color of wine!
The shape of her breasts so deliciously round,
and her suit so incredibly tight to her mound.
Jo stared at this goddess and then heard her say,
"Your roommates are tied up and out of the way
And now it's just you and just us and just me.
How hard can you cum?  Nevermind, let's just see."

At a wave of her hand, and a menacing "Go!"
Ms. Nicholas' slaves started in on "poor" Jo.
Rubbing and sucking, inserting their toys,
Squeezing and licking, they used all their ploys.

They spoke not a word, but went straight to their work,
'til Jo came twelve times, then again with a jerk.
Then pressing her strapon inside of Jo's seam,
Ms. Nick gave her proof that this wasn't a dream.

She finished at last, to her team gave instructions,
And away they all flashed, to look for obstructions.
'Cause Jo heard her exclaim, in a voice filled with glee...,

"Happy Christmas to all, but we're taking you three!"

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Ohh, and bye the way, let me be one of the very first to wish all the Forum members and guests a... MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!"   Kiss

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« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2005, 04:37:26 PM »

Jo-
Don't know what kind of feedback you got on that when it first came out, but it's a hooter — and like any tender morsel, rare and well done.
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« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2005, 07:47:30 PM »

Thanks, GHB... I got some nice comments last year, too.  All are appreciated, and hey, it's a very nice fantasy for me, too.  A win-win thing all around.  Smiley

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« Reply #4 on: December 14, 2005, 11:38:49 PM »

Greg -  (Smile)  Just a really excellent and emotional story for me, Greg, though I wished you had carried it out to a more definitive conclusion (although this certainly sounds like chapter one of two).  And this is like an episode of The Twilight Zone, though I believe that episode featured Jack Warner, instead, one of my all-time favorite actors.

It's sweet, and kinda sad, and very realistically carried forward for something so unrealistic.  I'm a bit surprised by Stan's slowness on the trigger, so to speak, but I can see that if he were compassionate enough, he would see this as a really awful thing, not being able to truly see the motivations behind what she did, or allowed to happen.

But it's well-written and a very easy read, and I really enjoyed it.  If you should carry it forward, then I can see it as deeply heart-rending, if you take it a certain way, and just as a wonderfully romantic, feel-great story, if you take it the other.  I'm a sucker for "second chance" stories, though, and this one is certainly one of those... for both of them.

Good luck with whatever you do with it, and thanks for posting it.  Smiley

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« Reply #5 on: December 15, 2005, 01:39:26 AM »


The rules?  Write as much Chrismas/Hannukah/Kwanza/Festivus/Equinox Orgy story as you want between now and December 25th!





Does it have to be good? Involve MC?
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« Reply #6 on: December 15, 2005, 02:46:54 AM »

MMMMMM I love a good Christmas story! Tongue
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« Reply #7 on: December 15, 2005, 03:03:23 AM »

I already posted a short one a little down the page. The mind control?altering is only implied though. Anyway if you missed it it's in the thread below

http://www.mcforum.net/yabbse/index.php?topic=4979.0
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« Reply #8 on: December 15, 2005, 05:22:50 AM »

Thats really good Jo,
and I can fully understand that you might fancy fulfilling that!
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« Reply #9 on: December 15, 2005, 06:49:05 PM »

The Gift

By Rinky Dink

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A true heart-warming erotic Holiday lesbian tale (or is it tail?) I did for Echso.

Christmas was not going to be a joyous time of year for Monica Johnson. With the economic downturn, even the porn industry had suffered. Porno queen Jenna Jameson had just laid off Monica as her personal assistant because she could no longer afford her just two weeks before Christmas.

Monica had no family to turn to. Growing up in a strict Baptist home in South Carolina, her family had shunned her since she revealed after her high school graduation that she was gay.

Her girlfriend Sherry had been the prom queen at the Christian school they attended while Monica, a trim blonde whose penchant for wearing revealing crop tops probably cost her the crown, had been in the court. Sherry then had developed a drug problem after graduation and drifted into the pornography industry.

Monica had enough of her religious training still in her to avoid the drugs and acting in porn but through Sherry she had met the beautiful and personable Jameson and, despite breaking up with Sherry shortly thereafter, got the job, which was endlessly fascinating with the constant parade of men and women Jameson slept with in both real life and on celluloid.

Jenna was famous for being the greatest lesbian lover of her time. Women wept when unable to make love to Jameson anymore and Monica had called the police several times to shoo away women desperate to have sex with Jenna again.

As a young (barely 20) and inexperienced lesbian, Monica took note of Jenna's technique. Not exactly the shy type, Monica had been able to watch many of Jameson's liaisons from close up.

The last thing on Monica's mind at the moment was sex. In her tiny Hollywood apartment, she was trying to figure out how long she could afford to pay the rent and feed herself with no money coming in. A porn star's ex-assistant with no college education was not exactly in high demand in show business.

To get her mind off of her troubles, Monica had signed up at her local church to help at a soup kitchen on Christmas Day serving dinner to the unfortunate. She had nowhere to go for Christmas so she might as well be helpful. Secretly, she wondered if by the following Christmas she might be in the line looking for a hot meal herself.

A slight ray of hope was that New Line Cinema had placed an ad looking for temporary publicity assistants for the final part of its "Lord of the Rings" trilogy, "The Return of the King", which opened right before Christmas.

The most famous name in the film was hot young actress Liv Tyler.

Monica had called for an interview but as she sat in the office of New Line publicity director Cherie Loan she knew she was totally underqualified for even this simple job.

She wore a micro-mini skirt and a blouse that showed plenty of cleavage of her C cup (thanks to the operation Jenna had paid for) sized breasts. Forlornly, she hoped her looks would cause Loan not to too look closely at her paltry resume.

"You really expect me to hire you with your total lack of experience?" said Loan with a note of incredulity in her voice.

"Well, I hope so. I'm kind of desperate. I promise Ms. Loan to work really hard. I really need this job."

"How am I suppose to tell my bosses I hired a porno queen's assistant for the biggest movie we've ever had?"

"It was no different than say, being what Liv Tyler's assistant does. It's just Jenna Jameson's film work is different."

Loan's eyes got fiery. "How dare you compare a great young Hollywood actress like Liv Tyler to a porno slut!"

"I'm sorry," cried Monica. "It's just that I want this job so bad. I'll be out on the street in a month if I don't get something."

Loan began to soften as Monica sobbed in front of her, her huge breasts heaving in full view.

"OK, OK. Look. The only position I have left is for a PR person to help Liv Tyler for a couple days when she comes to town next week to do publicity. You can have that job. At least it will give you enough money to buy Christmas presents for your loved ones."

"Thank you, Thank you, Ms. Loan," said Monica. "But it will go towards my rent. I don't have anyone to give presents to. I'm not close to my family and because they got into drugs I broke up with my girlfriend…I mean boy…you can think whatever," stammered Monica not expecting to reveal her homosexuality on a job interview, although it would turn out to be the smartest mistake she ever made.

Loan, a statuesque brunette about 45 who had appeared in a number of beach bikini movies in her youth before getting into the corporate world, eyed Monica up and down her nubile figure. In a now much different light.

"So you are a lesbian?"

"Yes," Monica meekly replied.

"And you are in no committed relationship at the moment"

"Yes."

"I've heard about Jenna Jameson's prowess as a lover. Did she teach you any of her techniques?"

"Yes."

"Do you find me attractive? Would you like to make love to me?"

"Why…Yes, Ms. Loan."

"Call me Cherie," said Loan who quickly went to her intercom. "Mrs. Wilson, please hold all calls until further notice. Tell the others waiting all the jobs have been filled. I do not want to be disturbed for any reason."

"Sure thing, honey," said the secretary, who had been through this routine many times before.

"OK, little Miss Prom Princess. Do your stuff," said Loan as he took off her business suit and revealed a very attractive figure for her age.

Two hours later….

"I am your slave. I live to serve you. My will longer exists. I am yours to do whatever. Please, please have sex with me again" said the woman as she held on dearly to the leg of the women trying to get out of the room.

"Please let go, Cherie. You're a nice lady and thanks a lot for the job but I have to get going. The last bus leaves in 15 minutes. I can't miss it because I can't afford cab fare home."

"Is that all, here" said Cherie as she grabbed her purse and threw all her money in front of Monica, who quickly estimated it to be around $200. "It's all yours. Everything I have is yours, but please let me have sex with you again."

Cherie was the first women Monica had sex with since she broke up with Sherry. She knew studying Jenna Jameson she had improved her lovemaking techniques but apparently she had improved so much she had turned a powerful executive into her personal sex slave.

Monica was young but street smart, if she could do this to any women she was after bigger game.

"I will make love to you in the future Slave Cherie, that is your new name around me, but first you must accomplish a task for your Mistress" After Monica gave her instructions, Cherie simply licked Monica's toes in appreciation.

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Liv Tyler was tired but she knew as the biggest name in "The Lord of the Rings" she had a duty to keep up a hectic publicity schedule. She had spent over a year in the outback of Australia filming this movie as well as its two sequels. She was proud of the work as the Elf Queen Arwen and wanted as many people to see it as possible, even if it meant missing part of the holidays with her family in New York.

Although she was the daughter of rock star Steven Tyler of Aerosmith, she had made it on her own. A former model, she still had the hourglass figure with shoulder-length curly brown hair and an interesting face that featured the biggest lips this side of Julia Roberts.

Her publicity assistant for the L.A. leg of her tour had been a godsend. Monica had a bubbly personality that kept Liv's spirits up and was extremely efficient. She couldn't believe it when she told her she was only 20 and was further surprised to learn a stunning looking girl like her had no boyfriend.

It was Christmas Eve and Monica had volunteered to have dinner in Liv's room so she wouldn't be alone. Liv had expected the usual turkey with trimmings but for some reason that dope Cherie in PR had ordered Lobster for the third night in a row.

"If I have any more lobster my hands are going to turn into claws," said Tyler as she opened the tray. "I'm going to kill that Cherie."

"That's OK, I rather like lobster," said Monica, who knew her slave had been simply following the orders of her Mistress.

"I can't thank you enough for keeping me company," said Liv. "I don't know what I would have done. You've been great all the time I've been here. I'll miss you when I leave for New York in the morning."

"That's Ok, Miss Tyler, I've had fun watching all the interviews and stuff you go through"

"Please, call me Liv. After tonight you no longer work for me. As far as I'm concerned, we're just two friends enjoying dinner. And I hope we are good friends."

Monica was not sure if that was a signal or not. She knew she would find out soon enough.

A bottle of wine had accompanied the meal and Monica had made sure Liv had her glass always filled to the brim. Tyler, not exactly coming from the same strict upbringing as Monica, was more than happy to keep downing the liquor, it wasn't like she had to drive or anything, throughout the meal and even afterward.

After a while Monica could see Liv had a nice buzz on and figured the lobster, a famous aphrodisiac, had time to work its way into Tyler's bloodstream. It was time to make her move.

"It's great Monica that you will be helping others on Christmas. I'm just going to my dad's mansion with 20 other people for dinner."

'Well," said Monica. "There is a way for you to reward me for my selflessness"

With that, Monica moved her hand under the waistband of Liv's skirt and went underneath her panties and began rubbing Tyler's clit between her fingers.

Liv looked at Monica with a shocked expression. She never realized Monica was into girls. But Monica was about to realize that so was Tyler.

"Please Monica, allow me to remove…. Everything!!" said Liv as she slipped off her panties and skirt and was soon naked. She then grabbed a now naked Monica and flung her into her large bed.

Two hours later….

Liv gave Monica a peck on the cheek and said she had to get to sleep so she was up in time for her flight the next morning, and maybe they'd get together next time Tyler was in town.

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Monica spooned out the mashed potatoes at the shelter through a stream of tears.

She was back to being jobless and friendless. Apparently her sexual prowess only worked on older weak-willed women like Cherie. Liv Tyler was too young and strong-minded to fall under her spell. Monica was not about to spend all her time making love to women twice her age so her life was again in ruins, with nowhere to turn.

To make matters even worse, if possible, she truly had fallen head over heels in love with Liv. She didn't want Liv to be her slave but her life partner.

But all of that was out the window. Tyler was back in New York eating a sumptuous meal while, with her shift almost over, Monica put together some scraps in a doggie bag to take home for her version of a Christmas dinner.

Monica had her head down as she walked quickly out of the shelter. Buses did not run often on a holiday and she didn't want to miss the next one.

She didn't notice the Rolls Royce parked incongruously in front of the shelter.

"Monica!!! Hey, Monica!!! Look back!!! Monica !!!"

Monica slowly turned around and saw____Liv Tyler standing next to the Rolls Royce, her arms beckoning Monica toward her.

Monica's eyes instantly filled with tears as she dropped her doggie bag and ran to Liv, leaping right into her outstretched arms. Tyler quickly hustled her into the back of the Rolls and it took off.

"Oh, Liv!!, I thought you had left me," cried Monica as she virtually mauled Tyler with her arms wrapping around her and hugging her.

"Are you kidding, you're the greatest fuck I've ever had and you're also the greatest person I've ever fucked," said a smiling Tyler. "I just felt guilty about taking you away from helping the homeless. I'm never leaving you again."

"Never, ever, leave me again," said Monica, her head now on Liv's shoulder in total bliss.

"I got a later flight and you're coming with me. I'll tell my dad you're my new ….personal assistant. I've got millions and he has tens of millions, and you are going to share it all with me."

In just a few minutes her life had turned from pure despair to pure joy. Monica realized two things while she and Liv necked in the back of the car.

Although she had let her go, Jenna Jameson had truly given her a miracle Gift that she was blessed to have received.

Her other thought: "Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to all"
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« Reply #10 on: December 15, 2005, 11:06:03 PM »

I liked your new addition, GregM, and the continuing slow build-up of that, his attraction to her, and the way she shows the depths to which she will go to please him, to be with him... very enjoyable.

And MesmerEyes... I love stories about justice for the common man, for one good turn leading to another, so really enjoyed your story, too.  Thank you for pointing it out, as I didn't see it when you posted it last week.

I like your story, too, Rinky Dink, although, gahh... Liv Taylor and Jenna Jameson connetions.  It was not quite as "sweet" as the other two stories, but it was heartfelt and hotter, and I enjoyed reading it, along with the others, as I just need a happy ending once in awhile, especially this time of year.

Thanks, all...  Smiley

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« Reply #11 on: December 16, 2005, 11:48:24 AM »

Rinky Dink,thats absolutely gorgeous.
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« Reply #12 on: December 19, 2005, 05:24:56 PM »

yuo people are just so garsh-darned good.really like what girl is this
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« Reply #13 on: December 19, 2005, 10:30:12 PM »

Just a really, really terrific new chapter to what is slowly becoming one of my favorite Christmas stories, ever.  I can't wait to see what happens at the New Year's Eve party, and how the two of them finally come together (pun not originally intended).  You are now directly responsible for the breaking, or preferrably, the non-breaking of my heart with this piece, Greg, so please, be careful.  If you mean for this to go south at the end, I do expect a heads-up in advance, just so I can handle it.

But I'm really enjoying this... so well-written, such nice characterizations, and so evocative, and I thank you for sharing.  Smiley

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« Reply #14 on: December 20, 2005, 02:59:48 PM »

It's not Christmas related, but I'm seriously debating whether to follow through on converting a Supergirl-themed roleplay log I had with someone into a story...
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« Reply #15 on: December 21, 2005, 01:22:14 AM »

This was something I had to write tonight, irrespective of how few will read it, given the holidays and all, and certain things I am feeling inside right now... It's a one-pass edit, so please ignore the typos and all, as best you can...

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A Home for the Holidays

Darkness becomes her, Jada felt, staring up at her Mistress.

Grrr... stop that! she thought.  You hate her, remember!

Jada laid on her side on her sleeping pad on the floor near the foot of Mistress' bed.  She didn't move or give any other indication that Mistress Cordelia had woken her when her new owner had climbed out of bed.  Jada had no idea of the time, but it was still dark outside, only the light of the full moon coming through the window allowing her to see anything at all.

Mistress Cordelia stood at that window, looking out.  Jada sat up slowly, holding her chains, trying not to draw the older woman's attention, simply wanting a better angle to view her.  Mistress was naked -- her pale, white skin looking even paler in the lunar glare, almost as if her body had been painted with a light blue.  She did not look happy, even though technically it was Christmas Day... and Jada's heart went out to her.

Sighing, even though she would rather have kept it for herself, Jada's heart went out to her Mistress.

Jada hadn't wanted to come here, hadn't wanted to leave her old life and become another's slave.  But she had met Cordelia in a bar the Thursday night before Christmas, both of them alone and lonely.  Cordelia had approached her, Jada had allowed her to sit, and the two of them had chatted and drank like two growing friends, well into the night. 

Then Cordelia had started talking about the candle on their table, about warmth and joy and peace on earth... or something like that.

The next thing Jada knew, she was here in the other's mansion, and that she owed her allegiance, her attention, and even her very existence, to Mistress Cordelia.

She could remember enough of her previous life to know that she hadn't always been a lesbian, that she had never worshiped breasts and pussy and another female's ass, before.  Somehow, she knew that all of this... her obedience, her subservience, her lust and desire for the naked woman at the window, were not real, were not something of her own choosing.

And somewhere deep inside, Jada hated Cordelia for that.

But still, Jada felt happy, felt content.  Her life had been neither before this.  It was going to be another Christmas alone for her... her job a bore, her parents and all her old friends a continent away.  That's why she had been at the bar, had left her cold, undecorated apartment on Thursday night... to drink her sorrow to sleep. 

And so, the two of them had met and talked about life and times and times before that, both of them reminiscing about when things were still... good.  Jada could still remember the look on Mistress' face when Cordelia had talked about a woman from her past, a woman named Jillian, a friend of hers who had gone away and had suddenly left her behind.

It was the same look Jada saw now.  It was a look at once hopeful, and terribly sad.  Wistful... that was the word.

Appropriately enough, it was the same look that Jada imagined a child would have looking out a window on Christmas Eve while they waited and hoped for Santa's arrival.  A look of hope, yes, but one laced with the knowledge that he wasn't real, that none of it was... that it was all just another fairy tale. 

So it appeared, despite all of her best efforts to please her new owner, despite all her attentive service and the hours of love-making just completed, that her Mistress was standing there at the window, lithe and dark and beautiful, missing another.

Jada hated Mistress for what she had done to her, but, helpless to resist her feelings, she loved Mistress far more.  Artificial or not, induced or not, the feelings of love, passion, and compassion she felt for Mistress now, and moreso every minute since they'd met, welled up strongly inside her.  Jada couldn't help herself, and started to cry, the tears streaming down her face... for so many reasons.

"What's wrong, Jada," Mistress called over to her, not moving from the window, but turning to face her.

"I'm sorry.  I'm sorry I'm not good enough to let you forget her, Mistress," Jada said, her words thick with emotion.

"Oh, dear," she heard Mistress whisper, then begin to move toward her.  "We can't have any of that, can we?"

"I... I didn't want to be here, Mistress, but now that I am... “ Jada stopped, unable to speak as Mistress Cordelia knelt down beside her and took Jada into her arms.  "I'm doing my best for you... I really am..."  She began to cry harder again, burying her face in Mistress' neck.

"Of course you are... of course you are, dear one," Cordelia told her, hugging Jada and pulling her close.  "I know that.  This... this has nothing to do with you."

Jada kissed her neck and pulled away, still crying softly, but able to speak again.  "You're missing Jillian, aren't you, Mistress?"

Cordelia lean down to kiss her, then lick away the tears from one side of Jada's face.  "Yes, sweetness, I am.  I was thinking about before last Christmas, about how good it was, is all.  I'm sorry, Jada.  I know how unfair that is to you."

"That's ok, Mistress Cordelia," Jada said softly.  "I understand.  I'm so very sorry she left you."

She watched as Cordelia frowned, looked toward the window, then back at her.

"I didn't tell you everything about her, Jada.  I only told you those parts I could stand to mention."

"Was... was she a slave like me?" Jada whispered, wanting to know, wanting to hear why her Mistress missed Jillian so much.

Cordelia stared at her for a moment, then closed her eyes before saying, "Not quite like you... no.  She was my friend... she was my lover... and we... we had a fight."

"When, Mistress?"

Her eyes still closed, Cordelia replied, "Last Christmas Eve.  I'm not even sure what started it anymore, but I yelled at her, she yelled at me, and then she ran out the door."  Cordelia opened her eyes, and turned once more to stare out the window.  "And three hours later, she left a bar, and... she shouldn't have been driving, and there was a bridge abutment, and she...."

Jada watched as tears began to slide down her owner's face, feeling herself beginning to melt inside, knowing that her questions had caused her Mistress to remember... and to hurt.

"I'm sorry, Mistress.  I'm sorry," she said, clutching at Cordelia, pulling her close, kissing her neck again and again.

"I know... I know," Cordelia said, hugging Jada and patting her on the back.  "But it's not your fault.  It's not anyone's fault, I guess.  But still...."  She let Jada cry for a while, then pushed her back, looking at her.

"I am the one who's sorry, Jada.  It's just... it's just I couldn't stand the thought of being alone this Christmas, too."  Her voice trailed off.  "Not again.  No, not again."

Somehow, Jada remembered how she had spent her own last Christmas, how she had spent it alone, eating a liverwurst sandwich and watching "It's a Wonderful Life" on the TV.  She remember about how, when it was over, she had cried and cried.

"I'm here for you, Mistress," she said, her teeth clenched so tightly that they hurt -- the only way she could speak without sobbing.  "Neither of us will be alone this year."

Cordelia pushed her away again, staring at her, trying to speak.  She couldn't for a moment, swallowing hard before she finally said, "Yess... we will have a good Christmas, you and I.  I have presents for you.  Lovely things, things that I hope you will like."

Jada was confused.  Mistress had not left the house since they had gotten together.  How could she have...?

"But I didn't get you anything, Mistress," was all she could manage to say, staring up at Cordelia with sad eyes.

She watched as her Mistress smiled for the first time tonight.

"That's ok... that's ok, my dear one.  And it's not true, either, as you have given me a present beyond my ability to repay."

"I have?" Jada said, stunned.

"Oh yes, Jada.  You have given me the gift of yourself!  The simple dresses and jewelry I have for you are as nothing compared to that."

For the first time tonight, Jada felt as if she hadn't failed, as if she hadn't come up short in the eyes of her Mistress.

"You got me dresses... dresses and jewelry?" Jada whispered.  "But how?  How did you know?"

Jada watched as Mistress Cordelia struggled with her emotions, as her owner seemed to search within herself for how to answer that.

"You... you have her figure, Jada.  You have her skin tone and hair color, and her nearly perfect beauty."

"Jillian's, you mean?"

"Yes, sweetness... Jillian's," Cordelia responded, her voice so low that it was almost beyond hearing.  "I... I never opened... never got rid of the presents I bought for Jillian last year...."  Mistress Cordelia's voice trailed off, her eyes never leaving Jada's, her look seeming to beg her slave for some kind of understanding.

Jada did understand, though... she did understand why she was here now, why Mistress Cordelia had chosen her.  She was simply a replacement, perhaps simply an avatar of a love lost in time and space and through the vagaries and cruelties of a universe that just didn't care about the needs and longings of an individual human heart.

"So they'll fit me then, you think, Mistress?" Jada said, letting herself smile, knowing what this could mean to the person whom she suddenly desired to please more than any other.

Cordelia looked at her even more closely, her eyes glistening in the soft moonlight.  "Yes, they should fit you perfectly," she whispered.  "But... but doesn't it bother you that I bought them for... for her?"

"Not anymore," Jada whispered back, leaning forward to kiss Mistress Cordelia's nearly perfect nipple.  "I understand about spaces.  I understand about emptiness, sadness, and loneliness.

"I don't want to be alone again either, Mistress... if you'll have me."

Cordelia said nothing for a time, simply staring at Jada, her eyes wide, her mouth open.

"Please love me!" she groaned finally, crushing Jada to her, and passionately kissing the younger woman again and again.

Yess, Mistress! Jada thought, unable to pull her lips away, unable to release her death grip on Cordelia's body.

She no longer cared how she had gotten here... she no longer concerned herself with what she had wanted or had dreamed about before that fateful Thursday night in that dark and lonely bar.

No!  Being here and helping someone else live through their pain... being here in another's arms and finally being able to thrust her own despair and sorrow aside for a few moments... was more than Jada could have ever imagined, was more than she could ever have wished for.

Jada finally pried her lips away and moaned, "Merry Christmas, Mistress Cordelia...."

Cordelia could only stare again, her eyes more inflamed than anything else now.  "Merry Christmas, my sweet, sweet Jada," she finally replied, wrapping her legs around her newest slave, and moaning as her naked sex began to slide against Jada's belly.

The room went dark, perhaps from a passing bank of clouds, perhaps because the powers that be no longer needed to see what they had wrought on this most magical of nights. 

It was probably irrelevant anyway, as both Cordelia's and Jada's eyes were closed in passion and desire, as they no longer questioned just how much room there was in their inns for each other... and perhaps for the light of a newborn star.

In the darkness, as it always is, there was only each other, and the need to be touched by someone who loved you.

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For reasons almost entirely unknown to me, until I had examined them fully, this story is for, among others, Katie McN, a general pain-in-the-ass, a great writer, and a passionate and dynamic personality beyond measure... wherever she should happen to be now.

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« Reply #16 on: December 21, 2005, 02:20:43 AM »

Jo...that was a beautifully sad story.  thank you for sharing it.
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« Reply #17 on: December 21, 2005, 02:56:44 AM »

Jo...

...I don't feel so bad that "Nobody's Hero" is gone now.

That's all.
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« Reply #18 on: December 21, 2005, 04:39:41 AM »

Gorgeous story Jo
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« Reply #19 on: December 21, 2005, 08:15:52 AM »

::::reaching over to gently pull a Kleenex out of Jo's box for myself and then slowly sliding the box towards Nymph::::::

My dear sweet Jo,
That was one of the most beautiful and breath-taking stories i've ever read and simultaneously one of the saddest and deeply moving ones on so many levels.  You have an incredible writing gift and i thank you so much for sharing it with us.  You also have an awesome heart that loves and feels and cares so very deeply.  You, precious one, are an amazing person, and i'm very much richer for knowing you and i feel terrifically honored to be your friend.

The warmest and most tender hugs,
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« Reply #20 on: December 21, 2005, 09:44:06 AM »

*blowing my nose into Latexman's kleenex*

*looking quizzically at it*

um...Latexman?  where on earth did you get latex kleenex?
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« Reply #21 on: December 21, 2005, 01:26:39 PM »

*blowing my nose into Latexman's kleenex*

*looking quizzically at it*

um...Latexman?  where on earth did you get latex kleenex?

DUHHHH, from the Latex Kleenex Outlet Store, of course!  You think i'm rich enough to shop at the regular Latex Kleenex Store?  Sheesh, and i thought you weren't a blonde....

:::thoughtfully uploads a 20% discount coupon to Nymph, good for any selection of latex apparel until December 31, 2005 at the Latex Store near her::::

That's just for being a good girl this year, or at least, Santa told me that you were...    Grin

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« Reply #22 on: December 21, 2005, 04:15:58 PM »

Nymph, blankpage, Stephanie, and Latexman -  Thank you all very much for reading my story and commenting on it (with an extra hug to Latexman for his words about me, personally... I'd like to think they aren't such an exaggeration as I'm feeling).  I really do appreciate that you saw it and took the time you did on it.

It's a bit rough in spots, and could stand some polishing, but it was so late when I finished it, that I just couldn't.  It was originally going to be Hot Flash, one of my, "think of a first sentence, almost at random, and see where it goes" ones.  But as I was writing it, I got to thinking about why Cordelia wanted or needed a slave.  Then I thought about turning it into a Christmas story.  And then I remembered one thing about Christmas that always tears at me, if I allow myself to dwell on it... those who are alone and lonely on what is supposed to be the happiest, most joyous, and most fun day of the year.

So that gave me the rest of my story.  That, and, like many of you, the desire to perhaps rewrite a painful ending to some story.  That's why I ended up having to write it, because, in the universe of my mind, there would be at least two lonely people that would not be alone on this Christmas.

I seldom write for cathartic reasons, but this was one time I needed to.  Thanks again to all of you for reading it.   Kiss

        Hugs,  Jo
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« Reply #23 on: December 21, 2005, 04:22:38 PM »

There is a lot of power in that story Jo because of that lonliness.  I've been thinking of it a bit today...and I realized that the sadness isn't going away on Christmas morning for those two.  How maddening it must be for a slave to realize that she'll never live up to what Cordelia lost.   

Stuff of tragedy in this one my friend.  Again...just really really good.
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« Reply #24 on: December 21, 2005, 05:52:47 PM »

Jo - Great story, tragic and sweet at the same time. If you will excuse my paraphrasing, it's a story I couldn't write.

GregM - Also a good story. Just please don't let it get dark at the end, it is Christmas after all.

Nymph - There's no reason it has to have an unhappy ending. Jada is showing some signs of fight, if she channeled that into forcing Cordelia to see her as a person in her own right rather than as an imperfect copy of Jillian I could see this as having a happy ending.






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